1、牛津译林版高中英语单元复习学案Unit 1Getting along with others词汇导练1Kids get_(难为情)if their mums kiss them in front of their friends.2There were no signs that the fire had been set_(故意地)3She_(发誓)that she hadnt told anyone，but her friends still didnt forgive her.4Hes still_(犹豫)about joining the expedition.5His recent
2、behavior_(使困惑)me.6Dont be so m_to your brother.Give him some chocolates.7Harry awkwardly a_to the lady for stepping on her left foot.8I told him it was a bad idea，but Daves so s_that he just never listens.9My tooth hurts badly，and I want to see my d_.10He was so a_in thought that he didnt hear what
3、you said.11You are 18 years old and you should pay attention to your_(behave)12Hes always_(anxiety)about his mothers health.1.embarrassed2.deliberately3.swore4.hesitating5.puzzled6.mean7.apologized8.stubborn9.dentist10.absorbed11.behavior12.anxious短语汇集1_与某人友好相处2_ 对感到惭愧3_ 因为某事向某人道歉4_ 一次难以忘怀的经历5_ 当众使某
4、人尴尬6_ 参加学校羽毛球队7_ 对某人在某方面严格8_ 等不及去做某事9_ 对有不同的态度10_ 遭受严重的污染11_ 导致，造成12_ 由于某种原因13_ 破坏友谊14_ 与一致1.get along well with sb.2.be/feel ashamed of.3.apologize to sb.for(doing)sth./make an apology to sb.for(doing)sth.4.an unforgettable experience5.embarrass sb.in public6.join the school badminton team7.be stri
5、ct with sb.in sth.8.cant wait to do sth.9.have/take different attitudes towards.10.suffer from serious pollution11.lead to/result in/contribute to12.for one reason or another/for some reason13.ruin the friendship14.be consistent with.语句试译1(回归课本P2)_they must have laughed behind my back！他们在我背后想必是笑得合不拢
6、嘴了！2(回归课本P2)I _ _ _very proud of myself after the test，_loudly how easy it was and how I was sure to get a good mark.考试之后，我的口气听上去想必很是自鸣得意，因为我嚷嚷着说那份试卷有多么容易，还说我肯定能够取得好的分数。3(回归课本P2)I was so upset_I felt like_.我太难过了，甚至直想哭出来。4(回归课本P3)Football is very important to me，but_ _our friendship.足球对我很重要，但我们的友谊同样重
7、要。1.How2.must have sounded；saying3.that；crying4.so is核心知识1.admitv承认，赞同；接纳(回归课本P2)We went to wash our hands in the girls toilets before lunch and I admitted how badly I had done.午饭前我们去女洗手间洗手，我承认了自己的考试成绩是那么糟糕。归纳拓展admit (to) sth.承认某事admit doing sth.承认做了某事admit (that) 承认admit.to be 承认为admit.to/into.允许进入
8、be admitted to 被接纳入admit of sth.容许，有可能admission n.允许进入，供认温馨提示(1)admit后接名词或动词ing形式，但不能直接接动词不定式。(2)admit的过去式、过去分词和现在分词要双写字母t，即admitted，admitted和admitting。例句探源Only athletes who have reached the agreed standard for their event will be admitted as competitors.只有比赛项目达标的运动员才有资格成为参赛者。Our hall admits 3,000 p
9、ersons.我们的礼堂可以容纳三千人。The matter admits of no delay.这件事不容拖延。(朗文P27)Dana admitted feeling hurt by what I said.达纳承认我说的话伤害了他。(牛津P26)It was generally admitted that the government had acted too quickly.普遍认为，政府行动过急。1完成句子(1)那个学生承认打破了窗户。(2)幸运的是，今年他被一所重点大学录取了。Luckily，he_ _ _/_ _ _ _this year.答案：was admitted to
