1、 (2013 新课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
2、I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and p
3、owerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案:I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she away.She is just a distant memory fo
4、r me now.I remember my grandfather very.He was tall,with broad and a beard that turned from black gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away they came over to play or do homework with me
5、.However,he was the gentlest man I have known.剖析:1.used to do sth.表示“过去常常做某事”。2.此处描述过去的事情,因此应用一般过去时,与主句时态一致。3.remember sth./sb.very well/clearly“很清楚地记得某事/某人”。4.人有两个肩膀,因此应用复数形式。5.turn from A to/into B 表示“由 A 变成 B”。6.他的嗓音低沉,这使他与众不同。短语 set sb.apart from“使某人与众不同”。7.分析句子成分可知,逗号前后为两个并列的分句,且表示并列顺承关系,因此应用 a
6、nd 连接。8.in fact“事实上”,为固定搭配。9.during 为介词,后可接名词或代词,不能引导从句,故应改为 when。when 在此处引导时间状语从句。10.我的爷爷是我曾见过的最温和的一个人。ever“曾经”,符合语境。Passage 2(2013 新课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及
7、其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon becomes another
8、meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案
9、:The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800s.tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,might not be served until 8 oclock at night.This custom soon another meal of day.,it had a connection the British porcelain(
10、瓷器)industry.Tea in China was traditionally from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good with handles to suit British habits.This made for the in the porcelain industry.剖析:1.read 为及物动词,其后不加介词。2.此处应用动名词短语作主语。3.which 在此引导非限制性定语从句,并在从句中作主语。4.此处在介绍英国人喝下午茶这一习俗
11、的形成,故应用一般过去时。5.day 是可数名词,且在此处表特指,其前应用定冠词 the。6.此处应用副词作评述性状语。7.have a connection with/to 是固定搭配,表示“与有联系”。8.分析句子结构可知,应用过去分词构成被动语态。9.此处 cup 为可数名词,应用复数形式表示泛指,指各种各样的茶杯。10.此处 grow 要作介词 for 的宾语,应用其名词形式 growth。Passage 3(2013 陕西)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺
12、词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the
13、water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry,we built a f
14、ire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.答案:My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we fishing at a lake.We took fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to get.I wan
15、ted to give up,mygrandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few,my grandfather also caught a fish.hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.剖析:1.句中出现了时间状语 One Sunday morning 且整篇文章说的是过去的事情,故用
16、一般过去时。2.修饰名词短语 fishing poles 应用形容词性物主代词。3.分析句子结构可知,此处是 as soon as 引导的时间状语从句,so 多余。4.根据句子意思可知,此处指的是在等了大约半个小时之后。故应用 after。5.get 是系动词,后面要用形容词作表语。6.根据上下文的意思可知,此处表示转折,而非并列。7.在 there be 句型中,be 的变化要和后面的名词保持一致。根据后面的 a sudden pull 可知,谓语动词要用单数形式。8.此处用不定冠词 a,表示泛指。9.few 后面跟可数名词的复数形式。10.根据句子结构可知,feel 与其逻辑主语 we 之
17、间为逻辑上的主谓关系,故应用现在分词作状语,表示原因。Passage 4(2013 辽宁)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜钱()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends
18、too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.”That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outs
19、ide her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案:Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time his work.Wit
20、h little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work made him very ill.“He has ruined his.We are worried about him.”That is other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quiet
21、ly I into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as as we missed him.剖析:1.spend time/money on sth.“在上花费时间/钱”,为固定用法。2.因为该句逗号前面是介词短语,因此 so 多余。3.因为本句的主语 hard work 是不可数名词,因此谓语要改为 has。4.his 是形容词性物主代词,后面应该接名词,所以将 healthy 改为 health。5
22、.引导表语从句,且在从句中作宾语,故用 what。which 有选择的意思,用在此处不准。6.pay a visit to sb.表示“拜访某人”,为固定搭配。7.根据上下文内容可知,此处应用 his 指代 Mr.Johnsons。8.根据前面的 Yesterday afternoon,paid,was,had 等词可知应用一般过去时。9.picture 是可数名词,some of the pictures 是多幅画中的一部分,所以 picture 应该用复数形式。10.修饰动词 missed 应用副词 much,much 在此用作程度副词,而 many 只可用作形容词,所以应将 many 改
23、为 much。Passage 5(2013 浙江)下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。例如:It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you.Luckily I completely free then,so Ill to say“yes”
24、.Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.Friday evening.Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my cl
25、assmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know Ill never fall sleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life
26、and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary 答案:Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my,my school just everything else I
