1、写作素养提升练Unit 8 Detective stories本单元讲述了一些侦探故事，通过学习，我们不但要学会讲述故事情节，而且还要提高自我保护意识。自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。假设你是Simon,今天的报纸上报道了一起谋杀案，请根据以下信息，写一篇 80-100 词的日记。1.今早发现一个年轻女孩死在家中，女孩可能是附近超市的售货员。2.警察来到现场勘查，一位老人说案发当晚看到一个穿着夹克衫的人从女孩家跑出来，可能是她的男朋友。3.男子方脸，鼻子很大，中等身材，警方正在抓捕中。4.警方已经悬赏一万元以获取有用的信息，任何有消息的人都应该联系警察。【思路构建】步骤构思列纲1介绍案情及
2、被害人信息A young girl was found dead in her house this morning.2警察勘查现场，走访群众The police have checked the scene.步骤构思列纲3锁定嫌疑人，描述嫌疑人A square face with a big nose,medium height.4悬赏征集信息以抓捕嫌疑人Offered a reward of 10,000 foruseful information.Sunday,4 August FineHere is todays local news.Another murder happened!A
3、 young girl was found dead in her house this morning.Her neighbour said she might be a saleswoman in a supermarket nearby.The police have checked the scene.An old man said he saw a young man dressed in a jacket running out of the house last night.The young man was【精彩范文】likely to be the girls boyfrie
4、nd.He is now wanted by the police.This young man has a square face with a big nose.He is of medium height.He might be cruel enough to kill his girlfriend.The police have offered a reward of 10,000 for useful information.Anyone with information should contact the police.1.murder 谋杀2.saleswoman 女售货员，女
5、店员3.detective 侦探4.scene 场面，现场【常用单词】1.be found dead 被发现死亡2.check the scene 检查现场3.run out of the room 跑出房间4.of medium height 中等身材5.a reward of 奖励【常用短语】1.Sb.be found dead.this morning.今天早上某人被发现死了2.He/She might be.他/她可能是3.The police and a detective have checked the scene.警察和一名侦探检查了现场。【常用句型】4.He/She is n
6、ow wanted by the police.他/她现在被警察通缉。5.The police have offered a reward of.for useful information.警方悬赏获取有用的信息。假设你叫李华，晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案。请根据表格中的信息，写一篇日记，词数80-100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。案发时间大约晚上九点。案发地点电影院附近的一条街道拐角处。作案人情况 两个男子：一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子。受害人情况 一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表。案发经过你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救。你看到两个男子正在抢劫一名女
7、子。女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗。当你赶到时，两个劫匪已各自骑着摩托车逃跑了。女子的金手表被抢走了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤。Saturday,2 June SunnyWhat a terrible thing I came across tonight!_I hope the government may take action to make our society safe._Saturday,2 JuneSunnyWhat a terrible thing I came across tonight!At about nine in the evening,I was on the way
8、 back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind.I turned around and found a tall man with a pair of sunglasses and a short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinema.The_woman wore a gold necklace and a gold watch.She put up a good fight with them.I ran towards them but when I arrived，the two robbers had ridden their motorcycles away.They robbed the woman of her gold watch.But luckily，the woman wasnt hurt.I hope the government may take action to make our society safe.
