1、2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Module 10: A holiday journey单元话题：假期生活范文11假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“An Exciting Trip”的英语短文。时间上周末参加者你和地点北海公园（Beihai Park）活动划船、爬山、野餐（have a picnic）、照相、做游戏感受要求: 1. 不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，表达正确；3. 60词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。An Exciting TripLast weekend, I went on a t
2、rip with _范文22上周你和你父母去四川旅游了，你们参观了那儿的一些名胜古迹，如：峨眉山，乐山大等，那儿的食物也很美味。请你把你的这次旅行经历写下来，适当发挥，不低于60词。参考词汇：Mount Emei 峨眉山；Leshan Buddhists 乐山大佛My trip to Sichuan_范文33假如你和你的家人去年暑假去了桂林旅游，请根据下面表格的内容写一篇短文，介绍你的旅游经历和感受。要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等；3. 词数70词左右。How was your trip?Wonderful. How did you go
3、 to Guilin?By train. How long did you stay there?For five days. What did you see there?Green hills, clean water and so on. What did you do?Go boating in Lijiang River. ._范文44提示：暑假要来了，你有什么旅行计划吗？请以“My Travel Plan”为题写一篇英语短文。内容可以包括目的地、出行方式、同行伙伴、天气状况、携带物品、旅行活动等。 要求：（1）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；（2）文中不得使用真实姓名
4、，校名，否则以零分计；（3）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。_范文55假设你是宋刚，你和父母上周末去北京旅游了。现在请你根据下表的内容提示，给你的笔友Millie写一封不少于60词的英语邮件，介绍你们在北京的所见所闻。邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。TimeActivitiesSaturdayVisit the Great WallSundayGo to the Summer Palace, visit Wangfujing StreetDear Millie,How was your vacation? _Yours,Song Gang范文66假如你是张芳，你收到外籍朋友Lily的邮
5、件。在邮件中她讲述了她的一次特殊的旅行经历，请根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件，向她介绍你的一次特殊的旅行经历。70词左右。写作提示：1. When and where did you go?2. What did you do during the trip? 3. How did you feel about the trip?注意事项：1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Dear Lily,It was great to hear from you. _ The trip is ve
6、ry special to me. I want to travel there again.Yours,Zhang Fang范文77假设你是李华，去年你和你的好朋友去参观了北京，你的英国笔友Tom想了解这次活动。请你根据以下要点，给他以写一封信介绍这次活动。Where to goBeijingHow to arriveBy planeWhen to arriveAt 10: 00 in the morningWhat to doVisit Tianan men SquareEat delicious food; watch Beijing OperaGo shopping on Wangfu
7、jing Dajie补充一个活动谈及自己的感受要求：1.必须包括所给信息，词数70左右；2.紧扣要点，适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。_参考答案：1One possible version:An Exciting TripLast weekend, I went on a trip with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at my home. We went to Beihai Park by bus. On the way, we were so excited and we sang songs on the bu
8、s. When we got there, we went boating on the lake. We climbed mountains and had a picnic on the mountain. After that we took some photos. Then some girls danced under the tree and some boys played games happily. We got home at 4 oclock in the afternoon. We were tired but very happy. We really had a
9、great time.【解析】1. 题干解读：本题为材料作文。要求根据题目所给要点提示写一篇关于郊游的英语短文，文中所给要点必须全部包含，并可以适当加以拓展。2. 写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称；时态应用一般过去时；按照要点提示，准确表达，内容条理清楚，无句法错误；可适当运用连词或时间状语从句，使文章内容层次清晰。2例文My trip to SichuanThere are many interesting places in Sichuan. During this summer holiday, I went to Sichuan with my parents. It was a gr
10、eat trip. We visited some places of interest there. We visited Mount Emei, Jiuzhaigou, Leshan Buddhists and so on. They were very beautiful. The food in Sichuan is very spicy, but very delicious. Its different from ours. I like the trip very much.【解析】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照提示介绍四川之旅，包括名胜和食物等。注意要点表达无误。写作指
11、导：本文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时。可以一段介绍，采用固定句型There be结构，举例时注意短语的使用。3例文I went to Guilin with my family last week. We had a wonderful time there. We went there by train. We stayed for five days. We saw beautiful green hills, clean water and so on. We went boating in the Lijiang River. We visited some places of
