1、Section Reading for Writing每/日/金/句：Music is from the language of the mind.音乐是来自心灵的语言。精读课文疏通理解障碍读文清障1 share with sb.与某人分享2 have an impact on.对有影响3 disease/dziz/n.(疾)病4 ache/ek/vi.&n疼痛5 much“非常，更加，很”，此处修饰形容词比较级。6 discouraged adj.灰心的，丧气的feel discouraged感到灰心的7 go through 经历；经受；完成8 treatment/tritmnt/n.治疗
2、；对待；处理medical treatment治疗；医疗treat vt.治疗，医治9 have sb. do sth.让某人做某事make sb. do sth.让某人做某事10 from then on从那时起from now on从现在起from that moment on从那时起11 spirits n心境；情绪12 relief/rlif/n.(焦虑、痛苦的)减轻或消除；(不快过后的)宽慰、轻松或解脱bring sb. relief使某人放松13 lean/lin/vt.(leant/leaned, leant/leaned)依靠；倾斜lean on依靠，依赖(的帮助和支持)(de
3、pend on)14 get through(设法)处理；完成15 moreover/mrv(r)/adv.而且；此外16 satisfaction/stsfkn/n.满足；满意；欣慰a sense of satisfaction满足感17 being/bi/n.身心；存在；生物human beings人类come into being形成，产生18 various/veris/adj.各种不同的；各种各样的19 somehow/smha/adv.以某种方式(或方法)；不知怎么地anyhow adv.尽管如此20treasure vt.珍视；珍爱；珍重原文呈现Good morning! My
4、name is Sarah Williams. Its an honour to be here and to share with1 you the story of how music has had an impact on2 my life【1】【1】Its an honour to do sth.意为“做某事很荣幸”。how music has had an impact on my life是how引导的宾语从句，作介词of的宾语。Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at al
5、l 【2】？ Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease3 which was difficult to cure 【3】. My body ached4 all the time and thus I thought I didnt have much5 longer to live. I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged6. Then one day, I had to go through7 a two-hour medical treatment8. The d
6、octor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen9 to some music, and one of the songs was “Happy”. The song made me feel so much better that 【4】 from then on10 I began to listen to music all the time. John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.”And its true. Music helped me recover.【2】此处是wh
7、en引导的定语从句，修饰a time, when在从句中作时间状语。【3】“I had a serious disease.cure”是一个宾语从句，作told的宾语； which引导定语从句，修饰a serious disease。【4】“so.that.”意为“如此以至于”，引导结果状语从句。Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music, it made my spirits11 fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave me strength and brought me relief12. It
8、 was the rock I leant13 on 【5】 to become strong and to get through14 those hard times. Moreover15， music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction16. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being17.【5】此处是定语从句，修饰先行词the rock。关系代词that/which在从句中作宾语，被省略了。Of cour
9、se, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did 【6】. At the same time, we all go through various18 periods when we feel sad or alone 【7】. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me 【8】. I hope all of you will somehow19 begin to treasure20
10、 music and make it a part of your life.Thank you!【6】此处是that引导的定语从句，表示同一概念，从句中的did是替代词，此处替代了went through。【7】此处是when引导的定语从句，修饰periods, when在从句中作时间状语。【8】此处是that引导的定语从句，修饰先行词the same way。the way 作先行词，关系词在定语从句中作状语时，关系词用that, in which或省略。课文翻译早上好！我叫萨拉威廉姆斯。我很荣幸来到这里与大家分享音乐是如何对我的生活产生影响的。你是否曾经历过黯淡无光、毫无希望的一段时光？
11、两年前，我被告知得了一种很难治愈的严重疾病，全身一直疼痛，因此我觉得自己活不了多久了。我非常害怕，感到十分孤独和沮丧。后来有一天，我不得不接受两个小时的治疗。医生想要我放松，所以他就让我听一些音乐，其中一首歌是快乐。这首歌让我感觉好多了。从那时起，我开始一直听音乐。约翰洛根曾说过：“音乐是心灵的良药。”的确如此，音乐帮助我康复。音乐给了我快乐。当我听音乐的时候，音乐让我的心情放飞，像风中的风筝。音乐给予我力量，也让我得到解脱。音乐是岩石，让我依靠，让我变得坚强，去度过那些艰难的日子。此外，音乐还给予我希望和满足感。音乐成了我最好的朋友。音乐让我的内心深受鼓舞。当然，我希望你们不要经历和我一样的
12、痛苦。同时，我们都会经历各种悲伤或孤独的时期。在那时，音乐可以像它曾经帮助我一样帮助你。我希望大家都能以某种方式开始珍爱音乐，让音乐成为你生活的一部分。谢谢大家！对接写作体现学以致用目标一宏观理解构建模板1.选出以下句子的修辞手法。A拟人B引述C明喻D暗喻It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. ()John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.”()It (Music) became my best frien
