1、专题十二：短文改错议论，应用类专练短文改错（每题1分，共40分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。A（考点29易） Should students make friends online? Some people think of so. Th
2、ey believe that the Internet helps students make many friends. Chatted考点08 online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get some help of考点03 their foreign languages. But others think quite differently. They insist making friends online is 考点01 waste of time, that 考点
3、10 should otherwise be spent on study. Besides, it is often reported that quite a little考点06 students get cheated online. It is my opinion what考点11 we students should place our study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can readily find them考点02 in our classmates and other people around u
4、s. If someone cannot even be friend 考点04 with the people around him, how can he possible 考点06 expect a friend online?B（考点29易） Smart phone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it looks like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a various 考点04 of study
5、aid apps aimed at student考点04. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our考点02 schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient 考点14 they are, these apps present problems with 考点03 both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the a
6、pp, while only a few use the app to study. Better 考点06 still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. Therefore考点06, this isnt to say that study aid apps should be completely ban考点08. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of
7、the study aid apps strengths and avoiding考点12 their weaknesses.C（考点30易）Dear Jeremy and Alice, Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo. Weve called several time 考点04 about Cleos early morning barking. It is dif
8、ficult to understanding考点08 why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have考点05 been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside考点06, Cleo tends to bark a 考点01 average of six hours a day. This morning she starts考点09 barking even before 5 oclock. That is t
9、oo much for us, considering how closely考点06 the houses are. We appreciate our考点02 apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure考点06 a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely, Jack and RoseD（考点30易）Dear schoolmates, In order to get high school students to attaching考点08 importance to the en
10、vironment and raise our awareness to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interest 考点06 knowledge contest. A 考点01 contest starts on October 14th and end 考点05 on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that 考点10 is very popular among high school s
11、tudent考点04. The answer sheet must考点07 cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after 考点03/13 the deadline. Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.Students Union语法填空（每题1.5分，共54分）阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。（1）TCM, or Tradi
12、tional Chinese Medicine, is a profound (深远的) pathway to create the life you truly want to live and the life you were born to live. Its a timeless bridge, _1_考点10 can start and support _2_ 考点04 (grow) in every life dimensionphysical, mental and emotional.TCM has an ancient but completely modern heali
13、ng system and it has the power to unlock your true potential and help you develop and use your own unique talents. _3_ 考点02 (it) wisdom and ability to understand individual health needs empowers each person with a way _4_ 考点08 (unite) body, mind and spirit-the foundation for lasting and authentic he
14、alth. TCM teaches you how to live _5_ 考点01 balanced and harmonious life.Its true _6_ 考点11 TCM is one of the oldest healing systems on the planet. It has _7_ 考点06 (actual) been in continuous practice for thousands of years. How can something so old still work for people living today?TCM can _8_ 考点09
15、(apply) to help heal anyone no matter what year it is because its rooted in unchanging natural law, which has its source beyond time. The unique medicine grew out of _9_ 考点09 (observe) carefully how everything in reality functions at the deepest, invisible levels and interacts with the surface or vi
