1、苏州市相城区 2021 届高三第一学期阶段性诊断测试47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Standing by the window,Della looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard.Tomorrow would be Christmas Day,and she had only one dollar and eighty-seven cents to buy her husband Jim a gift.There was
2、a tall glass mirror between the windows of the room.Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror and looked at herself.Now,Mister and Missus James Dillingham Young had two possessions which they valued.One was Jims gold watch that had been his fathers and his grandfathers.
3、The other was Dellas hair.Dellas beautiful hair fell about her,shining like a brown waterfall.It reached below her knees and made itself almost like a covering for her.She stood still while a few tears fell on the floor.And then quickly she put on her coat.With a quick motion and brightness in her e
4、yes,she danced out the door and down the street.Where she stopped the sign read:“Madame Sofrnie.Hair Goods of All Kinds.”Della ran up the steps to the shop,out of breath.“Will you buy my hair?”asked Della.“Twenty dollars,”said Madame,lifting the hair with an experienced hand.The next two hours went
5、by as if they had wings.Della looked in all the stores to choose a gift for Jim.She found it at last.It was a chain-simple round rings of silver.It was perfect for Jims gold watch and it cost twenty-one dollars.When Della arrived home she watched herself in the mirror.The hair had been ruined by her
6、 love and her desire to give a special gift.At seven oclock that night the coffee was made and the pan on the back of the stove was hot and ready to cook the meat.Jim was never late coming home from work.Della held the silver chain in her hand and sat near the door.Then she heard his steps and she t
7、urned white for just a minute,whispering:“Please God,make him think I am still pretty.”注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The door opened and Jim stepped in._Inside Jims package were combs something special to hold and decorate her long hair._【答案】One possible version:Paragraph 1:The door opened
8、and Jim stepped in.Stopping inside the door,Jims eyes were fixed upon Della with a strange expression she could not read.It terrified her.“Jim,darling,”she cried,“dont look at me that way.I had my hair cut off and sold because I couldnt have lived through Christmas without giving you a present.”“You
9、ve cut off your hair?”asked Jim,as if he had not arrived at that fact yet even after the hardest mental labor.Then,slowly,from his overcoat pocket,he drew a package and put it upon the table.Paragraph 2:Inside Jims package were combs something special to hold and decorate her long hair.Beautiful com
10、bs,pure tortoise shell,with jeweled rims just the shade to wear in the beautiful vanished hair.With tears,Della hugged them to her bosom and said:“My hair grows so fast,Jim!”And then she cried,“Oh,oh!Give me your watch.You dont know what a nice gift Ive got for you.”Instead of obeying,Jim smiled.“De
11、ll,lets put our Christmas presents away and keep them a while.Theyre too nice to use just at present.I sold the watch to get the money to.buy your combs.”【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，圣诞节要到了，Della 想给丈夫 Jim 买一个圣诞礼物，但自己没有太多钱；看到自己有一头秀发，Della 决定卖掉自己的秀发给丈夫 Jim 买一份礼物，最后 Della 卖掉了自己长发给丈夫买了一条链状的银制圆环。回到家后，D
12、ella 等待丈夫的归来。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：门开了，Jim 走了进来，所以本段描述 Jim 看到 Della 剪掉头发后的反应。第二段开头是：Jim 的包里是梳子，是用来固定和装饰她的长发的特别的东西。本段应该描述为 Della 和丈夫 Jim 对彼此的改变的反应。写作时，需要按题目要求去完成文章，注意控制文章的词数。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：I had my hair cut off and sold because I couldnt have lived throu
13、gh Christmas without giving you a present.这句话运用了 because 引导的状语从句；本文也使用了一些固定词组，如 fix upon;cut off;instead of 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2020 年夏“武汉襄阳荆门宜昌四地六校考试联盟”47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Before our wedding,my fiance(未婚夫)and I were very excited about shopping f
14、or our first house.So,we took look at several houses,yet as our funds were limited,none of the houses in our price range seemed satisfactory.One agent recommended a house in particular.Although her description of the house sounded very wonderful,the price was beyond our range,so we declined.However,
15、she kept urging us to have a look at least.We finally agreed and went to take a look.It was lovely at first sight.It was small but charming,overlooking a quiet beautiful lake.Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners,a kind and hospitable elderly couple,we felt the warmth and happiness o
