1、第二节 高分作文技巧 一、雕琢词汇1选非常用词汇 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或短语，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。treasureattach great value to珍惜，珍视We should attach great value to the food produced by thefarmers.(2020高考全国卷书面表达)我们应当珍惜农民生产的粮食。as plannedas scheduled 按计划As scheduled,the music festival will be held on the playgroundfrom 5 pm.to 8 pm.next
2、 Sunday.(2019高考全国卷书面表达)按照计划，音乐节将在下周日下午5点到8点在操场上举行。2换单词为短语一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词却比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。所以我们应把单词与短语巧妙互用。variousa variety of各种各样的The training schedule,apart from regular training,includesjoining in a variety of activities,such as participating in somenational competitions.(201
3、8高考天津卷书面表达)训练计划除了常规训练外，还包括参加各种各样的活动，例如参加一些全国性的比赛。considertake.into consideration/account 考虑I would really appreciate it if you could take my applicationinto consideration.(2018高考浙江卷应用文写作)如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。3用高级词汇尽量用高级阶段学到的词代替低级阶段学到的词。lastlylast but not least最后但同样重要的是Last but not least,through my intr
4、oduction and efforts,IbelieveIcanstrengthenthefriendshipbetweenChinaandEngland.(2019高考全国卷书面表达)最后但同样重要的是，通过我的介绍和努力，我相信可以加强中英两国之间的友谊。andas well as不但而且And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspectiveas well as improve my spoken English.(2018高考浙江卷应用文写作)我很珍惜这个机会，因为它不仅可以开阔我的视野，还可以提高我的英语口语。二、
5、变换句式句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得髙分。精彩句式的合理使用会使文章增加亮点，提高档次。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让作文跨上五档线！(一)利用复合句和非谓语动词，提升文章档次1定语从句定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中，如果我们把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，都能为文章增加亮点。My father is a teacher(and he)who loves his work and hisstudents very much.(2020高考全国卷书
6、面表达)我父亲是一个热爱本职工作、爱戴学生的老师。2状语从句在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。If it is convenient(条件状语从句),may I pay you a visit atyour office next Tuesday to give you more details?(2020高考全国卷书面表达)如果方便的话，我可以在下周二去你的办公室告诉你更多细节吗？Now that youre asking our opinion about what we want tolisten to most(原因状语从句)，I feel muc
7、h honored to take thechance to make my voice heard.(2019高考天津卷书面表达)既然你征求我们的意见我们最想听哪方面内容，我感到不胜荣幸借此机会说出我的心里话。3名词性从句名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达方式。Besides,what you told me about your country(主语从句)broadenedmyhorizonsandarousedmyinterestinforeignculture.(2019高考浙江卷应用文写作)此外，你告诉我关于你的国家的情况扩大了我的视野，引
8、起了我对外国文化的兴趣。I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you.(宾语从句)(2018高考全国卷书面表达)我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。4非谓语动词恰当地运用非谓语动词，不仅能使句型多样、句子灵活多变，而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。Having written the English script,we dont want anythinginappropriate to spoil the play.(2020高考全国卷书面表达)英文稿已经写好，我们不想有任何不合适的东西毁掉剧本。First of all,having lived in
9、 China for sixteen years andhaving learnt English since I was a child,I have a good commandof English and Chinese,which is beneficial for introducing Chinesepaintings.(2019高考全国卷书面表达)首先，我在中国生活了16年，从小就学习英语，所以我的英语和汉语都掌握得很好，这对介绍中国绘画很有帮助。(二)利用特殊句式，彰显能力水平写作中，如果考生能够使用如强调句型、倒装句型等特殊句式，不仅能彰显考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。1
10、强调句型I do hope that you will have a bright future and that ourfriendship will last forever！(2019高考浙江卷应用文写作)我真心希望你有一个光明的未来，希望我们的友谊天长地久！It was his continuous efforts that caused China to changegradually.(高考北京卷书面表达)正是他的不懈努力使中国逐渐发生了变化。2倒装句So significant is the game that it is required that everyoneshould
11、 present themselves punctually.(2019高考全国卷书面表达)这场比赛意义重大，要求每个人都要准时到场。Only in this way can we students study happily andeffectively.(高考湖南卷书面表达)只有这样，我们学生才能快乐有效地学习。3省略句When arriving at the farm,we found there were all kinds ofanimals,green fresh vegetables and fruit trees on the farm.(2020高考全国卷书面表达)到达农场时
12、，我们发现农场里有各种各样的动物、绿色新鲜的蔬菜和果树。If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,which can help them know more about Chinese culture.(2019高考全国卷书面表达)如果被接受，我可以向游客介绍中国画的技巧，这可以帮助他们了解更多的中国文化。4虚拟语气Additionally,without your help,I would not have been atop student in English and would not have wo
