1、表达 作文巧升格Unit 4 Friends forever为故事续写一个结尾本单元的写作项目是为故事写一个结尾，所设计的结尾可以是出乎意料的，也可以是符合常规的。写作中，时态通常使用一般过去时。写作步骤1阅读了解故事；快速阅读故事，了解故事是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索展开的，这样有利于“顺藤摸瓜”，分清楚人物关系和事件的脉络。2续写完成故事；仔细审题，明确续写要求，如词数限制等确定续写结尾的内容。常用词块1find out the real reason why he was late for class 找出他上课迟到的真实原因2walk up to me and shake hands
2、 with me走向我和我握了握手3shake hands with almost everyone present 几乎和在场的每一个人握手4instead of telling me the truth反而没有告诉我真相5keep calm and stay silent 保持镇静并且不要讲话6take what the old man said seriously and listen attentively 认真对待老人的话并认真听讲7expect everyone of us to keep a positive attitude towards life期待我们每个人对生活保持积极
3、的态度8honestly accept our criticism 老实地接受了我们的批评9give him a high five and a warm hug 给他了一个击掌鼓励和热情的拥抱10go to the usual bar in person to meet him亲自去了通常到的酒吧去见他经典结尾句1Its funny.Dont ever tell anybody anything.If you do，you start missing everybody.说来好笑。你千万别跟任何人谈任何事情。你只要一谈起，就会想念起每一个人。麦田里的守望者2The creatures out
4、side looked from pig to man，and from man to pig，and from pig to man again；but already it was impossible to say which was which.外面的生灵是从猪看到人，又从人看到猪，再从猪看到人；但他们已经分不清谁是猪，谁是人了。动物农场3Up the road，in his shack，the old man was sleeping again.He was still sleeping on his face and the boy was sitting by him watc
5、hing him.The old man was dreaming about the lions.在大路另一头老人的窝棚里，他又睡着了。他依旧脸朝下躺着，孩子坐在他身边，守着他。老人又一次梦见了狮子。老人与海4It is a far，far better thing that I do，than I have ever done；it is a far，far better rest that I go to，than I have ever known.我今日所做的事远比我往日的所作所为更好，更好；我今日将享受的安息远比我所知的一切更好，更好。双城记5It turned out the l
6、ight and went into Jems room.He would be there all night，and he would be there when Jem waked up in the morning.他关了灯，回到杰姆的房间去了。整个晚上他都会在杰姆身边。早上杰姆醒来时，他也会在杰姆身边。杀死一只知更鸟6If this should happen，please comfort me.Send me word that he has come back.如果发生了这一切，请及时告诉我，好让我得到安慰。请给我捎个话，就说他已经回来了。小王子下面是一个不完整的故事，请为它续写
7、 80 词左右的结尾。The seas surprise Jim and Andy walked along the beach，looking for an adventure.They joked that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map inside.So far they had only found shells and rocks and seaweed.Today though was different.The boys felt excit
8、ed.Sea crabs scampered on the rocks.Up one side and down the other.They were quick and lively.The tide didnt seem to ever wash them away.Then Jim saw a fish.It was stranded(搁浅)on the beach，just flopping around.“Can it talk？”Andy asked.“It looks like any other fish，”Jim said.He picked it up gently an
9、d carried it to the water.“Do you think it will give us any wishes？”Andy laughed.The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the water.“No.Maybe next time.”Jim smiled.As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle.It was green with a cork(木塞)in the mouth.“Our luck
10、will change.Does it have a map inside or a spirit？”joked Andy.Andy reached down and picked up the bottle.He rubbed it.Nothing happened.He pulled on the cork.Nothing happened.He shook it.Nothing happened.“Try the cork again.I bet the spirit is waiting for us to release him.Or well find a treasure map
11、 and have a real adventure，”Jim said.Andy pushed again on the cork.He dragged it back and forth.He twisted it around and around.Finally it popped out without breaking.Andy shook the bottle.Nothing came out.Looking inside he couldnt see anything.Jim looked too and shook his head.Empty.“Its just an ol
12、d wine bottle，”Jim complained.He grabbed the bottle and threw it back onto the sand.The bottle hit a rock and broke into many pieces.Both Andy and Jim gasped as they saw a long，silver key on the ground in the glass pieces.Then they looked at each other.Why didnt it make any noise when they shook the