10、/into a key university(3)这家电影院可容纳大约3000名观众。The cinema_ _ _ _.答案：admits about 3,000 audience2(2009年高考全国卷)If you leave the club，you will not be _ back in.Areceived BadmittedCturned Dmoved解析：选B。句意：如果你离开俱乐部，你将不会被允许返回。admit准许进(加)入。2.forgivevt.原谅，宽恕，饶恕(回归课本P2)I dont think I can ever forgive her.我觉得我无法原谅她。
11、归纳拓展例句探源(朗文P809)If anything happened to the kids，Id never forgive myself.如果孩子们出了什么事，我永远也不能原谅自己。I made the mistake of saying what I thought，and he wont forgive me for it.我不该说出我的想法，为此他不会宽恕我的。(牛津P799)Shed forgive him anything.她会原谅他的任何事。易混辨析forgive，excuse，pardon(1)forgive与pardon有时可通用，但forgive除了表示免予惩罚和追究
12、之外，往往还含有进一步的“不记旧账，从心里宽恕”等意思。还可用于forgive sb./sth.或forgive sb.for(doing)sth.原谅、宽恕某人做某事。(2)excuse原谅，语气较轻，宾语一般是过错、疏忽或犯过失的人，常用于口语中。除excuse sb.for(doing)sth.外，还可用于excuse oneself for(doing)sth.为自己(干)辩解。(3)pardon原意为“赦免”，在普通用法中也有“免予惩罚或追究”之意。只用于pardon sb.for(doing)sth.饶恕某人(干)某事。Children begin with loving thei
13、r parents；as they grow older they judge them；sometimes they forgive them.After the revolution all political prisoners were pardoned.There are some acts of injustice which no national interest can excuse.3完成句子(1)I think you should _(原谅) him his rudeness and _(道歉)to him first.After all，he is your brot
14、her.答案：forgive；apologize(2)如果你道歉，老师也许会原谅你的疏忽。If you apologize，the teacher may _.答案：forgive your negligence(3)我无法原谅自己，因为在我姐姐有困难时我没能帮助她。I couldnt forgive myself_ _ _ _ _help my sister when she was in trouble.答案：for not being able to3 .focusv& n集中注意力；聚焦n焦点，关注点(回归课本P3)The other team was brilliant and we
15、 really had to focus.对手非常优秀，我们必须集中精力。归纳拓展例句探源We shall maintain our focus on the needs of the customer.我们将继续重点关注顾客的需要。(朗文P794)The gallerys show focuses on works painted after 1945.那家美术馆的展览把注意力集中于1945年以后创作的绘画作品上。(牛津P786)The visit helped to focus world attention on the plight of the refugees.这次访问促使全世界关
16、注难民困境4.Most of us know we should cut down on fat，but knowing such things isnt much help when it _ shopping and eating.Arefers toBspeaks ofCfocuses on Dcomes to解析：选D。when it comes to意为“说到，一提起”。其他选项的主语都是人，而不是it。refer to意为“涉及，指的是，参考，适用于”；speak of意为“说到，论及”；focus on意为“集中在”。5. (2011年山东济南模拟) All her energi
17、es are _upon children and she seems to have little time for anything else.Aguided BaimedCdirected Dfocused解析：选D。guide“指导，指引”；aim“针对；目标”；direct“指引，给某人指路”；focus ones attention/eyes/energy on/upon.“集中注意力/视线/精力于”。句意：她所有的精力都集中在孩子身上，她似乎很少有时间关注其他任何事情。6While skating，you should_your attention_ the way you mo
18、ve.Afocus；on Bfocus；inCpay；on Dpay；in解析：选A。考查短语focus ones attention on sth.，若用pay，则是pay ones attention to sth.。7The students listened carefully to the teacher with their eyes_on the blackboard.Ato focus BfocusingCbeing focused Dfocused解析：选D。此处用了with复合结构，focus与eyes之间为动宾关系，故用过去分词形式。4.standvt.容忍，忍受；经受，
19、遭受(回归课本P3)I fell really guilty because I said some really cruel things too，but I cant stand seeing our team lose.我现在感到很内疚，因为我也说了一些很无情的话，可我就是无法容忍我们队输球。归纳拓展例句探源Our tent wont stand another storm like the last one.我们的帐篷经受不起像上次那样的风暴了。(朗文P2002)How can you stand letting her talk to you like that.你怎能容忍她那样给你
