1、Section Writing书籍的推荐1写作任务假定你是李华,你和你的朋友打算在学校创办一个英语读书俱乐部,请写信给你的美国朋友Peter,介绍一个俱乐部的创办目的和运作情况,希望对方提出建议。注意:1词数80左右;2文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,How is everything going?_Yours,Li Hua2写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文建议信主题:介绍读书俱乐部创作目的和运作情况,并寻求建议(2)二定:确定时态和人称时态:一般现在时为主人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称
2、(you)(3)三明确:明确写作要点创作目的运作情况寻求建议(4)四分段:结合写作要点,分为三个段落3素材整理(1)关键词语创作目的:widen our horizons,determine to do运作情况:buy appealing books,chances to do,exchange opinions, a range of, in an attempt to do寻求建议(2)完成句子我写信寻求你对我们英语读书俱乐部的一些建议。_ on our English reading club.为了拓宽眼界并提高英语水平,我和朋友决定在学校创办英语读书俱乐部。_,my friend an
3、d I _ set up an English reading club in our school.我们会买一些著名作家的有吸引力的书。We will buy _ works of famous authors.我们也将为俱乐部成员提供交流观点的机会。We will provide _.我们将为俱乐部成员推荐好书。_ to members of the club.我们也将举办一系列活动努力使更多学生对文学产生兴趣。_ in an attempt to _.4满分作文(连句成篇)请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。参考范文:Dear Peter,How is everyth
4、ing going? Im writing to ask you some advice on our English reading club.To widen our horizons and improve our English, my friend and I determine to set up an English reading club in our school. We will buy some appealing works of famous authors and order China daily and the 21st English newspapers
5、to learn about different cultures. We will provide chances for members of the club to exchange opinions on certain books so that they can learn from each other. Besides, we will recommend good books to members of the club. At last, we will also hold a range of activities in an attempt to make more s
6、tudents interested in literature.Such are our plans. Would you like to give us some advice? Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua综合点评:范文要点齐全,语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在其中使用了地道的短语和句式来达到写作目的,例如:第一段,开篇点题,点出写作意图:寻求建议;第二段,to do不定式作目的状语;so that目的状语从句的运用,语言地道,表意清楚。also,besides,at last等词(组)使文章逻辑条理。第三段,简洁清楚结束书信,
7、再次回归寻求建议的写作意图。整篇文章逻辑清楚,语篇连贯,完成了写作要求。5佳作背诵(1)佳作一学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信进行推荐。要点如下:1推荐这两类书;2分别说明推荐理由。注意:1词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_(2)佳作二假定你是李华,请你给喜欢中国诗歌的朋友Peter写信推荐一档节目。1节目名称:经典咏流传(Everlasting Classics);2推荐理由:诗歌和歌曲相结
8、合,专家讲解等。注意:1词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_Section Writing书籍的推荐3Im writing to ask you some adviceTo widen our horizons and improve our Englishdetermine tosome appealingchances for members of the club to exchange opinionsWe will recommend good booksWe will also hold a range of activitiesmake more students
9、interested in literature5佳作一参考范文:Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand scien
10、ce subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and
11、 language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua佳作二参考范文:Dear Peter,Learning that you are interested in Chinese poetry and want to know more about it, I am writing to recommend a pr
12、ogram called Everlasting Classics to you, which will be of great help.Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China. In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry. Also, professors are invited to give explanations about the poems and their backgrounds. Thus, the audience will surely understand these poems better.You can watch the program either on TV or on the Internet. I hope you will find it useful. Best wishes to you.Yours,Li Hua