16、sible physical levels. Its the medicine of extraordinary relationships. Every TCM principle _10_ 考点05 (reflect) and harmonizes with the relationships that exist within natural law.（2）When I was 14, I decided to make some pocket money by 1. 考点08（help） Mr. Miller cut the grass in his garden. I worked
17、hard because that was my first part-time job, 2. 考点10 is important to me. After working for one week, Mr. Miller said that he had no money for me. That surprised me 3. _ 考点06（great). I argued with him, and then I went back home in anger. My parents told me not to be angry 4. 考点03 Mr. Miller because
18、5. 考点02 was in difficulties. Then my mother called up Mr. Miller and they talked about something on 6. 考点01 phone. A few days later, my mother asked me to return to Mr. Millers garden because he was too weak 7. 考点08（look）after it When I came back, Mr. Miller said, “Sorry, Ive no money, 8. 考点12 I can
19、 do something for you.” He played a CD for me. Hearing the beautiful music, I was so interested in it that I 9. 考点05/09（forget） the money and did the work with pleasure. At last, Mr. Miller gave me a ticket to a concert. After that, I became very fond of music. Now Im one of the most popular 10._ 考点
20、04（sing） in our country. I can never thank Mr. Miller too much.（3）My interest in Chinese food started years ago，when I was a young reporter for the Washington PostOur office wasnt far from Chinatown，_1_ 考点10 I found some very good Chinese restaurantsThat was the first time that I_2_ 考点09（notice） the
21、 fresh taste of the meat and vegetables of Chinese foodWhen I learned more about the food，I began to understand why_3_考点02 has this special featureMany years ago，china had_4_ 考点01 energy crisis because it lost much of its wood due to over population and poor management of its forestsThis_5_考点04（lose
22、） was very bad for the country，of course，but it turned out to be very good for the foodWood became very expensive and hard to get，so the Chinese had to either find a substitute for their_6_ 考点06（value） wood，or learn how to use it betterThere werent any substitutes so people found ways to economizeIn
23、 order to economize in cooking，they had to use very little woodSo they started cutting their meat and vegetables_7_ 考点03 small pieces before they put them in the hot oilThat way，the food cooked_8_ 考点06（fast） and they saved more fuelThe food_9_考点08 （prepare） in this way kept its fresh flavorand its t
24、his flavor_10_ 考点14 attracts people from other countries to the art of Chinese cooking8、阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 Positive thinking does not mean you have to find every idea absolutely wonderful. It _考点09 (do) mean you have to be ready to explore an idea and to try and bring out whatever good
25、 features it has .The next step might be to find the _考点04 (weak) in the idea and to try and strengthen them, rather than use them _考点06 (simple) as an excuse for rejecting the whole idea. Finally, the idea, after it _考点09 (explore), may not be used because there is a _考点06 (good) one or because, go
26、od _ 考点14 it is, it is not suitable. There is _考点02 (something) wrong with being positive about an idea at first and then _考点08 (reject) it later, when you see that it wont work. It is easy to be negative and critical and too much talent is wasted in negative thinking. It is time we _考点07 (show) les
27、s respect for this kind of destructive thinking and focused _考点03 positive thinking more. So remember to think positively. 参考答案一、短文改错A、答案： Should students make friends online? Some people think of so. They believe that the Internet helps students make many friends. online, students can express their
28、 feelings and opinions more freely, and even get some help their foreign languages. But others think quite differently. They insist making friends online is waste of time, should otherwise be spent on study. Besides, it is often reported that quite a students get cheated online. It is my opinion we
29、students should place our study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can readily find in our classmates and other people around us. If someone cannot even be with the people around him, how can he expect a friend online? （2）答案： Smart phone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it