16、f the marriage within that house.It was exactly the house we wanted!Perfect as it was,the price remained much too high for us.But every day,we could sit by the lake,looking at the house and dreaming of what it would be like to live there.Days later,we made an offer,which was far below the asking pri
17、ce.As the price was so low,we were afraid that they would laugh it off.Surprisingly,they didnt laugh at us.They renewed their offer instead.It was also much more than we could actually afford,but far less than the original asking price.The next day,we got a disappointing message that another buyer o
18、ffered a much higher price.Even so,we made up our minds to talk with the owners directly.We made our final offer,which was still thousands of dollars less than the other buyers bid.We knew it,yet we decided to have a try.Nobody knew if we could get it.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Pa
19、ragraph 1:We went to the owners home,only to find the other buyer visiting the owners too._Paragraph 2:The owner looked at us and said,I decide to sell my house to you!_【答案】We went to the owners home,only to find the other buyer visiting the owners too.He said the price he offered was much higher th
20、an ours,he begged the owners to sell it to him,then the owner asked the buyer,why do you want this house?The buyer said Because it is near the city.I want to buy it for investment.I can rent it to earn money.the owner thought for a while and then looked at him and said.Im sorry,sir.I cant sell my ho
21、use to you,because I am looking for someone who truly loves my house,not just for money.The owner looked at us and said,I decide to sell my house to you!Then he explained:Hed seen us sitting by the lake all those times;he knew how much we loved the place and that wed appreciate the years of work the
22、y had put into their home;he realized he would take a loss by selling it to us.but it was worthwhile;we were the people they wanted to live there.He told us to consider the difference in the price an early wedding present.Thats how we found our home and how I learned that when people are kind,they a
23、re not strangers,only friends we havent yet met.【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写。本篇主要讲述了作者和丈夫去购买新婚用的房子。他们看上了一套房子，但中介告诉他们有人比他们的出价更高。抱着试一试的态度，他们决定和房子的主人见上一面。【详解】续写分为两部分。第一部分的开头是：我们去了房东家里，却发现另一个买家也在。所以可以接着写：他说自己的出价更高，并要求房东把房子卖给他。然后房东问他买房的原因，他说是因为想把房子当作投资。房东思考了一下说，不能把房子卖给他，因为他们要找的是爱房子的人，而不是把它当作投资，用来挣钱的人。第二部分的开头是：然后房东看着
24、我们说：“我决定把房子卖给你。”所以可以接着写，房东说：他看见我们最近常常坐在湖边，知道我们非常爱这套房子，也相信我们会欣赏他们在这套房子中投入的精力。所以他决定低价把房子卖给我们。至于那些不够的钱就当作是提前给我们的结婚礼物。我们就这样找到了喜爱的房子，也明白了一些道理。写作时应注意续写内容要符合逻辑，人称的转换和时态。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I cant sell my house to you,because I am looking for someone who truly l
25、oves my house,not just for money.中 who 引导定语从句；Thats how we found our home and how I learned that when people are kind,they are not strangers,only friends we havent yet met.中 how 引导表语从句，that 引导宾语从句。雅礼中学 2021 届高三月考试卷（一）67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Simple ThankI have been in the teaching p
26、rofession more than thirty years,and one of the best teachers I have ever known was Mr.Rowe.I was lucky enough to co-teach fourth grade with him.Mr.Rowe had infinite patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him.He could perform miracles,like the one he performed with Steven,one
27、 of the unhappiest kids I ever saw.Steven couldnt stand school.He didnt like being picked last for kickball.He didnt like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers,and most importantly,he didnt like himself.The first day he walked into Mr.Rowes classroom,he ignored the other students,
28、looking angry and annoyed,and slid into his chair,knocking a couple of textbooks onto the floor.Mr.Rowe walked over to him and touched Stevens shoulder,but Steven pulled away.Nevertheless,Mr.Rowe welcomed him,“Hi,Steven.Im happy you are in my class.We are gonna have a great year.”Steven looked aroun
29、d the room as if Mr.Rowe must be mistaken.No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his classroom.So,while Mr.Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school.It seemed like Steven was angry and confused.That day after classes,Mr.Rowe chose Steven to pitch the kickball at reces
30、s.“Hey,Steven,”Mr.Rowe commented,“You are good at pitching.Let me show you my secret trick.”Mr.Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform.Steven learned fast and did quite well!Everyone cheered for him!After the kickball,Steven sat as closer to Mr.Rowe in classes as he
31、could.When a question was asked,Steven lit up;he knew the answer!He raised his hands.When he answered the question,his voice shook.However,he got the answer right!He said,with Mr.Rowe,his days of the fourth grade promised wonderful.That was not to say that every day went smoothly,but it was evident
