1、2021高考英语读后续写专题(一)一:典题技法指导Once there was a slave named Androcles, who was so badly treated by his master that he resolved to run away from him. He therefore secretly left his masters house and hid himself in a forest, some miles distant from the city.After wandering about for some time, he came to a
2、large cave, and overcome by hunger and tiredness, he lay down in it, and soon fell fast asleep.He was suddenly awakened by the roar of a wild beast; a great lion stood right at the mouth of the cave. There was no way he could escape!Androcles expected nothing else than to be at once torn to pieces,
3、but to his great surprise, the lion came gently towards him, without showing any signs of anger. It gave forth a low and mournful (悲哀的)sound, as if it were begging for his assistance. As the lion approached him, he noticed that one of its feet was swollen.He then went up to the lion, took hold of th
4、e wounded paw(爪子), and examined it as a surgeon would examine a patient. He was not long in finding out the cause of the swelling; for he saw in the ball of the foot a very large thorn (刺). The slave pulled out the thorn, and pressed out of the wound a quantity of matter, which gave the lion immedia
5、te relief.Then, the lion began to show his gratitude by every means in his power. He jumped about like a playful spaniel (西班牙猎犬), wagged his great tail, and licked the hands and feet of his physician. From that moment Androcles became his guest; the lion always shared his prey.The slave continued to
6、 live like this for several months. At length, wandering carelessly through the woods, he was seized by a company of soldiers who were sent by the master to search for him.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to
7、 be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). Paragraph 2: However, the lion didnt act as most had imagined.二、写作思路1. 确定主题:寓言讲的是奴隶与狮子的故事,奴隶帮助了狮子,狮子知恩图报(From that moment Androcles became his guest; the lion always shared his prey.),最后救了奴隶。故事告诉我们善有善报。2. 时空变化:根据两句句首提示语,第一段地点应该发生在角斗场,时间应该是即将与狮子角斗的时候。第二段在
8、时间与空间上与第一段一致,时空变化不大。3. 续写难点:很难确定故事寓意,可以是善有善报,也考虑过珍惜友谊。三、下水续写Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). 1.The terrifying day finally arrived.2. All the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast.3. When Andr
9、ocles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot.4. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop.5. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost collapsed to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking.6. And then came a furious roar and the great lion charged at him with its flaming eye
10、s and gaping jaws.7. Desperate and hopeless, the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for. Paragraph 2: However, the lion didnt act as most had imagined.1. Much to their surprise, the savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then licked the slaves hands and feet.
11、2. He behaved like a pet dog.3. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didnt you recognize me?”4.Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest.5. Sighing with relief, the slave stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.6. So moved
12、were people by the story that they begged the master to set free the slave and the lion.7. One good turn deserves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.四:参考范文Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场). The terrifying day finally arrived. A
13、ll the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When Androcles appeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop. Overcome by a stab of fear, he almost collapsed to the ground, his heart po
14、unding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar and the great lion charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless, the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for. Paragraph 2: However, the lion didnt act as most had imagined. M
15、uch to their surprise, the savage beast stopped short , knelt down and then licked the slaves hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, “Didnt you recognize me?” Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest. Sighing
16、with relief, the slave stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. So moved were people by the story that they begged the master to set free the slave and the lion. One good turn deserves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.二:课后练习One time, the tea
17、chers at a school wanted to teach the students about airplanes. While all airplanes can fly, some are able to fly farther than others. This is because not all airplanes are built the same. For example, a fighter plane looks very different from a plane that people fly in when they want to go on a hol
18、iday. The teachers wondered how they could make students understand this.Then, the science teacher, Mr Moose, decided that the school should have a paper airplane contest. Every student would design a paper airplane. They would stand in a line in the playground behind the school. The students would
19、take turns throwing their airplanes. The student whose airplane went the farthest would win.When Mr Moose announced the paper airplane contest to the students, they were very excited. A student named Paul, who was on the school sports team, said to everyone else that his airplane would win. “I am th
20、e strongest,” Paul said. “So I will be able to throw my airplane the farthest.”However, while Paul was saying this, another student, Brian, was thinking how he could win. Brian did not play any sports and was not very strong. But he loved airplanes and really wanted to win the contest.Brian realized
21、 what he had to do. He went to the store and bought a big stack (叠) of paper. When he got home, he took the paper into his backyard. He took a piece of paper and folded an airplane. It didnt go very far, so Brian took another piece and folded another airplane and threw it. This airplane went a littl
22、e farther. Brian kept folding different kinds of airplanes and throwing them. Some went very far and some did not. Finally, when Brian had used all the paper, he walked up to the airplane that had flown the farthest and picked it up.The next day was the contest. All the students lined up. Everyone t
23、ook turns. After a while, everyone had thrown except Paul and Brian. Paul went first. With a loud yell, he threw the airplane into the sky. It went farther than every other airplane. Everyone cheered.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Para
24、graph 1: Finally, it was Brians turn. _Paragraph 2: Brian won because he tried out many solutions to the problem of how to make an airplane fly very far. _参考范文:Finally, it was Brians turn. Brian took the airplane that he had picked up the day before. He walked up to the line and, with all his streng
25、th, he threw the plane. It went flying, farther and farther, until finally it landed 10 feet past Pauls plane! The whole school cheered. Brian won the contest. Mr Moose gave him a prize: a toy airplane.Brian won because he tried out many solutions to the problem of how to make an airplane fly very far. He did this by testing out many different designs and comparing the results. When he found the design that worked best the paper airplane that flew the farthest he used it. Because Brian tried a lot of designs, he was able to make up for his lack of strength and beat Paul.