1、Unit 3 CELEBRATIONS Lesson 4 WRIGHTING WORKSHOPS 目标导航如何写叙述性的作文写作技巧旅游景点介绍属于描述性的说明文,在写作时要注意以下几点:1.确定阅读对象:旅游景点介绍。2.选准描写角度:根据写作需要确定用第一人称还是第三人称进行描写。因为不同的人称会影响写作内容的选择和写作目的的定位,如第一人称有助于增加描写的真实感。3.用好描写次序:描写景观时把握从整体概述到细节刻画的方法,灵活使用定点描写(同一角度描写多个景观)和定景描写(景观不变,更换观察角度)的手法。4.突出语言特色:以描写为主要写作手法,对景物进行介绍,并适当抒发个人感情。为此在写
2、作中要根据内容提示,筛选可能用到的描述该景点的形容词,同时既要恰当、灵活地运用词汇,又要避免同一词汇的单调重复。5.把握文章时态:文章的时态通常采用一般现在时,用于强调客观事实。写作步骤首段:简要介绍景点。正文:详细介绍景点,以举例方法为主。结尾:概括要点。常用表达描写位置.lie in/on/to the east/west/north/south of.Located in.covers an area of.Situated in.is paradise for.is located/situated in/to/on.,covering an area of.描写名气.has beco
3、me the most popular tourist attraction for.be known/famous for/as.描写人口和天气It has a population of.with a history of.The weather here gets neither too cold nor too hot all the year around.描写景色If you come to.for a visit, you will have a chance to enjoy.A trip to . will give you a glimpse of the happy li
4、festyle of.,known as.,attracts visitors from all over the world. A walk around.is a feast for your eyes.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Linda 今年暑假要来你所在的城市杭州旅游。请根据以下提示,给她写一封电子郎件,介绍一下杭州的基本情况。1.地理位置:中国的东南部,面临东海;2.名胜之地:西湖;3.休闲:划船,漫步,在草坪上野餐;4.变化:高楼大厦。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:草坪 lawnDear Lin
5、da,I am very glad to know that you will come to my city-Hangzhou this summer vacation. Now Im writing to tell you something about it. _ Yours,Li Hua思路导引本文是介绍景点的说明文,也属于应用文中的电子邮件,既要介绍景点,也要兼顾电子邮件的特点。写作之间,理清思路,列出要点(杭州地理位置、名胜、休闲、变化),再根据下列写作顺序,完成写作任务。首段:引出话题。正文:详细介绍景点。尾段:表达期盼之情。【参考答案】Dear Linda,I am very
6、glad to know that you will come to my city-Hangzhou this summer vacation. Now Im writing to tell you something about it.Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China, facing the East China Sea. It is most famous for the beautiful West Lake, which has a long history with a beautiful love story. During holi
7、days or on weekends, people like going boating on the lake, walking in the woods or sitting on the lawn to have a picnic. Great changes have taken place in Hangzhou during the past few years, with plenty of tall buildings going up. The landscape is so striking that lots of tourists from at home and abroad come to visit it every year.Looking forward to you visiting Hangzhou soon.Yours,Li Hua
