1、成都市英语兴趣小组2014高考英书面表达系列训练（1）及参考范文【2014高考英语湖北省武昌区调研试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 As students in Senior Grade 3,we are under great pressure of the College Entrance Examination and quite often feel depressed However, if we are realistic about our abilities and do our best to achieve our goa
2、ls, we can always be happy in school 注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数120以上。【参考范文】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）Sample writing:How can we be happy under the great pressure of the College Entrance Examination? The answer lies in the fact that we can have an objective understanding of our abilities
3、 and set a reasonable goal. Furthermore, what really matters is that we have tried our best to achieve them.In junior middle school, I was one of the top ten students in my school. I was confident and happy. But things have changed since I started senior school. However hard I tried, I was unable to
4、 be listed on the top one hundred. I felt stressed and depressed. After thinking carefully, I painfully realized that I was not as smart as I imagined. To my comfort, I have always been doing my best and I have never wasted a single hour. What makes me proud is that all my hard work paid off at last
5、.In our life voyage, we cant change the direction of the wind, but we can adjust our sails to reach our destinations. Be realistic and hardworking, and we can always be happy enough to live through our hard school life.【厦门外国语学校高三英语月考】书面表达 （满分25分）一个英国中学生代表团将到你校参观和交流, 假设你有幸参加与他们的座谈会，请根据以下图示，写一篇120词左右的
6、发言稿，请你谈谈学校开展小组合作学习和自主学习的体会。来源:学_科_网帮助倾 听制定计划学习主人 个人见解安排时间独立思考考思考合作来源:学_科_网Z_X_X_K 注意：1.根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯； 2.开头和结尾已写出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 Good afternoon! Its my pleasure to briefly introduce my school life regarding two aspects, independent learning and cooperative learning._ Thank you! 【参考范文】On
7、e possible version:Good afternoon! Its my pleasure to briefly introduce my school life regarding two aspects, independent learning and cooperative learning.Independent learning is a basic principle of my school education.At one level it encourages us to work out plans and arrange our timetable, in w
8、hich case we improve our independent thinking and management skills. On another level, it presents us with a block of work in which we are developing strategies.Meanwhile, we are making great attempt to create a cooperative-learning environment, where we are encouraged to work in groups. Within grou
9、p work, we are guided to voice our individual opinions, listen to each other and respect each other.Independent learning and cooperative learning form a key feature of my school education and they prove to be a great benefit to our overall development in the long run.Thats all for my introduction. W
10、ere eager to know about your school life so that we could better learn from each other.Thank you. 【江苏省宿迁市高三上学期模拟】书面表达（满分25分）请根据下列表格的内容提示， 写一篇题为SAVE EARTH, SAVE US的公益广告解说词。污染的原因人类的生产和生活活动（请自行列举）污染类型1空气污染 2. 噪音污染 3.水污染造成后果1.物种减少 2.人类健康受损 3 .环境恶化建议措施(请自己列出若干条)注意：1. 词数：150左右；2内容要涵盖上面所列的几条。 【参考范文】SAVE EA
11、RTH, SAVE USWith the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour wast
12、e water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems.Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly,we should make laws to
13、prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise peoples awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. Only by working together can we help the environment!【2014高考英语湖北省襄阳市统
14、考试题】短文写作（共1题：满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 A goal can guide us in the right direction, so a life without a goal is just like a travelling ship without a compass注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为l20左右。短文写作：一、评分原则： 1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档
15、次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前提下侧重于语言的表达3词数少于100的，将分数降低一个档次。4评分时主要关注：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。5拼写与标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，但英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、书面表达各档次的划分及给分范围第五档（很好）：（2530分） 要点完整，表达清楚，无重大语法错误完全完成了试题规定的任务。 所有内容与提示吻合。 应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇运用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达，具备较强的语言运用能力。 恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。 完全达到
16、了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）：（1924分） 表达基本清楚，缺少个别要点，有些语法错误。完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达影响。-较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（1318分）尚能表达，缺少多个要点，语法错误较多。基本完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示比较吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。 基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写
17、作目的。第二档（较差）：（712分）表达含糊不清，不能成篇。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示基本吻合。 语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（16分）动了笔，仅罗列了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。未能完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示不太吻合语法结构单一，应用词汇项十分有限。 较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。 缺乏语法之间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息，内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均
18、与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【参考范文】One possible version:In order to succeed ,we should realize the importance of life goal Without a clear goal ,we will feel confused and lost while if a goal is set ,we may make a sensible schedule and confirm to it I was not aware what I wanted to chase until the discussion w
19、hat is My Chinese Dream was held in my class last term I used to believe that it made no difference whether I studied hard or not to our nation The fate of a country had nothing to do with the individual student Fortunately, because of the hot discussion from my classmates, I have transformed my min
20、d Now, Im conscious I have to devote all my passion to achieving my personal goal as well as to striving for the great revival of the motherlandWith the life goal set, we can achieve anything we want【福建省泉州市一中高三上学期期中】 书面表达（满分25分）阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。ETL International English Summer CampVolunteer Wante
21、dEIL was funded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“Learn to live together by living together”.Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12Activities; Language study, outdoor recreation and travelCampers; S
22、tudents from different countriesCamp site; Mount Wuyi, FujianTime: July 26-August 9Application deadline; July 15,2008If interested, please e-mail to infoeiuk.org写作内容假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下：1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右。Dear Sir, Im Li Hua from Fuji
23、an. I am looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir,Im Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only ch
24、ild like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation. I am looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours,