27、love in the world.To make matters,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully,but I know Ill never fall.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary 剖析:1.far away 是不具体的,与前面的 350 m
28、iles 相矛盾,故应去掉。2.宾语从句的时间状语是 last week,故应改为过去时。3.又找到一份工作,又一个应该是 another one。4.根据上下文可知是“同学们”应用复数形式。5.此处是并列关系应改为 and。6.上文讲到的不是什么好事,这里应该是“更糟糕的是”应用比较级。7.first day 是特指的需要限定,故应加 the 或 my。8.tiring 是使人感到疲劳的,主语应该是物或事,故应改为 tired。9.fall asleep 是固定搭配。10.主语是 you,被插入语 dear diary 隔开了应改为 are。Passage 6(2013 四川)下面短文中有
29、10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;3.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to
30、 copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I
31、was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?答案:Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test,but I tried to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,me to let her to copy my answers.After for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher
32、was angry because we had same answers in the.We were warned not to cheat again she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why she punish me?剖析:1.动词 find 后用形容词作宾语补足语。2.表示“费力地”用副词 hard,hardly 几乎不,是表示否定意义的副词,不符合语境。3.句中缺少谓语动词,故用 asked(过去式)作谓语。4.let 后用不带
33、to 的不定式作宾语补足语。5.介词 after 后用动词-ing 形式作宾语。6.根据语境可知此处指两人都,所以用 both。7.same 之前需加定冠词 the。8.此处指一次化学考试,所以用单数形式。9.根据语境可知此处应用连词 or,表示“否则,要不然”。10.全文是在讲述过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。Passage 7(2012 新课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()
34、划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got a
35、ngry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“Thats it.No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to
36、last.My attitude changed from then on.答案:I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things /wrong,I got angry and broke.For a while parents bought me new to
37、ys.But before long they began to see was happening.When I apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,“Thats it.No more toys you.”My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.剖析:1.and 连接的应该是两个并列的成分,前面是比较级 more
38、patient,后面也应是比较级,故将 little改为 less。2.each of 短语后为复数可数名词,故改 toy 为 toys。3.do wrong 做错事。其主语一般是人,而此句中主语是 things 东西。go wrong 出毛病;出故障,故可将did 改为 went 或在 did 后面加 go 表示对 go 的强调。4.此处的代词指代前面的 toys,故用复数形式,改 it 为 them。5.此处指的是我的父母,应在 parents 前加 my。6.此处表示“发生什么事”,故用 what。7.“撕毁”动作发生在过去,应用过去式,与 said 同时发生。8.给某人买玩具应用 fo
39、r。9.must 在肯定句中表推测,语气最强,而此处语气较弱用 might 或 could 更合适。10.根据使役动词 make 的用法,应将 to 去掉。make sb./sth.do sth.使某人/某事物做某事。Passage 8(2012 浙江)下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Two years before
40、,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my
41、 mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.答案:Two years,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to sta
42、y in a hospital for at least two.I called my parents,I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they be worried about because I was so away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think th
43、at it was the right thing to do.剖析:1.由下文时态得知。2.因为 rent 是及物动词。3.此处是副词作状语。4.前有 two,故用可数名词复数形式。5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用 but。6.由上下文时态得知。7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。8.此处无表示比较之意。9.interesting“有趣的”,修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”,修饰人,因为此处修饰 stories,所以用interesting。10.因为指代上面的真实情况。Passage 9(2012 辽宁)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文
44、中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend,Gina.Unfortunate,the only pr
45、oblem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and,for a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out
46、far too quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona 答案:Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we with you.It was so kind you to let us bring Annes friend,Gina.,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible a
47、ccident on the highway and,a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six.In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there the road was clear.In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.finally dropped Gina off at her parents
48、 and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona 剖析:1.由下文可知此处应用过去式 had。2.此处 kind 修饰 you,说明 you 的品质,故用介词 of。3.unfortunately 为副词,修饰后面的句子。4.as a result 结果,是固定词组。5.前面有 six,故用复数名词 miles。6.until/till 直到,符合此处的语境。7.在那儿的一个停车场,故用 there。8.car 为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故用不定冠词 a。9.由后面的 our 可知,此处应用 we。10.home 为副词,故前面不用介词。Passage
49、 10(2012 陕西)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.
