1、专 题 微 练考前6周 提分组合练第3练 规范写作组合练 短文改错书面表达(约稿信)限时30分钟短文改错(2019新乡三模)When I was six years old,I was a innocent and lovely girl.One day,my father asked me,“How can fish only live in water？”I thought about it with cautions and then replied,“Thats because there is some cats on the bank.”My father said,“Althou
2、gh your answer sounds a little ridiculous,but I think you are smart.”I was happy to hear them then.Maybe it seemed an amused answer then.But now,I think it is benefit to me.And now I am smart.I dare said I could have a happy childhood just owing my parents love for me.答案与解析 aan 考查冠词。此处用不定冠词指“一个天真可爱的
3、女孩”，innocent是以元音音素开头的单词，故用 an。故 a 改为 an。HowWhy 考 查 特 殊 疑 问 词。根 据 下 文“我”的 回 答“Thats because.”可知，父亲问的是“为什么鱼只能生活在水中”，故 How 改为 Why。cautionscaution 考查名词的数。caution 作“小心；谨慎”讲是不可数名词，无复数形式。with caution“小心地”，固定短语。故 cautions 改为 caution。isare 考查主谓一致。此处为 there be 句型，主语为“some cats”，故谓语动词为复数形式。故 is 改为 are。去掉 but 考
4、查连词。although“尽管”引导让步状语从句，其后的主句无需并列连词 but 连接。but 多余故去掉。themthat/it 考查代词。此处指代上文父亲表扬作者的话故用 that 或 it指代。them 指代上文出现的名词复数；that/it 指代上文提到的事。故 them 改为that 或 it。amusedamusing 考查形容词。修饰名词 answer 表“有趣的”用 v.-ing形式的形容词。amused 指“(人)感到高兴的”。故 amused 改为 amusing。benefitbeneficial 考查形容词。be beneficial to“对有益处”，固定搭配。此处用
5、 benefit 的形容词 beneficial 在 is 后作表语。故 benefit 改为beneficial。saidsay 考查情态动词。情态动词 dare 意为“敢”后接动词原形。I dare say 意为“我想；很可能；大概”。故 said 改为 say。owing 后加 to 考查固定搭配。owing to“由于”，固定搭配。故 owing后加 to。书面表达(约稿信)假定你是李华，你得知某知名网站面向留学生发起主题为“美丽中国”的短片(short film)征集活动。请你给你的朋友 Peter 写封邮件，介绍相关事宜并期待他提供作品。内容包括：1.短片内容；2.截止日期；3.联
6、系邮箱beautifulChinaC。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。范文 Dear Peter，How are you doing?Ive heard that a film project intended for overseas students has been launched on a famous website.I expect you to be part of it,for I know you are always interested in Chinese culture and filming a
7、s well.The event,whose theme is“beautiful China”，aimed at carrying forward traditional Chinese culture and promote crosscultural communication.Any appealing aspect of China can be included in your short film as long as it is interesting and informative.It ranges from traditional Chinese culture,customs to Chinas rapid development.I am convinced that it is a good chance for you to learn more about China.If you want to join,you can submit your short film to beautifulChinaC before the end of June.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua
