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1、读后续写07:友情类Part1:经典例文(朋友和解)1Part2:友情类故事构造“三步法”4第一步:友情出现危机或困难(故事冲突)4第二步:友情弥补(解释、认错、弥补)5第三步:友情升华(懂得珍惜)6Part3:灵活应用6例1:三位好朋友与读书俱乐部6例2:陌生地方的新友情9例3:结识到新朋友12例4:我们的友谊14Part1:经典例文(朋友和解)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。“Want to go to the pool tomorrow?” Rosa asked Stephanie during recess. T

2、he pool at the YMCA was one of their favorite places, where they learnt and practiced swimming.Rosa and Stephanie did everything together. They rode the school bus together. They sat together during lunch. They took dance lessons together and they even went to the same summer camp. Their classmates

3、called them “twins”. They were best friends. Most of the time.Sometimes, though, when Stephanie was with other friends, she ignored Rosa or treated her like a little kid, even though they were the same age. Rosa and Stephanie had played together since they were babies, but sometimes Stephanie didnt

4、act like a friend.Today was one of those times.“Sorry. Im already going to the pool,” Stephanie said. “Toni and Vanessa and I are going.” She gave a broad smile, but in Rosas eyes, it wasnt her nice smile. Saying nothing more, she walked straight away to join Toni and Vanessa, and Rosa was left stan

5、ding alone, with her face burned and an angry tension coming into her limbs.After school, at dance class, Stephanie talked and giggled with the other dancers as they stretched in front of the mirror. When Rosa came in, Stephanie didnt say hello to her, but just another smile. Rosa hesitated for a wh

6、ile about whether she should join them, but she still felt too upset.Then she noticed Kiara, the new girl. Rosa joined her and began stretching, too. Kiara smiled and Rosa smiled back. The two girls began to talk. Rosa discovered that Kiara was not the quiet girl she had thought she was. Kiara talke

7、d a lot about her little brother, about the tree house her uncle had built and even about swimming. “I love swimming,” Kiara said. “I will hold a pool part at the YMCA.Would you like to come?” “Yes. Its awesome.” Rosa responded. She tried not to check the mirror to see if Stephanie had noticed. She

8、hoped Stephanie felt left out.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After the dance class, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat._When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank._【答案】After the dance lesson, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in th

9、eir usual seat. Seeing Rosa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her. But Rosa walked past and slid into the empty seat next to Kiara. They were talking about the pool party when Stephanie went over. “Do you still want to go swimming tonight?” Stephanie asked. “Im alre

10、ady going,” she said without looking up. “Kiara and I are going together.” Rosa smiled. Stephanie nodded and looked at her feet.舞蹈课结束后,罗莎上车时,斯蒂芬妮在他们通常的座位上等着。看到罗莎,斯蒂芬妮迅速把背包从座位上移下来,为她腾出空间。但罗莎走了过去,滑进了基亚拉旁边的空座位上。当斯蒂芬妮过去的时候,他们正在谈论泳池派对。“你今晚还想去游泳吗?”斯蒂芬妮问。“我已经要走了,”她没有抬起头来地说。“基亚拉和我要一起去了。”罗莎笑着说。斯蒂芬妮点了点头,看着她的脚

11、。When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank. Getting even didnt feel the way she had expected. She could walk away with her new friend and not look back. But when she saw Stephanies watery eyes, her heart beat painfully. Maybe we could all go together.” Rosa said. Stephanies face lit up.

12、 “Im sorry for ignoring you. Thank you for your tolerance.” Stephanie said. Rosa gave her a hug and said, “I was too sensitive. Thank you for your tolerance, too.” The two girls smiled at each other, which was their nice smile.罗莎看到斯蒂芬妮情绪低落,心沉了。甚至没有像她预期的那样感觉到。她可以和她的新朋友一起走开,而不是回头看。但当她看到斯蒂芬妮流泪时,她的心痛苦地跳

