1、第3讲 应用文(三)(通知&演讲稿)【典例】(2018全国卷)技法探究素养提升【要点盘点】1.第一段点题:你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大 家观看一部英文短片Recently,an outstanding movie _in our campus.Welcome to _!2.第二段主体段落展开:短片内容;放映时间、地点;欢迎对短片提出意 见短片内容:学校的发展The movie is about _.will be shownjoin us and enjoy itthe development of our school放映时间、地点It _in the library
2、 on June 9th.欢迎对短片提出意见Every one of you will _take part in it and give your own comments.3.第三段表达期望I have the confidence that you will _then.will be shownbe welcome tohave a great time【我来升级】1.句通过增加定语从句来拓展要点The name of the movie is Growing Together,_.2.句通过增加具体时间和地点拓展要点_3.句用非谓语动词作状语升级句式_which is about t
3、he development ofour beloved schoolIt will be shown on the fourth floor of the school library from 2:00 to 4:00 inthe afternoon on June 9th.Every one of you will be welcome to take part in it,having a heated discussionafterwards and giving your own comments.【五档满分范文】NOTICE Recently,an outstanding mov
4、ie will be shown in our campus.Welcome tojoin us and enjoy it!Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with,the name of the movie is Growing Together,which is aboutthe development of our beloved school.It is believed that the movie will be notonly meaningful but also interesting.Besides,plea
5、se note that it will be shown onthe fourth floor of the school library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June9th.Whats more,every one of you will be welcome to take part in it,enjoying themovie,having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully,you would make it to our
6、activity.I have the confidence that youwill have a great time then.The Students UnionApril 20th,2019【阅卷老师点评】1.该题目写作时容易犯的错误:(1)不问西东,抬笔就写。不注意是口头通知还是书面通知的格式和表达习惯。(2)无适当内容拓展。通知要点不具体,内容不清晰,不知道具体在什么地方,什么时间开始,什么时间结束,具体的活动项目与安排是什么。2.该范文运用了多个高级词汇和复杂句式,以及各种过渡词语,表现出作者扎实的语言功底和灵活的语言运用能力。如:relevant details,to beg
7、in with,beloved school,which引导的非限制性定语从句,not only.but also.,whats more,hopefully等【技法点金】1.通知和演讲稿的写作结构 段落通知演讲稿第一段开门见山,引起注意自我介绍并表明发言稿的主题第二段陈述通知的主要内容讲述演讲的内容第三段要求参加及注意事项,提出期望总结演讲并致谢2.通知写作注意事项(1)口头通知要注意以下几点:要有称呼用语。例如:在正式场合用的Ladies and gentlemen,对学生用的Boys and girls等。要有开头语。常用的开头语有:口头通知:Ladies and gentlemen,m
8、ay I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.Attention,please.I have something important to tell you.书面通知:There will be a meeting to be held in Room 25 of Building 3 at 7:00 on the evening of June 6.The Students Union has decided that.时态问题。口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动,因此要以一般将来时为主。人称问题。口头通知常用第
9、二人称表示被通知的对象。要有结束语。常用的结束语有:Thats all.Thank you.Any questions?Does everyone understand?(2)书面通知具有以下特点:书面通知的正文上面的正中有NOTICE或ANNOUNCEMENT标志。在正文最后的右下角要写上发通知的单位或组织者的姓名。在左下角写上发出通知的日期。3.演讲稿写作注意事项(1)论题:由于演讲的时间限制,必须开门见山,提出论题。提出论题的方法各种各样,但最生动、最能引起注意的是用举例法。另外,用具体的统计数据也是一个有效的引出论题的方法。(2)论证:对提出的论题,不可主观地妄下结论,而要进行客观的论
10、证,把道理讲清楚。常见的论证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等。(3)结论:结论要简明扼要,以给听众留下深刻印象。Passage 1 (2020湖州三模)假定你是某某中学国际部的学生会主席李华,受英语老师委托为国际部的留学生写一则通知,告知他们受新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情的影响,学校延期开学。要点如下:新题精练素养应用1.严禁学生假期到校;2.远程教育、在线心理辅导;3.如有调整,另行通知。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_ _【参考范文】NOTICEPrevention and control of COVID-19 is the top priority at pres
11、ent.According to the announcement of Ministry of Education,the new term opening date will be postponed.Maybe after March 2nd.Before that,students are not allowed to go to school.Everyone is required to work out regularly and keep healthy.Online education,including online psychological guidance,will
12、be provided during our absence from school.Please take it seriously.If there is any change,we will keep you informed ahead of time.The Students UnionFeb.21st,2020Passage 2 假如你是高三学生李华,请写一篇演讲稿,准备代表全体学生在毕业典礼上发言,内容要点如下:1.毕业的心情;2.高中三年的收获;3.感谢和决心。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。Good mo
13、rning,everyone._ _ _ _ Thank you for your listening.【参考范文】Good morning,everyone.Im Li Hua.Its my great honor to stand here to deliver my speech.It has been three years since I started my high school.At this moment,I can not bear to part but I am also eager for my new life in university.During the th
14、ree years,not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me,but also I have gained various knowledge.Before leaving,Id like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers.It was they who patiently answered our endless questions.Besides,I owe many thanks to my dear classmates.Without their help and encouragement,I couldnt have overcome so many difficulties.Now Ive been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I will live up to the expectations of my teachers and my parents.Thank you for your listening.
