1、保密启用前2021届高中毕业班第三次统一检测英语注意事项:1. 答卷前,考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。2. 回答选择题时,选出每小题答案后,用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如 需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时,将答案写在答题卡上,写 在本试卷上无效。3. 考试结束后,将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。第一部分 阅读(共两节,满分50分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2. 5分,满分37. 5分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。AThe Bureau of Labor Statistics recommends some hi
2、gh-paying jobs.Construction and Building InspectorConstruction and building inspectors inspect construction sites and buildings to make sure that the structures meet all requirements. Many construction and building inspectors have a certificate from a local or community college, although others have
3、 a two-year associates degree instead.Salary: about $ 70,710 per yearWeb DeveloperWeb developers design and develop websites. They create the look of the site and handle the websites performance, speed, and capacity. Web developers might work for computer system design companies, or for marketing fi
4、rms or departments, or be self-employed. While some web developers have an associates degree in web design, others have a certificate in web development instead.Salary: about $ 63,760 per yearArchitectural and Civil DrafterAn architectural and civil drafter creates drawings of the structural feature
5、s of buildings, or creates maps of civil engineering projects. Most drafters have training in computer-aided design and drafting (CADD), engineering, mechanical drawing, and other design and engineering skills. This training can be from a certificate program, a two-year program, or even a four-year
6、program.Salary: about $ 56,830 per yearSheet Metal WorkerA sheet metal worker constructs and/or installs products made of thin sheet metal. This work might involve measuring and marking dimensions on sheets, drilling holes in sheets, carrying large sheets, and so on. Sheet metal workers learn their
7、work through a certificate program from a technical school.Salary: about $ 50,400 per year1. Which job provides the highest income according to the text?A.Construction and Building Inspector. B. Web Developer. C. Architectural and Civil Drafter. D. Sheet Metal Worker.2. What is special about web dev
8、elopers?A.They inspect websites. B. They are good at marketing.C. They can be self-employed. D.They need CADD training.3. What common requirement do the jobs have?A. Engineering skills. B. Computer knowledge.C. A certificate or a degree.D. Technical school experience. BTrue, people remember what you
9、 wear. After a social event, we all remember the woman in red, or the man with the top hat. On the red carpet, Hollywood hopefuls take advantage of this reality by wearing outfits designed to be discussed and displayed on the front pages of newspapers. But in terms of making a good impression, being
10、 memorable is not just about novelty or fashion, but attraction, both physical and emotional, often in opposite order of importance.In a 2020 study, Andre Ndobo found people tended to remember the extremes: both attractive and unattractive faces. He acknowledged that one suggested explanation was th
11、at both are characterized by distinctive features that promote facial recognitionwhen compared with faces of average attractiveness. But while distinctiveness is memorable, beauty is skin deep. Accordingly, the way you are remembered by others is often not about what you wear and how you look but ab
12、out the way you make people feel.Professional interaction can create positive personal memories. Adrie A. Koehler, in a piece entitled In the Eye of the Beholder (2017) , found that when asked to recall their best learning experience, many students discussed a memorable teacher. What made the teache
13、rs memorable? According to the students, memorable qualities included not only teaching styles, but also interpersonal skills and positive qualities such as a sense of humor.We can relate to the results of this study when recalling people who are memorable in our own lives. They are not always peopl
14、e who we believed to be the smartest or most believed, but often those who made us feel the most comfortable, and who were most interested in us. Sincere interest is uniquely attractive. Not only will you remember what someone said, but they will also remember you, fondly.Regardless of what we wear
15、or how we look, we are always naturally more appealing and approachable when we focus on others and when we are genuine rather than simply sociable. Remember that, and others will remember you.4. The Hollywood hopefuls are mentioned to show.A. the competition on the red carpet B. peoples attempt to
16、be rememberedC. peoples wrong belief about impression D. the importance of clothing in ones success5. Why is an unattractive face remembered according to Andre Ndobo?A. It creates positive memories.B. Theres something special with it.C. It makes people feel uncomfortable.D. People often try hard to
17、avoid seeing it.6. What can we infer from the text?A. Smart people are especially attractive.B. Teaching styles impress students most.C. The best learning experience is hard to gain.D. Sincere attention is useful in communication.7. What can be a suitable title for the text?A. You Are What You WearB
18、. Mind the Impression You MakeC. How Can We Improve Our Self-image? D. What do People Remember about You?CThe over 48,000 orange trees that are distributed at all corners of Seville, Spain, not only fill the citys air with the pleasant smell of their flowers in spring, they also produce over 16, 500
