1、第三讲 征文投稿第三章 记叙文写作征文投稿一般都是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以议论文和记叙文居多。具体写作结构为：1吸引眼球开头句Recently we did a survey about whether.or not.最近我们做了一个关于是否的调查。To enrich our lives and deepen our understanding of traditional Chinese culture,our school held a Chinese painting exhibition in the school library last week.为了丰富我们的生活，加深我
2、们对于中国传统文化的理解，上周我们学校在校图书馆举办了国画展。At present our city is carrying out a campaign,the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet.目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须戴头盔。2亮点出彩篇中句Moreover,as is known to all,setting too much time aside just for watching TV is a waste of time.
3、而且，众所周知，只为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。To change the habit,I am supposed to put more emphasis on something more meaningful such as reading and taking exercise,which are not only beneficial to my mental and physical health but also can help me get rid of my bad habit.为了改变这个习惯，我应该把更多的精力放在一些更有意义的事情上，比如读书和锻炼，这些不仅有利于
4、我的身心健康，而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident.这项运动的目的是减轻这类交通事故的后果，降低事故中的死亡率。3.韵味无穷结尾句As far as I am concerned,students should do more listening and speaking so that they can develop their communicati
5、on skills.在我看来，学生们应该多听和多说来发展他们的交流技能。My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of ourselves and other people.我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。Last Saturday(及其他表示活动/事件发生的时间),our school held an activity themed“_(活动主题)”，aiming to_(活动目的).We_(活动/经历)Som
6、e _(一些人的活动)while others _(另一些人的活动)Then came the most exciting moment when _(其 他 活 动 部 分)Finally，_(活动/事件结果).Through the activity/experience,I was aware/realized that not only did the activity broaden my horizons _(个人感想之一),but it also fueled my enthusiasm for _(个人感想之二).(2022全国甲卷改编)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英
7、语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1海洋的重要性；2保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2短文的题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。Our Oceans,Our ResponsibilityJune 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.【满分范文】Our Oceans,Our ResponsibilityJune 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.It aims to raise peoples
8、 awareness of protecting oceans.Ocean plays a key role in our world.Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food,but also it maintains the balance of nature.Thus,it is imperative to protect ocean.First of all,what we can do is place importance on our daily actions.For example,garbage cant be thrown
9、into ocean.Whats more,we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean.The more people are involved,the better the ocean environment is.All in all,it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.【名师点评】1文章首先介绍世界海洋日的时间和意图；
10、然后介绍海洋的重要性；最后发出保护海洋的倡议。2范文语言流畅，结构合理，要点齐全，较好地完成了写作任务。在遣词造句上，使用了(not only.but also引起的)倒装句、形容词以及副词比较级“the比较级.，the比较级”结构、以及(it is high time that等)较复杂句型，并使用了高级词汇(imperative和plays a key role in)，合理使用了过渡词(First of all,Whats more,All in all等)，提高了文章的得分档次。(2023全国乙卷)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括
11、：1简要描述；2体验和感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2题目已为你写好。Learning a New Skill【参考范文】Learning a New SkillIt is important for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our future life.Since my mother is skilled at cooking,I decided to learn from her.Early in the morning we bought some ingredients,including som
12、e vegetables,meat and a fish in the local market.Once we got back home,I began to wash and cut them carefully.Under the guidance of my mother,I turned on the gas cooker.I first stir-fried two vegetables.Then I cooked meat with potatoes.The most difficult task to do was cook fish with tomatoes.However,I finally did it.The moment I put the dishes on the table,my parents gave me a thumbs-up.