13、动着。“也许我们都可以一起去。”罗莎说。斯蒂芬妮的脸亮了起来。“我很抱歉忽视了你。谢谢你的宽容。”斯蒂芬妮说。罗莎给了她一个拥抱,并对她说:“我太敏感了。也感谢你的宽容。两个女孩互相微笑,这是她们美好的微笑。【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Rosa和Stephanie是从小到大的好朋友,但有时Stephanie表现得不像朋友,有一天Rosa问Stephanie要不要一起去基督教青年会的游泳池游泳,Stephanie说她去过了就不去了,这让Rosa很尴尬;之后在舞蹈课上Rosa结识了新来的女孩Kiara,Rosa邀请Kiara一起去游泳,想以此来报复Stephanie。【详解】1.段落续写:

14、由第一段首句内容“舞蹈课结束后,Rosa登上公共汽车时,Stephanie正在她们平常的座位上等着。”可知,第一段可描写Stephanie为Rosa腾位置,但Rosa并未坐在Stephanie身旁,而是与Kiara坐在了一起,Stephanie问Rosa还去不去游泳,Rosa说她和Kiara一起去,Stephanie很失落。由第二段首句内容“当Rosa看到Stephanie情绪低落时,她的心一沉。”可知,第二段可描写看到失落的Stephanie,Rosa并没有报复的快感,Rosa邀请Stephanie一起去游泳,最后两个女孩和解,露出美丽的笑容。2.续写线索:座位问话失落释然和好笑容3.词汇激

15、活行为类迅速移开背包:quickly moved her backpack off / swiftly moved her backpack off走过去:went over / walked over不回头:not look back / not turn her head情绪类心跳得很痛苦:beat painfully / beat bitterly露出喜色:lit up / brightened up【点睛】高分句型1. Seeing Rosa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her.

16、(用了现在分词短语作状语)高分句型2. The two girls smiled at each other, which was their nice smile.(用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)Part2:友情类故事构造“三步法”第一步:友情出现危机或困难(故事冲突)1、内疚1. Overwhelmed by guilt(充满内疚), Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”(2020.12山水联盟)2. Murm

17、uring in a low voice(小声地低语), he dodged Asads shining eyes, somehow even not daring to look into them. (2020.12山水联盟)3. She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart(感觉内疚在她心里燃烧). (2021潍坊一模)4. Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty(开始感到内疚). (广东省高三年级上学期调研考试)2、困难与帮助1. Not knowing wha

18、t to do(不知道该做什么) , he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen. (2020.12山水联盟)2. “The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy(用善意和同情对待她).”(广东省高三年级上学期调研考试)3. When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashleys eyes(眼泪

19、都流出来了).(广东省高三年级上学期调研考试)3、破裂1. Because these were the people I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologized. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further(我不再继续这份友谊的决定). We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted

20、 to give the last try.(2021潍坊一模)2. During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other(有意避开彼此). However, I couldnt help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same. 10.(2021潍坊一模)第二步:友情弥补(解释、认错、弥补)1、原谅/和好1. Blushed, she broke the silence(打破沉默), “I am sorry again. I didnt mean to hurt

21、you.” Tears streaming down, she continued, “I should have talked to you earlier.” I stood up and reached out to hug her(伸出手拥抱她), “I am sorry, too. I should have been more generous.” (2021潍坊一模)2. But deep down, we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual(帮助

22、我们成长为更好的个体)instead of enemies.(2021潍坊一模)3. Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive(足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅). (2021潍坊一模)2、开心描写1. 得知我们将有一个晚餐,我非常激动。(浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试)Im thrilled to know that well have dinner together. 2.他非常激动,露齿而笑。(浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试)Excitement crept over his hear

23、t and made him grin from ear to ear. 3. 这顿饭使我激动不已。想象一下我们将在机场畅饮。(浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试)Im buzzing for the dinner. Imagine, were going to drink freely at the airport. 第三步:友情升华(懂得珍惜)1. It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly reckoned the value of sincerity and

24、 honesty(明白真诚和诚实的价值) in a relationship.(2020.12山水联盟)2. So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, “Luke, that was such a wonderful thing you did for me(那是你为我做的最美妙的事情) . Thank you.”(浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试)3. 一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。(浙江省绍兴市高三11月诊断性考试)It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten t

25、housand relatives.4. If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship(愿意保持和培养这段关系).(2021潍坊一模)Part3:灵活应用例1:三位好朋友与读书俱乐部It was lunchtime, Jerry, David, Tom, and I went to the dining hall to have lunch. I glanced a

