1、Section Writing写今昔对比类电子邮件描写今昔对比时要根据过去的情况和现在的事实组织材料。这类书面表达的一般写作格式为：1开头提出主题句(提出什么事情发生了变化)2对过去情况的描述(用过去时态，主要是一般过去时)3对现在情况的描述(用现在时态，主要是一般现在时)4总结句1Our school/hometown，as we all know，is not what it used to be.2Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.3Two new buildings have bee
2、n built and are in use.4Now，a large number of trees have been planted，which hold the soil and water.5I believe that the life of the peasants will get better and better.6I am glad to tell you something about it.7Please write to me soon and tell me about your.8Compared with the environment.years ago，t
3、he present environment has been greatly/significantly.with the efforts.假设你是某中学的学生李华，最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你校，听说你校现在变化很大，希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。三年前一座教学楼，一个操场，学生1 000多人现在1.校园扩建：新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，教学楼内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等；2学生人数增加到了2 000多人；3体育设施与音乐器材配备齐全；4绿化了校园。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，
4、但不计入总词数。参考词汇：体育设施sports facilities装备equipDear Joy，I was pleased to hear from you and Im writing to tell you something about the changes in my school. Yours，Li Hua体裁应用文时态一般现在时，一般过去时主题今昔对比人称第一人称为主，第三人称为辅结构第一段：开头提出学校发生了变化；第二段：详细描述今昔对比；第三段：表达自己的祝愿。.对接模块词汇1change变化2take place 发生3no longer 不再4in use 在使用5a
5、ll kinds of 各种各样的6be equipped with 装备有7musical instrument 乐器.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1众所周知，我们学校已经发生了巨大变化。We all know that great changes have taken place in my school.2它现在不再是三年前的样子了。It is no longer what it used to be three years ago.3那时候仅有一个教学楼和一个操场。There was only one teaching building and a playground at th
6、at time4其中之一是一座新教学楼。One of them is a new classroom building.5在这座新教学楼中，有音乐教室、美术教室和计算机教室。There are rooms for music，art and computer teaching in the new classroom building.(二)句式升级6用as引导非限制性定语从句升级句1As is known，great changes have taken place in my school.7用when引导的非限制性定语从句合并句2、3It is no longer what it use
7、d to be three years ago，when there was only one teaching building and a playground.8用“in which”引导的非限制性定语从句合并句4、5One of them is a new classroom building，in which there are rooms for music，art and computer teaching. 【参考范文】Dear Joy，I was pleased to hear from you and Im writing to tell you something abo
8、ut the changes in my school.As is known，great changes have taken place in my school.It is no longer what it used to be three years ago，when there was only one teaching building and a playground.Now two new buildings have been built and are in use.One of them is a new classroom building，in which ther
9、e are rooms for music，art and computer teaching.The other is the library，where there are all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.Besides，my school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments.The number of students has also grown from 1，000 to 2，000.Whats more，we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.I believe my school will become better and better，and I hope you will visit my school again.Yours，Li Hua
