1、2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（4）及答案【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学三模试题】读写任务 (共25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。As we all know, life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life. Without a good dream, people cant make progress; without a good dream, countries cant develop; without a goo
2、d dream, the world cant become so beautiful! And I hold the strong belief that everyone, whether he is old or young, poor or rich, junior or senior, does have a good dream! After all, dreaming is certainly a positive part of our life, and wishing for good things, however, costs nothing!Whats more, i
3、t is important to fly our dreams, especially for those who are Senior 3 students. It is high time for them to fly their dreams. If they cant let their dreams fly, the dream would just die!Therefore, it is no wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood. With a nice dream, China succ
4、eeded to host the 29th Olympic Games in 2008; with a nice dream, Hong Kong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997; with a nice dream, Yuan Longping rids the world of hunger; with a nice dream, Michael Jordon becomes the most popular basketball star; with a nice dream I can stand on this stage
5、 to compete in the final English speech contest. And with an aim of achieving success, I must do the best!So my good friends, if you want to realize your dream, please do not be afraid in face of difficulties or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains. You must keep going for
6、ward bravely! Just fly your dream highly above the sky!【写作内容】 1. 阅读短文后用30词左右概括短文的要点。2. 就“放飞梦想”为主题，以120词左右发表自己的看法，并包括以下内容要点：（1）列举自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例；（2）结合自己的实际，谈谈你现在的梦想，并说明打算如何实现。【写作要求】 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】One po
7、ssible version:Dreams play an important role in our daily life and a good dream is the motivation to success. To realize a dream, one should learn to defeat difficulties through constant struggles as well as persistence.It is a dream that enables one to do better in life. Like most classmates, there
8、 was a time when I dreamed of being an excellent student in English after entering junior middle school, though my English was very poor then. To catch up with my classmates, I made up my mind to learn English well and made pen-friends with some foreign students so as to practise my spoken English a
9、nd improve my written English. Although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening, seldom did I take part in such activities. Instead, I set aside to concentrate on my English and won the Final English Speech Contest around the city this term, realizing my dream.At present, I als
10、o have another dream. As a Senior 3 student, I hope that I can be admitted to a key university after graduation from middle school. Of course, whether my dream will come true depends largely on my personal efforts. Although life is full of ups and downs, I choose to go forward bravely. I strongly be
11、lieve that where there is a dream, there is hope and there is a way.高中英语书面表达中的高级结构英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也 需要一定的基础。而我觉得通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速达到这一目的。强调句：可以将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。It was not until I arrived hom
12、e that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter. It was then that I realized the importance of English. 倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me. Only by this means can he escape from the big fire. with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句
13、变成with结构。With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits He always likes to sleep with the windows open. 巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。Hearing that, the drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (=When he heard
14、 that, ) 恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是 nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。I searched all my pockets, but nothing was found.感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可 如此改造。How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam. 高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。We came to a place to which the
15、y had never paid a visit before. 进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus. 婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned to the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter. what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。What h
16、e gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it. “数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests 适当加一些插入语：一些连词、副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opin
17、ion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, whats more等，有时可以考虑几个插入语连用，就更像英美人士 的文章了。独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为分词即可。 Weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. 把简单句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简单句改成“tooto”或者“sothat”等高级一点的复合句。例如：I was very tired. I couldnt keep u
18、p with them.我们可以改成：I was so tired that I couldnt keep up with them.或：I was too tired to keep up with them. 这样一来，英语基础不是很好的学生只要能够写出最基本的句子，然后再对这些句子进行加工、改造、润色，慢慢的，就会让句子靓起来，在高考中就可以得到比较满意的成绩。【2013界广东省茂名市二模】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)假设你的同学因自己的肥胖而苦恼，请根据以下建议写一篇英语短文。写作内容DontsDos不要吃过多油腻的食物；睡觉前不要吃零食。否则可能增加体重或消化不良(indige
19、stion)。要保持均衡饮食；每天需要至少一个小时的运动，比如可以选择步行上学，这样既有利于减肥，又可以保护环境。做到持之以恒，只有这样才会在不久的将来拥有苗条的身材。写作要求1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 首句已经给出，不计入总句数。 评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。Dear classmate,Ive learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions. _【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)Ive learned that you ar
20、e trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions.On (the) one hand, you shouldnt eat too much fatty food or eat snacks before you sleep. Otherwise, you may gain weight or suffer from indigestion. On the other hand, you should keep a balanced diet. Meanwhile, doing exercise for at l
21、east one hour per day is needed, like walking to school, which is not only beneficial for your weight loss, but also helps protect the environment. Above all, you should be persistent, because only in this way can you become slim in the near future.【2013界广东省茂名市二模】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇15