50、It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many phot
51、os taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.答案:My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we Beijing last month.It is in the downt
52、own area,it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a double-room with a big bath.What I liked best the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared my friends many photos in Beijing.The food was wonderful with r
53、easonable prices,and we enjoyed several local.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of who is going to Beijing.剖析:1.由时间状语 last month 可知此处应用一般过去时。2.前后是因果关系或并列关系。3.anywhere 是副词,前面不加介词。4.作定语应该使用形容词。5.what 引导的主语从句作主语,谓语动词由宾语或表语而确定,故谓语动词用单数。6.share with.和一起分享、分担。7.photos 与 take 之
54、间为被动关系,故用过去分词。8.dish 为可数名词,前面有 several 修饰,要用复数形式。9.hotel 为可数名词,要加不定冠词,构成“such a(n)+adj.+单数可数名词+that+其他”结构。great 的发音以辅音音素开头故用 a。10.any friend of mine 我的朋友中的任何一个,此处应该使用名词性物主代词。Passage 11(2011 新课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该
55、加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket b
56、ut turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes
57、.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.答案:My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket turned around to pick up my bag from the flo
58、or and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money my pocket,but the only clothes I had those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any.When I finally arrived at my he lent to me lots of clothes.I very happy that I could change my clothes at last.剖析:1.I was at the
59、 Shanghai Railway Station 是主系表结构的主干句,需要用 buying 作状语。2.去看望在杭州的朋友,远指用 there。3.因为 holiday 是可数名词,去度假习惯上说“go for a holiday”。4.bought my ticket 和 turned around 两个动作间是并列关系。5.钱在口袋里,用介词 in。6.be 动词的主语是 clothes,又因为上下文都用过去时态,所以用 were。7.luggage 为不可数名词。8.arrived at(到达)的应当是朋友的家,my friends=my friends house。9.动词 len
60、d 的用法是 lend sb.sth.或 lend sth.to sb.。10.此处表述“我”在当时得到朋友的帮助很高兴,应用一般过去时。Passage 12(2011 辽宁)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。In early Janu
61、ary this year,the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne T
62、yler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,b
63、ecause the rate remained above the previous level.答案:In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports steady,around three per.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors outer space was shown on television,there was immediate increase in reports of sightings from all pa
64、rts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to his findings known.wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the n
65、umber of reported sightings,the rate remained above the previous level.剖析:1.因为句子的主语为 the rate,是单数,所以谓语动词要用单数形式。2.因为前面有 per(每一),所以用单数形式 week。3.来自外太空的,所以用 from。4.名词 increase 为泛指,且其前有发音以元音音素开头的 immediate 修饰,所以用不定冠词 an。5.who 引导的定语从句中缺少谓语动词。6.不定式 to 后用动词原形。7.因为代替的是一个人 Wayne Tyler,所以用 He。8.副词 naturally 作状
66、语修饰动词 explained,不需要加介词 for。9.现在分词短语作状语,drop 与 follow 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。10.前后句子间为转折或让步关系,所以用表转折或让步的连词。Passage 13(2011 陕西)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第
67、 11 处起)不计分。Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didnt have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the act
68、or couldnt be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldnt believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!答案:Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in th
69、e park near my home,I came across a crew a new film with one of my favourite.I didnt have my camera with me at that time,I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they finished the scene and the actor couldnt be seen.I was really and about to leave when he walked out a building.
70、He was right there in the front of me!I couldnt believe my lucknot only did I my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!剖析:1.a crew 与 make 之间存在逻辑上的主谓关系,用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰 crew。2.“one of+可数名词”结构中,应用可数名词的复数形式。3.句子的前后之间为因果关系,用 so。也可用 and 表顺承关系。4.get 表示“(去)拿来”时为及物动词,需加宾语,it 指代前文中的 camera,避免
71、重复。5.整篇文章以一般过去时为主,finish 这个动作发生在 got back 之前,故用过去完成时。6.否定句中应用 anywhere 来表示“到处”。7.表示人感到失望时应用 disappointed。8.walk out 后接宾语时需加 of,表示“从中走出来”。9.在事物的前面用 in front of.,in the front of 表示在事物内部的前面。10.倒装句中 did 表示过去,已提前,had 应用原形 have。Passage 14(2010 新课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两
72、处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door
73、 come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.
