1、 话题二：日常生活Writing 1 请谈谈你在学习或生活中曾经遇到的难关和你从中吸取的经验教训。高分范文1 Life is no plain sailing, nor is learning. I still clearly remember the hardship Ive gone through before the graduation exam of junior high school. It was in a model test that I failed, which poured cold water on my ambition as the final examina
2、tion was just around the corner. So discouraged was I when I got my low-scored test paper that I burst into tears. I thought it was the end of the my world and I was totally helpless since I couldnt do well in such a simple math test. Fortunately, my class teacher noticed my bad mood and offered me
3、a helping hand kindly. She helped me analyze all my strong points and weak points, as well as gave me the warm encouragement which I needed badly. I cheered up and spent double effort than before. In the end, my perseverance and diligence were rewarded with a success in the exam.The lesson Ive learn
4、t from this experience is rich and profound. On one hand, Ive been taught never to give up in the process of pursuing your goal. As an old saying goes, “God helps those who help themselves. ” How can we expect the joy of success without making continuous efforts, working hard and improving ourselves
5、? On the other hand, on no account should we lose confidence in ourselves. Failures and frustrations are unavoidable in our life, but they are only to make us stronger. Therefore, Ill always begin my day with a confident smile and steer my ship with hope.高分范文2 Life is like a fascinating voyage on th
6、e ocean, where huge waves and horrible storms always go hand in hand. It was a brand new start when I began my senior life 2 years ago. Packing my luggage and saying goodbye to my parents, I flew away from home and settled down to my new boarding school. As time went by, my great curiosity about the
7、 new lifestyle and strong passion for living independently all subsided easily. I began to feel homesick and got tired of daily routine. I couldnt help missing my little warm bed at home while the dorm was absolutely far from satisfactory in terms of comfort and convenience. Expecting too much of th
8、e new life made it hard for me to escape disappointment. I was about to give up when my roommates warmed up my heart by celebrating my birthday together. They gave me such a big surprise that I felt as if I were at home and they were my family members. Thanks to the deep friendship, my ship of life
9、got over considerable difficulties and went on and on. From this precious experience, I learnt a lesson that adaptation to a new environment is never a smooth course and one should always be prepared for the tough obstacles in front of you. Besides, it is friends that are the most precious treasure
10、you own and thats the source of power which is always on your side.Ill always cherish that experience and face up to the challenges in the future.Writing 2 2013届上海市高三英语二模（黄浦区） 当你在生活中遇到问题或困难时你会如何解决？请你就亲身经历的1至2件事具体介绍一下你解决问题的办法并简要谈谈你对困境的态度。高分范文As a college student to be, Ive gone through numerous diffi
11、culties in my course of learning and life. Among which I treasure an unforgettable experience in Senior One, which is and will remain the most vivid touch in my book of memory.Being a fresh senior student, I was at first curious about every single thing around me. But good dreams always break quickl
12、y, and soon the heavy burden of homework and the fierce competition in academic performances knocked me down. My scores performed free falls as I was wandering aimlessly all day with no confidence in myself, just coping numbly with the assignments which seemed impossible to be finished on time. Just
13、 at this critical moment in my life, my class teacher sharply sensed my abnormal status and gave me a helping hand. Through a serious face-to-face conversation, she pointed out to me that no matter what we are doing, the true meaning of life is always “Keep Fighting”.“How can I give up so early as I
14、 still can struggle?” These forceful words kept flashing into my mind, and suddenly I realized how silly I was to surrender when facing such small difficulties. Life is struggle, and only by constantly fighting can we make it. He who gives up early will surely fail in studying, life* and so on. From
15、 then on, I kept pushing myself through the stream of school life, thus making us increasingly stronger when facing obstacles.Keep fighting and never give up, this is what Ive learned through the above experience, and it always brings me up when I am in difficulties, ringing clearly deep in my mind
16、like a wind bell in a gentle breeze.Writing 3 2004年6月大学英语六级你买了一本英文词典发现有这样那样 的问题书店的态度又不好因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容:事 情的起因与书店交涉的经过呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量。高分范文 1Dear Editor,I am writing to you about my experience of an unsatisfactory purchase. Last month, I bought an English dictionary at a bookstore. However, after
17、using it, my disappointment was beyond description when I discovered several spelling mistakes and missing pages.In order to demand a refund, I sent a complaint letter to the store, but I havent received any reply so far. Last week, I paid a visit to the bookstore and pointed out the problems of the
18、 dictionary to the shopkeeper. Much to my frustration, he spoke in an impatient manner and refused to be responsible.I would appreciate it very much if you could kindly write something to the newspaper to call for better service quality. On one hand, by developing a greater sense of responsibility,
19、the service industry will better cater to the consumers need. On the other hand, by better respecting the consumers rights, the service industry will win the trust of the general public. This is a win-win situation for both sides. At last, thanks for your patience in reading. Im looking forward to y
20、our good news. Sincerely yours, Mary 高分范文 2Editor,Im a loyal reader of your newspaper. Recently I have something necessary to complain about. I bought an English dictionary last week in a bookstore, but I disappointedly found that several pages were missing and the text was not clearly printed. So I
21、 went back to the bookstore, hoping to exchange it for a new one.To my surprise, the shop assistant refused my requirement saying that it was the publishing house that was to blame for the mistake. And when I asked to see their manager, they turned down my request again by giving an excuse that the