13、n the English SpeechContest.(2019高考浙江卷应用文写作)此外，如果没有你的帮助，我就不会是一个英语尖子生，也不会赢得英语演讲比赛。Should you accept my application,I would spare no effort tocommit myself to your satisfaction.(2018高考浙江卷应用文写作)如果您接受我的申请，本人将竭尽所能，为您服务，以报厚望。5with复合结构In the end,we took a group photo,with cups in our hands,torecord this un
14、forgettable experience.(2018高考北京卷书面表达)最后，我们端着杯子拍了一张合影，记录下了这段难忘的经历。6it句型Id appreciate it if you offer to give some professional advice.(it作形式宾语)(2020高考全国卷书面表达)如果你提供一些专业性的建议我将不胜感激。三、巧用过渡词汇过渡词汇就像纽带一样把文章紧紧连接起来，更像润滑剂，使文章衔接流畅。1文章或段落起始常用的过渡词语to begin with(首先)，first of all(第一，首先)，in the firstplace(首先)，as yo
15、u know(如你所知)，as is known to all(众所周知)，as is shown in(正如在显示的那样)2文章或段落结尾常用的过渡词语therefore/thus(因此)，in conclusion(总之，最后)，in brief(简言之)，to sum up(总而言之)，in a word(总之)，generallyspeaking(总体上讲)，on the whole(总的说来)3常用的表示先后次序的过渡词语first(第一)，second(第二)，next(其次，然后)，last but notleast(最后但同样重要的是)，after that(之后)，event
16、ually/finally(最后，最终)，since then(从那以后)，afterwards(以后，后来)，meanwhile(同时)，immediately(立刻)名师指津 适用于两点的情况：On the one hand,on theother hand;for one thing,for another(thing)适用于三点或以上的情况：to begin with,then,furthermore,finally;to start with,next,in addition,last but not least;mostimportantly,moreover4常用的表示因果关系的
17、过渡词语accordingly/consequently(因此，所以)，for this reason(由于这个原因),as a result(of)(作为的结果)，in this way(这样)，due to/thanks to(由于),therefore/thus(因此),because of(由于)5常用的表示比较和对比的过渡词语in contrast with/in comparison with(与相比),similarly(同样),on the contrary(相反),different from(与不同),on theother hand(另一方面)6常用的表示举例的过渡词语a
18、 case in point(恰当的例子),that is to say(也就是说),forinstance/example(例如)7常用的表示强调的过渡词语furthermore/moreover(而且),besides(此外),actually/in fact(实际上),also(而且，也),indeed(的确)，in particular(尤其，特别),naturally(当然),hopefully(有希望地).按要求升级下面作文假定你是李华，上周参加了美国朋友David的生日聚会。请你写封感谢信，表达你对聚会的喜爱和对David的祝福。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使
19、行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David，Yours,Li Hua学生习作Dear David，Im writing to express my grateful feeling for your invitation.Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party last week.Itbrought me lots of entertainment.During the party,I think what impressed me most was your happy family.Both your pare
20、nts were enthusiastic about me.I enjoyed it because it made me feel at home.And the dessert and other snacks you offered me were tasty.Besides,the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere.On account of that I was able to open my heart to your other friendly and active friends
21、like brothers and sisters.Thanksagainforyourdinner.Andtheunforgettableexperience will be stored in my mind forever.Yours,Li Hua升级方案1将文中加黑词汇升级grateful feelingI thinkenjoyedBesidesa niceappreciationin my opinionwas fond ofIn additionan excellent2将文中加黑句式升级用定语从句合并句和句用强调句型改写句Thank you for inviting me to
22、your birthday party last week,whichbrought me lots of entertainment.It is on account of that that I was able to open my heart to your otherfriendly and active friends like brothers and sisters.阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空in my opinion，recently，worse still，on the one hand，on theother hand，howevermany schools
23、 have taken tough measures to forbidstudents to bring their mobile phones to school.,somestudents break this rule and some even play with their mobile phonesin class.RecentlyHoweverThe disadvantages of students bringing mobile phones to school are obvious.,mobile phones can distract students attenti
24、on.,some students may get access to some unhealthy websites,which are bad for their development.,some students are likely to compare the brands of their mobile phones with their classmates.On the one handOn the other handWorse still,I strongly support banning mobile phones in schools.Only in this way can we devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.In my opinion
