1、2015-2016学年度第一学期武山一中高一第一次月考卷英语试卷命题人：王映平第I卷（选择题） 一、阅读理解（30分）第一节： 阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项。（共15小题；每小题2分，共30分） A Eddie liked music very much when he was at school, but when he went to the university he decided to study medicine instead of music. When he passed his examinations and bec
2、ame a doctor, he had to work in a hospital for some time. There he discovered that a lot of patients were happier and caused less trouble if pleasant music was played to them When Eddie got an office and began to work for himself, he decided to keep his patients happy by having a tape recorder in hi
3、s waiting-room play beautiful music for them.But soon after the tape recorder had been put in, Eddies nurse heard a woman, who was sitting in the crowded waiting-room one morning, complained, “Here were all waiting to see the doctor, and hes just playing the violin in his office instead of doing his
4、 work.”1Eddie became a student of medicine at university_. Abecause he had lost interest in musicBbecause he thought medicine was more important than musicCto find out new use of music in hospitalDfor reasons unknown from this passage2Why did Eddie put a tape recorder in his office? AHe wanted to he
5、lp patients waiting to see him pass the time easily.BHe discovered that music was of help to his patientsCHe enjoyed listening to music while he workedDHe wanted to attract more patients to his office3From the passage we can see that_. Athe woman thought Eddie was an unusual doctorBthe woman didnt u
6、nderstand musicCthe woman did not understand what Eddie meantDthe woman hated to be kept waitingBTwo men were sitting together in a plane. They were on a long journey. One of the men was a businessman. The other was a farmer. They sat without talking for a while, then the farmer said, “Lets do somet
7、hing to pass the time.”“What do you want to do?” the businessman asked. “We can ask each other riddles.” The farmer said, “You start.” “Lets make the rules first,” the businessman said. “Thats not fair. You are a businessman with much knowledge. You know more things than I do. I am just a farmer.”“T
8、hats true.” The businessman said. “What do you want we should do?” “If you dont know the answer to a riddle, you pay me $100. And if I dont know the answer, Ill pay you $50.” The farmer said. The businessman thought about this, then he said, “OK. Thats fair. Who will go first?”“I will,” The farmer s
9、aid. “Here is my riddle. What has three legs when it walks, but only two legs when it flies?” The business man repeated the riddle, “What has three legs when it walks, but only two legs when it flies? Mm, thats a good one. Im afraid I dont know the answer.” He gave the farmer $100, then said, “Tell
10、me the answer. What has three legs when it walks, but only two legs when it flies?” “I dont know.” The farmer said and gave him $50.4The story happened _. Aon a farmBin a shopCbefore a long plane journeyDbetween two passengers5What does the word “riddle” mean in this story? AA difficult question to
11、find the answer to.BSomething to help to make rules.CSomething to win money.Da kind of game in doing business.6Why did the businessman agree to give more money if he lost? AHe made much more money than the farmer.BHe thought he knew more than the farmer.CHe was interested in making riddles.DHe was b
12、etter at playing riddle games.7The farmer _. Aenjoyed himself on his long journey.Bdidnt want to pay even one dollarCspent all his money on the plane ticket.Dwon fifty dollars by playing the riddle gameC Doing homework not only can help children master the knowledge they have learned, but also can t
13、rain their abilities of finishing the work alone, planning the time and doing the duties. But some children dont like to complete the work. Why? There are some reasons.Some children feel it is very difficult to do their homework, because they cant understand their teacher clearly, and cant follow th
14、eir teachers teaching process. Maybe there is something wrong with their intelligence.But some childrens intelligence is normal. They are even cleverer, but they dont listen to the teacher carefully. It is hard for them to sit well and pay attention to anything. It needs to carry on the attention ce
15、ntralized（集中注意力） training to help the children.Some children love their teacher and then they like the subject. Their interest depends on the teacher who teaches them. So every teacher should be helpful and kind. It can make children love you and the subject you teach. So they can do their homework
16、happily.8Doing homework can help children _. Amaster the knowledgeBtrain their abilitiesClean new lessonsDBoth A and B9Some children find the homework difficult. Which reason is NOT right? AThey cant understand their teacher clearly.BThey cant follow their teachers teaching process.CThe intelligence