74、Without a moments delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced:“Ill take them.”答案:My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door by to help.As the old man looked over the things that were to be s
75、old,he stopped at a box of golden for Christmas trees.On the box was a card:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price to 10 cents a piece.Without a moments delay,neighbor picked up the box announced:“Ill take them.”剖析:1.story 为可数名词单数,
76、表泛指,应用不定冠词 a。2.主语为物,应用 interesting。3.故事发生时间为 one day,句子时态为过去时,故用 came。4.考查固定搭配,on the ground 和 in the yard。5.a box of golden balls“一盒金色的球”,应用可数名词复数。6.saying 为现在分词作伴随状语。7.整篇文章都在叙述过去发生的一件事,故应用一般过去时态。8.副词用错,语意矛盾。价格从原先的每个 25 美分降到每个 10 美分。9.代词用错,人称不合适。由第一句的 his 及第二句的 he 可知用 his。10.此处表并列动作,应用 and。Passage
77、15(2009 海南、宁夏)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Dear Mrs Winthorp,So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think
78、Id email you and let you know what things are going.Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend wi
79、th them so that we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.Well,I had better to stop now.Im going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for Ive got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.Best,Carol 答案:Dear Mrs Winthorp,So my first week at college is
80、over!No lectures this morning so I think Id email you and let you know things are going.Im glad to say that has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I
81、plan to make with them so that we can help each other the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and here.Well,I had better to stop now.Im going to attend first lesson this afternoon,Ive got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.Best,Carol 剖析:1.表示让对方知道情况进展如何,应该用 how 来代替 what。2.“一切进展顺利”中“一切”应该为 e
82、verything;anything 为“任何事情”之意,常用于否定句和疑问句中。3.考查时态,该句谈论的是在大学的第一周所发生的事,属过去的事情,所以用过去式。4.序数词 second 前应该有定冠词修饰。5.make friends with sb.为固定结构,意为“与某人交朋友”。6.help sb.with sth.与 help sb.(to)do sth.均为固定结构。7.系动词 seem 后用形容词作表语。8.had better do sth.为固定结构,意为“最好做某事”。9.mine 为名词性物主代词,后面不能再接名词 lesson,所以必须改成形容词性物主代词 my。10.
83、该句表示结果,而不是原因,应该用 so。模拟试题 Passage 1(2013 银川一中高三第二次模拟)When you go aboard,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must adopt to:the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do how the people of the country do.Unless they eat
84、 snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get off cultural difficulties by visiting some old great museum.Dont s
85、pend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time make friends.In this way you could learn about the new culture and have fun.答案:When you go,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must to:the language,the food and the
86、 clothing.The best thing to do is to do the people of the country do.they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can
87、always get cultural difficulties by visiting some old great.Dont spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time friends.In this way you learn about the new culture and have fun.剖析:1.此处表示出国,故应用 abroad。2.adapt to 表示“适应”。3.此处为 what 引导的宾语从句。4.此处为假设的一种情况。if 如果。5.此处并非表示“敢不敢”,而是
88、表示“跟从”。6.find 与 difficult 之间缺少形式宾语 it。7.get round/around 在此处表示“顺利应付或克服”。8.museum 为可数名词,应用其复数形式。9.spend some time(in)doing something 花费时间做某事,为固定表达。10.此处不是表示过去,而是表示将来的事。故不用 can 的过去式。Passage 2(2013 海口高考调研测试)It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop,waited for Bus No.601 to go to
89、school.After the while,the bus came and she got on it.There are many passengers in the bus.Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.”When we heard thi
90、s,Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus.They worked hardly together,pushing the bus slowly backward.Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.答案:It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop,for Bus No.601 to go to school.After
91、 while,the bus came and she got on it.There many passengers in the bus.Some were talking some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.”When heard this,Li Hua and the other got
92、off the bus.They worked together,pushing the bus slowly.Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.剖析:1.在具体某一天的上午要用介词 on。2.wait 与主语之间为主动关系,故应用其现在分词形式。3.after a while 一会儿,为固定短语。4.前后时态应保持一致。5.前后句之间是对比关系,而非转折关系。6.此处表示汽车抛锚,无需被动,没有强调人为造成的。7.前后人称应保持一致。8.passenge
93、r 为可数名词,此处应用复数形式。9.hardly 表示“几乎不”;hard 表示“努力地”。10.众人在推车,故车应该向前(forward)行。Passage 3(2013 吉林白山第一中学高三第二次模拟)Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn p
94、ale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours treatment they finally escaped from death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care ab
95、out the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers.They must be charged with law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Yours,Wang Ming 答案:Dear Editor,I m writing to tell you about a food
96、 poisoning accident.Several days ago,my ate a bag of food from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours treatment they f
97、inally escaped from death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care happens to consumers.They must be charged law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the of food safety and begin taking actio