22、manager was on vacation. I couldnt but leave the bookstore in great anger and depression.Should cases of this kind happen again? Nowadays, more and more emphasis is laid on the quality of service, which can either build up or ruin a business reputation. Take bookstores as an example, if they have a
23、check on books before theyre sold, improve the after sale service system and require their staff to be more polite, things will be totally different. I really hope your newspaper can make efforts to call on the service industry to improve their service quality. Im looking forward to the change. Your
24、s sincerely, Tom 高分范文 3Dear Editor,Im writing this letter to complain about the poor quality of the product and service of a book store near my school. I bought an English-Chinese dictionary at the book store which I used to consider good. Contrary to the situation before, the dictionary I bought th
25、is time had much trouble in its quality, and it was almost impossible for me to read and learn clearly and comfortably. As soon as I found the problem, I went to the bookstore to ask for a better dictionary. However, only caring about their own profits, the shopkeepers rudely refused my request and
26、treated me badly as if I had been cheating. As a result, I finally had to leave the store without a dictionary of better quality.My experience is actually not a single case, though. Ive heard many of my friends and family members complaining about the poor service of service industry, which has left
27、 a bad impression in many peoples heart. With the 2010 World Expo drawing near, it is high time that the service industry tried its best to improve its service so that it can establish a good reputation among the citizens again. Besides, good service in public places is also a key element to foreign
28、ers attitude towards Shanghai.All in all, Im writing this letter not only for the sake of myself, but also for the sake of my fellow citizens, who firmly hope that the service industry in our city will serve us well one day. Yours sincerely, ChristinaWriting 4 2007年高考上海卷以“礼物”为题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括 以下内容： 1.
29、你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。 高分范文1Womens Day is drawing near. It suddenly occurs to me that it is high time that I did something special for my mom. After taking a wide range of gifts into consideration, I have finally come to the idea of preparing a delicious dinner for her as a gift with m
30、y reasons as follows：To begin with, my mom always devotes herself to creating a comfortable family atmosphere for my dad and me. You just cant imagine how busy she can be doing the heavy housework. Preparing a dinner for her as a gift not only helps her relieve some of her pressure but also shows my
31、 gratitude to her. Secondly, I used to live with my parents every day, but after I entered high school, I have less time to spend with them and take less care of Ihcm to show my love for them much than before. To make up for the loss of love between my parents and Ipreparing a dinner all by myself w
32、ill certainly make a difference. The relationship between mom and me will be strengthened again, I suppose. In addition to this, one day in the future I will have to live an independent life and take care of myself. If I can show my mom 1 have the ability to cook food myself and live a good life, sh
33、e will have more confidence in me and wont have to be worried about me all the time. Last but not the least, this gift will certainly leave a deep impression on both my mom and me, which is a unique treasure that no one else can have.It doesnt matter what gift I have prepared. It is the care and lov
34、e I put into the gift that really matters. Happy Womens Day,my dear mom. 高分范文2As my mothers birthday is drawing near, I want to send her a gift. Since sunflowers are her favorite, Im planning to send her a bunch of sunflowers as her birthday present.My mother is a sunflower-lover. You can see sunflo
35、wers everywhere in our apartment. The patterns on the curtains, the decorations on the wall and even the shape of the lights, they are all sunflowers. So maybe a bunch of real sunflowers will delight her.With the bunch of sunflowers, she can replace the fake ones in her bedroom with the real ones. W
36、ith the pleasant smell in the air, she may be happier to begin her brand new day and may stay in good mood all day long.Seeing the flowers turning to the sun, she may be happier when doing housework and may be able to do a better job in her teaching career.My mother has devoted all she has to me and
37、 the home. I hope that the bunch of her favorite sunflowers will show my love and gratitude to her for having brought me up, shaped my personality and made me who I am now. The only thing I want to see with the present is her smiling face.I want to send my mother a bunch of sunflowers to wish her a
38、happy birthday and a more delighted mood.Writing 5谈谈你是怎么使用零花钱的并谈谈感想。 高分范文1I get about 1,000 yuan as pocket money from my parents every month. Since we are students at school, pocket money is our only source of money and we should manage our parents hard-earned money properly.For my part, most of my
39、pocket money goes to books. Some are for the relaxation of my mind and some are for information, understanding and knowledge. Sometimes I will spend some on magazines or CDs for entertainment. Only a small portion is spent on snacks and the rest on transportation.I think it is advisable for me to sp
40、end most of my pocket money on books, which can provide us with food for thought as well as a long time of pleasure. In this way, material wealth can contribute to the build-up of our minds and the money spent is worth its value. Besides, to make the most of the pocket money, I need to plan a budget
41、 and note down where my money goes to get a clear idea how my plan is going. By doing this, I can improve my ability to handle money and cultivate a sense of frugality and that paves the road for the start of our future career.To sum up, to spend pocket money properly and wisely is of great importance. We should deal with it with care.