17、 of all the students isnt normal.DThey dont listen to the teacher carefully.10Whats the Chinese meaning of the underlined word “intelligence”? A作业B智商C思想D方式11According to the last paragraph, the writer thinks _ is very important. Aa teacherBa subjectCattentionDhomeworkDThe first day of school, our pr
18、ofessor introduced an old lady Rose to us.“Why are you in college at such an age?” I asked her. She replied, “I always dreamed of having a college education and now Im getting one!” We became friends quickly.At the end of the term I invited Rose to make a speech to our football team. Ill never forge
19、t what she taught us. She said, “There are some secrets of staying young and being happy. You have to laugh and find humor every day. You must have a dream. When you lose your dreams, you will die. There is a huge difference between growing old and growing up. Anybody can grow older. That doesnt nee
20、d any talent or ability. To grow up, you must always find the opportunity in change. Have no regrets. The people who are afraid of death are those with regrets.”At the end of the year, Rose finished her college. One week after graduation, Rose died peacefully in her sleep. We would always remember t
21、he great woman.根据短文内容，选择正确答案。（每题1分，计5分）12From the passage, we can learn that Rose _. Awent to college at an old ageBbecame a professor laterConce worked in a hospitalDdied before college graduation13At the end of the term the writer invited Rose to _. Ago to a partyBplay footballCmake a speechDwrite
22、 a book14The underlined word “talent” in the third paragraph means “_” in Chinese. A训练B方法C途径D才能15What is the best title of the passage? ALaughing every dayBNever too old to learnCGrowing old and growing upDHow to stay young and being happy第二节：根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填人空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。（共5小题；每小题2分，共10分
23、）When I was 16 years old, a boy gave me an important gift. 16 .It was the early autumn of my first year at a junior high school, and my old school was far away. 17 . I was very lonely, and afraid to make friends with anyone.Every time I listened to other students talking and laughing, I felt my hear
24、t break. I couldnt talk about anyone with my problems. And I didnt want my parents to worry about me.Then one day, my classmates talked happily with their friends, but I sat at my desk unhappily as usual. 18 I didnt know who he was. He passed me and then turned back. He looked at me, with a smile on
25、 his face.Suddenly, I felt the touch of something bright and friendly. It made me feel happy, lively and warm 19 I started to talk with other students and made friends. Day by day, I became closer to everyone in my class. The boy with the lucky smile has become my best friend now! 20 I believe that
26、the world is what you think it is. If you think it lonely, you might always be alone. So smile at the world and it will smile back.A. At that moment, a boy entered the classroom.B. Hes living in Australia now and he loves it.C. It doesnt matter because all the dark days have gone.D. It was a smile.E
27、. That smile changed my life.F. Its practically impossible to make friends here.G. As a result, no one knew who I was.二、完形填空（30分）Four brothers left home for college, and they became successful doctors and lawyers.Some years later, they got together again. While having dinner, they 21for a long time.
28、 They discussed the22they had given their elderly mother who lived far away in another city. The first said, “I had a23house built for Mama.” The second said, “I had my Mercedes-Benz dealer（奔驰经销商）send a24to her.” The third said, “I built a beautiful 25for Mama.” The fourth said, “You know 26Mama lov
29、ed reading poems and you know she cant read any more because she cant27very well. I met a businessman who had a parrot that can recite many28. It took him 12 years to29it to speak and he earns his living by renting it out. I had to pay him $100,000 a year for twenty years,30it is worth it.” On heari
30、ng that, the other brothers were31by his good thought. After the holidays their mother32her thank-you notes, which read, “Milton, the house you built is so huge. I only live in one room, but I have to clean the whole house. Its a （an） 33job. Thanks anyway.” “Marvin, I am too old to34. I stay home an
31、d have others work for me, so Ill35use the car. The36was good, although not realistic. Thanks.”“Michael, you gave me an expensive building for many people to37plays or watch movies in it, but all my friends are dead. Ive almost38my hearing and Im nearly blind. I wont use it. Thank you all the same.”