20、讲话。(牛津P1962)She couldnt stand being kept waiting.叫她等着，她会受不了。8用动词的适当形式填空：(1)I cant stand_(work)with Jane in the same office.答案：working(2)I cant_(stand)it when you do that.答案：stand9Modern plastics can_very high and very low temperature.Astand BholdCcarry Dsupport解析：选A。句意“现在的塑料可以耐高温和低温”，stand经受，忍受。5.bl
21、amevt.责备；谴责；把归咎于n过失；责备(回归课本P5)If she is a good friend，you should apologize for blaming her.如果她是你的好朋友，你就应该为责备她向她道歉。归纳拓展例句探源He blames you for neglecting of duty.他指责你玩忽职守。(牛津P192)Police are blaming the accident on dangerous driving.警方把事故原因归咎于危险驾驶。(朗文P185)Officials believe that more than one person may
22、be to blame for the fire.官员们认为不只一人应该为这次火灾承担责任。易混辨析blame，scoldblame意思是“责备，责怪”，语气较轻；而且blame的意思是“将过失归咎于某人”。scold意思是“责骂，训斥”，指大声呵斥、责备，常用于长辈对晚辈、上级对下级的关系。She doesnt blame anyone for her fathers death.He scolded them for arriving late.10. (2011年上海高三一次联考) _for the breakdown of the school computer network，Ali
23、ce was in low spirits.ABlaming BBlamedCTo blame DTo be blamed解析：选B。选择非谓语动词时，首先要看它与其逻辑主语的关系。Alice与blame之间为动宾关系，因此排除A、C两项。to be blamed位于句首作状语，表示目的，而本空为原因状语，因此排除D。11.Mr.Green stood up in defence of the 16yearold boy，saying that he was not the one _.Ablamed BblamingCto blame Dto be blamed解析：选C。句意：格林先生站了
24、出来保护那个16岁的男孩，他说这个男孩不该对此负责。to blame在此句作the one的定语。to blame为固定用法，只能用主动形式，能这样用的短语还有to let(出租)等。12I feel it is your husband who _ for the spoiled child.Ais to blame Bis going to blameCis to be blamed Dshould blame解析：选A。考查blame的用法。be to blame for“应受责备，该对负责”，这是一个强调句，强调主语your husband。6.delayn&.vt.& vi.耽搁；延
25、迟，推迟(回归课本P5)Do not delay.不要拖延。归纳拓展例句探源The World Health Organization gave a warning to the public without any delay when the virus of H1N1 hit Mexico in April，2009.世界卫生组织，在2009年4月H1N1病毒一在墨西哥发现就毫不耽搁地向公众发出了警告。(朗文P532)There was some delay in asking for help.寻求帮助有些晚了。(牛津P527)He delayed telling her the ne
26、ws，waiting for the right moment.他没有马上把消息告诉她,等有了适当的时机再说。13完成句子(1)延误送出请帖是你自己的错。It is your own fault to delay_ _ _ _.答案：sending out these invitations(2)火车被延误了五个小时。The train_ _ _ _.答案：was delayed five hours(3)如果这个人没被立刻送到医院，他可能就救不过来了。The man couldnt have been saved，if he hadnt been sent to hospital_ _.答案
27、：without delay7.persuadevt.说服，劝说(回归课本P9)Im so glad I persuaded you to talk to Rachel.我很开心终于说服了你跟雷切尔谈话。归纳拓展例句探源He persuaded some people to go back with him to Greenland.他说服了一些人跟他一起返回格陵兰岛。(朗文P1525)McFadden must now persuade the jury of her innocence.麦克法登现在必须让陪审团相信她是无辜的。(牛津P1482)I allowed myself to be
28、persuaded into entering the competition.我搁不住人家的劝说，就参加了比赛。易混辨析persuade，advise(1)persuade sb.to do sth.意为“说服某人干某事”，其结果是成功的。try to persuade sb.to do sth.意为“尽力说服某人干某事”，与advise sb.to do sth.同义。(2)advise sb.to do sth.意为“劝说某人干某事”，其结果可能是劳而无功(即“说”而未“服”)。Tom persuaded his father to take more exercises at last
