1、山东省新高考质量测评12月联合调研监测47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。It was 1939, and the Great Depression had made all our lives much harder. But we didnt know how poor we were until our father sat my brother and me down on the couch in our living room to have a talk.I will always remember the
2、sad look in Fathers eyes as he stared down at his hands, rubbing them back and forth, while he searched for the words to tell us that our family wasnt going to be celebrating Christmas this year.A month later, on Christmas Eve, I lay awake in bed late into the night, trying to talk myself out of sne
3、aking into our living room to see if Santa had come. I gathered my courage, then tiptoed down the hallway, hoping I would see the bright sparkling lights of our Christmas tree standing proudly in the corner of our living room, like it did every year.Instead, I was greeted by my seventeen-year-old br
4、other, Frank, who slept on our living room couch. “Hey, little one, what are you doing up?” he whispered.I started to cry. “Theres no Christmas tree.”There would be no presents, no singing, no Christmas dinner. It felt like we were the saddest family in the world. My disappointment overwhelmed me. I
5、 looked forward to Christmas each year. It wasnt only the presents. It was that special feeling I got from seeing my family happy. We hadnt been happy in such a long time.On Christmas morning, the sun shone into our chilly bedroom, waking me up. “Maybe Santa came! Maybe he came!” I suddenly insisted
6、. My eyes searched the living room, but there was no Christmas tree. I broke into uncontrollable tears.I ran to Father in tears and threw my arms around him. “ We arent going to have Christmas this year.”“Now, now, now, calm down. Go on in and see your mother. She will comfort you.” Dad slowly pushe
7、d the bedroom door open, leading me into the room.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed something different in the bedroom._阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。With my question answered, everything dawned on me._【答案】Out of the corner of my eye, I n
8、oticed something different in the bedroom. “Merry Christmas, my dearest child,” said Mom with her two warm arms holding me gently. “What is this in the sparkling box? Do you want to know?” Then she put it into my hands and told me to open it .Excitedly I uncovered it , in the box lay a tiny music bo
9、x with a small Christmas tree on it. How wonderful it looked! “But Dad told me that it is the Great Depression now, and we are living a hard life .How could you get the money for my Christmas gift ?” Mother told me that she had sold her gold ring .With my question answered, everything dawned on me.
10、It was mothers truest love for her dearest child that made her sell her favourite gold ring which had accompanied her for a long time. No mother in the world would like to disappoint her child on such an important day. I kissed Mom on her cheeks saying Merry Christmas to her . That special music box
11、 taught me a lessonno matter how tough the life is , my family would face it bravely as long as there is love in our heart.【解析】【分析】本文以人物情感为线索展开，讲述了作者在美国经济大萧条时期家庭困难没钱买圣诞树过圣诞节的故事。根据原文所述，作者在圣诞节早上醒来没发现一丁点的圣诞节节日迹象后开始失望地哭闹起来，谁知妈妈在卧室里像变戏法一样地送他一份圣诞节礼物，为贫困的家庭带来节日的气息。【详解】【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“在我眼角的余光里，我发现房间里有些不
12、一样的东西。”可知，第一段可描写“不一样的东西”，是什么，它怎么来的以及作者情绪的细微变化。由第二段首句内容“我的问题得到回答后，我明白了一切。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了事情的真相以及得到了什么感悟，从妈妈对孩子的爱和孩子的感激之情入手。2.续写线索：发现不一样的东西卖金戒指音乐盒提问感激感悟3.词汇激活行为类打开：uncovered it/opened it生活艰难：living a hard life/ living a tough life.陪伴：accompany her/ have its company/be with her情绪类.兴奋：excitedly/ thrilled
13、ly.勇敢：bravely/courageously【点睛】高分句型1. That special music box taught me a lessonno matter how tough the life is , my family would face it bravely as long as there is love in our heart.（no matter how引导的让步状语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句）高分句型2. It was mothers truest love for her dearest child that made her sell
14、 her favourite gold ring which had accompanied her for a long time.（It is that 强调句，及由关系代词which引导限制性定语从句）江苏省启东中学2020-2021学年度第一学期高三测试47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I lay on my bed, legs leaning against the wall, desperately wishing my mother would call. But I remembered the last
15、 time Id seen her, right before the train for Providence pulled out of the station, “You know how expensive it is to call,” she said, then hugged me tight and said good- bye.This was my first birthday away from home. I missed my mom, missed my sister, and most certainly missed the special pound cake
16、 my mother always made for my birthday. Since getting to college that year, I would watch jealously as the other freshmen received care packages from their parents on their birthdays-and even on ordinary days. Big boxes containing summer slacks and blouses, packages of M&Ms and Snickers , things the