13、d. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.()When I listened to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.()2According to the passage, we can learn when we write a speech, we can use the following outline.(写作模板)Dear classmates/Ladies and gentlemen，Its a great hono
14、r for me to stand here and deliver my speech.My name is _(自我介绍) The topic of my speech is _(提出演讲主题)_ (列举话题或现象) To begin with, many people suggest that _Whats more, _Last but not least, _(建议或解决问题的方法)What I want to stress is that _(重申主题) For one thing, _For another, _Besides, _(列举原因或重要性)In a word, _(总
15、结)目标二写作要领技法指导本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。文体感知演讲稿属于应用文的一种，是为演讲准备的书面材料，通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。篇章结构话题词汇topic 话题honor 荣幸feel/be honored 感到荣幸的deliver a speech 发表演讲on behalf of 代表give encouragement 给予鼓励relax oneself 放松自己have fun 玩得开心bring about happiness 带来快乐express ones thanks to 向表达某人的感谢a wealth of musica
16、l talent丰富的音乐天赋话题句式夺人眼球开头句1It is a great honor for me to deliver my speech here.我很荣幸能在这里发表演讲。2I am honored to give you a warm welcome on behalf of our school. 我很荣幸代表我们的学校向你们表示热烈欢迎。亮点出彩篇中句1Without music, our life will be colourless and tasteless.没有音乐，我们的生活将会失去色彩，索然无味。2Music is playing an important ro
17、le in our life, which is an essential part of our life.音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，它是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。3Music is to us what sunshine is to the earth，which brings colour to our life.音乐之于我们就像阳光之于地球。音乐给我们的生活带来色彩。4Whenever you listen to music, its a pleasure. Music makes everything around you look so beautiful.无论什么时候
18、听音乐都是一种享受，音乐会让周围的一切看起来都那么美好。5It is music that gives us encouragement in face of difficulty.就是音乐在我们面临困难时给我们鼓励。韵味无穷结尾句1Thank you for your attention. I hope you will find what I said helpful/useful/practical. 感谢倾听。希望我所说的对您有帮助/有用/实用。2Actions speak louder than words.Lets take action immediately.事实胜于雄辩。让我
19、们立即采取行动。目标三写作实践分步演练【写作要求】假定你是李华。你将参加主题为“Music and Life”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，要点如下：1音乐对你的影响；2你对音乐的感觉；3音乐的重要性。注意：1.词数：80词左右；2可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；3开语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. _Thats all! Thank you for listening. 第一步布局谋篇第二步遣词造句1在此发表演讲我感到很荣幸。_2我的演讲主题是“音乐的力量”。_3我在中考中发挥不好， 这让我很沮丧。_4它不仅能帮助
20、我放松， 而且让我更坚定。_第三步句式升级5用“介词which”结构提升句1、句2。_6用“介词which”结构提升句3。_7用倒装句提升句4。_第四步完美成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。_自查语基落实基本知能.核心词汇根据语境写出正确的单词1a _ for his illness 他所患疾病的疗法2my _ boss 我的前任老板3_ love 浪漫爱情4play the _ 弹钢琴5have a serious _ 得了一种严重的疾病6cause stress and heart _导致压力和心痛7the deep part of ones _某人
21、的内心深处8complete the _ 完成概要.拓展词汇根据语境写出相应的派生词1creating music is a _ 创作音乐是一种解脱_ (v.) the pressure 缓解压力feel _ (adj.) 感到宽慰2set up _ 组装设备_ (v.) the chemical lab装备化学实验室3have musical _ 有音乐才华a _ singer 一位有天赋的歌手4a two-hour _ 两个小时的治疗_ (v.) the problem seriously严肃对待这个问题5a sense of _ 满足感_ (v.) your need 满足你的需求fee
22、l _ (adj.) 感到满足a _ (adj.) result 一个令人满意的结果6go through _ periods经历各种的时期a _ (n.) of performances各种各样的演出7the positive _ 积极的反应_ (v.) quickly to the problem对问题做出快速反应.重点短语1_ 有能力；胜任 2_ 对有影响3_ 以为目标4_ 被吸引住；专心致志 5_ 安装好(设备或机器)6_ 参加选拔(或试演) 7_ 除以外(还) 8_ 从那时起9_ (设法)处理；完成 .重点句型1句型“It is an honour to do sth.”意为“很荣幸
23、做某事。”教材_ and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life. 很荣幸来到这里与大家分享音乐是如何影响我的人生的。2句型when引导定语从句教材Have you ever faced a time _ and you had no hope at all?_：事物看起来黯淡无光，且你感到毫无希望？3句型have sb. do sth. 让某人做某事教材The doctor wanted me to relax, so he _， and one of the songs was “Happy