98、n together to make sure food is safe.Yours,Wang Ming 剖析:1.由下文可知,此处并不是一个邻居。2.buy 与 food 之间为动宾关系,应用其过去分词作后置定语。3.前后时态应保持一致。4.call 作“打电话叫”讲时,为及物动词。5.be interested in.对感兴趣。6.此处指代前面的商人,故用 they 来表示。7.what 引导的宾语从句表示发生在顾客身上的事情。8.受到法律的惩罚应用介词“by”,表示动作的主使者。9.the/our whole society 表示“整个社会”。10.此处表示重要性,应用 importan
99、t 的名词形式。Passage 4(2013 吉林实验中学高三第二次模拟)In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,that is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and researching the computer software.An old saying go,“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree w
100、ith this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs.To meet me curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best“meal”of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English exam.Interest is the key of s
101、uccess.答案:In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and the computer software.An old saying,“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English
102、 when I was a little girl.I got interested in foreign cultures customs.To meet curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best“meal”of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English.Interest is the key success.剖析:1.形容词最高级前应加定冠词 the。2.that 不能引导非限制性定语从句。3.set up 与 research
103、之间为并列关系。两个动作同时进行。4.单数名词作主语谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。5.副词修饰形容词。6.此处 cultures 与 customs 之间为并列关系,而非选择关系。7.此处需用形容词性物主代词。8.read 为及物动词,其后无需加介词。9.此处指多次考试。10.the key to 表示“的关键”。Passage 5(2013 吉林四校联合高三第一次诊断)It is important to know that a parent can do to help reduce childrens stress.If you notice that your child is bec
104、oming nerve,he may have problems at the school.He may has trouble sleep.He may be depressing and begin to suffer from headaches.You should talk him to try to discover the cause of her stress.You can spend extra time help him.In short,you need to be complete supportive and encouraging all the time.答案
105、:It is important to know a parent can do to help reduce childrens stress.If you notice that your child is becoming,he may have problems at the school.He may trouble.He may be and begin to suffer from headaches.You should talk him to try to discover the cause of stress.You can spend extra time him.In
106、 short,you need to be supportive and encouraging all the time.剖析:1.what 引导的宾语从句,而且在从句中作宾语。2.此处需要 nerve 的形容词形式,与 become 构成系表结构。3.at school 在学校,为固定表达。4.may 后面跟动词原形。5.have trouble(in)doing sth.做某事有困难,为固定短语。6.表示人的心情应用 depressed。7.talk to sb.和某人谈话。8.前后人称不一致。9.spend some time(in)doing sth.花费时间做某事,为固定短语。10
107、.副词修饰形容词。Passage 6(2013 哈尔滨第六中学高三第二次模拟)Mrs.Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and was tired during the day to do anything,even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing.She had headaches more often,it prevented her from reading or watched TV.The more she thought about her conditions,the
108、 more worse she felt.At last she went to see her doctor,whom she had known for year.The doctor listened to his heart and said,“There is nothing serious wrong with you,and I accept the fact that you dont feel well.Now,I will give you some pills that will help.Come tomorrow morning and tell me how you
109、 felt.”答案:Mrs.Smith was unable to fall at night and was tired during the day to do anything,even the simple things that she used to enjoy doing.She had headaches more often,prevented her from reading or TV.The more she thought about her conditions,the more worse she felt.At last she went to see her
110、doctor,whom she had known for.The doctor listened to heart and said,“There is nothing wrong with you,I accept the fact that you dont feel well.Now,I will give you some pills that will help.Come tomorrow morning and tell me how you.”剖析:1.fall asleep 入睡,为固定短语。2.此处为 too.to.结构。3.which 引导的非限制性定语从句。4.read
111、 与 watch 为并列成分一起作 from 的宾语。5.worse 本身就是比较级,more 多余。6.for years 意为“好多年”。7.前后人称应保持一致。8.修饰形容词 wrong 应用 serious 的副词形式。9.前后句之间为转折关系,而非顺承关系。10.前后句时态应保持一致。Passage 7(2013 哈尔滨第九中学高三第五次月考)I like music very much,pop songs particularly.Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home,I alwa
112、ys play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the colourfully world of music.Now and then I stopped to follow the songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,asked me to fix my attention to my homework.She does not like the pop music.Like most grown-ups,
113、she enjoys folk songs,because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young.It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.答案:I like music very much,pop songs particularly.Every evening I am doing homework and a
114、t weekends when I at home,I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.The familiar patterns of notes attract me into the world of music.Now and then I to follow the songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,me to fix my attention my homework.She does not like the pop music.Like most grown-u
115、ps,she enjoys folk songs,because the peaceful music reminds her of beautiful life when she was young.It is a truth people of different understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.剖析:1.此处为 when 引导的定语从句。2.主语后缺少系动词。3.应用形容词形式修饰名词 world。4.上下文时态应保持一致。5.ask 与主语之间为主谓关系,故用其现在分词形式作状语。6.fix