32、“Dearest Melvin, you are the39son to have the good sense to give a little thought to your gift. The chicken tasted so 40. I liked it very much. Thank you.”21AfoughtBtalkedCstudiedDslept22AgiftsBchancesCwishesDchallenges23AwarmBbigCsafeDlonely24AbookBbikeCcarDbag25AstationBmuseumClibraryDtheater26Awh
33、atBhowCwhyDwhen27AlistenBfeelCseeDwalk28AstoriesBwordsCpoemsDlyrics29AprotectBbeatCraiseDtrain30AbutBsoCunlessDalthough31AshockedBimpressedCfrightenedDembarrassed32Asent outBput upCtook outDpicked up33AenjoyableBdelightfulCtiringDamusing34AlearnBworkCexerciseDdrive35AneverBoftenCregularlyDsometimes3
34、6AfutureBhobbyCideaDprogram37AcreateBenjoyCbringDrecord38AlostBadmiredCremainedDdiscovered39AsameBlastCnextDonly40AstrangeBunpleasantCterribleDdelicious三、语法填空：(共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分)阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。I am taught by many teachers in my school. Every subject has a _41_(differ)teacher, b
35、ut I like my math teacher 42 (well).Her name is Lakshmi but we usually call her Maam. She is our class teacher too.Maam 43(join) us last term. She is very kind and her 44of teaching is so interesting and simple that we all can understand what is being taught and how it could be done. Most 45(importa
36、nt), Maam teachers math with lots of patience. 46we do not understand a problem, she will spend extra time 47(guide) us until we understand it. And we can go to her at any time during school hours for help.She also helps us with activities at school. When there is some kind of programs, she will be
37、there 48(help) us to get ready for the show. Even when we go on picnics, she takes good care of 49.To me, Maam is not only 50good teacher, but also our best friend. I love Maam and I wish her a happy life.四、短文改错（10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处
38、加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both work in same officeThey often walk together to and from workOnce they were walking to home together while it suddenly started to rainTom quickly op
39、ened his umbrella and said proud，“My wife really has great foresight（先见之明）She said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my umbrella”Dick smiled and walked up to her under the protection of the umbrella，said，“Mine has even great foresightShe didnt let me carry one as she knew youd share yo
40、urs to me.五、书面表达（25分假定你是Amy，收到网友李华的电子邮件，说他上高中后，发现英语难学，现在正因成绩难以提高而犯难。为此，请你给他写一封回信。要点如下：1.要相信自己，不要放弃。信心是成功的关键和前提；2.制定一个英语学习计划，如：早读、记日记和复习语法等；3.找一份与教材同步的英语报纸, 可以从中学会许多知识。词数120150词。信心confidence；关键因素 elementDear Li Hua,_Yours truly,Amy参考答案一、阅读理解：A试题分析:本文讲诉的是本来热爱音乐的埃迪在大学里不知什么原因学了医学，后来当了医生。他发现医院里的病人听了美丽的音乐
