1、Unit 1 Science and ScientistsPeriod 5Using Language()写作培优课写作素养提升科学与科学家(Science and Scientists)【写作指导】话题阐释本单元写作话题是科学家,属于人物介绍,是高考书面表达常考话题之一,常把它归于记叙文的写作范畴。写作时要围绕人物组织材料。文体概述记叙文是以叙述为主要表达方式,以人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体。时间、人物、地点、起因、经过、结果是记叙文的六要素。记叙文以叙述为主,兼有描写、抒情和议论。框架构建记叙文在结构上通常分三部分来写。第一部分:指明要介绍的人物是谁;第二部分:介绍人物的具
2、体情况(如经历、成就等);第三部分:最后呼应文章开头,完美收尾。【典题示例】请你根据下面的提示,用英语对钟南山作简单介绍。1.钟南山是21世纪中国最著名的医学家之一。2.1936年10月出生于南京;1960年毕业于北京医学院;2003年春,钟南山在抗击“非典”中做出了巨大贡献;2020年初钟南山再一次投身到新型冠状病毒的抗疫前线。3.他是一位受国人尊敬的好医生。注意:1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Step 1谋篇立意体裁:记叙文Tips第一段:指明介绍的人物;第二段:详细介绍人物;第三段:首尾呼应。时态:一般现在时一般过去时人称:第三人称Step 2语言支架1.众所周
3、知,钟南山是21世纪中国最著名的医学家之一。_之一_医学科学家用as引导的定语从句翻译句子_ one of.medical scientistAs we all know,Zhong Nanshan is one of the most famous medical scientists inthe 21st century in China.2.他1960年于北京医学院毕业后就在那里任教。graduate from _担任用现在分词作状语翻译句子_ 毕业于work asHaving graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960,he worke
4、d as ateacher there.3.经过数月的努力,他们终于在抗击非典中取得了卓越的成就。_取得成就用after引导时间状语从句翻译句子_ make achievementsAfter they had worked hard for several months,they made outstandingachievements in the battle at last.4.尽管非常危险,钟南山还是决定再一次参加抗疫斗争。_参加_决定做;决心做用倒装句改写下面句子Although it was dangerous,Zhong Nanshan was determined to ta
5、ke part in the battle again._ take part inbe determined toDangerous as it was,Zhong Nanshan was determined to take part in the battleagain.5.正是因为他们的辛苦工作,最终中国的疫情得到了控制。_得到控制用强调句型翻译句子_ under controlFinally,it was their hard work that made the epidemic situation under controlin China.Step 3润色成篇As we all
6、 know,Zhong Nanshan is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China.He was born in October 1936 in Nanjing,Jiangsu Province.Having graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960,he worked as a teacher there.In the spring of 2003,Zhong Nanshan led his team to fight against S
7、ARS.After they had worked hard for several months,they made outstanding achievements in the battle at last.In the early of 2020,COVID-19 broke out.Dangerous as it was,Zhong Nanshan was determined to take part in the battleagain.He worked with his team day and night treating the patients.Finally,it w
8、as their hard work that made the epidemic situation under control in China.Zhong Nanshan is a good doctor with the spirit of dedication.So he is respected by all the people in China.【善积累获新知】话题词汇识记1.话题词语brave 勇敢的 cautious 谨慎的confident 自信的creative 有创造性的determined 坚定的revolutionary 创新的energetic 精力充沛的ent
9、husiastic 满腔热情的expert 内行的hardworking 努力的patient 耐心的pleasant 令人愉快的,友善的polite 有礼貌的positive 积极的2.实用短语scientific research科学研究set out a new scientific idea 开创新科学观点find a problem发现问题make a question设定疑问collect results收集结果analyse results分析结果think of a method想出一个方法find supporting evidence找到支持的证据in memory of为
10、了纪念in honour of为了纪念;为向表示敬意be strict with对严格话题好句背诵1.However,the scientist stuck to his opinion and went on with his research.然而,这位科学家坚持他的观点,继续他的研究。2.From that time on,she was respected as the leading scientist of the century.从那时起,她就被尊为本世纪最杰出的科学家。3.Actually,great scientific achievements are often the
11、results of years of failure.实际上,伟大的科学成就往往是多年失败的结果。4.Not all scientists can succeed,but the spirit and creativity they represent are more important.并非所有科学家都能成功,但他们所代表的精神和创造力更为重要。5.That is one of the important achievements which he has made.这是他取得的重要成果之一。6.Science has changed the way we live and think.
12、科学改变了我们的生活方式和思维方式。7.His father,a kind-hearted scientist,is respected and loved not only by his friends but also by his family.他的父亲是一位心地善良的科学家,他的朋友和家人都尊敬和爱戴他。8.Einstein was fond of music and often made music with his friends.爱因斯坦喜欢音乐,经常和朋友们一起做音乐。写作点拨 以叙事为主的记叙文应该注意以下几点:1.牢记叙事七要素(时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、经过、结果);2.注意叙事的顺序(按事件发生的时间或空间顺序进行记叙);3.叙事的相对完整性(内容全面,重点突出,详略得当,层次分明);4.确定写作需用的时态(英语记叙文的时态通常为一般过去时,但如果是经常性的事件或自然现象、社会现象,则用一般现在时);5.注意叙议结合(近几年高考的命题有了一种新的变化,即要求在记叙的基础上添加议论的成分)。