17、y needed and things they didnt. Instead of feeling thrilled about my upcoming eighteenth birthday, I felt empty. I wished my mom would send me something, too, but I knew that she couldnt afford presents or the postage. She had done her best with my sister and me-raising us by herself. The simple tru
18、th was there just was never enough money.But that didnt stop her from filling us with dreams. “You can be anything you want to be,” she would tell us. “Politicians, dancers, writers - you just have to work for it; you have to get an education.”Thanks to my moms sacrifices and big dreams, Id made it
19、to the Ivy League: Brown University in Providence, Rhode Island.As I was recalling these things, my roommate joined me on the bed. “Hey. After we study, lets buy ice cream and cake.” I nodded, closed my eyes, and imagined the cake Mom would have made. Mmm. I could see the golden yellow of each of th
20、e twelve eggs, and I could almost smell the vanilla(香草) filling the house while the cake baked.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1As I daydreamed, there was a knock on the door._ _Paragraph 2How had she managed to afford it? _【答案】读后续写Paragraph 1:As I daydreamed, there was a knock
21、 on the door. My roommate opened it to find a deliveryman asking for me. He handed her a large box, which she carefully placed on the desk near my bed. “Open it”. I did, and inside was a vanilla cake with chocolate frosting. In icing were the words: “Happy Birthday, Sande! Love, Mom.” I was filled w
22、ith excitement, as if Mom were right there hugging me close. Paragraph 2:How had she managed to afford it? I felt as if I were back at home with her, safe and secure while she sang and told me how much she loved having me in her life. I ran out to the hall and knocked on my dormmates doors. “Birthda
23、y cake,” I called. I cut cake for the students gathering in my room and watched their faces as they ate, because I didnt need to eat to feel both full and rich inside.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求续写两段内容（我收到妈妈送我的生日蛋糕和我的感受以及我和室友们一起分享的情节），注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好时态
24、应为一般过去时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； deliveryman（送货员），carefully（小心翼翼地），excitement（兴奋），secure（安全）， hug（拥抱）及gather（聚集）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be filled with（充满），run out（跑出去），as if (仿佛、好像)，ask for sb（找
25、某人）以及knock on（敲门），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“He handed her a large box, which she carefully placed on the desk near my bed.”，状语从句“I was filled with excitement, as if Mom were right there hugging me close.”以及“I cut cake for the students gathering in my room and watched their faces as they ate, because I didnt ne
26、ed to eat to feel both full and rich inside.”，非谓语动词“My roommate opened it to find a deliveryman asking for me.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。河北省“五个一”名校联盟2021届高三联考47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The young mother stared down at her son who was seriously ill. Although her heart was filled with sadness,
27、she also had a strong feeling of determination. Like any other parents, she wanted her son to grow up and fulfill all his dreams with ease though that might be impossible.But she still wanted her sons dreams to come true. She took her sons hand and asked,“Billy, have you ever thought about what you
28、would be if you grew up? Have you ever wished what you would do with your life? Mommy, I always want to be a fireman when I grow up. The mother smiled back and said, Lets see if we can make your wish come true. Later that day, she went to her local fire department, where she met Fireman Bob, who had
29、 a heart as big as the sea.She explained her sons last wish and asked if it might be possible to give her six-year-old son a ride around the block on a fire engine. Fireman Bob said, Look, we can do better than that. If youll have your son ready at seven o clock on Wednesday morning, well make him a
30、n honorary fireman for the whole day. He can come down to the fire station, eat with us, go out on all the fire calls! And if youll give us his sizes, well get a real fire uniform for him, with a real fire hat.Three days later, Fireman Bob picked up Billy, dressed him in the fire uniform and took hi
31、m from his hospital bed to the ladder truck. Billy got to sit on the back of the truck and help guide it back to the fire station.They finally reached the fire department. The firemen, with all the love and attention given to him, led Billy to be a good fireman all day. And finally the little boy go