26、cross the busy cafeteria and saw the new student, Jack. He was holding his plate and waiting in lines.David noticed him too. “Whys the new kid dressed like the headmaster?” he asked. Tom and Jimmy laughed.“Jacks cool. Hes in my English and history classes,” I said. However, I kept the truth that Jac

27、k and I had become friends when we worked on a project together. We discovered that we were both enthusiastic readers something I would never admit to Jerry, David, Tom.I saw that Jack was walking toward us. “Dont do it,” I thought, but in seconds he was at our table. My friends raised their eyebrow

28、s. Jerry, David, Tom piled their backpacks on the table and chairs so that there was no space left for another person to sit down. David said. “I dont think we have room.”This awkward situation froze the air. I could feel Jack looking at me, but I stared at my lunch as if it contained precious pearl

29、s of wisdom instead of rice and beans. After a long, uncomfortable pause, Jack left. I should have spoken up for him, but I couldnt walk away from my three friends, could I?Jack didnt speak to me after that meeting. He was soon hanging around with another group of kids. A few months later, I saw an

30、announcement about Jack being chosen to be president of the school book club. I was happy for Jacks achievements, but I realized I had made a big mistake when I said nothing at the lunch table that day. Why was I so afraid that my friends might find out that I like to read?As I stared at the announc

31、ement. I knew I needed to apologize to Jack even if he did not want to become my friend again. I thought that my three friends would not agree. I also thought that I risked losing them as well. However, I knew that I would lose myself if I did nothing.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the di

32、smissal bell rang, I gathered up my books, took a deep breath, and went to find Jack._Jack nodded, and then mentioned my three Mends._【答案】As the dismissal bell rang, I gathered up my books, took a deep breath, and went to find Jack. A wave of uncertainty overwhelmed me. On the way to Jacks classroom

33、. I felt several butterflies still fluttering in my heart. However, urged by the strong desire to be a member of the reading club, I quickened my paces spontaneously. The classroom door opened. Here came Jack. Looking into his eyes, I made an apology, explaining that I wanted to join the school book

34、 club.解雇铃响了,我收拾起书,深吸了一口气,去找杰克。一波不确定性淹没了我。在去杰克的教室的路上。我感到很不安。然而,在渴望成为阅读俱乐部成员的强烈愿望下,我自发地加快了步伐。教室的门开了。杰克来了。看着他的眼睛,我道歉了一下,解释说我想加入学校的读书俱乐部。Jack nodded and then mentioned my three friends. With hesitation, I had no idea how to answer him. Seeing through my mind, Jack smiled and put forward a good idea. The

35、 next day, we were having lunch when Jack approached, holding a notice to recruit new members, saying that if someone wanted to join the club, he must take three other students to form a group. To my surprise, my friends were also interested in the book club. In a flash, Jack and I beamed to each ot

36、her.杰克点了点头,然后提到了我的三个朋友。我犹豫着,不知道该怎么回答他。透过我的脑海,杰克笑了笑,提出了一个好主意。第二天,我们在吃午饭时,杰克走过来,发出了招募新成员的通知,说如果有人想加入俱乐部,他必须带其他三个学生组成一个小组。令我惊讶的是,我的朋友们也对这个读书俱乐部很感兴趣。一瞬间,杰克和我互相笑了起来。【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和Jerry, David, Tom是好朋友,但是向他们隐瞒了和Jack在读书俱乐部成为了朋友的事情,某天中午Jack想要和他们坐在一起,但是被其他三个朋友粗鲁地拒绝了,作者也没有为Jack说话,之后Jack也没跟作者说话,作者意识到自己犯

37、了错,需要向Jack道歉。最后作者鼓起勇气和Jack道了歉,取得了原谅,最后发现其他三个朋友也对读书俱乐部感兴趣。【详解】1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“下课铃声响了,我收拾好课本,深吸一口气,去找杰克。”可知,第一段可描写作者去找杰克道歉时的心理活动,以及诉说想参加学校的读书俱乐部的愿望。由第二段首句内容“杰克点点头,然后提到了我的三个朋友”可知,第二段可描写杰克想到邀请作者其他三个朋友加入读书俱乐部的办法,解决了作者的困境,三个朋友也对俱乐部感兴趣。2.续写线索:找杰克感到不安道歉杰克邀请另外三个人加入俱乐部另外三个朋友也感兴趣3.词汇激活行为类走向:go to/ on the way t

