1、第二部分 2013届高考英语书面表达专题练评专题一 文字提纲式作文练评练评二下面三道书面表达题都选自高考真题，且都是有关“英语学习”的话题。这三篇书面表达题或多或少地有些相似之处。所以我们放在一起来进行讲评。第一篇 试题来源(2012高考四川卷)书面表达（满分35分） 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li, Im ve
2、ry happy to have you as our English teacher. Thank you! Li Hua第二篇 试题来源(2010高考江苏卷)假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。 自己英语学习的情况1.英语学习的目的2.英语学习的方法3.课外自学的途径对学校英语教学的建议（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。注意： 1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。 3.文中不得提及考生所在学
3、校和本人姓名。 Dear teacher and schoolmates,1ts a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you. Thank you for listening.第三篇 试题来源(2012高考山东卷)假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1.参加英语角的益处；2.坚持写英语日记的作用；3.英文阅读网站(Enjoy Readin
4、g)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。讲 评第一篇 试题来源(2012高考四川卷)书面表达（满分35分） 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li, Im very happy to have you as our English teacher. Thank you! Li H
5、ua第一 攫取要点题目中已经说得很清楚，其表达的要点有五个：1.对英语学习的认识 （一个要点） 2.自己目前的英语水平（一个要点）3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题 （一个要点） 4.对英语教学的两点建议（两个要点）第二 细化要点文章应围绕以上五个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次分明。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际、符合逻辑。这是该题最大的难点所在。解决了这个难点，可以说本篇书面表达的写作就是水到渠成的事了。1.对英语学习的认识 对本要点的阐述必须表述必然要涉及到“英语”的重要性，但是落脚点应该在“英语学习” 的重要性上。围绕“英语是世界上
6、使用最广泛的语言”来联想“英语学习的重要性”。 English is one of the widelyused languages in the world. With adoption of Chinas reform and opening-up policy, it is getting more and more important for us to learn English well. Because only by grasping English can we learn much more advanced experience and technology from o
7、ther countries and make our country more powerful. English is getting more and more important to us. First, English is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in English. Again if we grasp English, we can learn a lot of advanced experience from other countries. If we learn Eng
8、lish well, we can serve our motherland better.As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.2.自己目前的英语水平 3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题 这两个要点最好放在一起去考虑，因为说了“自己目前的英语水平”后说出“自己英语学习存在的主要问题” 才顺理成章。在这里考生有一个误区：认为“因
9、为自己的英语差”就存在英语学习上的问题。所以第一个想到的就是“My English is very poor”。如果你这样去说，笔者以为不妥，你这不是把自己的英语水平直率地告诉阅卷老师吗？！我以为应该从“我的英语还好(My English is just OK / My English is just so-so)”这个角度来考虑，用一个转折词“but/however”引出“自己英语学习存在的主要问题”，不是更好吗？！在表述“自己英语学习存在的主要问题”方面，考生一定有不少切身的体会，所以可用的素材比较多。比如：记忆单词方面的问题、开口说英语方面的问题、语法学习方面的问题、阅读理解方面的问题、
10、写作方面的问题等等。但是在具体叙述时不要面面俱到，选其中的一两个问题说一下即可。My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. My English is just so-so but I have two main problems in my study. One is that I have difficu
11、lty in reading comprehension. The other is that I find it difficult to write a good composition. My English is just OK. However, the two main problems in my study are that I feel it very difficult to learn grammar well and that I have difficulty in reading comprehension.4.对英语教学的两点建议这两点建议应该围绕“自己英语学习存
12、在的主要问题”而提出来，这样才显得有的放矢。I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I really hope that you can make a suggestions on how to deal with reading comprehension. Another suggestion is to give us more chances
13、 to practice writing.I appreciate it if you give me good advice on how to learn grammar well. Besides, I really hope that yougive us more chances to do more reading comprehension.第三 整理成文 (请注意红体字部分)Dear Ms Li, I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.As we know, English is one of the widely
14、used languages in the world. With adoption of Chinas reform and opening-up policy, it is getting more and more important for us to learn English well. Because only by grasping English can we learn much more advanced experience and technology from other countries and make our country more powerful. T
15、o tell you the truth, my English is just so-so but I have two main problems in my study. One is that I have difficulty in reading comprehension. The other is that I find it difficult to write a good composition. Therefore, I really hope that you can make a suggestions on how to deal with reading com
16、prehension. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice writing. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you! Li Hua参考答案（官方提供）Dear Ms Li, I am very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more
17、and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good adv
18、ice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you! Li Hua讲 评第二篇 试题来源(2010高考江苏卷)假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。 自己英语学习的情况1.英语学习的目的2
19、.英语学习的方法3.课外自学的途径对学校英语教学的建议（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。 注意： 1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。 3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 Dear teacher and schoolmates,1ts a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you. Thank you for listening.2010江苏卷的书面表达与2012四川卷的书
20、面表达极为相似。比如：“英语学习的目的”可以比照“对英语学习的认识”；“ 对学校英语教学的建议”几乎等同于“对英语教学的两点建议”。第一 攫取要点1.英语学习的目的2.英语学习的方法3.课外自学的途径4.5.对学校英语教学的两至三点建议这样看来至少要有六个要点，最多为七个要点。第二 细化要点文章应围绕以上至少六个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次分明。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际、符合逻辑。这是该题最大的难点所在。解决了这个难点，可以说本篇书面表达的写作就是水到渠成的事了。1.英语学习的目的Im interested in Englis
21、h and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally its very important for me to learn English well. English has been my favorite class ever since I was in grade 1, because when I grow up, I want to be a diplomat, spreading hope, peace, friendship and prosperity all across the world. Naturally
22、its very important for me to learn English well. Im interested in English and hope to learn much more advanced experience and technology from other countries and make our country more powerful. Naturally its very important for me to learn English well. 2.英语学习的方法Vocabulary is an important part of lan
23、guage. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.I learn the language in many different ways. In class, I learn new words and grammar with our teacher, Mrs. Wang and do exercises preparing for the entrance examination for universities.Oral English is a basic too
