1、原则3 吃透八大应用文写作题型 之告知信&询问信&感谢信 专家说考情高考新考法学霸好声音 全国卷3套卷3年来考查过告知信、询问信和感谢信2020年7月浙江卷考查询问信2019年全国卷考查告知信,体现对体育的重视。2020年浙江卷考查询问外籍教师的近况,体现重视人际关系,倡导和谐社会的主旨。积累满分句式和高级词汇是提高写作满分的关键。写作时认真留意,争取不犯同样的错误。学写考场满分作文2020浙江卷7月改编假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1询问近况;2分享班级最新消息;3表达祝愿。注意:1词数80左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_满
2、分作文第一步:“五定”审题“三段”谋篇定体裁定人称定时态定要点、定结构 第一段 开篇点题点明写信目的,咨询老师近况,表达关心之情。第二段 分享班级近况1.我们英语取得进步;2为高考做好了充分的准备询问信第一人称一般现在时三段谋篇第三段(巧妙收尾)希望老师早点回中国。满分作文第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点1听到你生病已回爱尔兰的消息,我很伤心。(非谓语动词作状语)_(时间状语从句):_Hearing the news that youre ill and you have returned to Ireland,I feel very sorry.When I heard the news that
3、 youre ill and you have returned to Ireland,I feel very sorry.2由于你不辞辛苦的工作,我们在英语学习方面取得了很大的进步,尤其在口语英语方面。高级词汇:_高级句式(强调句型):_3我坚信我们不会辜负你的期望。(同位语从句)_Through your tireless work,all of us have achieved much progress in English,especially in spoken English.It is through your tireless work that all of us have
4、 achieved much progress in English,especially in spoken English.I hold the firm belief that we will live up to your expectations.满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇_Dear Peter,Hearing the news that youre ill and you have returned to Ireland,I feel very sorry.I m writing to you to show my concern for your health.It is
5、 through your tireless work that all of us have achieved much progress in English,especially in spoken English.Whats more,with the College Entrance Examination approaching,we are making full preparations for it.I hold the firm belief that we will live up to your expectations.We do sincerely hope tha
6、t you have recovered from your sickness and we are also expecting your early return to China.Yours,Li Hua3组不可不记的书信类万用句式告知信一、写作架构要规范告知信分为两类:1.告知某人有某事将发生;2.回复某人关于某事的询问。其结构通常如下:告知信告知某人某事(写信目的)相关事宜期盼回复二、靓点句式背一番吸引阅卷人开头句1Here is a piece of good news!/I have a piece of good news to tell you!这里有一个好消息!/我有一个好
7、消息要告诉你!2Our team is going to compete in an important volleyball match next week.Im writing to share some details with you.我们队下周将参加一场重要的排球比赛。我写信是想和你分享一些细节。吸引阅卷人篇中句1In order to make full preparations for the volleyball match,I have made a specific training plan.为了为排球比赛做充分的准备,我制定了具体的训练计划。2All the team
8、members are supposed to take the training punctually as scheduled.所有的队员都应该按时参加培训。吸引阅卷人结尾句1If you want to know anything else,please dont hesitate to contact me.如果你还想知道什么,请不要犹豫与我联系。2Hopefully,our efforts will pay off in the end.希望我们的努力最终会有回报。询问信一、写作架构要规范询问信主要用于询问信息,写作结构通常如下:二、靓点句式背一番吸引阅卷人开头句1Id apprec
9、iate it if you could offer me some detailed information about a one-month English course in your school during the summer vacation.如果您能给我提供一些关于暑假期间在贵校学习一个月英语课程的详细信息,我将不胜感激。2Im Li Hua,a student from China.Im writing to ask for some detailed information about the course.我是李华,一个来自中国的学生。我写信是想了解有关这门课程的详细
10、信息。3Im writing to ask you some relevant information about the basketball match to be held next week.我写信是想问你一些关于下周将要举行的篮球赛的相关信息。吸引阅卷人篇中句1First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?首先,课程什么时候开始?每周有多少课时?2As for the money you charge,Im wondering if it covers the entrance
11、 fees for visiting the places listed.至于你收取的费用,是否包括参观所列地方的门票?3To begin with,I wonder what topic I should choose.You know,a good topic is of vital importance,but I cant decide on it among so many choices.首先,我想知道我应该选择什么主题。你知道的,一个好的话题是至关重要的,但是我无法在这么多的选择中做决定。4Besides,Im at a loss what speech rate I shoul
