1、Section_WRITING_WORKSHOP_&_READING_CLUB 学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉教材原文名师论道范文诠释The Final SprintIt was the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclocross race in Spain.Fans lined the road to the finishing line，cheering on the competitors.Ismael Esteban，in third place，was just ahead of his competitor，
2、Agustin Navarro，with only 300 metres to the finishing line.Esteban had been cycling as hard as he could for hours and with the finishing line in sight all the cyclists began to speed up to cross it.Then，suddenly Esteban got a puncture.What should he do？Give up or continue？Esteban threw his bike over
3、 his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.Just a few seconds later，fourthplaced Navarro caught up with him.Surely，he could simply overtake Esteban and come third.But Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.The two cyclists reached the finishing line with Esteban ahead on foot，
4、Navarro just behind him.Navarro had let Esteban finish in third place，while he came fourth.The audience was amazed at his show of sportsmanship and cheered and clapped for the cyclists.After the race，Navarro said，“I didnt want to win that way.”Later，Esteban，who won the bronze medal，tried to give his
5、 medal to Navarro.However，Navarro refused，and his response was：“Offering me the prize was worth more than what I did for him.”The two cyclists made amazing sporting gestures Navarro for refusing to take advantage of Estebans troubles，and Esteban for offering Navarro his medal.This was sportsmanship
6、at its very best.学语言句式： 现在分词短语作状语过去完成进行时；with 复合结构词汇： take advantage of sth利用某物at its very best 最好地衔接词：时间过渡词：Then，Just a few seconds later，After the race转折词：But，However写作手法：1.文中一系列动作描写，如：threw . and raced towards .; slowed down .; tried to give .; .refused等使记叙过程详细准确。2.文中运用了语言描写，如Navarro said，“I didn
7、t want to win that way.”； his response was：“Offering me the prize was worth more than what I did for him.”体现了人物的心理和优秀品质。学结构第一部分：交代故事发生的背景、人物和地点等。第二部分：故事的发展和高潮及结局。第三部分：作者的感想和评论。1.I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Le
8、t me tell you. Its a . story. 我躺在医院的床上。我对朋友们笑了笑，尽管我的腿很疼。你想知道我发生了什么事吗？让我来告诉你。这是一个的故事。2.He stopped and looked around to find it was Li Li who was running after him. 他停下来，环顾四周，发现是李丽在追他。3.Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey!
9、 We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us. 上个月，我们全家坐火车去了黄山。我们花了十个小时才到那儿。多么漫长而累人的旅程啊！我们很累，但美丽的风景使我们兴奋。4.She was quite optimistic and energetic. She brought me a lot of happiness and courage. I learned something precious from her belief in life.她非常乐观、有活力。她给我带来了许多快乐和勇气。我从她身上学到了一些宝贵的东西要对生活有信心。
10、5.Now，I think it is a really successful experience，and I totally understand what labor means.现在，我想这真是一次成功的经历，并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。 佳句背诵仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍 题目要求生活中常有意外事故发生。假设你和你班同学李明从锅炉房打完开水后，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对此实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括：1描述事故发生的经过；2你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的
11、处理)；3简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。参考词汇：锅炉房boiler house热水瓶 thermos bottleAccidents always happen suddenly. 仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段：交代事件的背景。第二段：主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。第三段：发表感想、愿望等。Step 2二仿语言规范美观1从锅炉房打了一些开水后，李明和我在回来的路上。Li_Ming_and_I_were_on_our_way_back_after_fetching_some_boiling_water_from_the_boiler_house.2突然，李明的保
12、温瓶破裂了，滚烫的水使他的脚受了重伤。Suddenly,_Li_Mings_thermos_bottle_burst_and_the_boiling_water_caused_severe_injuries_to_his_feet.3我把他带到附近的水龙头旁，把他的脚放在冰冷的流水下，直到疼痛减轻。I_carried_him_to_the_water_tap_nearby_and_put_his_feet_under_the_cold_running_water_until_the_pain_lessened.4我叫了一辆出租车，赶紧把他送到医院，在那里他接受了进一步的治疗。I_called_
13、a_taxi_and_rushed_him_to_the_hospital_where_he_received_a_further_treatment.Step 3三仿句间过渡自然 1从锅炉房打了一些开水后，李明和我在回来的路上，这时李明的保温瓶破裂了，沸水使他的脚严重受伤。One_day，Li_Ming_and_I_were_on_our_way_back_after_fetching_some_boiling_water_from_the_boiler_house_when_Li_Mings_thermos_bottle_burst_and_the_boiling_water_caused
14、_severe_injuries_to_his_feet.2我立刻把他带到附近的水龙头旁，把他的脚放在冰冷的自来水下，直到疼痛减轻。然后，我叫了一辆出租车，赶紧把他送到医院，他在那里接受了进一步的治疗。Immediately,_I_carried_him_to_the_water_tap_nearby_and_put_his_feet_under_the_cold_running_water_until_the_pain_lessened._Afterwards,_I_called_a_taxi_and_rushed_him_to_the_hospital_where_he_received_
