1、高二英语开学测汇编五 短文改错短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；3. 3.只允许修改10出，多者（从第11处起）不计分。（一）Hi, Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the probl
2、ems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a timewasting activity!
3、 In fact ,I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace【答案】1.want后加上to2.tell-told3.friend-friends4.sing-singing5.many-much6.so-but 7.How-What8.are-were9.him-them1
4、0.去掉help后面的with【解析】试题分析：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。1. 加上to 考查动词want的用法，want to do 想要做。句意为：我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。2. telltold 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意为正如我上次告诉你的那样。3. friendfriends 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成f
5、riends。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。4. singsinging 考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend（in）doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。（二）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basi
6、c step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to r
7、etire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!【答案】 1. 去掉in2. anything 改为something3. better改成best4. decide改成decided5. step 改为steps6. well改成good7. after改成when/while8. a改为the9. just后加to10. enjoy改
8、为enjoying 【解析】试题分析：文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常高兴。1句意：我的足球教练上个星期退休了。last week前面不加介词，去掉in。2.句意：我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。肯定句用something。3.句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成best。4.句意：所以我决定向她求助。这篇文章使用一般过去时，decide改成decided。5.句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。step 是可数名词，用复数steps。6.句意：我认为这些饼干很好。做表语用形容词，well改成good。7.句意：我唯
9、一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上。after改成when/while8.这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会。a改为the。9.句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干。用不定式做目的状语。just后加to。10.句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干。of后面接动名词，my coach and me是逻辑主语，enjoy改为enjoying。【难度】一般（三）Today, more and more high school students have his own blog on the Internet. For one thing, it can
10、provide colorful platform to show their talents, and for another, it is also a way to release their pressure. And this make it popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a same view, think that managing a blog will be a waste of time and energy, while this should be used f
11、or study which is their main duty. Personal speaking, I do approve of this activity. Open and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various ability such as writing, designing and so on. Only if that we have those abilities can we make a good blog. But also, we can improve ourselves during the proced
12、ure of organizing our blogs.【答案】【小题1】his 改为 their【小题2】provide 后加a【小题3】make 改为 makes 【小题4】same 改为 different【小题5】think 改为 thinking【小题6】Personal 改为 Personally 【小题7】Open 改为 Opening【小题8】ability 改为 abilities【小题9】去掉 if 后 that 【小题10】But改为 And【解析】试题分析：【小题1】现在，越来越多的高中学生有自己的博客。主语是more and more high school stud
13、ents ，形容词性物主代词应该是their。【小题2】首先，它可以提供一个丰富多彩的平台可以让学生展示他们的才能。Platform是可数名词，provide 后加a。【小题3】这使得它很受高中生的欢迎。主语是it，谓语是make 改为 makes 【小题4】根据下文的：think that managing a blog will be a waste of time and energy,可知很多老师和家长有不同的观点。 same 改为 different。【小题5】很多老师和家长有不同的观点，认为管理博客是浪费时间和精力。这里用现在分词做伴随状语。think 改为 thinking【小题
14、6】Personal 改为 Personally，Personally speaking,是固定短语“就我个人而言”。【小题7】和organizing 并列做主语的是动名词Opening。【小题8】开放组织一个吸引眼球的博客需要各种各样的能力。考查名词“能力”，various后面接名词复数：ability 改为 abilities。【小题9】只有我们具备这些能力才能管理好的博客。If引导的是条件状语从句。【小题10】我们在组织博客的过程中，还能够提高自己。这里和上文是并列关系：But改为 And【难度】一般（四）Dear John,Hows everything? We havent seen
15、 each other for long. Im very exciting to receive an e-mail from you. Im glad you have made so great progress that you can write your e-mail with good Chinese. I read your e-mail to my parent and showed them the photos youd sent to me. What time flies! Our friendship lasted for several months. We ha
