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1、书面表达(满分35分)假设你是李华, 在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他在网上看到两幅图片, 希望了解更多的有关情况。请结合下图, 给他写一封回信(词数150左右), 介绍你校的变化、带来变化的原因和自己的感受。(信的格式和开头句已给出)。Dear Mr. Smith,I am so glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell you something about our school Wanchuan Senior High school. Yours, Li Hua第一幅图万川中学(2008)2008年汶川大地震给

2、“我们”学校带来的可怕的灾难;所有建筑变为废墟;以上两点可以直接从图片中得出。根据常识可以推断:夺去很多人的生命。搜索表达的词组或句型Wenchuan earthquake in 2008bring a terrible disaster tobe turned into ruinsclaim a lot of lives第二幅图万川中学(2011)变化:呈现新面貌新建了高楼和操场。搜索表达的词组或句型take on a new lookGreat changes have taken place.tall buildings put upa standard playground built

3、箭头中的文字表示带来变化的原因:其他省市援建;国际国内捐助;当地人民辛勤建设。workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild donations from home and abroadlocal people worked hard day and night注意多重表达Wenchuan earthquake in 2008 brought a terrible disaster to our school.The earthquake, which happened in 2008 in Wenchuan

4、, brought a terrible disaster to our school.A terrible disaster happened to our school in 2008.All of the buildings were turned into ruins.All of the buildings fell down and into ruins.The disaster claimed a lot of lives.A lot of people lost their lives in the disaster.Our school is taking on a new

5、look.Great changes have taken place in our school.A lot of tall buildings have been put up.A standard playground has been built.Thousands of workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild our school.Donations from home and abroad were given to us.The local people worked hard day

6、and night to rebuild our school.注意增加一些细节以及过渡词(组)、过渡句等,使上下文连贯。As you know, the earthquake, which happened in 2008 in Wenchuan, brought a terrible disaster to our school. All of the buildings were turned into ruins and the disaster claimed a lot of lives. Time flies and our school is taking on a new l

7、ook. For example, a lot of tall buildings, including a standard playground, have been built. You may wonder what has brought us the changes. First of all, thousands of workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild it. Moreover, donations from home and abroad were given to us, su

8、ch as money, food, clothes and so on. Additionally, local people worked day and night, which contributed to its restoration.围绕“给我们学校带来变化的原因”进行展开:地震可怕,但是阻止不了我们重建家园;“我”对人们的无私奉献和支援表示感激;作为灾区的一名学生应该怎么做来作为报答。Terrible as the earthquake is, it can never prevent us from rebuilding our homes. Im very grateful

9、 for everyones selfless devotion and assistance. As a student in the disaster-stricken area, Ive made up my mind to study harder to repay peoples deep love.因为是书信,最后还要加上客套话。如:I hope you will come to see for yourself one day.【参考范文】Dear Mr. Smith,I am so glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell

10、you something about our school Wanchuan Senior High school. As you know, the earthquake, which happened in 2008, brought a terrible disaster to our school. All of the buildings were turned into ruins and the disaster claimed a lot of lives. Time flies and our school is taking on a new look. For exam

11、ple, a lot of tall buildings, including a standard playground, have been built. You may wonder what has brought us the changes. First of all, thousands of workers from other provinces and cities came and helped to rebuild it. Moreover, donations from home and abroad were given to us, such as money,

12、food, clothes and so on. Additionally, local people worked day and night, which contributed to its restoration.Terrible as the earthquake is, it can never prevent us from rebuilding our homes. Im very grateful for everyones selfless devotion and assistance. As a student in the disaster-stricken area

13、, Ive made up my mind to study harder to repay peoples deep love.I hope you will come to see for yourself one day.Yours, Li Hua为纪念汶川大地震三周年,某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示,以“Great Changes”为题,用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下:1.某中学灾后三年来的变化,如教学与活动场所,以及师生精神面貌等;2.发生变化的原因;3.你的感想。注意:1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可根据图片提示适当发挥;3.词数:120左

14、右。Great ChangesI am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.【参考范文】Great ChangesI am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.On May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost eve

15、rything in the school, leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including classroom and laboratory buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living ha

16、ppily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now turned into a beautiful school, full of life. Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be not new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unit as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.

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