2012高考英语考点突破阶段写作方略UNIT1~2《人教大纲版必修5》.ppt

1、佳作赏析图画作文图片类(2010上海高考)下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景比较你同时期的上课情况简单谈谈你的感受上一页_1话题特点：这是一篇图画类作文中的图片作文，也属于话题类作文，材料直观、形象、生动，学生写作时具有很大的自由发挥空间。这就要求学生对图片内容要有充分的认识，认真观察图片，了解图片所表达的内容或内涵，甚至要考虑图片表达的是何时、何地、什么人、什么事、过程和结果等。上一页2写好这类作文要注意：(1)看懂图片内容活跃的课堂一角，天真活泼的孩子们的表现。(2)人称和时态：人称用第一、三人称。对图片的描述

2、用一般过去时；谈自己的感受用一般将来时。(3)连词、过渡段，在文章中起着“润滑”作用，串点成文、整体划一；关键词也必不可少。上一页3常用的句法表达：(1)描述图片内容可用：As we all can see，.The picture shows us that.From the picture,it can be easily seen that.(2)回顾童年和作对比的时候可用：It reminds me of.when.Compared with these childrens active attitude,I think back to my time when.When it com

3、es to the topic of this picture,I look back on.上一页(3)谈自己的感受时可用：As time goes by.,I realized that.I am shocked to find the difference between.The difference between.gives me some experience.上一页 As we all can see,the lovely students in the picture are so active that they all put their hands high,hoping

4、 to express their own opinions.It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and everyone enjoys it.Thats great,isnt it?The picture also reminds me of the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public.Just like me,during my class,our classmates just listened to class,and everyon

5、e was afraid of asking questions!I even prayed that my name would come to my teachers mind.But as time goes by,I grow up,so does my mind.I realized hat the situation shown in the picture was far better.Children are all curious about everything,and knowledge will only be acquired by an acquiring mind

6、.Those who dare not speak out will never know anything new.The childhood without asking is not a real childhood.We should also keep the curiosity now and forever.That will benefit you in the rest of you life.上一页这篇文章文笔自然流畅，时态运用正确无误，其中复合句和高级词汇的使用较多。文章主题鲜明，在写作过程中始终围绕主题图片中孩子的表现和自己小学生时代的表现的差异，以及对这种差异的感受。

7、(1)短语类：express ones opinion,remind sb.of,in public,too.to.,come to ones mind,go by,grow up,far better,be curious about,speak out,in the rest of 上一页(2)句子类：定语从句：As we all can see,.the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public.Those who dare not speak out will never know anythi

8、ng new.宾语从句：I even prayed that my name would come to my teachers mind.I realized that the situation shown in the picture was far better.上一页状语从句：.are so active that they all put their hands.as time goes by,.主语从句：It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and.其他句式：.,hoping to express their own opin

9、ions.Thats great,isnt it?I grow up,so does my mind.(3)过渡语：also,just,even,but,and 上一页习作过关(2011长沙一中月考)要求：1.请描述图画内容，写出图片的寓意并发表自己的看法。2.字数不少于120词。上一页_【参考范文】A painter wants to paint a beautiful tree,but on the dry land where he is living he cant find a tree with any leaves.Therefore,he has no choice but t

10、o add some imaginary leaves to the bare branches of the tree.That is what we can see in the picture.But what does the picture try to tell us?I guess the picture is trying to draw our attention to the worldwide problem of water shortage.In fact,in todays world,water shortage is becoming an increasingly serious problem.As members of the global village,we should do our best to keep what is described in the picture from becoming true by saving water,planting trees and doing whatever we can to protect the environment.Only in this way will we have beautiful green leaves around us forever.上一页