1、Part 4Writing写作题目假如你叫李华,在调研过程中,你发现家乡野生动植物数量正逐渐减少,对此请你向有关部门写一封信,分析造成这种现象的原因,并根据实际情况提出切实可行的几条建议。要点包括:1.野生动植物的现状;2.分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因;3.提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in our hometown.
2、 Yours sincerely,Li Hua思路点拨主题保护野生动植物体裁应用文时态以第三人称为主时态以一般现在时为主布局第一部分,引出主题,描述野生动植物濒临灭绝的现状;第二部分,文章主体,分析原因,提出自己的建议;第三部分,文章结尾,表达希望和祝愿。遣词造句.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1. n.野生动植物2.在危险中3.n.灭绝4.n.物种5.n.栖息地6.保护不受(危害)7.vt.& vi.猎取8.n.保护区9.以至于;结果答案1.wildlife2.in danger of3.extinction4.species5.habitat6.protect.from.7.hunt8.res
3、erve9.so that.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子(1)众所周知,许多野生动植物物种正面临着灭绝的危险。As is known to all, many species of wildlife are .(2)这是因为野生动植物的生存环境遭到了极大的破坏。This is because the environment that they are living in .(3)随着我们家乡的发展,水和空气被严重污染。 our hometown, water and air are seriously polluted.(4)它们不仅缺乏食物,而且还可能被人类猎杀。They have li
4、ttle to eat, can be hunted by human beings.(5)这些野生动植物物种是我们生活的重要部分,我们应该采取更多的措施保护它们免遭伤害。These species of wildlife are important part of our life. More measures should .(6)必须制定更多法律以阻止人们砍伐树木。More laws must be made .(7)所有工厂在排废水进河流或湖泊之前必须净化废水。All the factories must clean the waste water rivers or lakes.(8
5、)应该建立更多的动植物保护区,以便它们能安全地生活。More reserves should they can live safely.(9)总之,我真的希望我的建议有帮助。To sum up, I do hope my suggestions .答案(1)in danger of extinction(2)has been destroyed greatly(3)With the development of(4)not only; but also(5)be taken to protect them from being hurt(6)to prevent people from cut
6、ting down trees(7) before it is poured into(8)be set up so that(9)are helpful2.句式升级(10)用倒装句升级第(4)句(11)用be+of+n.改写第(9)句答案(10)Not only do they have little to eat, but they also can be hunted by human beings.(11)To sum up, I do hope my suggestions are of help.连句成篇参考范文Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to giv
7、e some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in our hometown. As is known to all, many species of wildlife are in danger of extinction. This is because the environment that they are living in has been destroyed greatly.With the development of our hometown, water and air are seriously polluted.
8、Their habitats are becoming smaller and smaller. Not only do they have little to eat, but they also can be hunted by human beings. These species of wildlife are important part of our life. Personally, more measures should be taken to protect them from being hurt. Firstly, more laws must be made to p
9、revent people from cutting down trees. Secondly, all the factories must clean the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes. Last but not least, more reserves should be set up so that they can live safely.To sum up, I do hope my suggestions are of help.Yours sincerely,Li Hua写作积累建议信开头常用语1.
10、I am writing to tell you about.2.You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.3.I think it would do great good if you could.4.I would like you to consider the following suggestions.表达“建议”常用语1.I think the most suitable.for you is.2.I would like to suggest that.3.Youd better
11、./Its better to.4.As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.5.For one thing., for another.6.If I were you, I would.建议信结尾常用语1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.2.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.3.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/usef
12、ul/helpful.4.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.实战演练()假如你叫李华,你从报纸上得知有六种熊由于人类活动而面临灭绝的危险。请根据以下要点,给世界野生生物基金会(WWF) 写信反映这一情况,呼吁采取措施保护熊。主要内容包括:1.写信目的:呼吁WWF采取措施保护熊。2.濒危的原因:熊的某些身体部位可用作贵重的药物;栖息地遭到破坏,熊正失去家园。3.建议:建立更多的保护区,让熊自由地生活;立法禁止猎熊。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词
13、数。参考词汇:habitat栖息地Dear Sir/Madam,I have learned from a newspaper that six bear species in the worldYours sincerely,Li Hua答案全解全析Part 4Writing实战演练One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,I have learned from a newspaper that six bear species in the world are dying out as a result of human activities, so Im w
14、riting to ask you to take immediate measures to protect the bears.One of the reasons why bears are often killed is that some parts of bears can be used as expensive medicine. In addition, many habitats of bears are being destroyed, so they are losing their homes. Its high time we took immediate meas
15、ures to save bears. I think more reserves for them should be set up so that they can live freely. Besides, laws should be passed to prevent people from killing bears. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into serious consideration. Please give a hand to the endangered bears. They need help to survive.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
