1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（13）及答案【2014高考英语广东省华侨中学四模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）以下是一则学生对待家务的基本信息及相关调查。调查显示：13%的孩子做家务，87%的孩子从不做家务（household chores），十六七岁的孩子连自己的袜子、内衣裤（underwear）都没洗过。主要原因：1. 熬夜学习，争取好成绩，父母包办一切；2. 上网聊天、沉迷游戏，顾不上吃饭；3. 周末放学玩到深夜才回家，白天睡懒觉。专家建议：孩子要按时回家、学做家务、与家人度周末，否则不利于自己的成长。【写作内容】根据以上信息给校报写一篇英语调查说
2、明，内容包括：1. 调查情况；2. 主要原因；3. 专家建议。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作： As the survey shows, 13% of the students always do household chores while 87% never do housework, and some 16-to-17-year-old teenagers have never washed their own socks or underwear. There are three main reasons a
3、s follows: some students stay up studying for better grades because their parents have done everything for them. Some chat on the Internet, addicted to games without a moment to spare for dinner. Others stay with their friends at weekends until they return home late at night, and sleep at daytime. I
4、t is suggested by experts that students should return home on time, learn to do housework, and spend the weekend with their family, or else such bad habits are doomed to affect their growth. 【2013广东省广州市调研测试】读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。In recent years educators and parents have beco
5、me concerned about the poor performance of boys in school. The so-called “boy crisis (危机)” in education refers to both their academic performance and their behaviour. In both areas boys results are much worse than girls. USA data shows that boys rank behind girls in almost all areas of schooling. Th
6、ey earn lower grades overall in primary school and high school. They are behind girls in reading and writing, and 30 percent of them are in the bottom quarter of standardized tests, compared with 19 percent of girls. Boys are also more likely to have behavioural problems, to repeat a grade and to dr
7、op out of school altogether. Studies in China have found similar trends.Although the causes of the “boy crisis” are not fully understood, some experts believe that same-sex (boys-only and girls-only) classrooms and schools may help solve the problem. The idea is to remove some of the distractions ca
8、used by the opposite sex, in order to improve students concentration and hopefully their grades. The first Chinese school to experiment with this idea is the Shanghai No. 8 Middle School, which began “boys-only” classes in September, 2012. Although it is too early to tell if the reform has made a di
9、fference, its supporters argue that the results are promising.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 2. 以约120个词就“学校按性别分班”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）你认为按性别分班有何优、缺点；（2）你是否赞成学校按性别分班； （3）你赞成或反对按性别分班的理由。写作要求1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【读写任务评分说明：】读写任务是有材料作文；要求学生在阅读的
10、基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查学生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。本试题要求考生阅读一篇关于“男孩危机”的英语短文之后就“学校按性别分班”这一话题进行议论，内容包括：（1）按性别分班的优、缺点；（2）是否赞成学校按性别分班；（3）赞成或反对的理由。在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：1按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分。2. 概括部分要求能抓住文章所含的大意，即：“男孩危机”的现象、一些调查研究的证明、专家提出的可能的解决措施。概括应包含以下要点：(1) 现象：“boy crisis” - boys tend to perform worse than girls.(2) 例证：study data.
11、(3) （之一）措施：same-sex classrooms and schools.3. 写作的内容应该包括： （1）按性别分班的优、缺点； （2）是否赞成学校按性别分班； （3）赞成或反对的理由。4. 其它要求见评分标准。读写任务【评分标准】评分说明 读写任务的评分建议采用综合法，即：根据总体影响给分。概要和文章的分值分别为5分和20分。项目赋分评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息。语言结构
12、基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比
13、较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有一定的用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况
14、，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【参考范文】读写任务： The passage shows that nowadays boys tend to perform worse than girls in all aspects in school, which is known as the “boy crisis”. Experts suggest that same-sex schooling may be a possible solution to the problem. From my perspective, the
15、 merits of single sex education are as follows. Firstly, kids feel more comfortable being themselves in this environment. Secondly, it is easier for teachers to design learning tasks because boys and girls process information differently. When it comes to its disadvantages, the lack of socialization
16、 is my primary concern. If kids lack the opportunity to communicate with the opposite sex, their psychological development and their communication skills may be harmed. As for me, Im opposed to the same-sex education. One reason is because its not practical to be carried out on a large scale at pres
17、ent. Moreover, same-sex schools could encourage inequality and unfairness between boys and girls. But most importantly, if kids can encounter the opposite sex, they will have more appreciation, understanding and sympathy for others. This will help them be more mature and open-minded and contribute t
18、o their well-being in later life.【2013界广东省东莞市2013届高三上期末调研测试】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分) 校运会下周要开始了，你接受一项任务，要为英语校报写一篇运动喝水注意事项。写作内容1原因：运动后身体会缺水。2作用：有利于保持体能，恢复体力。3补水方法：运动前：两三个小时可以适当喝水，不宜太多。 运动中：适当喝运动饮料或盐水。 运动后：最好少量慢喝。 特别提醒：运动后禁止喝茶、咖啡或酒。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分) It is obvio
19、us that our body will lack water( because of sweat streaming) after exercise, so it is necessary to increase water for our body, which will keep our body energetic, making us refresh quickly. It is better to drink suitable water two or three hours before exercise, but not too much. Meanwhile we shou
20、ld choose a certain sports drinking or salty water during the exercise. Besides, after exercise, wed better add water in time properly and slowly for its good for our health. Special attention: strong tea, coffee and wines are also prohibited after exercise(此句也可用一个句子来表达: eg: What we should pay more attention to is that-).- 7 - 版权所有高考资源网
