1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家专题强化练(十一)书面表达Passage 1(2019山东潍坊高三模拟)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry要来中国体验传统民间艺术，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1表示欢迎；2推荐一个体验项目；3说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】这是一篇应用文写作。第一步：根据提示可知，要求写一封邮件；假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry要来中国体验传统民间艺术，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.推荐一个体验项目；3.说明理由。第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：the Chinese traditional
2、 folk arts(中国传统民间艺术)，express my warmest welcome(表达最热烈的欢迎)，abundant(丰富的)，papercutting(剪纸)；delightful(令人愉快的)等。第三步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【参考范文】Dear Terry，Learning that youre coming to China to experience the Chinese traditional folk arts.
3、Im writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome.There are abundant forms of folk arts throughout the whole country.Among them, papercutting is a good choice for you, whose themes usually involve everything in local peoples daily life .Papercutting represents the wisdom of Chinese people.It is not
4、 only beautiful but also very useful.People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate something delightful, especially for the Spring Festival.More and more people are interested in it.It enjoys increasingly high popularity, for which it is an ideal gift for friends.I wish you a pleas
5、ant time here.Yours, Li Hua【点评】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Among them, papercutting is a good choice for you, whose themes usually involve everything in local peoples daily life .运用了定语从句；People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate something delightful, especially for
6、 the Spring Festival.运用了时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Passage 2(2019湖南岳阳高三模拟)假定你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Jack发来邮件说这个暑假他想来中国旅游。请用英语给他回一封邮件，主要内容如下：1表示欢迎；2介绍长城、岳阳楼或者杭州西湖(任选一个景点)。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack，Yours，Li Hua【写作思路】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于介绍一个旅游景点的书信，时态应为一般
7、现在时。第一步：确定关键要点：1.暑假他想来中国旅游；2.表示欢迎；3.介绍长城。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：summer holiday(暑假)，the Great Wall(长城)，the most important tourist spots(最重要的旅游景点)等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【参考范文】Dear Jack，Im very glad to hear that you are coming to C
8、hina this summer holiday.You will be warmly welcomed.There are lots of famous places of interest in China for you to visit, for example, the Great Wall, Yueyang Tower, the West Lake and so on.Take the Great Wall for example.It is known as one of the seven great wonders of the world, which is located
9、 in North China, over 6, 000 kilometers in length and 25 feet high on average.It can date back to 2，700 years ago built with earth, brick and stone to keep out invaders in ancient China.However, it is now regarded as one of the most important tourist spots in our country or even in the world.It is r
10、eally worth your visit.Im looking forward to your coming.Best wishes to you!Yours，Li_Hua【点评】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。如：非限制性定语从句的使用：It is known as one of the seven great wonders of the world, which is located in North China, over 6, 000 kilometers in length and 25 feet high on average.
11、非谓语动词的使用：It can date back to 2，700 years ago built with earth, brick and stone to keep out invaders in ancient China.Passage 3(2019河南新乡高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国谚语(Chinese proverbs)很感兴趣。他来信请教有关知识。请给他回信，内容包括：1中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验，简短有意义，口口相传)；2学习中国谚语的方法。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要假定你
12、是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国谚语(Chinese proverbs)很感兴趣。他来信请教有关知识。请给他回信，内容包括：1.中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验，简短有意义，口口相传)；2.学习中国谚语的方法。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。但注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【参考范文】Dear Tom，Its great to hear from you.Im delighted to know
13、 you are interested in Chinese proverbs.Chinese proverbs are summaries of peoples wisdom and experience.They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by the folks and passed on orally generation by generation.How can you learn Chinese proverbs? Well, books about the relevant topic are availab
14、le online, which may give you a more specific explanation.If you have got some proverbs, try to recite one every day or combine them with your life.You can apply them to communicating with Chinese people around you.I sincerely hope the above can be of some help.If you want to learn more, please let
15、me know.Yours faithfully，Li Hua【点评】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用了高级句式。如非谓语动词的使用：They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by the folks and passed on orally generation by generation.定语从句的使用：Well, books about the relevant topic are available online, which may give you a more specific expl
16、anation.Passage 4(2019深圳高三调研)假定你是李华，你们学校的英国交换生Jeff准备参加“外国人讲中国成语(idiom)故事”比赛，他发邮件请你给予辅导。你回复邮件，内容包括：1答应帮助；2提出建议；3询问辅导时间与地点。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jeff，Yours，Li Hua【写作思路】这是一篇应用文写作。第一步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你们学校的英国交换生Jeff准备参加“外国人讲中国成语(idiom)故事”比赛，他发邮件请你给予辅导。你回复邮件，内容包括：1.答应帮助；2.提出建议；3.询问辅导时
17、间与地点。第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：reply to(回答)，the Chinese idiom story competition(中国成语故事比赛)，participate in(参加)，would like to(想要)；additionally(此外)；ancient myths(古代神话)等。第三步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，卷面要保持整洁美观。【参考范文】Dear Jeff，I am writing to reply to your email re
18、garding the Chinese idiom story competition you are going to participate in.It would be my great pleasure to help you prepare for the contest.I would like to offer some suggestions before we meet.Firstly, as there are a great number of idioms to choose from, I recommend the most commonly used ones t
19、hat come from interesting stories.Additionally, many idioms found roots in ancient myths or historical facts.Thus, I advise fully researching their meanings and origins to gain an instructive and fascinating insight into the cultural history of China.In this way, your storytelling will be highly imp
20、ressive and appealing.I hope the suggestions above can be of some help to you.Could you please tell me when and where you would like to meet? I look forward to further discussion with you.Yours，Li Hua【点评】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am writing to reply to your email regarding the Chinese idiom story competition you are going to participate in.运用了定语从句；Firstly，as there are a great number of idioms to choose from, I recommend the most commonly used ones that come from interesting stories.运用了as引导的原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。- 9 - 版权所有高考资源网