41、后对他们的病有好处，所以他每天都在办公室里放悦耳的音乐。1D细节推理题。根据第一段：but when he went to the university he decided to study medicine instead of music. When he passed his examinations and became a doctor, he had to work in a hospital for some time.(.但是当他去大学的之后他决定去学医学而不是音乐。当他通过考试成为了一名医生后，在一家医院工作了一段时间)可知文章并没有讲到埃迪为什么会放弃他喜爱的音乐去学医学
42、。故选D.2B细节理解题。根据第一段：There he discovered that a lot of patients were happier and caused less trouble if pleasant music was played to them.可知埃迪发现放音乐对病人的病有帮助，故选B.3C细节理解题。当埃迪知道放音乐对医院病人的病有帮助后，他于是在他的候诊室里放起了音乐当他办公的时候。根据最后一段中女人的抱怨：“Here were all waiting to see the doctor, and hes just playing the violin in h
43、is office instead of doing his work.”（我们都在这里等着看医生，他却在候诊室里弹起了钢琴而不是工作）可知她并不知道埃迪医生的做法有何用意。故选C考点：考查记叙文阅读B.试题分析：本文讲述了一个发生在飞机上的小故事，农民用自己的机智赚取了这位老师很多钱。告诉了我们受过教育与的人也不是什么都知道的道理4D考查细节理解题。根据第一段提到Two men were sitting together in a plane. They were on a long journey. One of the men was a businessman. The other w
44、as a farmer.两个人坐在飞机上，进行一次长时间的旅行，一个是商人，一个是农民，故选D项。5A 考查推理判断题。根据第二段提到 “What do you want to do?” the businessman asked. “We can ask each other riddles.” The farmer said, “You start.”商人问，你想做什么，我们问彼此一个问题，农民说，开始吧，故选A项。6B 考查细节理解题。根据第二段提到Thats not fair. You are a businessman with much knowledge. You know mo
45、re things than I do. I am just a farmer这不公正，你是个知识丰富的商人，你知道的事情比我多，我只是个农民，故选B项。7D 考查细节理解题。根据最后一段提到He gave the farmer $100, then said, “Tell me the answer. What has three legs when it walks, but only two legs when it flies?” “I dont know.” The farmer said and gave him $50.可知给了农民100美元后来农民不知道又给了商人50美元，故可
46、知选D项。考点：故事类阅读C. 试题分析：这篇短文主要介绍了学生不喜欢写作业的原因，一方面是学生听不懂老师讲的内容，另一方面是学生注意力不集中，再就是是否学生喜欢这个老师。8D考查细节理解题。根据短文第一段Doing homework not only can help children master the knowledge they have learned, but also can train their abilities of finishing the work alone, planning the time and doing the duties.，可知做作业不仅可以掌握
47、知识而且可以训练他们独立完成作业，计划时间，尽责任的能力，故选D9C考查细节理解题。根据第三段But some childrens intelligence is normal.可知许多孩子的智力是正常的，故C错误。10B考查推理判断题。根据上文可知句意：也许他们的智商有问题，故选B11A考查归纳理解题。根据最后一段可知作者认为老师在学生乐于学习方面很重要，故选A考点：教育类短文阅读。D.【解析】试题分析：本文讲述了一个老太太为了实现自己的梦想，很大年纪上了大学。她在给足球队做演讲时说，人保持年轻和快乐的秘密就是要寻找幽默，要大笑，并且要有梦想。失去梦想，人也会死去。在她完成大学学业后一星期，
48、她在睡梦中安静的去世了。12A考查细节理解。根据The first day of school, our professor introduced an old lady Rose to us.可知Rose去上大学时是一个老太太，故选A。13C考查细节理解。根据At the end of the term I invited Rose to make a speech to our football team. 可知在学期末，作者邀请Rose给足球队做演讲。故选C。14D词义猜测题。根据与名词ability“能力”相并列，意思相近，故为才能的意思。故选D。15B考查文章标题。文中围绕着一个老太
49、太为了实现自己的梦想，上大学学习，这展示了活到老，学到老的精神。故选B。考点：考查故事类短文阅读第二节：七选五【解析】试题分析：一个善意的微笑改变了一个人的生活。对世界微笑，世界就会对你微笑。16D根据下文内容He looked at me, with a smile on his face.他脸上带着笑容，看着我。文章最后一句So smile at the world and it will smile back对世界微笑，世界就会对你微笑。综观全文内容可知“我十六岁的时候，一个男孩给了我一个重要的微笑”。所以下一句应是“它是一个微笑”。故选D。17G上一句提到：我原来的学校很远。下句：我很