24、”医生想让我放轻松， 所以他让我听了一些音乐， 其中一首叫做“Happy”。4句型主语be形容词to do教材Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease which _两年前，我被告知得了一种很难治愈的严重疾病。探究新知发展语言知识1(教材P55)people to set up equipment安装设备的人set sth. up安装好(设备或机器)set out 出发set off 出发；使爆炸set aside 把放在一边；留出set out to do sth.set about doing sth. 开始做某事佳句In orde
25、r to make our school life more colorful, the Students Union has decided to set up a cycling club.为了使我们的学校生活更加绚烂多彩，学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部。 练通用set的相关短语填空She _ an educational fund in memory of her mother.I will _ for Beijing tomorrow with the aim of visiting my teachers at college.He tries to _ at least half
26、an hour every day for jogging.写美一句多译可怕的地震过后，人们开始重建家园。After the terrible earthquake, the people _After the terrible earthquake, the people _equipment n设备；装备(1)a piece of equipment 一件设备(2)equip vt. 装备，配备equip.with. 用来装备be equipped with. 配有佳句This equipment has saved the lives of a number of new born ch
27、ildren.这套设备已经挽救了许多新生儿的生命。练通单句语法填空Modern _ (equip) and no smoking are two of the things I like about working here._ (equip) with some food and drinks, the boys set sail early.写美句型转换Because I am equipped with good communication skills, I am capable of communicating with different people._， I am capabl
28、e of communicating with different people.(过去分词短语作状语)2(教材P55)What can those who think they do not have musical talent do?那些认为自己没有音乐天赋的人能做什么？talent n天才；天资；天赋(1)have a talent/gift for. 有的天资/天赋show a talent for. 表现出才能(2)talented/gifted adj. 有才能的，有才干的be talented/gifted in 在方面有才能佳句I would appreciate it if
29、 you could give me such an opportunity to show my talent.如果你给我这样一次机会展示我的才华我将感激不尽。练通单句语法填空Ive heard that you are a _ (talent) young woman, and I have found you charming and intelligent as well.He had a gift _ music when he was just 6 years old, so we all consider him to be a _ (gift) musician.写美应用文佳句
30、操场上所有的足球选手都大声欢呼起来， 说我有足球天赋。All the football players on the playground cheered loudly, saying that I _.3(教材P55)So can I assume that the aim of the festival is to raise money?所以，我能认为这个节日的目的是筹集资金吗？assume vt.以为；假设(1)assume sb./sth. to be. 假定/假设某人/某物为It is assumed that. 据认为(2)assuming conj. 假设assumption
31、n. 假定；假设佳句It is assumed that global warming and climate change could cause even more disasters in the future.据推测，全球变暖和气候变化可能在未来造成更多的灾难。练通单句语法填空Last but not least, it is generally assumed _ music enables us to explore the new things around us.As far as I know, a great many people make the _ (assume)
32、that he is right.写美应用文之邀请信如果您对此感兴趣，请发邮件到123456。_， please send an email to 123456.4(教材P55)How else could you help in addition to what has already been mentioned?除了提及的以外，你还能提供什么样的帮助呢？in addition (to sb./sth.)除以外(还)(1)in additionbesides/furthermore/whats more另外；而且in addition tobesides/apart from/as wel
33、l as除之外还(2)additional adj. 额外的；附加的佳句In addition to work, there are many meaningful things to do in life.除了工作，生活中还有很多有意义的事情要做。练通单句语法填空/对比填空Working out in the morning provides _ (addition) benefits beyond being physically fit.She can speak French and German _ English.(in addition/in addition to)The pr
34、oducts are of high quality. _， the price is low. (in addition/in addition to)5(教材P56)Its an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.非常荣幸来到这里与大家分享音乐是如何影响了我的人生的。句型公式： It is an honour to do sth.非常荣幸做某事(1)It is an honour to do sth. 非常荣幸做某事(2)It isadj.f
