1、表达 作文巧升格UNIT 5 FIRST AID叙事性记叙文本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。基本框架 1开头交代清楚事件的背景。2主体主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。3结尾呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。注意事项：1标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题。2人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称。3时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。常用词块 1without
2、 delay/hesitation 毫不迟疑/毫不犹豫 2learn a lot from it 从中学到很多东西 3give us a warm welcome 热烈欢迎我们 4have a good time with us 和我们一起玩得很开心 5participate more actively in helping those in need 更积极地参与帮助那些有需要的人 6rush him to the hospital 赶紧送他就医 7a basic knowledge of first aid 基本的急救知识 8in the case of emergency 在这种紧急情况
3、下 9benefit a great deal from 从中受益良多 10cause severe injuries to his feet 使他的脚受重伤 常用语句 1Thats really an unforgettable experience.那真是一次难忘的经历。2After a while，many people came to help us.过了一会儿，许多人来帮助我们。3Every time I thought of it，I was full of energy.每当我想到这件事，我就充满了活力。4Although it happened three years ago，
4、I never forgot the evening party.虽然那是三年前发生的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。5Hardly had he heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation.他一听到有人喊救命，就毫不犹豫地跳进了河里。6Before the ambulance came，the lady who proved to be a nurse later performed first aid to the kid.在救护车到来之前，那位后来被证明是护士的女士对这个孩子进
5、行了急救。7The story is a good example in which first aid makes a big difference.这个故事是一个很好的例子，说明急救可以起到很大的作用。8From it，we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better prepared for an emergency.从这件事中，我们知道了解基本的急救技能是必要的，以便我们可以更好地为紧急情况做好准备。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述
6、你与同学参加学校举办的“红十字会急救培训”活动的全过程。注意：词数 80 左右。参考词汇：救护员证书 first aider certificate 学生习作 Last week,I took part in the Red Cross first aid training in our school.At first,we listened to the important and basic steps of first aid in the school hall.In a classroom we watched closely as a trainer showed every mo
7、ve of the procedure.In the test for first aid I managed to carry out all the moves taught.To my excitement,I was issued a first aider certificate.点评：1文中出现了一些简单的语法错误。如 important 应为名词 importance作宾语。2词汇有限，语法单调，高级词汇太少。3只用了一些简单句，缺少高级句式。4全文不太连贯，衔接不够顺畅。升格作文 Last week,I took part in the Red Cross first aid
8、training in our school.At the beginning,we assembled in the school hall to listen to the importance and basic steps of first aid.After a short grouping,we were led to a classroom where a trainer demonstrated the detailed procedure.We watched closely as he showed every move.Then came the test for fir
9、st aid.Although I was nervous,I managed to carry out all the moves taught.To my excitement,I was issued a first aider certificate.I thought that I could help more people in need with the knowledge of first aid.生活中常有意外事故发生。假设你和你班同学李明从锅炉房打完开水，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对此实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇 80
10、词左右的短文，向学校英文报 Teens 投稿，主要内容包括：1描述事故发生的经过；2你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院作进一步的处理)；3简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。参考词汇：锅炉房 boiler house 热水瓶 thermos bottle Accidents always happen suddenly.【参考范文】Accidents always happen suddenly.One day，Li Ming and I were on our way back after fetching some boiling water from the boiler ho
11、use when Li Mings thermos bottle burst and the boiling water caused severe injuries to his feet.The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen.Immediately，I carried him to the water tap nearby and put his feet under the cold running water until the pain lessened.Afterwards，I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further treatment.Only then was I aware what a difference a basic knowledge of first aid can make，especially in such a case.点击右图进入 课 时 分 层 作 业 谢谢观看 THANK YOU!