116、 ones attention on 把某人的注意力放在,为固定短语。7.pop music 为专有名词,其前不需要加定冠词。8.前后人称不一致。9.此处为 that 引导的主语从句。10.形容词 different 后应跟名词的复数形式。Passage 8(2013 辽宁大连高三第一次模拟)It was my first day of high school,and I was late.My next lesson,French,scared to me,for I just can not speak that language.At the door,a hand reached ou
117、t and shook me firmly.I looked up.The man with a smile and welcoming words eased my fears.That year,I enjoyed his classes a great deal because I learned more than just French.Sometime he told us interesting stories.After school his room always filled with students and he would listen to and chatted
118、with them.He taught me what every person is worth your times.How fortunately I felt being his student!答案:It was my first day of high school,and I was late.My next lesson,French,scared to me,for I just not speak that language.At the door,a hand reached out and shook firmly.I looked up.man with a smil
119、e and welcoming words eased my fears.That year,I enjoyed his classes a great deal because I learned more than just French.he told us interesting stories.After school his room always filled with students and he would listen to and with them.He taught me every person is worth your.How I felt being his
120、 student!剖析:1.scare 使某人害怕,为及物动词。2.前后时态应保持一致,此处需用 can 的过去式 could。3.此处用名词性物主代词 mine 来表示我的手。4.此人第一次出现,故用不定冠词。5.sometimes 意为“有时”。6.be filled with 意为“充满”。7.chat 与 listen to 为并列谓语,都用动词原形。8.that 引导的宾语从句。9.句意:每个人都值得你去花费时间。所以此处用 time。10.应用形容词形式作 felt 的表语。Passage 9(2013 辽宁五校协作体高三第二次联合模拟)A few years before,Jac
121、k and I had a quarrel over score in a football match.From then on,we didnt speak to each other any longer.One day,when I was standing by a tree read,a ball flew to me and I kicked it back with looking at the player,but while I put up my head,I found it was Jack.Seen him,I was feeling very embarrasse
122、d.However,he was smiled to me,so I smiled either.Then we began to make up.This way the walls between us were torn down with a smile but we become good friends again.答案:A few years,Jack and I had a quarrel over score in a football match.From then on,we didnt speak to each other any.One day,when I was
123、 standing by a tree,a ball flew to me and I kicked it back looking at the player,but I put up my head,I found it was Jack.him,I was feeling very embarrassed.However,he was to me,so I smiled.Then we began to make up.This way the walls between us were torn down with a smile we become good friends agai
124、n.剖析:1.几年前应用“a few years ago”表示。2.a score 在此处表示“一个进球”。3.not.any more 意为“不再”。4.此处需用 read 的现在分词形式作伴随状语。5.由句意可知,此处表示我没有看踢球的人。6.while 后不能跟短暂性动作。7.see 与主语 I 之间为主动关系,应用其现在分词形式作状语。8.他正在对我笑,用过去进行时。9.either 用于否定句,而 too 用于肯定句。10.前后句之间为顺承关系,而非转折关系。Passage 10(2013 咸阳高考模拟)One day last month,a group of Chinese st
125、udent arrived in Brisbane.I was one of them.After speaking goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport,I started my long journey.That was my first journey abroad!How exciting I felt when I got on board.We left Shanghai to Hongkong to change to another plane to Melbourne,second largest city in Aust
126、ralia.From there we went to Brisbane,that is the capital city of Queensland,Australia.We were exchange students and send to the country by their government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months.From the first few lessons,we found the teachers there really worked hardly,and I am sure of ever
127、ything will go well in the next months.答案:One day last month,a group of Chinese arrived in Brisbane.I was one of them.After goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport,I started my long journey.That was my first journey abroad!How I felt when I got on board.We left Shanghai Hongkong to change to a
128、nother plane to Melbourne,second largest city in Australia.From there we went to Brisbane,is the capital city of Queensland,Australia.We were exchange students and to the country by government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months.From the first few lessons,we found the teachers there reall
129、y worked,and I am sure everything will go well in the next months.剖析:1.a group of 后应跟可数名词的复数形式。2.say goodbye to sb.向某人说再见,为固定表达。3.feel excited 感到兴奋的。4.leave.for sp.离开去某地。5.序数词前应加定冠词 the。6.which 引导的非限制性定语从句。7.此处应用 send 的过去分词与 were 构成被动语态。8.前后人称不一致。9.hard 努力地;hardly 几乎不。10.be sure of 后不能跟宾语从句。Passage
130、11(2012 浙江桐乡二月模拟)The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble get along with my parents.I had about fifty dollar in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick.Liv
131、ing on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of Im on my own,I get to deal with my duties without be told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.In the other hand,I coul
132、d make my own future plan.I have made rules for my to follow.答案:The first time I to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble along with my parents.I had about fifty in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home I start
