1、35分写作规范抢分练(十). 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。I am the shared bike. Id like to be on the street to serve for people. They
2、can ride me just via a mobile App. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us without paying their bills on the App but treated us badly. We felt angry for which those bad guys did. Thanks to some kindly people, we received careful “treatment”. Now, you help as well a
3、s the whole societys attention are what we need most. We are designed help people who are stuck by the heavy traffic. We are neither toy nor private vehicles. Please obey the basic rules. 答案: 1. 【解析】第一句thea。考查冠词。bike是单数可数名词, 此处表示一辆共享单车, 故the 改为a。2. 【解析】第二句去掉for。考查动词。句中动词serve是及物动词, 后面直接加宾语, 不用加介词。3.
4、 【解析】第四句happenhappened。考查动词的时态。根据时间状语a few days ago可知本句应用一般过去时。4. 【解析】第五句butand。考查连词。此处指有些人不付款偷走单车, 还对“我们”不好。前后是并列关系, 不是转折关系。5. 【解析】第六句whichwhat。考查宾语从句。此处指对那些坏家伙所做的事感到生气, 宾语从句的谓语did缺少宾语, 故用what引导宾语从句并作did的宾语。6. 【解析】第七句kindlykind。考查形容词。此处修饰名词people, 应用形容词。7. 【解析】第八句youyour。考查代词。此处修饰名词help, 应用形容词性物主代词
5、, 指“你的”帮助。8. 【解析】第八句areis。考查主谓一致。as well as 连接的主语, 谓语动词的数要与as well as前的主语保持一致, 因此, 本句的谓语的数应与your help保持一致。9. 【解析】第九句在help前加to。考查不定式。句意: 我们被设计出来, 其目的是帮助那些受困于交通堵塞的人。所以这里用不定式表示目的。10. 【解析】第十句toytoys。考查名词的单复数。主语是we, toy应用复数形式, 同时, vehicles也暗示了答案。. 书面表达假设你是学校英语文学社(English Literature Club)的社长李华, 现需招募一批成员。请
6、你用英语写一份招募启事, 内容包括: 1. 招募条件; 2. 社团活动内容; 3. 其他(报名方式、截止日期等)。注意: 1. 词数100个左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Club Members Wanted_【参考范文】Club Members WantedWelcome to our English Literature Club! Anyone who is into English literature is welcome to sign up. It is preferred that you, easy-going and responsible, who ha
7、ve a good knowledge of English literature can join. In our club, a variety of activities will be well organized, such as English knowledge contests, literature appreciation, English poetry reading, etc. Above all, not only can you share learning experience with one another but also you can make a lot of friends, which contributes to broadening your horizon. Should you be interested in it, please sign up in Meeting Room 2 of No. 3 Teaching Building before July 4. Were waiting for you! 关闭Word文档返回原板块