32、that Steven grew to love Mr.Rowe more and more with each passing day.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Time passed quickly that year,and before we all knew it,it was the last day of school._Many years later,Mr.Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom,dressed
33、 in the Marine Corps(海军)uniform,_【答案】Time passed quickly that year,and before we all knew it,it was the last day of school.Our school had a very special tradition on the last day All the teachers filled the sidewalk,waving goodbye to the kids as the buses pulled out with their horns honking.But on t
34、hat particular day,Steven walked slowly to the bus,his head down,tears in his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly,hesitated,and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr.Rowe,“I dont want to leave you.”He sobbed.With red-rimmed eyes,Mr.Rowe comforted him,“I will miss you,too.”Many years later,Mr.Rowe and
35、I were surprised when handsome young man walked into our classroom,dressed in the Marine Corps(海军)uniform.The young man stood tall and proud.It was Steven!Mr.Rowe and I couldnt believe our eyes.He saluted and hugged Mr.Rowe tightly!“I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!”It is m
36、y hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back simply to say a very simple THANKS.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇读后续写。【详解】“读后续写”题型的写作步骤：1精读文章，确定文章线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”。阅读材料得知：作者是有 30 年教龄的老师，曾经有幸和耐心善解人意的 Rowe 老师共同带四年级。文章重点叙述了 Rowe 老师如何感化不快乐的学生史蒂文的故事。2仔细审题，明确续写要求，
37、如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有数”。回扣原文，想象续写内容。快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。续写的第一段场景是史蒂文毕业前的最后一天。需要写出老师们欢送学生，学生们尤其史蒂文对 Rowe 老师的依依不舍。第二段描述多年后，当上海军的史蒂文回校感谢 Rowe 老师的故事。3拟写草稿，修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，上下文的衔接。4标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语，最后誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级
38、词汇和高级句子。如：boarded the bus reluctantly,hesitated 等高级词汇；运用了非谓语动词 All the teachers filled the sidewalk,waving goodbye to the kids as the buses pulled out with their horns honking.以及强调句 It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such an experience of a former student coming back simply to say a ve
39、ry simple THANKS.等高级句式。徐州市 2021 届高三 9 月学情调研考试47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。Zigfried was a little mouse who used to live with a happy family.The children of the family would hug him in the arms and discussed about their Christmas gifts.Zigfried enjoyed every hour of them,espe
40、cially when he was drinking hot chocolate.Suddenly he was woken up by the noise coming from his own stomach.He stretched himself and rubbed his eyes.Slowly and feebly he climbed to the windowsill.Zigfried blew his breath on the frosty window of the farmhouse and rubbed it to see the outside.Still no
41、body came.Maybe today,he thought hopefully.It was only a few days before Christmas and he was watching for a miracle.This farmhouse had been empty too long.All the equipment was covered with dust and dirt.Everything looked like dead ashes.It needed a family.Only a familys moving in could light up th
42、e house.Again Zigfrieds stomach made a noise.He realized that he hadnt eaten anything since yesterday.He jumped from the windowsill,took a bag from his home,and went next door to Farmer Mikes.He wished to get something to eat for the present.If lucky enough,he could store some sandwiches,cheese or c
43、hocolates for the coming of his granny who would arrive on Christmas Eve to celebrate with him,bringing a Christmas gift.Farmer Mikes house had been a great place for the little mouse until the farmer married a wife who had a cat.The cat was in and out of the window constantly and meowed horribly in
44、to the bargain.Zigfried trembled when he thought of that narrow escape with the cat.He looked around carefully as he stole into the room where grain was stored and was quite nervous as he filled his bag with wheat.Paragraph 1：He was turning to leave when suddenly he felt a hot breath about his ear._
45、Paragraph 2：The next afternoon Zigfried heard some good news：_【答 案】One possible version:He was turning to leave when suddenly he felt a hot breath about his ear.The cat placed his paw upon the bag and began to open his big jaws to swallow him.His heart beat wildly,and without thinking,he started to
46、run as quickly as he could and luckily escaped the cats paws.But the bag filled with delicious food was left in the barn.He took a deep breath and bit his teeth pretending to enjoy something he liked.The next afternoon Zigfried heard some good news:a new family would be moving into the farmhouse soo