133、ed to feel homesick.Living on my own is a different experience for three main reasons:being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of Im on my own,I get to deal with my duties without told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their.the other hand,I c
134、ould make my own future plan.I have made rules for to follow.剖析:1.前后句时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。2.have trouble(in)doing sth.为固定表达,意为“做某事有困难”。3.前面有 fifty 修饰,因此 dollar 用复数形式。4.start 为短暂性动词,不与 while 连用,故用 when 来引导。5.修饰形容词 different 应用 total 的副词形式。6.because of 为介词短语,后不能跟从句。7.without 是介词,其后跟动词-ing 形式。8.advice 为不可数名词
135、,无复数形式。9.on the other hand 为固定短语。10.介词 for 后跟物主代词的宾格形式。Passage 12(2012 陕西宝鸡高三第一次质检)Dear Li Hua,Its a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now Id like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.A boy,Li Ming,whom father died a month ago,was late for s
136、chool.He stood outside the classroom silent.I smiled to him and asked him to come.After a while,he began to cry.Seeing this,I walked to him and asked what has happened.He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by
137、 his word,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named“Mother”for the students.From then on,I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them.Do you think so?Im looking forward to your reply.答案:Dear Li Hua,Its a long time since I heard from you in las
138、t time.Now Id like to tell you impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.A boy,Li Ming,father died a month ago,was late for school.He stood outside the classroom.I smiled to him and asked him to come.After a while,he began to cry.Seeing this,I walked to him and asked what
139、 happened.He told me his mother was ill he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named“Mother”for the students.From then on,I began to realize we should respect our parents and ou
140、r best to help them.Do you think so?Im looking forward to your reply.剖析:1.last time 为名词短语在句中作状语,其前无需加介词。2.impressive 修饰可数名词单数 story,且以元音音素开头,前面要用不定冠词 an。3.此句是 whose 引导的非限制性定语从句,whose 在从句中作定语修饰 father。4.修饰动词 stood,需用 silent 的副词形式。5.此处表示“请他进来”,所以用 come in“进来”。其中 in 为副词。6.主句用了一般过去时,从句动作发生在主句之前,表示过去的过去,
141、因此用过去完成时。7.前后句之间是顺承关系而非转折关系。8.word 表示“话语”时为可数名词,应用复数形式。9.此处是定语从句应用 which/that,what 不能引导定语从句。10.realize 后的宾语从句中,and 连接两个并列谓语动词 respect 和 do,因为前面有 should,所以用动词原形。Passage 13(2012 辽宁重点中学协作体期末)On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from“Green Eyes”,was having an environmental protection activ
142、ity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it out and found it wounded.Thinking it should die without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to flying the bird,they felt a bit of pit
143、y but very delightful.I think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.答案:On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from“Green Eyes”,having an env
144、ironmental protection activity near the riverside when they sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it and found it wounded.Thinking it die without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to the bird,they felt a bit of
145、pity but very.I think its worthwhile for to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.剖析:1.主语 Li Hua and Wang Ping 为复数概念,谓语动词应用复数。2.主从句时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。3.pick sth.up 为固定词组,意为“把捡起来”。pick out 意为“
146、挑选,辨认出”,不符合语境。4.此处表示推测,故应用 might 或 could。5.此处为动词不定式,to 后应跟动词原形。6.delightful 令人高兴的,令人愉快的;delighted 高兴的,愉快的。此处表示“高兴的,愉快的”,因此用delighted。7.指代 Li Hua 和 Wang Ping 应用 them。8.respect 表示“尊敬,敬重”时为不可数名词,无复数形式。9.nature 表示“自然界”时,其前面无需加冠词。10.当先行词为 the way 而从句中缺少状语时,关系词可以用 in which、that 或省略。所以需加 in。Passage 14(2012
147、 吉林普通中学高中毕业班质检)Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices and she didnt like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office read:“This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.”Rose was exciting.When Rose went to the managers office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the d
148、oor and the manager raised her head.“Do you need a typist?”asked Rose.“Yes!”he said.Rose clapped her hand.She couldnt help saying,“OK!How much will you pay for me every month?”The manager thought for a while and said,“I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 30 dollars ev
149、ery month.”Rose smiled and answer,“Great!I will come and work here three months late.”The manager was speechless.答案:Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices she didnt like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office:“This office needs a typist can type 200 words a minute.”Rose was.When Rose w
150、ent to the managers office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised head.“Do you need a typist?”asked Rose.“Yes!”he said.Rose clapped her.She couldnt help saying,“OK!How much will you pay for me every month?”The manager thought for a while and said,“I will pay yo
151、u 77 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.”Rose smiled and,“Great!I will come and work here three months.”The manager was speechless.剖析:1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系。2.read 与 a board 之间为主动关系,故用动词-ing 形式作宾补。3.在定语从句中作主语用 who,不用 whom。4.修饰人用 excite 的过去分词形式,表示“兴奋的”。exciting 表示“令