35、or sb. to do sth. 结构中it作形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语。佳句It is a great honour to have been invited to give a lecture at the meeting.非常荣幸被邀请在会议上演讲。写美应用文佳句当你遇到来自不同文化背景的人时，了解自己能做什么和不能做什么是很重要的。When you meet people from different cultures, _ what you can and cannot do.被邀请为残疾人做志愿者工作是极大的荣幸。_ the voluntary work for the d
36、isabled.6(教材P56)Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment.后来有一天，我需要去做两个小时的治疗。treatment n治疗；对待；处理(1)under medical treatment 正在接受治疗；在治疗中(2)treat vt.&vi. 治疗；对待；款待treat sb. as. 把某人当看待treat sb./oneself to 用款待某人/自己(3)treat n. 请客；款待佳句To our great relief，the patients are under good trea
37、tment in the central hospital.使我们大为欣慰的是，病人们在中心医院得到了良好的治疗。练通单句语法填空It has been confirmed that it is the most effective _ (treat)It was very kind of you to treat us _ good meals and show us around.写美应用文之建议信如果你把高考看成正常考试， 就没必要太过担心。If you _ one of your normal examinations, there is no need to worry too mu
38、ch about it.7(教材P56)The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was “Happy”医生想让我放松，就让我听一些音乐，其中一首歌是快乐。句型公式： have sb. do sth.让某人做某事使役动词have的用法(1)have sb. do sth. 让/请某人做某事(2)have sb./sth. doing sth. 让某人/某物处于做某事的状态(3)wont/cant have sb./sth. doing sth. 不允许或禁止某人/
39、某物做(4)have sth. done 请/让/叫别人(为自己)做某事佳句I am writing to express my great pleasure to have you spend the weekend in my home.我写信是想表达我非常高兴能让你在我家度过这个周末。练通单句语法填空The soldiers had him _ (stand)with his back to his father.It is a waste to have the water _ (run) all the time.We must have the work _ (finish) be
40、fore the hurricane comes.These parents wont have their children _ (behave) impolitely to others.写美应用文佳句我确信我能够通过我的服务， 使游客们满意地离开。I am sure that I can _ with satisfaction through my service.8(教材P56)The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time.听着这首歌，我感觉好
41、多了；从那以后我开始一直听音乐。from then on 从那时起from now on 从今以后from that day on 从那天起佳句They got to know each other in 1990 and from then on they remained in touch with each other.1990年他们相识，从此两人一直保持联系。写美应用文佳句从现在起，我们应该更加注意保护环境。_， we should pay more attention to protecting the environment.我们初次见面时，我13岁，从那天起，我们的友谊就开始了。
42、I was 13 when we first met, and _ our friendship grew.9(教材P56)It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.音乐是岩石，让我倚靠，让我变得坚强，去度过那些艰难的日子。get through (设法)处理；完成；设法联系上(尤指打通电话)；通过；用完get away with 被放过；从轻发落get down to 开始认真处理/对待get over 克服get along well with 与相处得好佳句Graduat
43、ion is a good time to thank those who help you get through the tough years.毕业是一个感谢那些曾经帮助你度过艰难岁月的人的美好时刻。练通写出下列句中get through的含义I assume that we can get through the task within 2 weeks._I couldnt get through to him because his telephone was out of order._Luckily, he got through the exam and his efforts
44、 paid off._The little boy got through all his money and had to ask his mom for some more._写美应用文佳句一个微笑可以帮助我们渡过难关，在陌生人的世界里找到朋友。A smile can _ and find friends in a world of strangers.10(教材P56)Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.此外，音乐还给予我希望和满足感。satisfaction n满足；满意；欣慰(1)with satisfac
45、tion 满足地；满意地to ones satisfaction 令某人满意的是(2)satisfy vt. 使满足；使满意(3)satisfied adj. 感到满意的satisfying adj. 令人满意的佳句I feel really proud whenever I see my patients leave the hospital with satisfaction.每当我看到病人们满意地出院时， 我都会感到很自豪。练通单句语法填空From the _ smile on her face, we can see the performance was _(satisfy)Much
46、 to my _ (satisfy), my boss agreed to my suggestion.To be honest, I dont think your service is _ (satisfy)写美应用文之人物描写为了纪念这次有意义的活动，我们都拍了照片，感到满意和高兴。In memory of this meaningful activity, all of us took photos, _11(教材P56)At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone.同时，我们
