1、Section Guided Writing游记类记叙文Module 3 My First Ride on a Train写 作 技 法 指 导 游记类记叙文就是记述旅途中所见所闻，并通过对当地的风土人情、山川地貌、人文景致、名胜古迹等方面的描写来表达作者的思想感情。一、基本结构 游记一般分为三部分：开头部分：引出话题，简要介绍游览的情况；主体部分：详细记述游览过程；结尾部分：要抒发自己的体验与感受。二、增分佳句 1I will never forget my first trip to Lhasa.我永远不会忘记第一次去拉萨的旅行。2That was my first visit to th
2、e West Lake.那是我第一次去参观西湖。3On the way to the Palace Museum，we saw the beautiful scenery.在去故宫的路上，我们看到了美丽的风景。4After 4 hours riding on the train we arrived at Mount Tai.乘坐 4 个小时的火车后，我们到达了泰山。5We were all attracted by the beauty of nature.我们都被这种自然美景吸引住了。6This is an unusual/unforgettable journey to London T
3、ower.这次去伦敦塔的旅游令人难忘。7It was really an unforgettable journey.这确实是一次难忘的旅行。8What a good trip we had today！我们今天的旅行多么愉快啊！9We were very tired，but we really had a wonderful day.尽管我们非常累，但我们真地度过了愉快的一天。10This was a real lifechanging experience that I would never forget.这是一次真正改变生活的经历，我永远不会忘记。五 步 写 作 规 范 题目要求 去年
4、夏天我和家人到大连旅游。我们参观了海洋公园，观看了海豚的精彩表演。又到海里游泳，后来还去看了一些有名的景点，品尝了那里的名吃。请根据提示，以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题写一篇100 词左右的英语记叙文。参考词汇：海豚 dolphin _ _ _ _ 第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 1确定体裁：本文为游记类，属于_；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为_；3确定时态：主要用_。记叙文第一人称一般过去时二、构思 第一部分，引入：整体介绍游览的概况；第二部分，阐述：详细介绍游览过程；第三部分，总结：抒发体验并表达愿望。第二步：核心词汇想周全 1_ 和一起 2_ 游览 3_ 现代化海
5、滨城市 4_ 乘坐公共汽车 together with make a tour of modern coast city take the bus/by bus 5_ 很多种 6_ 不能相信自己的眼睛 7_ 去游泳 8_ 玩得很愉快 many kinds of cant believe ones eyes go swimming enjoy oneself/have a wonderful time 第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1去年夏天我和家人一起到大连旅游，因为大连是一个美丽的现代化的海滨城市。(as 引导原因状语从句)_Last summer,I,together with my famil
6、y,made a tour of Dalian,as Dalian is a beautiful and modern coast city.2那里有很多种动物，以至于我不能相信自己的眼睛。(so.that.引导结果状语从句)_There were so many kinds of animals that I couldnt believe my eyes.3观看了海豚的表演之后，我们在一家餐馆吃午餐，那里的海鲜美味可口。(after 引导时间状语从句；whose 引导定语从句)_After we had seen the show of dolphins,we had lunch in a
7、restaurant whose seafood was delicious.4大海是蓝色的，海滩是金色的，我们在海里玩得很愉快。(so连接两个并列句)_The sea was blue and the beach was golden,so we enjoyedourselves in the sea.5我们也看了大连一些有趣、著名的景点。(主谓结构)_6尽管游览使我非常疲惫，但我感到很高兴。(although 引导让步状语从句)_We also went to some interesting and famous places in Dalian.Although I was exhau
8、sted from the tour，I felt very happy.7我希望有空时能再次去那里。(that 引导宾语从句；when 引导时间状语从句)_I hope that I can go there again when I have free time.第四步：句式升级造亮点 1用 which 引导的非限制定语从句改写句 1 _Last summer,I,together with my family,made a tour of Dalian,which is a beautiful and modern coast city.2用现在分词短语作状语改写句 3 _3用 as 引
9、导的让步状语从句改写句 6 _Having seen the show of dolphins,we had lunch in a restaurantwhose seafood was delicious.Exhausted as I was from the tour,I felt very happy.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 An Unforgettable Trip _ _ _ _ 参考范文 Last summer,I,together with my family,made a tour of Dalian,which is a beautiful and modern coast
10、city.First we took the bus to the Sea Park.There were so many kinds of animals that I couldnt believe my eyes.Having seen the show of dolphins,we had lunch in a restaurant whose seafood was delicious.After lunch we went swimming.The sea was blue and the beach was golden,so we enjoyed ourselves in the sea.We also went to some interesting and famous places in Dalian.Exhausted as I was from the tour,I felt very happy.I hope that I can go there again when I have free time.点击右图进入 英 美 文 化 欣 赏 Thank you for watching!