13、 bottle？Why didnt they see it？Andy bent over to pick up the key.Suddenly the glass pieces came together to form a bottle again.The key was mysteriously back inside！And the bottle began rolling slowly toward the sea.学生习作Two boys ran after it.When they entered the sea，they found themselves walking on
14、the surface of the seawater.At last，they arrived at an island and found a lot of treasure there.They were so excited that they forgot the fairy who took them here.When they calmed down，they found the fairy nowhere.They began to make a boat by themselves and finally they came back with a lot of money
15、.名师点评：1故事的结尾过于平铺直叙；2故事的结尾与前面的描述出入较大，从“获救的小鱼知恩图报”这个角度去写。升格作文Two boys ran after it.When they entered the sea，astonishingly they didnt sink into the water but floated on the surface of it.They felt excited.They followed the bottle and then it stopped near an island where there was lots of treasure like
16、 diamonds and stones.“You can take as much as possible，”a voice came from the coast where a talking fish was swimming.It was the stranded fish that Jim saved and put back into the water.下面是一个不完整的故事，请为它续写 80 词左右的结尾。About ten years ago，my wife and I left home and took a trip to the Grand Canyon in Ari
17、zona.I didnt like to carry all my keys in my pocket during a long walk so I took off the car key and left the rest in the car.We came back，and I put the key somewhere in the car without tying it to the key ring.We made a fire and went to sleep in the back of the SUV.The next morning，we were cleaning
18、 up our campsite when I saw a magpie(喜鹊)inside my car.It was the only time I had ever seen a bird of any kind inside the car.I walked over，and it flew away.When we got in the car to go home，I couldnt find the key.We searched and searched，even emptying out the car completely，but it was gone.Then it h
19、it me.The magpie must have taken it.After all，they were known for stealing shiny things to make their nests nicelooking.Keys were shiny.The magpie was the stealer！It made perfect sense to me.So，I set out in search of its nest.The next problem:As everyone knows，the Grand Canyon is quite large.So I di
20、dnt like my chances of actually finding a certain nest belonging to a certain magpie in a certain tree in all that space.But what other choice did I have?My wife was not encouraging.She said，“Are you crazy？Youll never find it！The Grand Canyon is the biggest hole on Earth！”I didnt say a word and marc
21、hed purposefully onward.I tried hard with hope as I searched dozens of trees and tracked every singing bird.Two hours later，I finally gave up and returned to the car only to find my wife relaxing in a chair，drinking a hot cocoa and wondering why she married me.The next challenge was making out how t
22、o get a new key made.Luckily，another family came through the campsite.They said they were going to town.I asked them to send out a repair man to help us.They promised they would.Five hours later，the repair man showed up.Because of the time he spent on the way，he charged me nineteen times as much as
23、the normal amount for making a new key.The next day，we went back home and stopped at A&W for lunch.I pulled out the cup holder in my car，and the key was sitting right there.It was the only place that I didnt search._参考范文I didnt know who put it theremay be I or maybe my wife.A speechless feeling almo
24、st made me crazy.I got out of the car，looked up at the sky，fell to my knees，and raised my hands shouting.“Whyyyyy？”At the same time，my wife seemed to get much happiness from this memory，mainly from enjoying my embarrassment.In the later years，she told and retold this story to many friends.It clearly became a certain kind of pet phrase.When we couldnt find something or neither of us knew who lost it，she simply said“Go and find the magpie.”点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
