1、Section Writing an animal fact file 学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠解教材原文名师论道The redcrowned crane is one of the largest cranes in the world, standing at about 150 cm tall.Its feathers are as white as snow, except for some black ones on its face, neck and wings.Its unique feature, from which it gets its name, is t
2、he bright red skin on the top of its head.The redcrowned crane is found in China, Russia, Mongolia, Japan and the Korean Peninsula.In China, it spends the warmer months in the rivers and wetlands in the northeast.When the weather gets cold, it migrates to eastcentral China.Its food includes fish, sn
3、ails and water plants.The redcrowned crane is a symbol of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.学语言本文主要介绍了中国的一种珍稀动物丹顶鹤。范文介绍了丹顶鹤的外形、栖息地、迁徙行为以及在中国文化中的寓意。时态主要运用了一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；语言上使用as .as结构，把丹顶鹤的羽毛比喻成白雪。另外，作者运用了高级句式，如使用现在分词短语作定语，“介词关系代词”引导定语从句等，给文章增色不少。学结构总体介绍(世界上最大的鹤之一)具体介绍(外形特征、栖息地、迁徙行为、饮食习惯)其他
4、介绍(文化寓意)佳句背诵精彩开头1.The Siberian crane is also known as the snow crane.西伯利亚鹤也以雪鹤著称。2.It is about 140 cm in height, generally shorter than the redcrowned crane.它身高约140厘米，一般比丹顶鹤矮。丰满主体1.Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost，making animals lose their homes to live in.许多树木被砍伐，越来越
5、多的森林消失，使得动物失去了居住的家园。2.Many fields are being turned into desert，which makes the animals living there have no place to find food to eat.许多土地正在变成沙漠，这使得生活在那里的动物没有地方找食物吃。3.Many animals are being killed so that some of them are in danger of dying out.许多动物正在被猎杀，导致有些动物濒临灭绝。余味结尾1.In a word，we must take some
6、measures to prevent rare animals from extinction.总之，我们必须采取一些措施来防止珍稀动物灭绝。2.Finally，we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals.最后，我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。3.To protect endangered animals, measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves.为了保护珍稀动物，应该采取措施建立一些自然保护区。仿佳作找差距巧
7、借外力，事半功倍题目要求根据要求写一篇有关濒危动物金丝猴的短文。1栖息地：中国西南部。2外貌：金黄色，有点灰；尾巴和身体一样长。3生活环境：海拔1,5003,000米的森林。4生活习性：群居，吃水果、干果，在树上活动。5金丝猴的数量不断减少，呼吁人们保护金丝猴。仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理第一段：引入话题。第二段：具体介绍金丝猴的情况。第三段：对全文进行总结。Step 2二仿语言规范美观 金丝猴是一种生活在中国西南部的珍稀濒危动物。Golden monkey is an endangered animal that lives in southwestern China.它们的皮毛是金
8、色的，有点灰。Their fur is golden and a bit grey.它们的尾巴和身体一样长。Their tails are as long as their bodies.雄性金丝猴又大又壮。The male golden monkeys are big and strong.雌性的要小得多。The female ones are much smaller.金丝猴生活在海拔1,500至3,000米的森林里。Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1,5003,000 metres above the sea level.它们喜欢群居，以
9、水果、坚果、树叶等为食。They like living in family groups and feed on fruits, nuts, tree leaves and so on.它们的数量越来越少。Their number is getting smaller and smaller.我们的政府已经建立了一些自然保护区来保护它们。Our government has built some nature reserves to protect them.我们希望越来越多的人了解保护金丝猴的重要性。We hope more and more people will understand
10、the importance of protecting golden monkeys.Step 3三仿句间过渡自然用并列连词while连接句和句。The male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller.Step 4誊写Golden monkey is an endangered animal that lives in southwestern China.Their fur is golden and a bit grey.Their tails are as long as the
11、ir bodies.The male golden monkeys are big and strong while the female ones are much smaller.Golden monkeys live in forests which are 1,5003,000 metres above the sea level.They like living in family groups and feed on fruits, nuts, tree leaves and so on.But now their number is getting smaller and smaller.Fortunately，our government has built some nature reserves to protect them.We hope more and more people will understand the importance of protecting golden monkeys.