19、 tons of fruit every winter. Though that makes the city Europes top orange-producing city, the fruit is too sour to be consumed fresh. While some of the produce is used to make orange juice, most of it ends up in Sevilles landfills. However, that may change soon thanks to a creative idea to use the
20、oranges to produce clean energy.In the pilot program, juice from 38. 6 tons of oranges will be left to ferment (发酵)in an existing biogas facility. The juice is fructose (果糖)made up of very short carbon chains, and the energetic performance of these carbon chains during the fermentation process is pa
21、rticularly high. The gas released from the fermented liquid will be used to drive a generator to produce clean power. The officials estimate the test run will generate about 1,500 kWh of energyenough to run a water purification plant. Its not just about saving money. The oranges are a problem for th
22、e city, and were producing added value from waste,M said Benigno Lopez, the head of Emasesas environmental department.If successful, by 2023, the city hopes to recycle all the oranges and add the electricity generated back to its grid (电网).In trial runs, 1,000 kilos (2,200 pounds) of oranges produce
23、d 50 kWh of clean energy一enough to meet the daily electricity needs of five homes. The project team estimates that if all the fruit is recycled, it will produce enough energy to power as many as 73,000 residences.The latest effort is among the many programs implemented in Spain to achieve the countr
24、ys goal of switching its electricity system to renewable sources by 2050一and if everything goes according to plan, fully decarbonizing its economy shortly after that.8. What problem does Seville face?A. It is short of energy.B. Most oranges are wasted.C. Fruit production is falling.D. Trees take up
25、much space.9. Whats the final product of the fermentation process?A. Fructose.B. Carbon chains.C. Clean power.D. Gas.10. What does the underlined word implemented in the last paragraph probably mean?A. Conducted.B. Assumed.C. Popularized.D. Completed.11. What is the authors main purpose in writing t
26、he text?A. To prove a theory.B. To raise a problem.C. To introduce a project.D. To comment on an idea.DIn a new study, shark researchers working off the eastern coast of New Zealand have found that three species of deep-sea shark are bioluminescent (生物性发光的),producing a soft blue-green light with spe
27、cialized cells in their skin.One of the species, the kitefin shark, grows to a length of nearly six feet, making it the largest known bioluminescent animal. The other two species are somewhat smaller than the kitefin, and all are occasionally caught as unintended by-catch by fishers. None are consid
28、ered in danger of extinction, but little is known about their lifestyles and biology.Bioluminescence had previously been documented in only around a dozen shark species, so this discovery significantly adds to our knowledge, says Jerome Mallefet, lead author of the new study.In the deep sea, where s
29、cientists estimate three-quarters of all creatures are bioluminescent, having the ability to create light can be extremely advantageous. In the depths of the ocean, which receives minimal amounts of sunlight, bioluminescent animals can hide themselves from enemies by producing enough light to match
30、their surroundings. All three species examined in this study have large concentrations of photocytes (发光细 胞)on their undersides, which suggests that these sharks may hide from enemies in just this way.The discovery that these three species produce light is not surprising,w says David Ebert, director
31、 of the Pacific Shark Research Center. Thats because researchers think many more species of sharks are likely capable of producing light一Mallefet estimates that perhaps 10 percent of the 540 known species of sharks are bioluminescent. But Ebert thinks even this is far from the truth. As the deep-sea
32、 shark research advances, that number will go even higher, he says.Both Ebert and Mallefet hope that more attention will be paid to deep-sea sharks in the future, as the creatures and their habitat are understudied and under threat. A lot of people know that sharks can bite, says Mallefet, but few p
33、eople know that they can produce light in the dark. ”12. What do we know about the bioluminescent shark species?A. They were quite difficult to catch,B. They preferred to live in the dark.C. They were considered to be endangered.D. They were little known about before the study.13. What does the four
34、th paragraph focus on?A. The function of bioluminescence.B. The significance of the discovery.C. The terrible surroundings in the sea.D. The usual activities of sea creatures.14. What does Ebert think of Mallefets guess at the number of bioluminescent sharks?A. Agreeable. B. Scientific.C. Inaccurate
35、.D. Inspirational.15. What is Ebert and Mallefet common wish?A. More people will study sharks.B. Deep-sea sharks will grow in number.C. Deep-sea sharks will receive more attention.D. More bioluminescent animals will be found. 第二节(共5小题;每小题2. 5分,满分12. 5分)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为 多余选项。Whil
36、e you may be avoiding your gym during the pandemic (疫情)due to health concerns, that doesnt mean you cant break a sweat while staying home. 16 Here are a few tips to help you master at-home workouts and stay healthy.Establish a routine17 However, its easy to get distracted (分丿C?) when working out at
37、home. Schedule a block of time for your daily workout, and find a space in your home for exercise. Try to avoid distractions during your workout as best you can. 18 Stick with your workout schedule several days per week to establish a consistent routine.Work on new skillsIf youre used to working out
