1、浙江省云和县2015高考英语短文改错暑假专练（1）及答案 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the Com
2、mittee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they are interested in farming are invited to take part the activity. Weather permitted, well ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a farm. It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some vegetables, pl
3、ant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless you are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!【参考答案】3.Hi, everyone. To let us get closel
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6、ling改为unwillingyou are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!1.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Elli， Im a senior student. I like
7、 making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that shedislikes me. He doesnt want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of mebecause of Im fat. I am kind to her but why cant she be
8、 friend towards me? My other problemis trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?Please give me some advices. Yours, Mary 【参考答案】1.Dear Elli， Im a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for friends witheveryone. Bu
9、t in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that shedislikes me. He doesnt want tomy friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of medisliked She bebecause of Im fat. I am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? My other problemfriendlyis trying to lose
10、 weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way? Or Please give me some advices. advice Yours, Mary 2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Though great progress has made in science these years, there are still many people lived in poor co
11、nditions. They make their livingby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have no enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developin
12、g country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.【参考答案】2.Though great progress has made in science these years, t
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15、ion explosion. clearly3.短文改错We are all busy talk about and using the Internet 76. _which set up in the 1960s. At first, the Internet was 77. _only used by the government, but in early 1970s, 78. _the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to 79. _use it, too. Otherwise, computers were still
16、very expensive 80. _and the Internet was difficult to use it. By the 81. _start of the 1990s, computers become cheaper and easier. 82. _Today it is easily to get on-line and it is said 83. _that millions of people use the Internet every day. 84. _Send e-mail is more and more popular among students.
17、85. _It has now become one of the most important parts of peoples life.【参考答案】3.76. talk-talking 77. set 前加was78. early 后加the 79. 去掉the80. Otherwise -However81. 去掉it 82. become 前加had83. easily-easy 84. 85. send 改为sending5.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把
18、多余的词用斜线（）划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该词下面写出该加的词。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. Its very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to in
19、troduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He gre
20、eted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man dont want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was tim
21、e to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, dont forget to take your dog!”【参考答案】5.Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now 1. touchinglisten to me carefully. Its very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to
22、 house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all 2. because 3.himselfhis new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the 4.去掉waspeople in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell
23、, 5.soand the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted 6.toothem with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of 7.the coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man dont want to seem rude, so he 8
24、.on 9.didntpetted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when 10.gentlyit was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, dont forget to take your dog!”6.短文改错文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该
25、加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。 Dear Brad,Im very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard.
26、The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I dont think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua【参考答案】6.1.askasked 2. thea 3. ComparingCompared 4. hardharder5.expensivelyexpensive 6.删with 7.ThereforeHowever8.househouses 9.weus 10.efforts后加to