38、o/ approach/ walk toward提出:put forward/ come up with道歉:make an apology / apologize情绪类惊讶:to ones surprise / surprised感兴趣:be interested in / show interest in【点睛】高分句型1 Looking into his eyes, I made an apology, explaining that I wanted to join the school book club. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句)高分句型2 The next

39、day, we were having lunch when Jack approached, holding a notice to recruit new members, saying that if someone wanted to join the club, he must take three other students to form a group. (运用了sb. be doing sth. when句型)例2:陌生地方的新友情Lily was cleaning windows, and it was what she must do for her familys n

40、ew Chinese restaurant. Everything had to be absolutely perfect: unique decorations, skillful employees, and delicious traditional food. Then customers would love the place, making the business a success.Lilys family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was

41、opened yesterday. She was new in the neighbor and had few friends. The first few days at her new school hadnt been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didnt know and it seemed like the students hadnt even noticed her. She was eager for a friendship, though.Lily shifted her vision t

42、o look outside the restaurant as a girl about her age, with abundant red hair, walked up the street. The girl paused to study the sign announcing their opening and then looked directly at Lily with a friendly smile. Lily smiled back shyly and lifted a hand, accidentally waving with the cleaning clot

43、h. The girl smiled at her amusement and waved back happily.Lily hesitated, not accustomed to starting friendship, but she felt courageous, so she opened the door. Hello, she said, adding the first thing that entered her head, “do you like Chinese food?”“I dont know, but I like to try new things, the

44、 girl remarked, and then she introduced herself as Gabriela.Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea._The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard an unexpected knock. _【答案】Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a s

45、udden idea. She ran into the kitchen and came back with a small package. “Some Chinese candy for you to try,” she explained. “If you enjoy it, I hope youll return and tell me.”“Excellent, Ill see you around soon.” Gabriela headed down the street, glancing back with a cheerful wave. Lily spent the re

46、maining afternoon hoping Gabriela really would return and not think Lilys gift was strange.莉莉突然有了一个想法,才想出再进行多的谈话。她跑进厨房,带着一个小包裹回来了。“一些中国糖果让你试试,”她解释说。“如果你喜欢,我希望你能回来告诉我。”“很好,我很快就会见到你。”加布里埃拉沿着街上走去,愉快地挥手回头看了一眼。莉莉花了剩下的下午,希望加布里埃拉真的会回来,而不会觉得莉莉的礼物很奇怪。The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine w

47、hen she heard unexpected knocking. It was Gabriela with a plate covered with plastic wrap. Lily grinned with enthusiasm and opened the door with an excited greeting.Gabriela presented the plate and said, “I brought biscuits made from my grandmothers recipe to thank you for the delicious candy.”“Come

48、 in, and we can have some biscuits right now,” Lily stammered, happy inside.Lily was now positive that the restaurant would make a wondrous impression on the customers and that she was going to enjoy life here immensely.第二天,莉莉在餐厅做例行公事时,她听到了意想不到的敲门声。那是加布里埃拉和一个覆盖着塑料包裹的盘子。莉莉热情地咧嘴一笑,兴奋地打招呼,打开了门。加布里埃拉递给盘

49、子说:“我带了祖母食谱做的饼干,谢谢你提供的美味糖果。“进来,我们现在可以吃点饼干了,”莉莉结结巴巴地说,里面很开心。莉莉现在肯定,这家餐厅会给顾客留下深刻的印象,她将非常享受这里的生活。【解析】【分析】续写应该围绕“陌生地的新友情”这一主题展开,需要充分挖掘文本中提供的信息,如中国餐馆、文化背景、Lily个性特点等,把握主人公情感的需求和变化。一次偶然的邂逅通过何种方式发展成为二次见面,由此带给女主人公什么样的感受,这是续写的落脚点。续写部分需要对话的支撑,但更需注重表情神态、心理活动等描写。【详解】1.段落续写:第一段首句内容“直到她突然有了个主意,Lily才想出其他的谈话。”可知,第一段