47、都会经历各种悲伤或孤独的时光。various adj.各种不同的；各种各样的(1)variety n. U变化；多样性；C种类；品种a variety ofvarieties of 各种各样的(2)vary vt.&vi. 使不同；变化vary from.to. 从到不等佳句There are various clubs for all the students to choose from.有各种各样的俱乐部，供所有学生选择。练通单句语法填空I have different hobbies, _ (vary) from playing the piano to basketball.No m
48、atter what you like to do, there is a way to get involved in _ (vary) activities on Earth Day.写美词汇升级I will encourage them to take part in all kinds of activities to improve their social skills.I will encourage them to take part in _ activities to improve their social skills.12(教材P58)Encouraged by th
49、is first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, I have continued to play the piano and enjoy it more every day.在第一次演出和观众的积极反应的鼓舞下，我继续弹钢琴，并更加享受每一天。reaction n反应；回应(1)the reaction to. 对的回应/反应(2)react v. 回应；发生反应react to. 对作出回应(to是介词)react against 反对；反抗佳句He was surprised that his answer s
50、hould have caused such a strong reaction.他很惊讶他的回答竟引起如此强烈的反应。练通单句语法填空Her parents reaction _ the news was surprisingly calm.Many young people react _ traditional values.写美应用文佳句重要的不是发生了什么，而是你如何应对它。Its not what happens to you, but _ that matters.Section Reading for Writing对接写作体现学以致用目标一1DBAC目标三第二步1I feel
51、 greatly honored to deliver a speech here.2The topic of my speech is “The power of music”3I didnt do well in the Academic Test for the Junior High School Students, so I felt rather depressed.4It can not only help me feel relaxed, but also make me more determined.第三步5I feel greatly honored to deliver
52、 a speech here, the topic of which is “The power of music”6I didnt do well in the Academic Test for the Junior High School Students, for which I felt rather depressed.7Not only can it help me feel relaxed, but it can also make me more determined.第四步Good morning, everyone!I am Li Hua. I feel greatly
53、honored to deliver a speech here, the topic of which is “The power of music”. Two years ago, I didnt do well in the Academic Test for the Junior High School Students, for which I felt rather depressed. Those days, I listened to some of my favorite songs, which brought great happiness to me and made
54、me stronger in mind. Since then I have made up my mind to study harder. Music plays an important part in our life. Not only can music help me feel relaxed, but it can also make me more determined.Thats all! Thank you for listening. 自查语基落实基本知能.1cure2.previous3.romantic4.piano5.disease6ache7.being8.ou
55、tline.1reliefrelieverelieved2equipmentequip3talenttalented4treatmenttreat5satisfactionsatisfysatisfiedsatisfactory6variousvariety7reactionreact.1be capable of2.have an impact on3.aim for4be absorbed in5.set sth. up6.try out for.7in addition (to sb./sth.)8.from then on9.get through.1Its an honour to
56、be here2when things looked dark; 你有没有过这样的经历3had me listen to some music4was difficult to cure探究新知发展语言知识1set upset off/outset asideset out to rebuild their homesset about rebuilding their homesequipmentEquippedEquipped with good communication skills2talentedfor; giftedhad a talent for football3thatas
57、sumptionAssuming you are interested in it4additionalin addition toIn addition5it is important to understandIts a great honour to be invited to do6treatmenttotreat the College Entrance Examination as7standrunningfinishedbehavinghave those tourists leave8From now onfrom that day on9完成打通电话通过用完help us get through difficult situation10satisfied; satisfyingsatisfactionsatisfyingfeeling satisfied and happy11varyingvariousvarious/varieties of/a variety of12toagainsthow you react to it
