1、北师大版高二英语模块五Unit 13 Communication WorkshopWriting：Describing a PersonSentence Expansion广东省佛山市顺德区李兆基中学周玉萍Sentence Expansion(on Description)Debbie 他简直要笑出眼泪。He nearly laughed to tears.他苦笑了一下。He smiled bitterly.他露出了谜之微笑。He smiled mysteriously.他笑靥如花，一脸幸福。He smiled like a blooming flower,filled with happin
2、ess.他举着一直蹄子(trotter)，流着口水笑了。Lifting a trotter,he laughed with his mouth watering.他躲在那个女孩后面，满意地笑了。Hiding behind that girl,he smiled with satisfaction.1234564他笑了。He laughed/smiled.7 他很瘦。He is thin.他瘦成了一道闪电。He is as thin as a flash of lightning.他比我们的谢主任还瘦，简直瘦成了一道闪电。He is much thinner than our Director
3、Xie,just like a flash of lightning.The method of Sentence expansionSupplement(增补法)Head-supplement Mid-supplement Tail-supplement(adj/adv/介宾结构/非谓语/同位语/并列句/从句/)1.Our school will cancel classes on Saturdays.It is unimaginable/unbelievable/a daydream that our school will cancel classes on Saturdays.2.Th
4、e little boy felt nervous.Obviously/It seemed obvious to us that the boy felt nervous.Head-supplement1.As Beijing University was too far away,I decided to choose Shunde University.As Beijing University was too far away from my home,I finally decided to choose Shunde University.2.I realize that Jiang
5、uo is standing outside our classroom.I suddenly realize that Jianguo,who is the most humorous teacher Ive ever met,is standing outside our classroom.Mid-supplement1.We saw him running into the canteen(饭堂).We saw him running into the canteen hurriedly,out of breath.2.One day,David showed up in my off
6、ice.One day,David showed up in my office,his face pale,and his hands shaking slightly.Tail-supplementBasic rules of Sentence expansion Basic rules：1.Be consistent in logic and topic(合乎逻辑，不偏离主题)2.Guarantee fluency with no grammatical or narrative mistakes(确保语言流畅，无语法和表述错误)3.Use richer,more vivid,and m
7、ore concrete expressions(语言更丰富更生动更形象更具体)Time to practise!Activity 1(你一句我一句):Write a sentence and ask your seatmate to expand it.This winter sweet(梅花)is not ordinary.Activity 2(扩句接龙):Invite four of your classmates to make up a group,and then cooperate to expand the following sentence one by one,each
8、of the latter should be based on the former.Example I didnt take Cantonese lessons.Student 1:What I regret most is that I didnt take Cantonese lessons.Student 2:What I regret most is that I didnt take Cantonese lessons when I had a chance to do so.Student 3:What I regret most is that I didnt take Ca
9、ntonese lessons when I had a valuable chance to do so.Student 4:What I regret most is that I didnt take Cantonese lessons when I had a valuable chance to do so before I came to China Town.longerlongeeeerlongeeeeeeerlongeeeeeeeeeeerThis winter sweet(梅花)is not ordinary.This winter sweet is not ordinar
10、y.这朵梅花傲立寒冬，给光秃秃的山坡增添了几分景致，她不是一朵普通的梅花，你要是知道她的名字，一定会大吃一惊，她叫。This winter sweet,which proudly stands in the chilly winter,adding beauty to the bare hillside,is not ordinary in the least,and once you get to know her name,you will be in for a surprise,as her name is Zhang Daimei.张代梅Assignment Expand the following paragraph freely.XXX is my roommate.He/She has a weird(奇怪的)habit.Once you get a chance to live with him/her,never hesitate to seize it.