50、可描写Lily想办法与Gabriela建立谈话的过程。由第二段首句内容“第二天,Lily正在餐馆里做她的例行公事时,突然听到一阵意外的敲门声。”可知,第二段可描写Gabriela再一次来访的目的,Lily成功地交到了朋友,且心理得到了满足和宽慰。2.续写线索:取饼干赠送盼望、等待反馈礼物感悟3.词汇激活行为类取饼干:run into/rush into the kitchen等待回应:spend the remaining afternoon doing/wait for the reply anxiously情绪类积极:be positive/hold a positive attitude

51、 towards高兴:grinned with enthusiasm/be enthusiastic about her return【点睛】高分句型1. Gabriela headed down the street, glancing back with a cheerful wave.(现在分词作伴随状语)高分句型2. The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard unexpected knocking.(when引导的时间状语从句)例3:结识到新朋友阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头

52、语续写两段, 使之构成 一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。“Now, parents and students separate into two groups. You will be reunited at the end of the campus tour. ”Groups of incoming freshmen happily left their parents upon hearing this announcement. I was less than thrilled about starting college, let alone leaving my mot

53、hers side to tour the campus with other freshmen;I felt a little anxious.We followed the senior tour guide. The other freshmen chatted and made casual introductions as I dragged behind. How could I have believed I was ready for this ? After all, it had only been a few months since I left the hospita

54、l. I was feeling better for the first time in years. But college. . . ?My thinking was interrupted by a sweet female voice, Hi, Im Jennifer. Im Lauren, I replied. Where do you prefer to live? At home or on campus? she smiled. Im not sure, I said. You should live on campus!It will be a lot of fun! sh

55、e said. Before I could reply, the tour guide announced it was time to create our schedules and select the courses we wanted to take.We crowded into the Student Activity Center. Three seniors handed out thick course bulletins (课程公告)and forms that needed to be filled out. All around me, the sounds of

56、turning papers and writing sounded like those given by an alarm clock. Others seemed to be moving through the process quickly but I hadnt even opened my course catalog (目 录).Focus, I told myself. Just read through the catalog and find the courses you like and a schedule that works. Psychology A or B

57、, Geology 101, English, History, sections 1, 2, 3. . . The list went on and on.I panicked and almost started to cry. How was I supposed to know how to complete it?I was just relearning how to live in the real world, and they wanted me to make a schedule. How I wished someone could help me.Paragraph

58、1:Soon, other freshmen were handing in their forms._Paragraph 2:Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder._【答案】Paragraph 1:Soon, other freshmen were handing in their forms. Many of them rushed out to meet their parents. I couldnt breathe and was feeling anxious. My head was pounding. Moments later, I

59、was crying. And several students started to stare at me. One of the seniors in charge walked over to my table. “Whats the matter?” she asked impatiently. “I. I cant do this!” I said. “All you have to do is make your schedule, just like everybody else,” she said, clearly annoyed.很快,其他的新生也交出了他们的表格。他们中

60、的许多人冲出去去见他们的父母。我无法呼吸,感到焦虑。我的头砰砰作响。过了一会儿,我哭了。有几个学生开始盯着我看。其中一位负责我的老人走到我的桌子旁。“怎么了?”她不耐烦地地问。“I.我不能这样做!”我说。“你所要做的就是像其他人一样安排日程安排,”她说,显然很恼火。Paragraph 2:Then, I felt a warm hand on my shoulder. I looked back and found Jennifer standing behind me. “Everything is alright,” she told the senior. “Ill help her.”

61、 The senior walked away. “Whats wrong, sweetie?” Jennifer asked. Hearing Jennifers kind words, I cried even harder, saying, “Its just too much!” Then Jennifer put her arm around me and said, “Let me instruct you.” She then guided me through the process step by step until I completed my schedule. Lat

62、er, when saying goodbye, we made a promise to keep in touch.然后,我感到一只温暖的手放在我的肩上。我回头一看,发现詹妮弗站在我身后。“一切都很好,”她告诉大四学生。“我会帮她的。那位老人走开了。“怎么了,亲爱的?”詹妮弗问。听到詹妮弗的好话,我哭得更厉害,说:“太多了!”然后詹妮弗搂住我说:“让我告诉你。”然后她一步一步地引导我完成这个过程,直到我完成日程安排。后来,当我们说再见时,我们承诺要保持联系。【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,本文讲述了作者的大学校园之旅,作者对开始上大学一点也不兴奋,更不用说校园

