1、Section Guided Writing文体指导人物介绍是高考书面表达常见的形式之一，以简单介绍人物的生平为主，这种简短的人物传记内容是人物生平最基本的信息和最重要的事迹。一般包括下列内容：1人物的基本信息如：生卒年月、出生地、国籍、职业、家庭背景等；2人物的重要事迹(举例说明)；3人物及其事迹对社会的贡献或影响；4对人物的评价。亮点句式1年龄He was born in 1996 and is 23 years old now.Born in 1996，he is now a 23yearold student，studying in a university.He began to m
2、ake a living at an early age.In his fifties，he began to feel his age.2外貌特征She is a lovely girl，with big eyes，white teeth and long hair.He is a handsome man，with a thick moustache.He is a tall man，with blue/bright eyes and blond/brown hair.3家庭背景、教育状况He was born into a poor/rich family and lived a har
3、d/happy life.He started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.He went to study in Peking University in 2004 and graduated 4 years later.He got his bachelors/masters/doctors degree in mathematics from.4生平事迹He devoted his lifetime to.He won a prize in.He made up his mind to.He made great progr
4、ess in.5对人物的评价He is one of the most outstanding persons.He is honored/regarded/considered as.He has made great contributions to.He sets an example to.请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。11911年生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉；21938年在美国获航空、数学博士学位；31950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国；41958年起长期担任
5、航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”；52009年于北京去世。注意：词数100左右。参考词汇：航天航空科学技术aerospace science and technology第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为人物介绍；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：介绍已故人物的时态应以一般过去时为主。二、构思1介绍钱学森的个人生平；2介绍钱学森的经历、事迹和成就；3对钱学森的评价。第二步：核心词汇想周全1be regarded as被认为是2further study 进修；深造3think highly of 高度评价4obtain
6、 doctors degree 获得博士学位5be devoted to 献身于6pass away 去世7contribution 贡献8respect 尊敬第三步：由词扩句雏形现1他1911年生于上海。He was born in 1911 in Shanghai21935年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门的赞誉。In 1935，Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements.31938年在美国获航空
7、、数学博士学位。In 1938，he obtained his doctors degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.41950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国。In 1950，he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him.第四步：句势升级造亮点用定语从句合并2
8、、3In 1935，Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements，who obtained his doctors degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US in 1938.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇_【参考范文】Qian Xuesen，regarded as the father of Chinas space program，was born in 1
9、911 in Shanghai.In 1935，Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements，who obtained his doctors degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US in 1938.In 1950，he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to
10、his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him.Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and contributed a lot to the cause of Chinas aerospace and in 2009，he passed away in Beijing.Because of the love for his country and the great achievements，he has received the respect and admiration from his people.