50、孤单，害怕与任何人交朋友。可知我不敢和别人交朋友，说明没有人认识我。故此空选G。18A根据下文的I didnt know who he was可知有一个男孩进入了教室。故选A。19E根据上文的It made me feel happy，lively and warm空格下一句说的是：我开始和其他学生谈话、交朋友。所以此处表达的应该是“微笑改变了我的生活”。可知E正确。20C根据上句：带着幸运微笑的男孩已经变成了我最好的朋友。下句是：我相信这个世界是你认为它是什么。根据上下文可知作者认为一切的黑暗都过去了。所以选C。考点：考查人生百味阅读。二，完型填空【解析】试题分析：本文主要讲述了四个儿子为老
51、母亲准备礼物的故事。他们每个人都花费心思和金钱给妈妈买最好的礼物，特别是其中一个儿子给母亲买了个鹦鹉为母亲读诗。可是孩子们的礼物母亲并不是很满意，最满意的是那只鹦鹉，只是妈妈把它给吃了，觉得很鲜美。21B 考查动词。Afought 打架；Btalked 谈话；Cstudied 学习。Dslept 睡觉。根据下文的They discussed可知，四个儿子在一起讨论。故选择B。22A 考查名词。Agifts礼物；Bchances机会；Cwishes 愿望；Dchallenges 挑战。根据最后一段的Dearest Melvin, you are the son to have the good
52、sense to give a little thought to your gift.可知，四个儿子在讨论送给妈妈的礼物。故选择A。23B 考查形容词。Awarm 温暖的；Bbig 大的；Csafe 安全的；Dlonely 孤独的。根据下文的Milton, the house you built is so huge.可知，Milton建了一所大房子送给母亲，故选择B。24C 考查名词。Abook 书本；Bbike 自行车；Ccar 汽车；Dbag包。根据上文的I had my Mercedes-Benz dealer（奔驰经销商）可知送的是一辆车，故选择C。25D 考查名词。Astatio
53、n 车站；Bmuseum 博物馆；Clibrary 图书馆；Dtheater 剧院。根据下文的plays or watch movies in it,可知，这个儿子建了一个剧院给母亲。故选择D。26B 考查疑问词。Awhat 什么；Bhow 如何、怎么；Cwhy 为什么；Dwhen 什么时候。根据句意选择B，意为：你们都知道母亲是多么喜欢读诗。27C 考查动词。Alisten听；Bfeel 感觉；Csee 看见；Dwalk 走路。根据上文的you know she cant read any more可知，她现在不能读诗了，故选择C，是因为母亲看得不清楚。28C 考查名词。Astories 故
54、事；Bwords 词汇；Cpoems 诗歌；Dlyrics 歌词。根据上文可知，母亲喜欢读诗，但现在眼睛不好读不了诗，故这个儿子买的鹦鹉应该是能背诗歌才能符合母亲的心愿，所以选择C。29D 考查动词。Aprotect 保护；Bbeat 击败、敲打；Craise 提高；Dtrain 训练、培训。根据常识，鹦鹉能背诗肯定是被训练过了，故选择D。30A 考查连词。Abut 但是；Bso 因此；Cunless 除非；Dalthough 虽然。前一分句意为：我每年要付10万美元；后一分句意为：值得了。两个分句之间存在转折关系，故选择A。31B 考查形容词。Ashocked 感到震惊；Bimpressed
55、 印象深刻的；Cfrightened 害怕的；Dembarrassed 尴尬的。根据下文的his good thought说明其他三个人都觉得这个想法不错。故选择B，指其他的兄弟对他的好主意印象深刻。32A 考查词组。Asent out 发出；Bput up 张贴；Ctook out 拿出了；Dpicked up 捡起、收听、学到等意思。根据下文的her thank-you notes，可知选择A，指母亲发出了感谢信。33C 考查形容词。Aenjoyable 愉快的、快乐的；Bdelightful 令人非常高兴的；Ctiring 累人的；Damusing 有趣的、好玩的。根据上文的but I
56、have to clean the whole house可知选择C，表示一个人打扫整个房子很累人。34D 考查动词。Alearn 学习；Bwork 工作；Cexercise 练习、运动；Ddrive 驾驶、驾车。根据下文的so Ill use the car可知，此处选择D，表示：我年纪太大不能开车。35A 考查副词。Anever永不、绝不；Boften 总是；Cregularly 有规律地；Dsometimes 有时。根据上文的I stay home and have others work for me可知这位母亲不需要用车，故选择A，36C 考查名词。Afuture 未来；Bhobby
57、 爱好；Cidea 想法；Dprogram 项目。根据上文可知，这是儿子送给母亲的礼物，母亲不觉得实用。所以她认为想法不错，但是不现实。故选择C。37B 考查动词。Acreate 创造；Benjoy 欣赏；Cbring 带来；Drecord 记录。根据下文的watch movies可知选择B，指欣赏戏剧或看电影。38A 考查动词。Alost 失去；Badmired 钦佩；Cremained 保持；Ddiscovered 发现。根据下文的Im nearly blind可知，母亲几乎失去听力，故选择A。39D 考查形容词。Asame 相同的；Blast 最后的；Cnext 下一个的；Donly 唯
58、一的。根据下文的I liked it very much.可知，母亲很喜欢这份礼物，相对于对其他儿子礼物的不喜欢，她认为这是唯一一位愿意动心思的儿子。故选择D。40D 考查形容词。Astrange 奇怪；Bunpleasant 不愉悦的；Cterrible 糟糕的；Ddelicious 美味的。根据上文的动词taste以及下文的I like it very much可知，选择D，意为：小鸟尝起来很美味。三，语法填空【解析】试题分析：本文考查句子分析及上下文综合理解。41考查词形转换。differ 是动词，意为不同于，而此处要修饰名词应用形容词，本句意为每一科目都有一个不同的老师，故填diffe