24、l to communicate with foreigners so I make great use of time to practice my oral English.3.课外自学的途径After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, Ive learned a lot from the Internet and other sources. After class, I often read English stories and novels to improve my
25、 ability of reading comprehension. Besides, I join in English corner for English lovers, where I can not only make friends with common interest but also practice oral English and exchange points with students from different grades.After class, I read news, articles and watch videos from well-known w
26、ebsites like New York Times, ABC and CBS. I also have a lot of fun learning English with cartoon characters, Shrek and Donkey, for example, are my favorites.4.在你的书面表达字数达标后可以不考虑这一点。5.对学校英语教学的两至三点建议 We should be given more opportunities to use what weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. I
27、 hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.We should be given more good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more cha
28、nces to practice speaking.I really hope that our teachers can make a suggestions on how to deal with reading comprehension. I hope our teachers can bring some fun to the class, help us make some pen-friends with teens from English-speaking countries.I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting
29、 books and magazines improve our ability of reading comprehension. I suggest Internet can be used in our English class to enhance learning and increase fun. 第三 整理成文 (请注意红体字部分)即官方提供的范文Dear teacher and schoolmates, its a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning Englis
30、h with you. Im interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally its very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use
31、whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, Ive learned a lot from the Internet and other sources .Now, Id like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what
32、weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.Thank you for listening. 讲 评第三篇 试题来
33、源(2012高考山东卷)假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1. 参加英语角的益处；2. 坚持写英语日记的作用；3. 英文阅读网站(Enjoy Reading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2012年山东卷的书面表达把2010年江苏卷书面表达中的“自己英语学习的情况”变成了“介绍你课外学习英语的经验”。且有三点提示，这就比2010年江苏卷书面表达容易得多。作文可以分为三部分，第一部分点出写作主题， 第二部分介绍学习经验，从
34、提示的三个要点入手：参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站(Enjoy Reading)对你的帮助。在具体的写作中要注意写出这三个方面给你的英语学习带来的益处。同时还要注意层次性。第三部分总结全文，升华主题。第一段：可以采用直接开头，引出主题It is increasingly acknowledged that English, as a widely-spoken language in the world, plays an indispensable role in modern society; consequently, learning English well e
35、nable you to stand out in competition with others. Here are some ways which are conducive for you.Im glad I have won the first prize in the English Contest, which was the result of my after-class English learning. As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to lea
36、rn it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.As we know, English is getting more and more important. Learning English well enable you to stand out in competition with others. Today, its a great pleasure
37、 for me to share my experience of learning English with you.As we know, English, one of the widelyused languages in the world, plays an important role in modern society; consequently, learning English well enable you to stand out in competition with others. Here are some ways which are conducive for
38、 you.第二段：核心段落按照罗列的要点介绍自己英语学习的经验，并且需要对每个要点进行适当的扩展Join English clubs organized for English lovers, where you can not only make friends with common interest but also practice oral English and exchange points with people from different walks of life. Take down what you experienced and what you thought e
39、very day, which can better your writing skill and grammar.Visiting English websites regularly, Enjoy Reading for example, also severs a good way to improve your English in that the up-to-date words and expressions they convey can enrich you vocabulary bank.In the English corner, I meet many friends,
40、 who share the same interest with me. Sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by
41、 practice will we make more progress. Some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.Join En
42、glish corners organized for English lovers, where you can not only make friends with common interest but also practice oral English and exchange points with students from different grades. Keeping a diary in English can better your writing skill and grammar.Visiting English websites regularly, Enjoy
43、 Reading for example, also help you enlarge your words and expressions to enrich you vocabulary bank.第三段：总结结尾Briefly, whatever ways you adopt, hold on to them and you can make a difference in English learning and in your life.All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off.整理成
44、文 (请注意红体字部分)即官方提供的范文一 It is increasingly acknowledged that English, as a widely-spoken language in the world, plays an indispensable role in modern society; consequently, learning English well enable you to stand out in competition with others. Here are some ways which are conducive for you. To begi
45、n with, join English clubs organized for English lovers, where you can not only make friends with common interest but also practice oral English and exchange points with people from different walks of life. Next, take down what you experienced and what you thought every day, which can better your wr
46、iting skill and grammar. Additionally, visiting English websites regularly, Enjoy Reading for example, also severs a good way to improve your English in that the up-to-date words and expressions they convey can enrich you vocabulary bank. Briefly, whatever ways you adopt, hold on to them and you can
47、 make a difference in English learning and in your life. 参考范文（官方提供的范文二）Im glad I have won the first prize in the English Contest, which was the result of my after-class English learning. As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from Engl
48、ish class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved
49、 a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make more progress. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. Whats more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process. All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off.