29、.She advised her parents to give up their plan，but they wouldnt listen.14一句多译他说服她参加/不参加这次聚会。_答案：He persuaded her to/not to go to the party.He persuaded her into/out of going to the party.15.Its no use trying to_him to change his mind；he is pigheaded.Amake BsuggestCdiscourage Dpersuade解析：选D。考查动词辨析和词语
30、用法。根据后半句中的内容可知想“说服”他改变注意没有用，因为他固执。假如选择A项，题干中的第二个to要去掉；如果选择B项则搭配不当；C项表示“使灰心”，语意不符合。8.respondvi.回答，答复；响应，反应(回归课本P18)When asked they usually hesitate before responding，.当被问起时，他们回答之前通常犹犹豫豫，归纳拓展例句探源He responded to my question.他回答了我的问题。(朗文P1743)How did they respond to your criticism?他们对你的批评作何反应？(牛津P1699)T
31、he product was developed in response to customer demand.这种产品是为了满足顾客的需要而开发的。16完成句子(1)你还没有答复我们的请求。(2)政府为对付经济压力而采取了行动。The government acted_ _ _economic pressure.答案：in response to9.get along相处；进展(回归课本P1)What do you think the proverbs tell us about friendship and getting along with others?你觉得这些谚语在友谊和与他人交
32、往方面给我们一些什么样的启示呢？归纳拓展get through(to sb.)(用电话)接通，打通，联系上；到达(某人处)get through to sb.使某人理解，使某人接受(所讲的话)get through(sth.)顺利通过(考试等)；用完，耗尽；处理，完成，做完get over解决，克服，控制；从(疾病、震惊等)中恢复常态get sth.over to sb.向某人讲清某事；让某人明白某事get about走动，到处跑；消息传来get back回来；恢复；取回get into进入；陷入；被录取get off从下来get rid of摆脱，除掉get out of出去，离开get u
33、p起床；站起来get round/around传开；绕开困难；传播get into the habit of.染上习惯get together聚会；碰头get down to sth.开始做某事；开始认真注意(或对待)某事例句探源Im getting along well with a boy in my class.我跟班上的一位男同学一直相处得很好。Hi，Bob，how are you getting along with your spoken report?嗨，鲍勃，你的口头报告准备得怎么样了？I tried phoning her office，but I couldnt get t
34、hrough.我试着往她办公室打电话但就是打不通。Id love to.But Im just getting over the flu.我很乐意去，但我的流感还在恢复中。Public transport provides a cheap way to get around in Beijing.公共交通为人们游览北京提供了低价位的出行方式。(朗文P866)Were expecting more business as word gets around.随着消息传开，我们预期会有更多的业务。Isnt it time you got down to marking the papers?不是到了
35、你开始批改试卷的时间了吗？17(2010年高考福建卷)Weve just moved into a bigger house and theres a lot to do.Lets_it.Akeep up withBdo away withCget down to Dlook forward to解析：选C。本题考查动词短语的意义辨析。句意：我们刚搬到一所更大的大房子里，有很多事情要做，我们开始干吧。get down to开始做符合题意。keep up with跟上，赶得上；do away with废除；look forward to期待，盼望。18(2010年高考浙江卷)After that
36、，he knew he could_any emergency by doing what he could to the best of his ability.Aget away with Bget on withCget through Dget across解析：选C。句意：在此之后，他知道他只要尽全力就能成功应对一切紧急事件。get through“度过(艰难等)”，符合语意。get away with“从轻发落”；get on with“与和睦相处”；get across“被传达，被理解”。19.(2011年山东省实验中学高三二模)He thought he would be ab
37、le to_cheating in the exam!What a fool！He deserves the punishment.Atake the place of Blook forward toCbring about Dget away with解析：选D。句意：他还以为他考试作弊会免受惩罚呢！真愚蠢！他应受惩罚。take the place of，“代替”；look forward to，“盼望”；bring about，“导致，造成”；get away with，“做坏事而免受惩罚”。由句意可知D项正确。20.I dont think that your lecture_the