59、rent42考查词形转换。 well是形容词，意为好的，根据句子but I like my math teacher 应是我最喜欢我的数学老师，应用形容词的最高级，故填best43考查时态。根据句子Maam (join) us last term 此处描述的是过去的事应用过去时，故填joined44考查细节理解。根据句子She is very kind and her of teaching is so interesting 可知应是她的教学方法很有趣，故填way45考查词形转换。此处要单独成句，应用important的副词形式，另most important通常不单独使用，后多接名词，故填
60、importantly46考查连词搭配。根据句子 we do not understand a problem .本句是一个状语从句，另根据句子，是当/如果我们不懂一个问题时，她会.用时间状语从句或是条件状语从句搭配句意更合适，故填If/When47考查固定搭配。spend time doing sth.意为花费时间干某事，本句意为她会花费额外的时间引导我们，故填guiding48考查动词不定式作状语。根据句子she will be there (help) us to get ready for the show.空格前半部分为一个完整的句子，可知后半句需采用动词不定式作目的状语的形式，本句
61、意为她会在那儿帮助我们为表演做好准备，故填to help49考查代词。根据句子Even when we go on picnics, she takes good care of .介词后要用代词的宾格形式，她对我们是倍加照顾，故填us50考查数量词搭配。根据句子To me, Maam is not only good teacher 修饰可数名词teacher ，要表示一位老师，应用a，故填a考点：考查连词搭配、固定短语、时态等四，短文改错【解析】试题分析：考查介词名词等的用法。【小题1】neighborneighbors考查名词。neighbor是可数名词，所以用neighbors。【小题
62、2】same前面加the考查冠词。in the same固定搭配，所以加the。【小题3】去掉to考查介词。home前不加介词，所以去掉to。【小题4】whilewhen考查副词。两个时间点是并列的，没有具体意义，所以用when。【小题5】proudproudly考查副词。修饰动词，用副词，所以用proudly。【小题6】telltold考查过去时。文章一直是过去时，所以用told。【小题7】herhim考查代词。由前文的his可知用him。【小题8】saidsaying考查进行时。此处是过去进行时，所以用saying。【小题9】greatgreater考查比较级。even修饰比较级，所以改为
63、greater。【小题10】towith考查介词。share with是固定搭配，所以用with。考点：考查短文改错五，书面表达Dear Li Hua,Im glad to have received your letter but Im sorry to hear that you are having some difficulties with your English study. The following is my advice for you and I wish it will be of some help.First, believe yourself. Confiden
64、ce is the most important element of success. As long as you have it, nothing is impossible.Second, make a plan for your English study. For example , keep on reading English aloud in the morning, keep a diary in English everyday and go over the grammar points in the evening.Third, get an English news
65、paper to go with the textbook and you will learn a lot from it.I hope you make great progress in your English study!Yours truly,Amy【解析】 试题分析：题目要求给网友李华写一封回信，就如何学习高中英语，给李华提一些建议。写作要点包括：要相信自己；制定英语学习计划；使用英语报纸等三个方面。词数在120-150词之间，注意使用参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的
66、连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。语法方面：宾语从句that you are having some difficulties with your English study，you make great progress in your English study；条件句As long as you have it, nothing is impossible.等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；篇章结构方面：范文注意使用but, first, second, for example, third等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be glad to do, have difficulties with sth, be of help, keep on, go over, learn a lot from, make progress in等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。考点：材料类作文