30、looks like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a of study aid apps aimed at . Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient they are, these apps present problems both pa
31、rents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. , this isnt to say that study aid apps should be completely . Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help
32、students to take the advantage of the study aid apps strengths and their weaknesses.解析：1.句意:近年来,发布了各种各样针对学生的学习应用软件。 固定搭配:a variety of各种各样的,故把various改为variety。2.泛指所有的学生用可数名词复数形式,故把student改为students。3.句意:这些应用程序中的大多数都允许用户拍摄他们的作业照片,而正确的答案将会出现在他们的智能手机上。应该是“他们的”用代词their,故把our改为their。4.句意:尽管这些应用程序很方便。尽管as/
33、though,引导让步状语从句,把作表语的形容词放在句首,故在they前面加as/though。5.句意:但它们给家长和老师都带来了问题。固定搭配:present something to somebody 把.呈现给某人。6.句意:更糟糕的是,一些学生甚至将学习应用软件作为社交网络。worse更糟糕的,故把Better改为Worse。7.句意:然而,这并不是说学习应用软件应该完全禁止。然而 however,表示转折,故把Therefore改为However。8.应用是被禁止的,要用被动语态,故把ban改为banned。9.句意:家长和老师应该提供必要的指导,帮助学生利用学习应用软件的优势,避
34、免他们的缺点。take advantage of利用, 不用定冠词,故把the去掉。10.And连接连个并列成分,take advantage of和avoid都作help to的宾语,故把avoiding改为avoid。 C、答案：Dear Jeremy and Alice, Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers us. In a word, your dogCleo. Weve called several about Cleos
35、 early morning barking. It is difficult to why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. , Cleo tends to bark average of six hours a day. This morning she barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us, consid
36、ering how the houses are. We appreciate apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose D、答案：Dear schoolmates, In order to get high school students to importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment, a
37、nd China Daily is planning to hold an knowledge contest. contest starts on October 14th and on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, is very popular among high school . The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily the deadline. Please pay more att
38、ention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in on time.Students Union解析：1.第一句 attachingattach 考查非谓语动词。此处为动词不定式作目的状语，此处to是不定式的to，后面接动词原形，用attach。2. 第一句 去掉China前面的and 考查连接词。逗号前面是目的状语，不是句子，因此不需要连接词来连接，故去掉and。3.第一句 interestinteresting 考查形容词。此处为形容词作定语，修饰后面的名词。4. 第二句 AThe 考查冠词
39、。此处contest是第二次出现，属于特指，应用the。5.第二句 endends考查主谓一致。此句中有连接词and，根据前后一致的原则，前面是谓语动词starts，用三单形式，故end也用三单形式，ends。6. 第三句 thatwhich 考查关系代词。此处为非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，从句缺少主语，指代前面China Daily newspaper，故用which。7.第三句studentstudents 考查名词单复数。此处是指高中的学生们，应用复数。8. 第四句must后加 be 考查语态。此处意思是答题卡被剪下来，应用被动语态，而且must是情态动词，后接动
40、词原形，故加be。9.第四句afterbefore 考查连词。此处意为“在截止日期之前”，而不是之后，故用before。10. 第五句 themit 考查代词。此处是指参加这个竞赛，单数，故用it来代替。 二、语法填空 （1）答案：1. which 2. growth 3. Its 4. to unite 5. a 6. that 7. actually 8. be applied 9. observing 10. reflects解析： 【1题详解】考查定语从句。此处为非限定性定语从句，先行词是a timeless bridge，关系词在从句中做主语，应使用关系代词which引导。故填whi
41、ch。【2题详解】考查名词。此处做start和support的宾语，意为“开始并支持成长”，应使用名词。故填growth。【3题详解】考查形容词性物主代词。此处指“它的智慧和能力”，应使用形容词词性物主代词。故填Its。【4题详解】考查不定式。此处指“有一种方法来统一身体、思想和精神持久和真正的健康的基础”，way“方式，方法”，常用不定式做定语。故填to unite。【5题详解】考查不定冠词。固定短语：live alife“过着一种的生活”。故填a。【6题详解】考查主语从句。此处it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的从句，从句不缺成分，应使用只起连接作用的代词that引导。故填that。【7题详
42、解】考查副词。此处修饰动词been，应使用副词形式。故填actually。【8题详解】考查被动语态。句意：中医可以被应用于帮助治愈任何人。根据句意，此处应使用被动语态。故填be applied。【9题详解】考查现在分词。此处位于介词of后且表动作，应使用现在分词。故填observing。【10题详解】考查主谓一致。“every+名词单数”做主语时，谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式。故填reflects。 （2）答案：1helping 2which 3Greatly 4with 5he 6the 7to look 8but 9forgot 10singers （3）答案：1. where 2. ha
43、d noticed 4. it 4. an 5. loss 6. valuable 7. into 8. faster 9. prepared 10. that解析： 【1题详解】where 此处Chinatown是先行词,在后面的非限制性定语从句中作地点状语,故填where。【2题详解】had noticed 在That was the first time that.句型中,前面是was,所以从句中用过去完成时态,故填had noticed。【3题详解】it 此处用it指代前面的the food。【4题详解】an energy以元音开头,“很多年前中国有一个能源危机”,故填an。【5题详解
44、】loss 根据句意可知,此处缺主语,所以应该用名词形式,故填loss。【6题详解】valuable 形容词修饰名词,故填valuable(有价值的)。【7题详解】into 句意:把肉和蔬菜切成小块。根据句意可知填into。【8题详解】faster 根据后面的more,可知此处用比较级,故填faster。【9题详解】prepared 此处是过去分词作后置定语,故填prepared。【10题详解】that 此处是强调句型,故填that。 （4）答案：does; weaknesses ; simply; has been explored; better; as/though; nothing; rejecting; showed; on