32、t the hat with the symbol of the Fire Department on it. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A miracle（奇迹）seemed to be happening._ The firefighters decided to hold a fire escape and rescue the boy from the window._【答案】 A miracle (奇迹） seemed to be happening. After months of careful treatment, the doc
33、tor and the mother found Billy was getting better. Finally, the boy fully recovered, and the doctor informed them that they could leave hospital the next day. The mother thought the miracle of her sons recovery was partly the result of the firemen s kindness and effort. So she called the fire depart
34、ment and told them the good news that her sons discharge from hospital. The firemen felt happy for this. They decided to give the boy a big surprise.The firefighters decided to hold a fire escape and rescue the boy from the window. The next day, with the hospitals permission, the fire truck drove in
35、to the hospital. They put up a ladder outside the window of the boys room. When the mother opened the window in time, a fireman jumped in and said, Dear little fireman, congratulations on your recovery! Ill take you home, but instead of taking the lift, we escape here like a victim trapped in a fire
36、. Pleasantly surprised, the boy left hospital through the window.【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了一位年轻的母亲想办法实现了病重的儿子的梦想的故事，要求续写本文。【详解】本文解题思路：一、仔细审题，明确续写要求，1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3.续写完成后,按照要求的格式书写。二、回扣原文，想象续写内容。快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语确定续写段落的内容。结合上文，根据 第一段的提示句：A miracle（奇迹）seemed to be happening
37、.一个奇迹似乎要发生。可知，本段主要是讲述要发生的奇迹，对于一个重病的孩子，奇迹就是经过医生的治疗，他逐渐好转，大家都很开心；根据第二段所给提示句：The firefighters decided to hold a fire escape and rescue the boy from the window.消防队员们决定守住防火梯，从窗户里救出那个男孩。可知，本段内容应紧接上一段的内容，男孩康复了，要出院，消防队员给了男孩惊喜，让他像被困在火里的受害者一样从医院窗户逃了出来。” 男孩又惊又喜地从窗口离开了医院。此外要注意与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致；要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持
38、一致；主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。本文续写紧绕所给首句内容，展开想象续写所给故事。【点睛】文章使用了一些复合句型：1.Finally, the boy fully recovered, and the doctor informed them that they could leave hospital the next day. 本句是that引导的宾语从句。2.So she called the fire department and told them the good news that her sons discharge from hospital.本句是that
39、引导的同位语从句。江苏省扬州市2021届高三上学期期初学情调研47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I stepped off the bus and headed for the pool with my friends, concentrating on what I needed to do to win this swimming competition. I jumped in the water, amid(在. . . . . 中）screams of Oh man, its freezing, and found it wasnt too bad.
40、 I started to warm up, and noticed the sky getting gray. Its going to rain, my friend Ashley said behind me. Lets pray for no thunder or lightning, I replied. This meet cant be canceled. That was when I noticed his uneasiness. Whats wrong? I asked. He looked over at the other team and back at me, sa
41、ying, Their 50m freestyle swimmer, Jack, is talking something bad about you. He said youd be a good swimmer if you didnt swim like a girl. And hes not only saying something bad about you, but everyone of us. Ashley gave me a look of encouragement and added, Tom, youd better swim as fast as possible
42、and beat him. Show him whos the boss!”My event was third. By that time, all my friends had shown up and I was preparing for my 50m freestyle sprint(冲刺）。I walked over to the blocks(起跑器）and began to prepare myself. “You think you actually have a chance?” came an aggressive voice from my side. I turned
43、 and recognized the guy who Ashley had pointed at. It was Jack, who added, Dont even try. Luckily, I was not alone. My friends were close by. “My friend is going to beat you, Ashley warned. Jack replied, “Thats a good one. Well settle this in the water. ”“Swimmers up! the official called. I stepped
44、onto the starting block and prepared for the race. That was when all my friends started to cheer me on. I focused all my attention and followed the officials order, Take your mark. I bent down into my starting position, the cheering around me growing louder. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关
45、键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:When the starting gun fired, I jumped into the water:_Paragraph 2:All I heard was cheering._【答案】When the starting gun fired, I jumped into the water. I began pumping my arms fast. “Faster,” I thought, “swim faster!” I was pushing myse
46、lf to the limit. I took a breath and headed for the wall of the pool. Out of the corner of my eye I saw the guy, Jack, neck and neck with me. “This is close, ” I thought, I came to the last five meters and sprinted with all my strength. “Go, go, go, ” my brain yelled. I hit the wall and lifted my he
47、ad at almost the same time as Jack. All I heard was cheering. I looked around and nearly every one, including the other team, was pointing at me in amazement. I had touched the wall a second before Jack. I looked at the official, and he signaled that I had won. I screamed in my head. Ashley and my o