38、audience，for they appeared quite puzzled.Agot across to Bgot close toCgot away with Dgot along with解析：选A。句意：我认为观众不会理解你的演讲，因为他们看上去有些迷惑不解。get across to，“使被理解；传达”；get close to，“靠近，临近”；get away with，“做坏事而免受惩罚”；get along with，“与相处”。由句意可知A项正确。10.in trouble有麻烦，处于困难中(回归课本P3)A friendship in trouble.处于困境中的友谊。
39、归纳拓展例句探源Do you easily lose heart when you are in trouble?身处困境时，你会很容易灰心丧气吗？He took the trouble to gather the materials for us.他不辞辛苦地为我们收集材料。(朗文P2209)I just told him the truthI didnt mean to get you into trouble.我只是把实情给他讲了我不是故意要给你惹麻烦的。21完成句子(1)没有一件事要比帮助陷入困境的人带给他更大的快乐。Nothing gives him more pleasure th
40、an helping someone_ _.答案：in trouble(2)你不必麻烦去做那些复杂的实验。You neednt_ _ _ _those complicated experiments.答案：take the trouble to do(3)孩子们在深雪中行走有点困难。The children_ _ _in the deep snow.答案：had trouble walking11.keep ones word信守诺言(回归课本P2)I was so angry that I went straight to Hannah and told her we werent goin
41、g to be friends any more because she couldnt keep her word.我非常生气，于是径直走到汉娜跟前告诉她我们将不再是朋友因为她不守诺言。归纳拓展break ones word食言，失信，不守诺言word by word一字不差地，逐字地eat ones words收回前言，道歉认错；食言have a word with sb.与某人谈话have words with sb.与某人发生口角get in a word插话in other wordsthat is(to say)换句话说，也就是说in a/one wordin short/to b
42、e short简言之；总之word came that.有消息传来说【注意】word“诺言，保证”，多用作单数，其前往往有形容词性物主代词或名词所有格修饰；word“消息，信息”，用作不可数名词，其前不加冠词。例句探源Busy as he was，he kept his word.虽然很忙，他还是信守了诺言。In a word，good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.总之，认真倾听确实能使我们拉近彼此的距离。In other words，there are not many people in the wo
43、rld like me.换句话说，世界上像我这样的人并不多见。He told me all you said，word for word.他把你的话逐字逐句地告诉了我。I was very angry and had words with him over money.我很生气，和他就钱的事吵了起来。Where is Peter？I want to have a word with him.彼得在哪里？我想跟他说句话。 22完成句子(1)小心点，杰克经常不履行他的诺言。Be careful.Jack often_ _ _.答案：breaks his word(2)你可以相信我，我会信守诺言的。
44、You can trust me to_ _ _.答案：keep my word(3)你去开会之前，我们能说句话吗？Could we_ _ _ _ _ _before you go to the meeting?答案：have a word with each other(4)总而言之，我不信任他。_ _/_ _，I dont trust him.答案：In a/one word(5)家里传来消息要我回去。_ _ _I was wanted at home.答案：Word came that23.Mr.Jackson often depends on others._，he doesnt do
45、 things by himself.AIn a wordBIn one wordCIn other words DIn no word解析：选C。句意：杰克逊先生经常依靠别人，换句话说，他不自己做事情。in other words“换句话说”；in a/one word“总之，一句话”。12.discourage sb.from doing sth.阻止某人做某事(回归课本P11)Mum discourages me from chatting online.妈妈不让我上网聊天。归纳拓展同义短语还有以下几种表达方式：prevent sb. from doing sth.stop sb. fr
46、om doing sth.ban sb. from doing sth.keep sb. from doing sth.prohibit sb. from doing sth.例句探源(朗文P574)Schools discourage youngsters from being involved in gangs.学校劝阻青少年不要加入帮派。(剑桥P2215)Theyve put barriers up to stop people (from)getting through.他们筑起了街垒，阻止人们通行。Motor vehicles are prohibited from driving
47、in the town centre.机动车辆禁止在市中心行驶。24完成句子(1)艰难的形势并没有阻挡她追求她的梦想。The severe situation did not_ _ _ _her dream.答案：discourage her from following(2)你不能阻止我吃我想吃的东西。You cant_ _ _ _whatever I want.答案：prevent me from eating(3)她已经被禁止开车达六个月之久。She_ _ _ _ _for six months.答案：has been banned from driving25. (2011年华师附中检