12、 interest. Many people visit them every day. The food in Guilin is very delicious. People are also very friendly. Guilin is a very beautiful place. I hope to go there again one day.【解析】1.题干解析：这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇70字左右的英语短文，介绍去桂林旅游的经历和感受，要做到要点齐全，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：全文主要使用第一人称，时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时。可采用两段式写作，一段介绍去桂林旅游的经
13、历，另一段说明自己的感受，适当使用短语和句型，为文章增加亮点，同时要做到没有单词和语法错误。4参考范文：My Travel PlanI want to go on a trip this summer holiday. I plan to visit Hangzhou with my father and mother.We plan to go to Hangzhou on July 10th in the morning. We will go there by plane. We want to stay there for three days. The weather there i
14、s always sunny. So I plan to take a pair of sunglasses. I will also take a map and a camera. On the first day, we plan to visit the West Lake. I hope to take many beautiful pictures. On the second day, we would like to go shopping. On the third day, we will visit Leifeng Tower. I am sure we will hav
15、e a good time.【解析】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“My Travel Plan”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含目的地、出行方式、同行伙伴、天气状况、携带物品、旅行活动等内容。2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式：第一段：提出自己的旅行计划；第二段：从时间、交通方式、天气状况、携带物品、旅行活动等阐述自己具体的旅行计划；第三段：表达美好祝福。5One possible version:Dear Millie,How was your vacation? My parents and I went to Beijing for a
16、vacation last weekend. We had a good time there. On Saturday, we visited the Great Wall. We climbed it and saw beautiful scenery there. On Sunday morning, we went to the Summer Palace. We saw different kinds of flowers and a nice lake. It was so beautiful and it was just like an excellent painting.
17、On Sunday afternoon, we went to Wangfujing Street and bought some gifts for my grandparents there. And then we came back home by train. Yours, Song Gang【解析】1. 题干解读：本文要求以宋刚的身份给笔友Millie写一封电子邮件，介绍与父母去北京旅游的所见所闻，写作时提示要点要写全。2. 写作指导：本文采用一般过去时；主要以第一人称为主展开叙述；短文采用二段式：第一段说自己的与谁、去哪儿旅行；第二段叙述旅行的时间，所进行的活动及交通工具等，介绍
18、活动时要详细具体。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。6例文Dear Lily, It was great to hear from you. Last winter holiday, my friend Zhang Min asked me to her hometown. Her hometown is in Ermei, Sichuan. When I arrived at her home, her family had a big party to welcome me. The next day, Zhang Min and I climbed the mountains and
19、visited some small villages. The life there was so quiet that I fell in love with it at once. The kind villagers prepared a wonderful dinner for us. And we sang and danced with them. I was very happy about the trip.The trip is very special to me. I want to travel there again.Yours,Zhang Fang【解析】1.题干
20、解读：本文主要是讲述自己的一次特殊的旅行经历，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，文章开头和结尾已给出，第二段只需描述自己的旅行经历。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。7例文：Dear Tom,Last year, my good friend and I visited Beijing by plane. We arrived in Beijing at 10:00 in the morning. We visited Tianan men Square and the Forbidden City and so on. We watched Be
21、ijing Opera and ate Beijing roast duck. Beijing roast duck is so delicious. We also went shopping on Wangfujing Dajie. Finally, we climbed the Great Wall. The trip was very tired but happy.Yours,Li Hua【解析】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先介绍什么时候怎样去的北京，然后介绍在北京做了什么，最后介绍自己的感受，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍参观北京的活动时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
