1、Unit 2Morals and VirtuesPeriod 5Reading for Writing()写作培优课写一篇评论(Write a review)【写作指导】话题阐释 英语评论是高考书面表达考查频度较高的话题之一,常涉及影视评论、寓言评论、小说评论等。文体概述 英文评论主要根据材料明确故事的体裁,然后分析里面的演员或人物角色、故事发生的背景、故事的情节和高潮简介,最后是正反两方面的评论。框架建构(开篇:电影名、人物简介)It is an interesting movie about _(主角名字)!Its a lazy panda _(主角描述).(主体:影片故事)It take
2、s place in a small village and Po wants to be a master of Kung Fu.At the beginning,_ Then _.At last,he _.(结尾:表述读后感)After seeing this movie,I realized the importance of _.【典题示例】请以功夫熊猫为题,写一篇影视评论。注意:1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Step 1谋篇立意体裁:应用文开篇:陈述基本信息主体:围绕具体事件展开陈述结尾:表述感想或体会时态:一般现在时人称:第三人称Step 2语言支架1.这是
3、一部有趣的电影,讲的是一个叫阿宝的懒熊猫,一个疯狂的功夫迷。an interesting movie _of Kung Fu 一个疯狂的功夫迷用动词-ed形式及同位语从句翻译句子:_ 一部有趣的电影a crazy fanIt is an interesting movie about a lazy panda named Po,a crazy fan of Kung Fu.2.阿宝一直想成为一名功夫大师来保护自己和家人,以及小村庄,但一开始他并没有取得任何进展。_想要保护他自己_at the beginning 一开始取得进展连词成句:_ want to protect himselfmake
4、 some progressPo always wants to be a master of Kung Fu to protect himself,his familyand his small village,but he did not make any progress at the beginning.3.偶然地,他赢得了一场格斗比赛,并被一位大师选中,教他如何格斗。_赢得一场格斗比赛a master _and taught him how to fight一位大师选中了他并教他如何格斗用被动语态及定语从句翻译句子:_ win a match of fightingselected
5、himOccasionally,he won a match of fighting and was selected by a masterwho taught him how to fight.4.看了这部电影,我意识到,不管有多难,只要我们有梦想,并为之奋斗,总有一天会成功的。_不管有多难fight for the dream_someday 总有一天会成功用介词短语及条件状语从句翻译句子:_no matter how hard it is为梦想而战make itAfter seeing this movie,I realized that no matter how hard it i
6、s,as long aswe have the dream and fight for it,we will make it someday.Step 3润色成篇Kung Fu PandaHave you ever seen the movie Kung Fu Panda?It is an interesting movie about a lazy panda named Po,a crazy fan of Kung Fu.Po always wants to be a master of Kung Fu to protect himself,his family and his small
7、 village,but he did not make any progress at the beginning.Occasionally,he won a match of fighting and was selected by a master who taught him how to fight.At last,after beating a bad guy called Tai lung,he became the real master of Kung Fu.After seeing this movie,I realized that no matter how hard
8、it is,as long as we have the dream and fight for it,we will make it someday.善积累获新知话题好句背诵1.Recently,an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.最近,一部优秀的电影将在我们的校园上映。2.No matter how hard it is,as long as we have the dream and fight for it,we will make it someday.不管有多难,只要我们有梦想并为之奋斗,总有一天我们会成功的。写作点拨影
9、视评论的写作步骤模板1.A proper title2.Beginning(1)Introduction to the film(within 2-3 sentences)(2)Main idea(general/critical view about the film)3.Development(1)Analysis of the most striking/impressive scenes(2)Inspirations from the film(3)Film-making stuff(background/language/setting/music/dressing.)with unique feature4.EndingSummary and re-emphasis of personal view about the film
