1、Section Reading for Writing写一篇学生简介 学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠释教材原文Ann, 15Lakeside High School USAMy name is Ann Wells and Im a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School.Im an active person and I love sports.Im curious about everything.I often ask questions, but I learn best by doing.My favourite subject is p
2、hysics.Dancing and skating are my hobbies, and I also like to read short stories.I plan to become an engineer in the future.Thando, 16South Hill High SchoolSouth AfricaIm Thando Gowon.Im 16 this year.I come from South Africa.Im a Grade 10 student at South Hill High School.I look good, think fast, an
3、d play hard.Youll never see me without a book or a pen.If Im not in class, Im either in the library or in the computer lab.At the weekends, I play computer games if Im not busy studying.My dream is to start my own IT company！名师论道学语言第一部分(About Ann)文章使用了动名词作主语(Dancing and skating)、不定式作宾语(to read short
4、 stories)及用and连接的并列句，从而使得文章的句式多样，表现出作者较强的语言文字功底和文学素养。第二部分(About Thando)1.文章第五句中的“look good”“think fast”“play hard”三个并列动词短语突出表达了人物的特点。2.在介绍学习风格时，作者连续使用了两个高级句式“never .without .”和“either .or .”。never .without .意为“每必”，这是一种双重否定句式，表示肯定意义；either .or .意为“或者或者”，加强语气，以此强调人物对学习的热爱。3.倒数第二句if引导条件状语从句和最后一句不定式短语作表
5、语，增强了文章的可读性。学结构第一部分(About Ann)1.文章开头用句型“My name is .”和“Im a(n) .”直接对人物的姓名、年级、学校进行了具体的描写，表达流畅自然。2.本段恰当地运用连接词and, but等把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。第二部分(About Thando)文章开头介绍了学生的姓名、年龄、国籍、年级、学校等基本信息；接着介绍了外貌、性格特征、爱好及学习风格；最后介绍了人生规划。文章紧凑，思维活跃。佳句背诵1.My name is Li Ming.I am a Senior 3 student of Xinhua Middle School.我是李明
6、，新华中学高三年级的一名学生。2Physics is my favourite subject and I plan to become a physicist in the future.物理是我最喜欢的科目，我计划将来成为一名物理学家。3I am also good at sports, such as football, basketball, and table tennis.我也擅长运动，如足球、篮球和乒乓球。4I have been learning English for nearly six years，so I have a good knowledge of English
7、.我已经学习英语近六年了，因此我精通英语。5Im openminded, easygoing and enthusiastic.I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends.我心胸开阔，性格随和，热情好客。我认为我能够与外国人用英语交流，而且我喜欢交朋友。6I sincerely hope that you can give me a hand, which makes me enjoy my new school life.我真诚地希望你能帮助我，使我能享
8、受新的学校生活。7Id like to make full use of free time to take part in sports activities.我想充分利用空闲时间去参加体育活动。8Last but not least, he is warmhearted and willing to help others in need.最后但同等重要的是，他是热心的并愿意帮助那些需要帮助的人。 仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求假如你叫李华，正在向英国剑桥大学(Cambridge University)提出入学申请。在校方需要的相关材料中，你要准备一份个人简历。现在，请你根据下表信
9、息，写一份个人简历。姓名李华年龄17性别男国籍中国住址山东省济南市山大路26号电子邮箱LiHua1297个人简介1.在济南第一中学就读；2性格外向，对新事物很好奇，喜欢探索大自然；3将来想成为一名设计师；4为提高英语水平，想到剑桥大学学习注意：1.词数80左右；2开头已给出，不计入总词数；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。My name is Li Hua，仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段：基本情况介绍，包括姓名、年龄、性别、国籍、住址等。第二段：介绍自己的特长、阅历等。第三段：告诉别人自己的联系方式。Step 2二仿语言规范美观 1我喜欢运动。(主谓宾结构)I love spor
10、ts.2画画和听音乐是我的爱好。(动名词短语作主语)Painting and listening to music are my hobbies.3思考将来的发展，我计划将来成为一名设计师。(不定式短语作宾语) Thinking about my future，I plan to become a designer4为了提高我的英语语言能力，如果可能的话，我想到剑桥大学学习。(if状语从句的省略)In order to improve my English language skills，I would like to study in Cambridge University if poss
11、ibleStep 3三仿句间过渡自然 1用并列连词合并句1和句2I love sports and painting and listening to music are my hobbies.2用并列连词合并句3和句4Thinking about my future, I plan to become a designer, so in order to improve my English language skills, I would like to study in Cambridge University if possible.Step 4誊写 My name is Li Hua