63、之旅了,作者开始感到焦虑;途中,作者认识了珍妮弗,还没来得及和她说很多话,校园导游宣布开始选课,作者惊慌失措,几乎哭了起来,她很希望有个人能帮助她。【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:很快,其他新生都在交表格,本段应该描述作者反应,作者感到焦虑,不知所措,一位年长的老师过来要求作者交表格,作者没有交出表格,那位老师很生气。第二段开头是:然后,我感到一只温暖的手放在我的肩膀上。本段应该描写詹妮弗帮助作者完成选课,作者和詹妮弗最后成了好友。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写

64、完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型,如:She then guided me through the process step by step until I completed my schedule.这句话运用了until引导的时间状语从句;本文也使用了一些固定词组,如rush out ; stare at; keep in touch等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为

65、文章增色添彩。例4:我们的友谊阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.Our friendship runs back to our college days when I first met Rishi. We had our own share “ first impression about each other. Mine wasshes a lovely, charming and full of life personality. Hers wasI look like an arrogant personality. I dont blame h

66、er for this. Many of my close friends had the same view when they first met me. Blame it on my bitch face and me being a shy person to some extent.We became really close within a short period of time. Ours was group of four people divided into 2 each during our final year when we both chose advertis

67、ing as our specialization and the other two journalism. Back then, I was a regular user of BBM messenger and hardly used Whatsapp.On one specific occasion, we had really bad argument about a failed project. The usual blame game was on. We decided to put it past us and focus on our studies. During th

68、is time, she once handed me her phone to show me a picture. While I was going through that, I came across a message from a particular Whatsapp group that comprises of her and my other two friends. I asked her permission to view the group. She had a blank expression on her face. But she allowed me to

69、 go ahead.I was in shock while going through their messages. Not really positive things were said about me in particular. It shook me. Because these were the people. I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologised. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not want

70、ing to continue this friendship further. We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted to give the last try.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Then came the Rajasthan IV trip which was our official last trip._Its been almost 7 years after graduation since we picked up our friendship._Para 1:

71、Then came the Rajasthan IV trip which was our official last trip.During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other. However, I couldnt help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same. The embarrassment was heavy like a dark shadow. I was sitting alone with my head down when sudden

72、ly a figure approached. I looked up, surprised to find Rishi in front of me. Blushed, she broke the silence,“I am sorry again. I didnt mean to hurt you.”Tears streaming down, she continued,“I should have talked to you earlier.”I stood up and reached out to hug her,“I am sorry, too. I should have bee

73、n more generous.”At that moment, we both realized we were an indispensable part of each others life.然后是拉贾斯坦邦四世之旅,这是我们的最后一次旅行。在旅途中,我们故意避开对方。然而,当她转过身来时,我忍不住看了她一眼,我也感觉到了同样的感觉。尴尬像个阴影。我正独自低着头坐着,突然有一个人影走近了。我抬起头来,惊讶地发现里希站在我面前。她脸色苍白,打破了沉默,“我又很抱歉了。我不是要伤害你。眼泪流下来,她继续说,“我应该早点和你谈谈。”我站起来,伸手拥抱她,“我也很抱歉。”我应该更慷慨一些。“在

74、那一刻,我们都意识到我们是彼此生活中不可或缺的一部分。Para 2:Its been almost 7 years after graduation since we picked up our friendship.Looking back, I am always grateful for her stepping up to make up with me. Till now, she has beenone of the few people Icantrust andcount on.Our major offered us the same background so that w

75、e supported each other in our professional development. Of course, we had argument from time to time. But deep down, we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual instead of enemies. Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgiv

76、e. If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship.我们建立友谊已经将近7年了。现在回想起来,我总是很感激她站起来跟我化妆。到目前为止,她一直是我为数不多的一个能信任和指望的人之一。我们的专业提供了我们相同的背景,以便我们在专业发展中互相支持。当然,我们不时地会争论。但在内心深处,我们都知道,所有的争论都是为了帮助我们成长为一个更好的个体,而不是敌人。因此,我们都学会了宽容和勇敢,以永远原谅我们。如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊,总是珍惜他们的存在,表现出维持和培养关系的意愿。

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