47、n.Before long,a car came up the road leading to the house,with butter sandwiches,cheese and chocolate.Zigfrieds Christmas miracle did arrive!The house came alive the next few days.However,the day before Christmas,he heard the discussion of the children of the family about what they might get as Chri
48、stmas gifts.What?A cat?The smile froze on his face;his mouth fell wild open.After a long while,he at last found his voice:“Hey!Whose Christmas miracle is this?”【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇读后续写。要求考生根据前文线索续写短文，情节合理，内容流程。而且还要使用文章里的划线词，总体难度很大。【详解】第 1 步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一篇记叙文，要求续写小老鼠 Zigfried 到农民 Mike 的家里偷粮食之后发生的事情，全文
49、使用一般过去时和第三人称。第 2 步：组织要点。第一段：Zigfried 遇到了农民 Mike 所养的猫，它拼命逃跑。却把偷来的食物拉在了后面，只能饿着肚子。第二段：新的一家人要搬进 Zigfried 藏身的这家农舍，这意味着会有很多食物，的确产生了圣诞奇迹。但它没有想到的是新的主人也要养一只猫。它没有想到所谓的圣诞礼物是一只猫。第 3 步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为 swallow，run as quickly as，escape，miracle，get as Christmas gifts，A cat 等。写作时注意上下文线索的串联。第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进
50、行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如 swallow，escape，pretend，lead to，miracle 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句及分词做状语pretending to enjoy something he liked.宾语从句he heard the discussion of the children of the family about w
51、hat they might get as Christmas gifts.同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如 however 等,这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。2021 届辽宁渤大附中、育明高中高三第一次考试47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of
52、my mother-loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells us a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way
53、.As the first day of our tip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if wed ever see them again!Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drov
54、e off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go,and
55、I will stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.I had terrible pictures in my mind:Honey,where are the kids?What?!Oh，Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.We were never actually left behind in a strange city,but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we h
56、ad trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and asked if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could underst
57、and our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.Paragraph IThe next day we remembered the brand new(崭新)tent we brought with us,_Paragraph 2We dro
58、ve through several states and saw lots of sights along the way._【答案】One possible version:We were happy to see it all still packed,and hoped it would be packed forever.However,things came to its turning point.Mom lost Dad in the gas station when we were sleeping.Whats more,as the dark approached,we m
59、et the same trouble again.Fearful as Mom was,she decided to camp near the road waiting for Dad.The wind cried widely like a monster.Tears took control of us.Mom embraced us tightly singing a smooth song,which really relaxed us.We didnt met Dad in the last few days,but we felt comfortable staying wit
60、h MomThe tent bacame a close friennd then.Every time we camped,Mom would read a book or sing a soft song.The warmth of her arms never faded away in my memory.Though she was forgetful,laugher accompanied us along the way.We finally met poor Dad in our destination.This trip made me realize that love m
61、ay have many ways,but it can always warm people in the dark.【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写。短文叙述了作者的母亲很健忘，一家四口自驾旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了有趣的事情。【详解】根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事(尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个 forgetful 的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事)(也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现 nice这一个点);其次，
62、第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景：此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只能有景色描述；例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等等角度都可以的;当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题;总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多；续写部分分为两段：第一段开头是：第二天，我们想起了我们带的那个全新的帐篷，所以应该写由于没有找到有空房的旅馆，利用帐篷在户外扎营发生的的一系列事情。母亲健忘而在加油站把父亲落下了，因此母亲在路边扎营等父亲。夜晚天气非常恶劣，母
63、亲依然唱着轻松的歌让大家放松。这与第一段作者所描述的母亲慈爱、健忘等特点相呼应；第二段的开头是：我们开车经过几个州，沿途看到了许多风景后面继续写，在父亲不在的情况下，母亲虽然健忘，但是一路走来，母亲用读书声或轻柔的歌声陪伴孩子们。最终在目的地等到了父亲。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：Whats more，take control of，fade away 等高级词汇；时间状语从句：as the dark approached,we met the same trouble again，让步状语从句：Though she was forgetful,laugher accompanied us along the way 等高级句式。
