1、2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（12）及答案【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关写作内容 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；2
2、中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3专家解读。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作：Last weekend, I had an interview with an eye-doctor, Professor Wang, about the primary and middle students short-sightedness in our country. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks No. 1 in the world, are
3、 short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that we should avoid overusing our eyes and do more outdoor exercise. Whats more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness,
4、 we need to pay attention to using the pen.【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。The “Clean Your Plate” campaign was started by nongovernmental organizations and activists, which urged people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table. The campaign, launc
5、hed on Weibo, was soon joined by millions of netizens across China to fight against food waste.The estimated annual waste of grain in China reaches 50 million tons, enough to feed about 200 million people for a year.People from across China support the campaign. The Central Government has promised t
6、o take measures to reduce food waste, take the lead in saving food and follow a simple working style.More and more Chinese are saying “No” to food waste. Staff members of a restaurant set off a campaign encouraging customers to stop food waste in Qingdao, Shandong province, Jan. 24. “Did you empty t
7、he dishes today?” has become the most popular question in China. Showing an empty dish also turns a new fashion among Chinese netizens.In some restaurants there are signs reminding the diners not to waste food. Some even offer awards to the customers who eat all their food, as part of the campaign t
8、o reduce waste. More and more restaurants kindly remind and encourage customers to take their leftovers away.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“光盘行动”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) “光盘行动”产生的背景；(2) “光盘行动”的作用；(3) 你对“光盘行动”的看法和诉求。写作要求 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，
9、内容合适，语篇连贯。 【参考范文】读写任务： When some people started the “Clean Your Plate” campaign in an effort to reduce food waste, millions of netizens joined in it and more and more people are taking real action to stop food waste.As many people are still living in poverty around us, Im quite delighted by this cam
10、paign. As far as I know, while people in advanced countries dont have to worry about their meals, millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day. Though most Chinese have enough food to eat, there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill thei
11、r stomach. Unfortunately, I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste. It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food, which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year. What an alarming waste it is! We
12、should feel guilty to waste so much food.It is high time that we took action to stop such waste without delay. There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals. If all people cut down food waste, a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed.The “Clean Your Plate” ca
13、mpaign is really good and useful. Lets join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food. 【2013界广东深圳市第二次调研考试】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面微博上的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Designed by our monitor, we has a story telling contest at the class meeting. All of us were very active, and everybody said that the mos
14、t touching story was the one told by Zhang Hua, which won the first prize and made the meeting more meaningful So, here, I would like to share:Not long ago, my friends encouraged me to try a 150-mile ride trip, an annual event that raised money for the poor children in the far-away mountains.When I
15、registered, the idea seemed excellent-to support a worthy cause while riding for a long distance. The ride began in the morning, and for the first few hours, I felt wonderful. But by the end of the day, I felt tired and bored.Every excuse my brain pushed out seemed to travel right down to my legs. “
16、I cant handle this,” and “everyone else is a better rider” were translated into shortness of breath. I was sure Id have to quit.Then I noticed that the lone rider in front of me looked different in some way. But she was too far away for me to tell why. So I pushed my self to catch up. There she was,
17、 riding alone slowly but steadily, with a slight and determined smile on her face-and she has only one leg.My focus changed at that moment, For a whole day Id been doubting my body, but now I knew it was the will that would help me reach my goal.写作内容1以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法，内容包括：（1）为什
18、么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘？（2）举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响；（3）你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。写作要求1在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用文中的内容。2作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校的名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） At a class meeting, Zhang Hua won the 1st prize in a story telling contest, which was so touching that the writer noted it d
19、own to share in his blog.In his story, he experienced a volunteer ride trip to raise money for poor children. He had thought it was as easy as a cake, but then, tired and bored, he had a thousand reasons to give up when he noticed a one-legged lady before him. Seeing her determined smile, Zhang Hua
20、reached his goal. What a great story and class meeting! It is inspiring us how to face difficulties in our life.Once I was addicted to computer games, and I was so involved in it that it influenced my school work terribly. Then at a class meeting, my head teacher organized many activities to let us
21、know the bad effects of being addictive. I was shocked and realized my danger! If it had not been because of that valuable class meeting, I would have been another person.So, class meetings are our expectations, because they are an effective form of school moral education and the important way to co
22、nvert the students thought. Therefore, a good head teacher often attaches great importance to a weekly class meeting.第二节：一、读写任务评分原则1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 短文概括5分 主题写作 20分。2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一
23、个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点 1. 以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法，内容包括： (1) 为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘？ (2) 举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响; (3) 你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。三、各档次的给分范围和要求：项目分值评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原
24、文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不
25、相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1
26、-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【2013界佛山市普通质量检测（一）】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Education does Count（excerpt）Bill GatesHundreds of students send me e-mail each year asking for advice about
27、education. They want to know what to study, or whether its OK to drop out of college since thats what I did.My basic advice is simple and heartfelt. “Get the best education you can. Take advantage of high school and college. Learn how to learn.”Its true that I dropped out of college to start Microso
28、ft, but I was at Harvard for three years before dropping out and Id love to have the time to go back. As Ive said before, nobody should drop out of college unless they believe they face the opportunity of a lifetime. And even then they should reconsider.In my companys early years, we had a bright pa
29、rt-time programmer who threatened to drop out of high school to work full-time. We told him no.Quite a few of out people didnt finish college, but we discourage dropping out. Having a diploma certainly helps somebody who is looking to us for a job.Theres not a perfect correlation between attitudes i
30、n high school and success in later life, of course.But its a real mistake not to take the opportunity to learn a huge range of subjects, to learn to work with people in high school, and to get the grades that will help you get into a good college.【写作内容】1以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；2然后以约120个词谈谈你对教育的看法，内容包括： (1)
31、为什么有些学生想中途放弃学业去创业；(2) 你认为读书与事业之间的关系是怎样的；(3) 你自己有何打算。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）The author is often asked to give advice about education due to his successful experience. He thinks it is unwise to drop out and
32、 that learning is sure to be beneficial.Some students want to drop out of school, believing schooling has nothing to do with a successful career, because there are many cases where people who dont finish their schooling are successful, such as Bill Gates. Besides, the high tuition of college educati
33、on is too much for ordinary families. Dropping out to find a job helps them to lighten the heavy financial burden on their parents. Furthermore, experience counts most for a career and no wonder why some would like to accumulate experience by taking a job at an early age. Knowledge is power. Schools are where people become knowledgeable.As for me, I will make full use of time to complete my schooling and achieve my dream.