152、人兴奋的”,常修饰物。5.由上文的 the man 可知此处应用 his。6.拍的是双手,应该用 hand 的复数形式。7.pay sb.some money 为固定表达,意为“付给某人多少钱”。8.序数词前应该加定冠词 the。9.and 所连接的两个并列动词的时态应保持一致。10.three months later 三个月以后。Passage 15(2012 西安高三第一次质检)I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning and something
153、unexpected happened half way.One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldnt move any far.Nobody knew what to do it.One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area.Lucky we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let hi
154、m rested in it.He took some medicine.Then he drink some water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.答案:I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning something unexpected happened h
155、alf way.One of my suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldnt move any.Nobody knew what to do it.One girl tried to call her mum her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area.we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him in it.He took some medicine.Then he som
156、e water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed on the top of the mountain.剖析:1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系。2.one of 后跟可数名词的复数形式。3.not.any farther/further 为固定表达,意为“无法再远”。4.do 的宾语是 what,故 it 多余。5.call sb.on ones mobile phone 意为“给某人打手机”。6.作状语修饰整个句子,应用副词形式。7.let sb.do sth
157、.为固定表达,意为“让某人做某事”。8.and 连接的前后动作的时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。9.after a while 为固定短语,意为“一会以后”。10.enjoy oneself 为固定搭配,意为“玩得高兴”。Passage 16(2011 辽宁实验中学期末)When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They neednt to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no manner.Then a
158、warm-hearted man teaches him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.”The next day,he met his uncle,but he did as the man told him to.The bow was too long that it made his uncle esca
159、pe soon with a surprising look.When Jack looked down,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did she go away?”答案:When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They neednt to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no.Then a warm-
160、hearted man him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.”The next day,he met his uncle,he did as the man told him to.The bow was long that it made his uncle escape soon with a look.W
161、hen Jack looked,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did go away?”剖析:1.neednt 在此为情态动词,后面直接加动词 wait,去掉 to。2.manners 是“礼貌”的意思。manner“举止”。3.全文都是过去时态,因此应用 taught。4.月份前不用冠词,去掉 the。5.perfect 为形容词,因此 will 后要加 be。6.前后两句为顺承并列关系,因此用 and。7.构成 so.that.“如此以至于”这一句型。8.此处指惊讶的表情,因此要用 surpr
162、ised。9.按照句意知当 Jack 抬起头时,发现他叔叔走了,因此用 look up。10.此处指代叔叔,要用 he。Passage 17(2011 河南郑州 47 中高三第三次月考)It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,Mike,wasnt there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mikes room and found
163、 Mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite patient and sent her
164、son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers on the floor!答案:It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner they that their son,Mike,wasnt there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to
165、 go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mikes room and found Mike on his face on the floor,a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She
166、 got quite and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of on the floor!剖析:1.be about to do.when.为固定结构,意为“正要做这时”。2.整篇文章都是过去时态,因此应用 found。3.lie 意为“撒谎;躺”,现在分词形式为 lying;lay 意为“放置;下蛋”,现在分词形式为 laying。4.reading a bo
167、ok 为现在分词短语作伴随状语。5.副词修饰动词 left,因此应用 unwillingly。6.wonder 后跟宾语从句且从句中又缺少主语,因此用 what,that 多余。7.wait 为不及物动词,要加介词 for 之后才能跟宾语。8.由上下文可知史密斯夫人很不耐烦,因此应用 impatient。9.to ones surprise“使某人吃惊的是”,为固定短语。to 为介词,介词后跟名词,而 surprised 为形容词。10.故事书是儿子的,为男性,因此用 his 而不用 hers。of 后跟名词性物主代词或名词所有格形式,因此应用 his。Passage 18(2011 宁夏银川
168、一中模拟)Im eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I grow up in this village,so I know everyone here.Thats the problem-the problem is theres nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the moments I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop
169、 as I work.Theres a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,therefore,Im going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.Im really looking forward to living in Nottingham.答案:Im eighteen years old an
170、d I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I up in this village,so I know everyone here.Thats the problem-the problem is theres nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop I work.Theres a bus at 7:30 in the mornin
171、g the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,Im going to stay in Nottingham my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.Im really looking forward to living in Nottingham.剖析:1.live in a small village“生活在一个小村庄里”,应加不定冠词 a。2.我在村子里长大这个动作已完成,因此应用过去时。3.根据上下文,可知此处表达的是:那不是问题,问题是无事可做。结合句意,在 is 后加 not。4.引导表语从句的 that 不能省略。5.at the moment“现在,此时此刻”,为固定短语。6.shop 后为定语从句。shop 在定语从句中作地点状语,因此应用 where。7.由句意知此处是并列关系,而不是选择关系,因此用 and。8.此处表句意的转折,要用 however;而 therefore 是“因此,所以”的意思。9.stay with sb.与某人住在一起。10.join the Navy“加入海军,成为海军中的一员”。join in 参加群众性的活动。