48、ther friends were jumping with joy. I did not celebrate; it wasnt my style. I glanced over at Jack, who had a look of embarrassment. Seeing that, I said sincerely to Jack, “Hey, a good swim. ”【解析】【分析】本文是一篇读后续写。【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和他的朋友们前往游泳池准备参加游泳比赛。在准备期间，作者的朋友Ashley告诉他说对方有一个叫Jack的人说他和队友们的坏
49、话。并且希望作者能打败他。最终在所有的人的加油之下，作者做好开赛准备要打败Jack。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：发令枪一响，我就跳入水中。所以这一段要详细描写写作者用尽全力游到终点以及在此过程的心理活动。第二段开头是：我听到的都是欢呼声。本段应该写获得了比赛的胜利后，大家都祝贺我。但是我并没有太骄傲，也鼓励了Jack。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清
50、晰。使用了较为高级的句式:定语从句：I glanced over at Jack, who had a look of embarrassment.非谓语动词Seeing that, I said sincerely to Jack, “Hey, a good swim等。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。20202021学年金色联盟-浙江省百校联考67. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Chester was born in a cardboard box with four other cats. He was in a
51、smaller cardboard box marked “free kittens” when Sasha met him and took him home. From that moment on, he loved boxes. In the mornings he sat, licking (舔) his paws and fur with his tongue in the rainbow-colored sunlight. Then he would look around for a box to sleep in.He slept in hatboxes and shippi
52、ng boxes, gift boxes and takeout food boxes. He slept in Sashas sock drawer, if she left it open. When he was a kitten, the size of a small load of bread, he had slept in shoeboxes. But he grew and grew, and now he was a lot bigger. When he tried to sleep in a shoebox, his furry tummy (肚子) hung over
53、 the sides.Chester didnt just sit in boxes, though. Sometimes he sat in flowerpots, pans, or laundry baskets. Chester also liked to sit in the bedroom of Sashas dollhouse, her birthday gift, with the furniture in a mess. Sasha had to redecorate the dollhouse every day, but she didnt mind as long as
54、Chester was happy. Sashas mom suggested Chester need a fixed house of his own, but Sasha ignored.One day Sasha came home from school, and she couldnt find Chester. He wasnt in the dollhouse, or her sock drawer. “Mom, Dad!” Sasha yelled. “Chester is gone!”Sashas mom looked in the attic (阁楼). There we
55、re boxes and dust balls, and even a mouse that had escaped Chesters notice, but no Chester. Sashas dad looked in the kitchen cabinets. There were pots and pans, and the old can of soup he thought hed lost, but no Chester.Suddenly, “I found him!” Sasha cried.The big orange cat was inside her moms new
56、 glass vase, clear glass with blue and green lines. He curled up in it, his fatty body almost jamming the vase. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:He didnt look happy at all. _Paragraph 2:Luckily, not only Chester, but the vase,
57、 was still in one piece. _【答案】One possible version:He didnt look happy at all. Sasha tipped the vase over gently and tried to pull him out, but Chester just yowled painfully. “We had to break the vase to get him out!” Looking at the annoyed and frightened cat inside, Sasha cried. “No,” said her dad,
58、 “If we break it, the glass might hurt Chester. Maybe we can put butter on the inside of the vase and slide him out.” Sashas mom buttered as much as she could reach, and her dad pulled the unhappy cat out. Luckily, not only Chester, but the vase, was still in one piece. With tears rolling in the eye
59、s, Sasha held the buttery cat in her arms immediately. “Mom, youre right. Wed better make a house for him now.” Sasha turned to her mom. After washing the butter out of the vase, mom brought a refrigerator box and helped Sasha made it into a cozy box house for Chester. They cut out round windows, de
60、corated it all around and put pillows inside for him to sit on. Staring it with his glittering eyes, Chester loved it.【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写。【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，小猫Chester被主人Sasha收养后，它喜欢待在各种盒子里，有时还会坐在花盆、平底锅或洗衣篮里。妈妈建议给小猫建一个自己的猫舍，可是Sasha没有在意。有一天Sasha发现Chester不见了。原来它蜷缩在花瓶里面，肥胖的身体几乎卡住了。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：它
61、看上去一点也不高兴，所以应该写Chester的痛苦和挣扎，还有Sasha一家人为救出小猫所遇到的困难和做出的努力，结合第二段开头，最终想办法救出了Chester等等内容。第二段开头是：幸运的是，不仅是Chester，连花瓶都完好无损。本段应该写Sasha的喜悦心情，后悔没有听妈妈的话，于是给小猫建了一个十分漂亮的猫舍，Chester很喜欢。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文续写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级
62、句子。如tip the vase over ，yowl painfully ，the annoyed and frightened cat ，slide out ，a cozy box house ，glittering eyes 等等词汇的使用，使语言生动形象，有画面感；再如Sasha tipped the vase over gently and tried to pull him out, but Chester just yowled painfully使用了并列句；If we break it, the glass might hurt Chester使用了条件状语从句；With tears rolling in the eyes, Sasha held the buttery cat in her arms immediately.使用了with复合结构作伴随状语等高级句式。