12、d keep and how long it will take me to finish my show.此外,我不知道我应该保持什么样的语速,以及我需要多长时间来完成我的节目。吸引阅卷人结尾句1Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.我期待着尽快收到你的来信。2Thank you for your kindness,and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated!感谢您的善意,如果您能及时关注这封信,我将不胜感激!感谢信一、写
13、作架构要规范感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。其结构为:二、靓点句式背一番吸引阅卷人开头句1I am Li Hua,a student of Senior 3.I am writing to express my gratitude for your kind help with my English all these years.我是李华,一个高三的学生。我写这封信是为了感谢你这么多年来对我英语的帮助。2I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation for your tim
14、ely help with my English all these years.我想对您这些年来在英语学习上给予的及时帮助表示衷心的感谢。3I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for your timely help and assistance.我愿借此机会对您的及时帮助表示感谢。吸引阅卷人篇中句1I made great progress with your kind help,without which I couldnt have got the prize.在你的帮助下,我取得了很大的进步,没有你的帮
15、助,我不可能得到这个奖。2Thanks to your generous help,without which I wouldnt have made such great progress.感谢你的慷慨帮助,没有你的帮助,我不会取得这么大的进步。吸引阅卷人结尾句1It was kind and generous of you to do this for me,and I appreciate it more than I can say.您对我如此友好和慷慨,我真是感激不尽。2I wish there were a better word than“thanks”to express my
16、 appreciation for your generous help.任何语言都不能表达我对您慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。沙场练兵 写满分作文Writing 1 告知信2020临沂市高三下学期模拟假如你是李华,你的美国朋友George在纽约所住的小区中有多人感染新冠病毒而发病。请你给他写一封邮件安慰他并告知注意事项。注意:1词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3参考词汇:新冠病毒 novel coronavirus_Writing 1【佳作展台】Dear George,Im sorry to learn from your email that many people in your
17、neighbourhood have got infected with the novel coronavirus.Novel coronavirus is a danger to the health of human beings.However,there is no sense worrying too much about it.In China,we have gone all out and succeeded stopping it from spreading.I advise that you wear masks when going out and wash your
18、 hands regularly.Do not go where it is crowded.If we defend ourselves correctly,Im sure we will win.With best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 2 询问信2020枣庄市高三模拟假定你是李华。你的外籍教师John本打算春季开学时返回中国,现因英国的新冠肺炎(COVID-19)疫情待在伦敦家中。你在英语学习中遇到了一些困难,请给他写一封电子邮件寻求帮助。内容如下:1询问John的健康情况;2告知学习中的困难;3请求帮助。注意:1词数80左右;2可以适
19、当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_Writing 2【佳作展台】Dear Mr.John,Learning that you cant return to China on time due to the impact of COVID-19 on your country,Im very concerned.Are you OK now?Do you have enough protective articles?Whats more,Im puzzled about some problems recently.During my studying at home,I find it hard
20、to remember English words so my vocabulary is more limited.Besides,English grammar is so difficult that I have trouble making out sentence structures.Therefore,many sentences are too complex for me to understand.I would be grateful if you could give me some specific suggestions on these problems.Loo
21、king forward to your reply and early return.Yours,Li HuaWriting 3 感谢信假定你是李华,作为交换生在伦敦学习时得到当地学校老师Mr.Nathan的悉心照顾,回国后请你给他写一封邮件表达谢意。内容包括:1回忆在学校一起度过的美好时光;2遇到的困难和受到的帮助;3邀请他来中国旅游。注意:1词数80左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_Writing 3【佳作展台】Dear Mr.Nathan,Im writing to express my thanks for your great help when I was studying
22、 in London.During my stay,you were very considerate and careful.When I met with difficulties,you always gave me a hand,which I will always remember.I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.Thanks again for all your efforts!I do hope someday youll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.Yours,Li Hua