1、Day 2A假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改:在错的词下划横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Last summer, I took part in international summer camp. It was a greatly chance for me. It was an exc
2、ited experience to make new friends. They were both friendly to me and we have a good time. There were a lot of activities in the camp where we were shared our ideas with each other but understood each others cultures. One of my favorite activities were the cooking competition. I made zongzi that ev
3、eryone loved. These activities let me know what to get along with people from different country. I will never forget this experience.B假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错词的下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改后的词。注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许
4、修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。One year ago, I had a special English lesson held at the railway station. It was quite different from the English classes with that we were familiar, for I found out that we had no textbooks and no fixed seats.Gathered at the entrance of the station, we were told to collect as mu
5、ch English words and sentences as possible. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, searching for any informations in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst out cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translatio
6、n and vivid pictures, we could easy figure out its meaning.As matter of fact, that is how we should do to be an active learner wherever we go.答案A【答案解析】 1.in后面加上an2.greatlygreat3.excitedexciting4.bothall5.havehad6.去掉were7.butand8.werewas9.whathow10.countrycountries【分析】本文是记叙文,讲述了作者参加一次国际夏令营的经过和感受。【详解】
7、1.考查冠词。international是以元音发音开头,用不定冠词an表示数量,意为“一次,一个”,故in后面加上an。2.考查形容词。修饰名词chance, 应用形容词, greatly是副词,故greatly改为great。3.考查形容词。exciting 意为“令人兴奋的,令人激动的”,修饰物;excited意为“感到兴奋的,感到激动的”, 修饰人。这里是修饰experience,应是an exciting experience“一次令人激动的经历”。故excited改为exciting。4. 考查代词。both指两者“都”,all指三者或三者以上“都”。这里friends应该是多者,
8、故both改为all。5. 考查时态。全文是叙述过去的事情,用一般过去时。故have改为had。6. 考查语态。句意:夏令营中有多种多样活动,在这些活动中我们可以互相分享自己的想法。主语we和谓语动词share之间是主动关系,用主动语态,故去掉were。7. 考查连词。句意:夏令营中有多种多样活动,在这些活动中我们可以互相分享自己的想法,了解彼此国家的文化。前后两句之间是并列关系,不是转折关系,故but改为and。8. 考查主谓一致。 主语是“one of +可数名词复数”,谓语动词应该用单数,故were改为was。9. 考查从属连词。句意:这些活动让我知道如何与来自不同国家的人相处。根据句意
9、,应用how, 意为:“如何,怎样”,故what改为how。10. 考查名词单复数。根据句意,“不同的国家”应该是复数意义,故country改为countries。【点睛】以-ed结尾和以-ing结尾的形容词的区别有些表示情感的及物动词,如excite, discourage, disappoint, encourage, inspire, interest, move, please, puzzle, surprise, worry等,其后常加上后缀-ing或-ed转化为分词(也可称为形容词),用作表语、定语、状语或补足语。以-ing结尾的形容词含有“(某事/物)令人的”的意思;而以-ed结
10、尾的形容词含有“(人)感到”的意思。 (1)Some people whose lives are full are always interesting to talk to. 有些人的生活经历丰富,与他们交谈总是很有趣的。If I can find you any support, would you be interested? 假如我能为你找到资助,你对此有兴趣吗? (2)He is worried about his sons safety.他为儿子的安全担忧。The situation is worrying.形势令人忧心。(3)The boss was disappointed
11、at the employee. 老板对那个雇员感到很失望。The result of the competition is disappointing. 比赛结果令人失望。但是如果是修饰look, expression, smile,voice等词,表示“感到”的意思,用-ed结尾的形容词。 如:satisfied smile 满意的微笑 frightened expression 感到害怕的表情B【答案解析】 1. that 改为which2. out删去3.gathered 改为gathering4. much改为many5. informations 改为information6. c
12、omes 改为came7. out 改为into8. easy 改为 easily9. 添加a 10. how 改为 what【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲作者在火车站上了一堂特别的英语课,来告诉我们要做一个积极的学习者。【详解】1. 考查定语从句。句意:它和我们熟悉的英语课很不一样。本句中the English classes为先行词,在定语从句中做with的宾语,不能用that,做介词宾语用which。故将that改为which。2. 考查动词词组。句意:因为我发现我们没有课本,没有固定的座位。本句中found为及物动词,后面接宾语或宾语从句,故将out删去。3. 考查非谓语动词。Gat
13、hered at the entrance of the station在本句中做状语,gather的逻辑主语是we,他们之间为主动关系,所以应用现在分词作状语,故将gathered 改为gathering。4. 考查形容词。句意:我们聚集在车站的入口处,被告知要尽可能多地收集英语单词和句子。本句中的words为可数名词,应用形容词many来修饰,故much改为many。5. 考查名词。句意:我们又好奇又兴奋,在车站周围走来走去,四处寻找,寻找任何有关英语的信息。本句中的information为不可数名词,不能加s,故将informations 改为information。6. 考查动词时态。
14、本段写得是一年前的事情,都应用一般过去时,故将comes 改为came。7. 考查固定词组。句意:有了中文翻译和生动的图片,我们可以很容易地理解它的意思。句中figure out为算出的意思,根据句意可知,应该是理解,故将out 改为into。8. 考查词性转换。本句中的easy用来修饰动词,应该用它的副词形式,故将easy 改为 easily。9. 考查固定搭配。本句中As a matter of fact为固定短语,意为下定决心做某事,为固定短语,故添加a。10.考查 表语从句。本句中is后面为表语从句,从句中缺少宾语,意为“什么”, 故将how 改为 what。【点睛】非谓语动词也是短文改错的重要考点,考生应着重区分现在分词,过去分词和不定式做状语的结构,现在分词作状语的特点同逻辑主语之间是主动关系,并且时间上同谓语同步发生;过去分词作状语同逻辑主语之间是被动关系,时间上一般先于谓语发生;不定式做状语一般表将来,表目的。小题3就是现在分词作状语,和它的逻辑主语之间为主动关系。