48、测题) His parents made every effort to_him from going abroad，for they thought it unnecessary.AencourageBdiscourageCenforce Ddisagree解析：选B。句意：“他父母尽力阻止他出国，因为他们认为没必要”，discourage sb.from doing sth.“阻止某人做某事”。句型解析1【教材原句】I was so upset that I felt like crying.(P2)我当时觉得太难过了，甚至都想哭出来了。【句法分析】so.that.如此以至于He ran
49、so fast that I couldnt catch up with him.他跑得那么快，我没赶上他。I was so busy here (that) I had no time to write a letter.我在这里很忙，没时间写信。归纳拓展(1)so.that.“如此以至于”，可引导表示结果的状语从句。(2)so that引导目的状语从句，其从句中的谓语动词通常和can，may，should等情态动词连用，而且主句和从句之间不使用逗号，意为“以便，为了，使能够”。(3)so that句型也可以用来引导结果状语从句，意为“因此，结果”，这时其从句中的谓语动词不与情态动词连用。这
50、种结构和so.that.引导的结果在含义上有很大的区别。so that句型所表示的结果往往同主句有因果关系，而so.that.句型所表示的结果往往表明so后面形容词或副词的程度。The workers did so well that he was pleased with them.工人们干得很好，他对他们很满意。They got up early so that they could catch the early bus.为了能赶上早班车，他们早早就起床了。26完成句子(1)他没有把时间计划好，结果没有按时完成这项工作。He didnt plan his time well，_ _he
51、didnt finish his work on time.答案：so that(2)天气热得我不能入睡。Its so hot_I cant sleep.答案：that27.(2010年海淀质检)Keep ourselves and our hearts open_we can experience the great joy that friendship can bring.Aso thatBeven ifCas if Dever since解析：选A。句意：敞开心扉，我们就能体验到友谊给我们带来的快乐。so that在此处表结果，引导结果状语从句。2【教材原句】Football is v
52、ery important to me，but so is our friendship.(P3)足球对我很重要，但我们的友谊也同样重要。【句法分析】sobe动词/助动词/情态动词主语，此句型用法只限于肯定句中，表示“某人或某物情况也是这样”。so意为“也”。He was very excited，so was everyone present at the party.他非常兴奋，出席晚会的每个人都很兴奋。If she goes there，so shall I.如果她去那儿，我也去。(1)neither/norbe动词/助动词/情态动词主语，表示前面的否定情况也适用于后者。(2)It is
53、 the same with名词/代词宾格或So it is with名词/代词宾格，表示前者的混合情况(句中既有肯定又有否定或两个谓语无统一的助动词)适用于后者。意为“也”。(3)so主语be动词/助动词/情态动词，表示对前面或对方所说情况的赞同或证实，主语指的是同一个人或物，语气较强，意为“的确如此”。28完成句子(1)我从未去过南京。I have never been to Nanjing.汤姆也没去过。_/_ _Tom.答案：Neither/Nor has(2)玛丽喜欢弹钢琴，但是她弹不好。Mary likes playing the piano，but she cant play i
54、t well.她的哥哥也是这样。So_ _ _ _ _._ _ the same _ _ _.答案：it is with her brother；It is，with her brother(3)玛丽最终考试及格了。Mary has finally passed the exam.的确如此。_ _ _.答案：So she has29My cousin is very clever but he doesnt work hard at his lessons._.ASo is my little brotherBNeither does my little brotherCSo it is wi
55、th my little brotherDNeither is my little brother解析：选C。当表示一个人的多种情况与另一个人一样时，需用so it is/was with sb.或it is/was the same with sb.。作文指导记叙文(例：记人)【体裁导航】在高考写作中，要求直接对人物描述的文章不是很多，但写人的记叙文却是同学们必须掌握的。普通高中英语课程标准(实验)对记叙文的写作作了明确要求，所以，记叙文的写作，应引起同学们的重视。记叙文的写作，一般应考虑六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。遇到以图表的形式提供的材料时，注意要点应齐全。写记叙
56、文时，由于多是叙述过去发生的动作，所以，叙述中常用过去时态，当然有时也会出现一般现在时或其他时态，尤其是在直接引语里。写人、记事、描述地点或刻画场景，最常用的文体可能就是记叙文了。因而，平时遇到一些好句子，就应当多记。例如：Joan is a pretty gentle lady in her early twenties.My sister is a boyish girl.She has short and straight hair like a boys.He is a handsome young man with bright eyes and broad shoulders.以上