12、, a senior high school student of 17.I live at 26 Shanda Road, Jinan, China.Im an outgoing boy.I love sports and painting and listening to music are my hobbies.Thinking about my future, I plan to become a designer，so in order to improve my English language skills，I would like to study in Cambridge U
13、niversity if possible.If you think I can get the chance, please get in touch with me, sending an email to LiHua1297.I am looking forward to your early reply.1curious adj.好奇的；求知欲强的(教材p.8)Im curious about everything.我对一切都感到好奇。(1)be curious about sth对某事感到好奇be curious to do sth极想做某事(2)curiosity n.好奇心out
14、 of curiosity出于好奇meet ones curiosity满足某人的好奇心(3)curiously adv.好奇地佳句If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustnt miss this good opportunity!如果你对我们学校的历史感到好奇，或者关心它的未来，你一定不要错过这个好机会！练透单句语法填空Im curious to know (know) how many satellites have been sent into sp
15、ace up to now.Out of curiosity (curious), the man followed the guide into the hall.The people looked at the strange boy curiously (curious).写美补全句子The little boy is very curious about everything he meets with.这个小男孩对他遇到的每件事都很好奇。2company n公司；商行；陪伴(教材p.8)My dream is to start my own IT company!我的梦想是创立自己的
16、IT公司！in ones companyin the company of sb在某人陪伴下in company with sb和某人一起keep sb company与某人做伴；陪伴某人佳句Ill keep you company while youre waiting.我会陪你一起等。练透写出下列句中加黑词的含义Alice found a job as a secretary in an insurance company.公司Company is having another person with you, usually when youre feeling lonely.陪伴写美补
17、全句子He is performing in company with the pianist Lang Lang.他在和钢琴演奏家郎朗一起表演。句型公式：either .or .或者或者，要么要么(教材p.8)If Im not in class, Im either in the library or in the computer lab.如果我不在上课，我要么在图书馆要么在计算机实验室。连接两个并列主语时，谓语动词的数遵循“就近原则”的并列连词有：either .or .或者或者neither .nor .既不也不not only .but also .不但而且not .but .不是
18、而是佳句I often go to either the English Corner or the gym as my afterclass activities.课外活动时，我通常要么去“英语角”，要么去体育馆。练透单句语法填空Either you or one of your students is (be) to attend the meeting.Kunming is a beautiful city, where its neither too hot nor too cold all the year around.写美补全句子Either he or you are righ
19、t；this is to say，not both of you are right.要么他对，要么你对，也就是说，不是你们两个都对。维度一：品句填词1I am so lucky to have a partner (同伴) like you to enjoy the beauty of life together.2What should our marketing strategy (策略) have achieved in future?3What parents do in their daily life will have a great effect on their child
20、rens personality (性格；个性).4The company (公司) has given him a chance to work abroad recently.5English is easy to learn if you practise and revise (复习) it every day.6He is a very popular writer，but I dont like his style (作风).7Only in this way can you have a chance to achieve your goal.8Someone pressed a
21、 switch and all the lights on the Christmas tree flashed together.维度二：词形转换1Some new companies (company) have been set up recently in this area.2All teenagers are looking forward to having (have) happy holidays.3The UN is an international organisation (organise) that helps countries to solve problems
22、 peacefully.4She asked him curiously (curious), “Why do you have this hobby？”5Only in this way can you make improvement (improve) in the operating system.维度三：固定搭配和句式1Her dream is to become a singer, and I believe her dream will come true.(be to do)她的梦想是成为一名歌手，我相信她的梦想会实现的。2When the girl is happy, she
23、 either sings or dances(either .or .)当这个女孩高兴的时候，她要么唱歌要么跳舞。3. No matter what you say, I will never believe you.(no matter疑问词)不管你说什么，我都不会相信你。4It is childrens nature to be curious about the people and things around them.(curious)对周围的人和事物感到好奇是孩子的天性。5I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you. Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.(look forward to)我希望我的建议对你会有帮助。盼望着早日收到你的来信。6They got married while travelling in Europe(状语从句的省略)他们在欧洲旅行时结婚了。