15、a_further_treatment.Step 4誊写Accidents_always_happen_suddenly.One_day，Li_Ming_and_I_were_on_our_way_back_after_fetching_some_boiling_water_from_the_boiler_house_when_Li_Mings_thermos_bottle_burst_and_the_boiling_water_caused_severe_injuries_to_his_feet.The_burn_was_so_severe_that_the_skin_was_red_and
16、_swollen.Immediately,_I_carried_him_to_the_water_tap_nearby_and_put_his_feet_under_the_cold_running_water_until_the_pain_lessened._Afterwards,_I_called_a_taxi_and_rushed_him_to_the_hospital_where_he_received_a_further_treatment.Only_then_was_I_aware_what_a_difference_a_basic_knowledge_of_first_aid_c
17、an_make,_especially_in_such_a_case.自我评价EvaluationABCD1.(final copy) Be well organized.2.(every sentence) Have correct tense and voice.3.(final copy) Use what we have learned in the reading beautifully.4.(writing) Be neat and beautiful.5.(passage) Use proper conjunction (连接词)6.(passage) Use transitio
18、nal sentences (过渡句)7.(spelling, punctuation andcapitalization) Be correct.8.(final copy)Be worthy of being shared.重点单词1with the finishing line in sight终点就在眼前2all the cyclists 所有的自行车运动员3he could simply overtake Esteban 他可以轻而易举地超过埃斯特班4The audience was amazed at his show of sportsmanship. 观众对他表现出的体育精神感
19、到惊讶。5the bronze_medal 铜牌6his response 他的反应7To my amazement，the amazing news amazes the family and their neighbors are also amazed.(amazed)8None of the students responded to her question; that is to say, her question failed to get a response from any of the students.(respond)sportsman n. 运动员；运动家；冒险家
20、ship sportsmanship n. 体育精神，运动员风范例如： scholarship n奖学金friendship n. 友谊leadership n. 领导地位relationship n. 关系membership n. 会员资格championship n. 冠军头衔.重点短语1It was very quiet all around with nobody in_sight(看见)2They should take some crash courses to catch_up_with (赶上) their classmates.3They decided to take_a
21、dvantage_of(利用) the beautiful weather and go to the country.4Father and mother wanted to go for a ride, and on_the_other_hand (另一方面)，the children wanted to stay home and play with their friends.5I work_out (锻炼) regularly to keep fit.6Its so nice to hear from her again. Believe_it_or_not_ (信不信由你)，we
22、last met more than thirty years ago.典型句式1教材原句Esteban had been cycling as hard as he could for hours and with the finishing line in sight .句式分析with复合结构佳句仿写老师手里拿着一本书走进了教室。The teacher came into the classroom with_a_book_in_his_hand.2教材原句That year，she not only won the silver medal in the Australian Open
23、 but also won the gold medal in the French Open.句式分析not only .but also .是英语中比较常见的一个关联词，用于连接两个表示并列关系的成分，着重强调后者。其意思是“不仅而且”，其中的also有时可以省略。佳句仿写约翰不仅对音乐感兴趣，而且有天赋。John is not_only_interested_in_music，but_also has a gift for it.1sight n视野(教材p.40)Esteban had been cycling as hard as he could for hours and wit
24、h the finishing line in sight all the cyclists began to speed up to cross it. 埃斯特班竭尽全力骑了几个小时，终点线就在眼前了，所有的自行车手都开始加速穿过终点线。catch sight of看见lose sight of 看不见at first sight 初看时at the sight of 一看见(就)in sight 看得见，在视野范围内out of sight 看不见佳句He looked up the street, but there was no one in sight. 他朝街上望去，一个人也没看见
25、。练透单句语法填空He let out a scream of terror at the sight of a figure in the darkness.The boys got home and ate everything in sight.The theory is not as simple as you might think at first sight. 写美补全句子She was walking in the street when she caught_sight_of_a_car in the distance.她正在街上散步，这时看见远处有一辆汽车。2respons
26、e n回答，答复(教材p.40)However，Navarro refused，and his response was：“Offering me the prize was worth more than what I did for him.”然而，纳瓦罗拒绝了，他的回复是：“将这个奖给我(这一举动)远远超过了我为他所做的。”(1)in response to 作为对的回应make a response to 对做出反应(2)respond vi. 回答；响应；做出反应respond to 对做出回应佳句I received an encouraging response to my ad
27、vertisement. 我的广告宣传有了令人鼓舞的回应。练透单句语法填空I knocked on the door but nobody responded to it.No one has_responded(respond) to our complaints yet.She opened the door in response to the knock.写美补全句子I asked her what the time was，but she didnt_respond/made_no_response.我问她几点了，但她没回答。3defend vi.& vt.保护，保卫(教材p.43)
28、Soft martial arts，such as tai chi，teach you to use your opponents own force to defend yourself.软武术，像太极，教你用对手的力量来保护自己。(1)defend .from/against . 保护免遭defend against . 防御defend oneself 自卫；为自己辩护(2)defense n. 保卫；防守；辩护in defense (of) 自卫；防御；保护(3)defensive adj. 防御的；保护的佳句All the officers are trained to defend