16、ve got to know and learned a lot of from each other. Yes, its obviously that the life in Australia is quite different from one in China. Im looking forward to hear from you soon and I hope you will come to China in the near future.Best wishes to you!Yours,Zhang Yang【答案】【小题1】exciting-excited【小题2】so-s
17、uch【小题3】with-in【小题4】parent-patents【小题5】What-How【小题6】在lasted前加上has【小题7】去掉of【小题8】obviously-obvious【小题9】one-that【小题10】hear-hearing【解析】试题分析：这是一位中国学生写给外国笔友的信。他对外国笔友的中文水平的提高感到惊叹，同时也邀请这位朋友来中国玩。【小题1】excitingexcited 考查形容词。本句考查形容词exciting和excited之间的区别。exciting意为令人兴奋的而excited意为感到兴奋的。根据主语I可知，此处指的是我感到很兴奋。故把excit
18、ing改成excited。【小题2】sosuch 考查so和such的区别。so是修饰形容词和副词，而such修饰名词。本句是修饰progress的，故把so改成such。【小题3】within 考查介词。本句考查介词用法，用语言是介词in而非with，故把介词with改成in。【小题4】parentpatents 考查名词。父母应用复数形式parents，故改成复数形式。句意为：我把你写给我父母的email读给他们听。【小题5】WhatHow 考查感叹句。感叹句有两种形式，分别由what和how来引导。What+a+adj+n!或How+adj+a+n!/How+n+v!本句应是由how引导
19、，故把what改成how，句意为：时间飞逝！【小题6】加上has 考查时态。根据时间状语for several months可知，此句时态为现在完成时。故加上has。【小题7】去掉of 考查a lot。本句考查a lot和a lot of的区别。a lot是表示程度的短语，一般修饰动词；而a lot of是修饰名词的，表示许多。本句是修饰动词learn，故用a lot，表示学到了很多。【小题8】obviouslyobvious 考查形容词。本句为形容词作表语，故把obviously改成obvious。句意为：很明显澳大利亚的生活和中国的生活是非常不同的。【小题9】onethat 考查代词。本句
20、考查代词one和that之间的区别。one为泛指，相当于a+名词，代指上文出现的可数名词单数，而that为特指，相当于the+名词，代指上文出现的可数或不可数名词。本句代指上文出现的life，特指中国的生活，故把one改成that。【小题10】hearhearing 考查非谓语动词。本句中的look forward to的to为介词，其后的动词用ving形式，故把hear改成hearing。【难度】一般（五）例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spentweekend with you. Luckily theI was complete
21、ly free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m. amin Friday evening.OnMy old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy s
22、ee the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side
23、of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.【答案】1.side-sides2.from-to3.sit-sitting4.easy-eas
24、ily5.is-was6.them-it7. 将could not enjoy中的 not 删除8.in hurry- in a hurry9.felt-feel10.If-Although/Though【解析】试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。1. side-sides 考查名词的单复数。根据前面的three，此处应该使用复数形式2. from-to考查介词搭配 make of与make from两者都常用在被动语态中,表示“某物由构成的”. make of 的原材料是看得到的, 即平常我们说的物理现象,比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木头做成的。而make
25、from的原材料是看不到的,比如Paper is made from the trees. 纸张是由木材做成的，是一种化学变化,从纸上是看不出一棵树的。3. sit-sitting考查动名词 动词enjoy后接 ing形式。 4. easy-easily考查副词 此处的副词修饰动词see5. is-was考查动词的谓语时态 根据前后句的谓语时态都是使用过去的，所以这里面也需要用过去时态。6. them-it考查代词 此处的it指代的是学校。7. 删除not 考查意思是否表否定， 该句的意思应该是表达肯定而不是否定，所以要删除not。8. in hurry- in a hurry考查冠词 in
26、a hurry 意为“立刻”，也是一个固定搭配。9. felt-feel 考查使役动词的法。 Make sb do sth,是某人做某事，sb后要用动词原形。10. If-Although/Though考查连词的用法 ，根据句意“尽管在我读书的时候我是一个小孩，但我不会忘记它”表达让步，而不是条件。而且翻译为如果意思上也不通。【难度】一般（六）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home
27、in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and
28、 dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to regret it .【答案】1. think thought 2. countryside前加the3. orand4. onwith 5. have been shown 中的been去掉6. seriouslyserious7. airsair 8. muchmany 9. foundfind10. yourour【解析】试题分析：作者是孩
29、子的时候，梦想生活在城市。而作者现在生活在城市，却向往着家乡，因为那里更少的污染。1. think thought句意：我认为生活在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”2. countryside前加the 句意：但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指，故用定冠词the。3. orand句意：那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。4. onwith句意：随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着的发展。5. have been shown 中的been去掉 句意：许多研究表明。语态用法错误。主语与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。6. seriouslyserious句意：全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词修饰。7. airsair 句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。 8. muchmany句意：许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词animal为可数名词，故用many修饰。 9. foundfind句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。动词用法错误。情态动词must后接动词原形。10. yourour句意：我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。【难度】较易