57、例句都是用于描述人的好句子，应首先学会灵活套用。长此以往，潜移默化，同学们的表达自会在不知不觉中达到“即便信手拈来，却也恰到好处”的境界。写人的记叙文当然离不开记事，但两者的侧重点有所不同。记人者，以人为主导，所写的事都是为衬托人物服务的，所以，记述时，外貌的描写、性格的刻画等等，都要服务于人物，不可喧宾夺主、本末倒置。【写作示例】请根据下面所提供的资料，写一篇介绍潘玮柏(Will Pan)的英语短文。潘玮柏，当今著名歌手，英俊潇洒，身高1.74米，1980年8月6日在上海出生。会汉语和英语两种语言。他喜欢篮球，最喜欢的音乐是Hip Hop、R&B和华语流行音乐(Chinese Pop Mus
58、ic)。他为人随和、活泼好动、笑容灿烂。他的愿望就是能够成为“super idol”(超级偶像)。注意：1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2词数：120左右。【写作要领】一审题要点1体裁：记叙文；2时态：一般现在时；3人称：第三人称。二内容要点1潘玮柏的概况描述；2他的业余爱好及性情；3他的愿望。【金点模板】一、开头参考句式：1Will Pan, who was born on.，is a.2Will Pan, one of the.，was born.3Born on.，Will Pan is a.4Will Pan was born.and he is one of the.二、
59、主体参考句式：1He can speak.as well as.2He can not only.but also.3He likes.most and dislikes.4He is fond of.and.5Everyone likes him very much.6He is very popular among young men.为使各项内容衔接自然，可以适当添加过渡词。如：as well as；not only.but also. ；though；although. ；however；but.三、结尾参考句式：1Wish he will succeed!2Wish his drea
60、m come true!3Good luck to him!4Wish him a fantastic future!【范文点评】Will PanWill Pan, one of the most famous pop stars now in China, was born on August 6, 1980 in Shanghai.He is about 1.74 meters tall and is a handsome young man.Will Pan can speak English as well as Chinese.His most favorite songs are
61、Hip Hop, R & B, and the Chinese Pop Music and he himself sings many good songs of this kind.During his free time, he is fond of taking part in sports, and his favorite sport is basketball. Though he is famous, he is easy to get along with.He is lovely and actively.He always wears a big smile on his
62、face, so more and more young men and women become his fans.Pan has many wishes. To become a super idol becomes the biggest one of them.Wish his dream come true!点评：one of the most.作Will Pan的同位语使句子灵活。as well as用得好，也可用not only.but also.。转折词使用得当。wear a big smile表示带着微笑，使句子增色很多。用动词不定式作主语避免了文章句式的单调。加上祝愿语使得
63、文章活泼生动。【类题尝试】请用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍一下该人物，要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且须包括以下三部分内容：1对该人物的简单介绍；2喜欢该人物的理由；3从该人物身上得到的启示。琰茞Thomas Edisoninventor；creative；diligent；full of wisdom“Genius is one percentinspiration and ninetyninepercent perspiration.”_One possible version：Thomas EdisonBorn in America, Thomas Edison was a grea
64、t scientist and inventor.He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating.In fact, he was a man full of imagination.I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world.He had more than 1,000 inventions.In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which
65、 helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.What impresses me most is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninetynine percent perspiration.” Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner.From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.高考资源网独家精品资源，欢迎下载！高考资源网Ks5uK&S%5#U
