1、表达 作文巧升格Unit 3 Faster,higher,stronger 体育运动时刻 描述一个体育运动时刻属于记叙文文体。基本框架 1开头(beginning)故事发生的时间、地点和人物 2主体(body)事件的起因及发展过程 3结尾(ending)结果和感受 常用词块 1sports meeting 运动会 2an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 3strengthen ones friendship 增强友谊 4compete with 与竞争 5catch up with 赶上 6fall down 跌倒 7commit a foul 犯规 8imp
2、rove ones skill 提高技能 常用语句 1We held a sports meeting in the school stadium.during which we.我们在学校体育场举行了运动会，运动会期间我们 2At first，we were neck and neck，but unfortunately，one of our teammates hurt himself，which.一开始，我们肩并肩，但不幸的是，我们的一个队友受伤了，这 3We all thought he would drop out but what made us moved was that he
3、.我们都以为他会退出，但让我们感动的是他 4Realising it was.that caused the problem，we turned to our coach who.意识到是导致了这个问题，我们求助于我们教练 5We felt proud of our school basketball team although they.this time.尽管这次，我们都以我们学校篮球队为豪。假设你是红星中学的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记，记述上周六你和父母一起参加奥林匹克森林公园健步走活动的过程。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2周记的开头已给出，不计入总词数。La
4、st Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called“I Walk，and Im Fit”_ _ _ 学生习作 Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called“I Walk，and Im Fit”Early in the morning，we arrived at the registration place
5、 and signed our names immediately.A signal was given off and we went along the walking route.It seemed that no one wanted to be left behind.I walked faster than ever.We won first prize.How delighted we were!I realized that taking part in activities like this regularly is a good way for us to keep fi
6、t.Id like to participate in such activities as much as possible in the future.点评：1要点不完整，遗漏图画 2 的内容。2句式单一，没有复杂句式。3句与句之间衔接不紧凑。升格作文 Last Saturday，I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called“I Walk，and Im Fit”The activity we participated in was meaningful，which g
7、ave me a great deal of inspiration.Early in the morning，hardly had we arrived at the registration place when we signed our names immediately.Seeing the sea of people doing warm up exercise，we couldnt wait to join them.Soon afterwards，a signal was given off and we went along the walking route，which r
8、an around the park.It seemed that no one wanted to be left behind.Thinking of that，I couldnt help walking faster than ever.More than one hour later，our effort paid off.We won first prize.How delighted we were!Only then did I realize that taking part in activities like this regularly is a good way fo
9、r us to keep fit.Id like to participate in such activities as much as possible in the future.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris 对他在你校网站上看到的运动会照片很感兴趣，并发来邮件询问。请给他回信，内容包括：1时间和地点；2你或你们班参加的比赛项目；3给你印象深刻的事。注意：1词数 80 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ _ _【参考范文】Dear Chris，Im writing to tell you something about the sports meeting we held
10、 at the school stadium last Wednesday.We had all kinds of traditional events this time，during which three boys from my class and I took part in the 4100m relay race.At first，we were in the end.Unfortunately，I fell down when I took the stick from another boy.Although I stood up and kept on running，we were the last to reach the finishing line.All the audience still cheered loudly for me because I didnt give up.Do you often take part in the sports meeting at your school？Please write and share with me.Yours，Li Hua 点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