22、0词左右的英语短文。As a kid, I was a little fat. In college, I was less active, and I started blowing up. It got out of control when I went to law school. At the age of 30, I weighed 414 pounds. I was always tired. I have a family history of heart disease, and I was scared. I also wanted to look better. So a
23、 few weeks after my birthday, in the spring of 2006, I started to lose weight. Walking was all I could do at first. I started by walking to a subway stop a few blocks away instead of the one closest to my apartment. I gradually increased the distance. A year later, I started to run. At first I could
24、 run for only two minutes, but I kept on. I made a difference. I was losing nine or ten pounds a month, and I had a lot more energy. I started to think about the New York City Marathon, which goes right past my apartment building. For years, I thought I could never do that. But now I realized that m
25、aybe I could By my 33rd birthday, in the spring of 2009, I was down to 180 pounds. That summer, I started formally training for the marathon. And on the morning of November 1, I stood on the Verrazano Bridge in Staten Island with more than 40,000 other runners, waiting for the event to start. When w
26、e started moving, it was an amazing feeling to have people cheering me on, handing me cups of water. In Harlem, my mom and brother stood on a street corner, waving. And then I crossed the finishing line in Central Park, and somebody put a medal around my neck. I was in tears from being so happy. 写作内
27、容 1以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2以约120词就“持之以恒”这个话题发表你的看法， 内容包括： (1) 你读后的感受；(2) 用你自己或他人的经历说明持之以恒的重要性；(3) 呼吁大家坚持就是胜利。写作要求 1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 【参考范文】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分） The author was getting very fat when young and he tried to lose weight step by
28、step. He tried hard and even joined in the City Marathon. At last he achieved great success. Having read the passage, I was deeply touched and admired the author for his insistence. If he had not been so determined and persistent, he would not have lost so much weight and lived an exciting life. His
29、 story shows that if one sets his mind to something, nothing is impossible.It reminds me of a similar experience. One day it was announced that there would be a rope-skipping competition in our class. On hearing the announcement, I felt nervous because I had never done rope skipping before. But my s
30、ister, who promised to teach me, persuaded me to have a try. At the beginning I found it hard to learn to skip because my feet always blocked the rope. However, I didnt lose heart but changed my way of learning. Gradually I could skip faster and faster. Thanks to my sisters help and my perseverance
31、I took part in the competition confidently, in which I skipped 155 times and ranked fifth. So my dear friends, I strongly recommend that only with insistence can your dream eventually come true! 【2013界广东省茂名市一模】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)写作内容今年十一黄金周期间，我国首次对高速公路行驶的小汽车实行免费政策。对此，群众议论纷纷，褒贬不一。以下是相关信息，请你写一篇英文介绍。利刺激消
32、费，有利于第三产业发展, 例如旅游行业；亲友驾车相聚拉近人与人的距离。弊大家都挤向高速公路，车流量猛增，从而增加拥堵；事故发生率比以往提高你的看法 *刺激 stimulate 写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分) During this National Day holidays, free passage was given to cars on the highway for the first time ever, which caused a heated discussion nationwi
33、de. On the bright side, some believe that it is good to stimulate consumption and boost the third industry, such as tourism. To some extent, this policy also brings people closer, for those who were reluctant to visit their friends are totally seduced and willing to reunite by car. However, with car
34、s flocking to the highways, others are concerned that the traffic flow will increase tremendously, resulting in worse traffic jam and higher accident rate than ever before. Personally, free passage is what the public have been longing for, but more following measures should be taken, for example, so
35、me contingency plans should be made to deal with the potential problems and more clear road signs are needed to give drivers precise guidance.【2013界广东省茂名市一模】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Nowadays, the term sense of happiness has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias. During th
36、e National Day holidays, CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by the question Are you happy now? What exactly is happiness in your eyes? The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions. I would say Im pretty happy
37、 at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job. said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face. Though it seemed that most people said they were happy, different voices were still heard and should not be ignored. There was a migrant worker(农民
38、工) whose answer to the question was widely spread online. When asked if he was happy, he said My family name is Zeng, showing his determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness. The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered I dont know in an interview
39、when he was asked the same question: Are you happy? 写作内容1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就“幸福”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括： （1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；（2）请描述到现在为止让你觉得最幸福的一件事情；（3）谈谈你对幸福的理解。写作要求 1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分） When asked by the CCTV w
40、hether they were happy, most people gave a positive answer while some didnt. The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didnt know whether he was happy or not. At present, I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like and I like what I am doing. As a senior three student, I study hard every day and li
41、ve it to the fullest. It feels good to study hard with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams. When I recall the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all. It was a time when my family was going through the extreme fina
42、ncial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoping to lighten my parents financial burden. After making tons of painstaking efforts, I succeeded. At the ceremony, I could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, yet with the brightest smile on her face. It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life. As far as I am concerned, happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile. When we bring happiness to them, it gives happiness to ourselves.