29、 themselves from/against knife attacks.所有的警察都接受训练，保护自己免受持刀袭击。名师点津与defend .from/against用法类似的还有：prevent .(from), stop .(from), keep .from, protect .from/against, discourage .from等，上述短语若用于被动语态，from都不可省略。练透单句语法填空No matter what happened, I would defend her from/against being hurt.All the people were figh
30、ting against the flood in defense of their own homes.What are the forwards doing attacking or defending (defend)?写美补全句子It is impossible to defend_against an allout attack.防御全面进攻是不可能的。4take advantage of 利用(教材p.40)The two cyclists made amazing sporting gestures Navarro for refusing to take advantage o
31、f Estebans troubles .两位自行车手展现出了高度的体育精神纳瓦罗拒绝利用埃斯特班碰到的麻烦be at an advantage 处于优势be at a disadvantage 处于劣势be to ones advantage 对有利have advantages of . 有的优势give sb an advantage over 让某人比占优势佳句She took full advantage of the childrens absence to tidy their room.她趁孩子们不在时收拾了他们的房间。练透单句语法填空Her teaching experien
32、ce gave her a big advantage over the other applicants for the job.We took advantage of the fine weather and spent the day at the beach.It will be to your advantage to study abroad.Anyone who cant use a computer is at a disadvantage.写美补全句子Younger workers tend to be_at_an_advantage when applying for j
33、obs.年轻的工人申请工作时往往处于优势地位。1句型公式：with复合结构(教材p.40)Esteban had been cycling as hard as he could for hours and with the finishing line in sight .埃斯特班竭尽全力骑行了几个小时，终点线就在眼前了(1)with的复合结构在句中常作状语，表示方式或伴随情况，也可作定语。(2)with复合结构的构成：with名词/代词形容词/副词/现在分词/过去分词/不定式/介词短语佳句He went out of the library with a book under his ar
34、m.他胳膊下夹着一本书走出了图书馆。练透单句语法填空He left the house with the tap running (run)I cant go out with all these clothes to_wash (wash)He sat there with his eyes closed (close)写美补全句子I like to live in the house with_its_windows_facing_the_sea.我喜欢住在窗户面向大海的房子里。名师点津在with复合结构中，现在分词一般表示主动的、正在进行的动作；过去分词往往表示被动的、完成的动作；而动词
35、不定式则常常表示尚未发生的将来的动作。2句型公式：not only .but also .“不仅而且”(教材p.48)That year，she not only won the silver medal in the Australian Open but also won the gold medal in the French Open.那年，她不仅在澳大利亚公开赛上获得银牌，而且还在法国公开赛上拿到了金牌(1)not only .but also .可用于连接两个并列的主语、谓语、宾语、状语、句子等。(2)not only .but also .连接并列主语时，谓语动词的人称和数与临近
36、的主语保持一致，即使用“就近一致”原则。(3)not only .but also .连接句子时，not only 可以置于句首表示强调，这时第一分句要采用倒装结构。佳句The Americans and the British not only speak the same language but also share a large number of social customs.美国人和英国人不但语言相同，而且有很多相同的社会习俗。练透单句语法填空Not only does (do) he speak English correctly，but he also speaks it f
37、luently.Not only the students but also their teacher likes (like) playing football.Not only I but also Tom and Mary are (be) fond of watching television.写美句型转换They not only told us what had happened in the accident, but also told us what they had done.Not only did_they_tell us what had happened in t
38、he accident, but also told us what they had done.维度一品句填词1He pulled out to overtake (超过) a truck.2We were amazed (惊讶的) to find that no one was hurt. 3He was awarded his countrys highest medal (奖牌) for bravery. 4My sight (视力) is failing, and I cant see to read any more. 5The product was developed in r
39、esponse(答复) to customers demand.6He made a rude gesture (手势) at the driver of the other car.7Troops have been sent to defend (保卫) the borders.8Well, I remember being run over by a cyclist (骑自行车的人) as a little girl. 9Computers offer a much greater degree of flexibility in the way work is organized. 1
40、0They are likely to respond positively to the presidents request for aid.维度二词形转换1The Olympic oath encourages athletes to follow the spirit of sportsmanship (sport)2The talks can succeed if both sides are flexible (flexibility) and serious. 3To our amazement (amazed)，the face of the city keeps on cha
41、nging every day.4She made no response (respond) to my question，which made me very angry.5Dont ask him about his plans he just gets defensive (defend)维度三固定搭配和句式根据括号内的汉语提示补全下面的句子(每空一词)。1Anyway，Im amazed at/by (对感到惊讶) the progress youve made.2He stepped back appearing surprised and put up his hands, as if in defense (自卫)3He took advantage of(利用) his free time to finish the novel.4Plenty of fresh air can come in with the windows open (开着窗户)5Not only Mr Lin but also (不仅而且) his son joined the club two years ago.6We soon lost sight of (看不见) the boat in the dense fog.