38、 in a gym and using their wide variety of equipment, it can be annoying to have limited resources at home. 19 For example, if you typically lift weights in the gym, focus on balance exercises and flexibility at home.Take virtual classesIf you typically attend fitness classes or are looking for struc
39、tured workouts to follow at home, keep in mind that many local gyms and studios are offering virtual classes. This is a great opportunity to support local business owners. 20A. This is especially true when you have no other choice.B. Following a workout video or app can help keep you focused.C. Ask
40、your previous instructors to see if they offer virtual options.D. Youd better forget about the equipment and atmosphere in the gym.E. Going to a gym or a fitness class naturally creates a structured routine.F. But its also a good chance to work on new skills and modes of exercise.G. If youre new to
41、working out at home, its challenging to find the motivation.第二部分 语言运用(共两节,满分30分) 第一节(共15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。My parents went bankrupt (破产)when I was seven years old. I went from a kid who got everything he asked for to one 21_ having nowhere to stay. This change was
42、 as 22_ for my parents as it was for me. But I wasnt used to hearing no so I 23_ asking.When asked what I wanted for my birthday, I said I wanted a video gaming system. I didnt know it was 24 . All I knew was that my friends 25 them and that I wanted one too.On my birthday, I 26 started opening my p
43、resent,believing I would get what I 27 . But I didnt. My mom could tell my 28 and she started crying. I gave her a 29 that was bigger than ever. Her tears 30 me that she was working so hard andthat she couldnt 31 to give me anything I didnt need.From then on I learned to 32 the things I had. When I
44、wanted a new iPod, I had to work to buy it. I got a 33 job and after working for a month every day after school,I saved up enough 34 to buy it.The feeling of having 35 something is one of the best feelings in the world.21. A. stillB. hardlyC. evenD. merely22. A. minorB. dramaticC. effectiveD. exciti
45、ng23. A. stoppedB. admittedC. forgotD. kept24. A. expensiveB. complicatedC. unnecessaryD. advanced25. A. likedB. ownedC. wonD. chose26. A. cheerfullyB. curiouslyC. impatientlyD. violently27. A. worked onB. agreed onC. longed forD. struggled for28. A. hesitationB. innocenceC. determinationD. disappoi
46、ntment29. A. surpriseB. hugC. taskD. gift30. A. remindedB. promisedC. persuadedD. warned31. A. expectB. fightC. affordD. remember32. A. selectB. abandonC. compareD. appreciate33. A. dead-endB. part-timeC. demandingD. regular34. A. energyB. timeC. wagesD.fees35. A. earnedB. createdC. beatenD. caught第
47、二节(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Impacts from climate change are happening now. These impacts extend well beyond the rise in temperature? 36 (affect) ecosystems and communities in the United States and around the world.Changes to water resources can have a big impact 37 peoples
48、 lives. In some regions,38 (particular) in the western United States, drought is 39 seriousproblem facing communities. Less snow cover in the mountains is important in the West and Alaska, 40 will greatly reduce the chances of disasters caused by too much snow. The 41 (frequent) of heavy downpours i
49、n the Midwest and northeastern states 42 (increase) in the past decades. In many regions, floods and water quality problems are likely to be worse because of climate change.Our food supply depends on climate 43 weather conditions. Agricultural practices may be adaptable, but changes like increased t
50、emperatures, water stress, diseases, and weather extremes create challenges for the farmers who put food on our tables.Human health is also affected by climate change. The changing environment 44 (expect) to cause more heat stress, an increase in waterborne diseases, poor air quality, and diseases s
51、pread by insects and rodents (啮齿动物).Extreme weather events can worsen many of these health 45 (threat).第三部分 写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节(满分15分)假定你是李华,正在学习生涯规划(career planning)的相关知识。请给外教Louis写封 邮件向他了解情况,内容包括:L你对生涯规划的认识;2 ,请他介绍他们国家的中学生的生涯规划情况;3.请他提供生涯规划方面的建议。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Louis,How ar
52、e you?第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。I grew up in the city, so moving to the country with my husband, Dillon, was a challenge. He was working away from home two weeks at a time. I wanted to adopt a dog. However, I was gone from home at least ten hours a day. It would be irresponsible
53、 to get a dog. So, I did what many dog lovers do when they cant have a dog: volunteering at the local Humane Society.I wanted to interact with the dogs, but an adoption counselor (顾问)appointed me to work at the front desk. One day, a couple walked in with a scared and sick one-year-old Boxer named B
54、ella. One look at her ripped (撕)my heart wide open. The couple who sent her here had tried to take care of her after their neighbors moved away and left her behind. After a few weeks, Bella was healthy enough to be adopted. My heart sank.After begging the adoption counselor, she finally let me in to
55、 visit Bella. I stayed with her for fifteen minutes, trying to convince myself that it still wasnt a great time to get a dog. Anyway, Dillon had just left, so he couldn,t meet her. The Humane Society had a rule that potential adopters had to spend time with the dog at the shelter before they could b
56、e approved.I couldnt ask for special treatment just because I volunteered there. But when I returned the following Tuesday, I ran to see if Bella was still there. She was. Days later, I had another visit with her and said goodbye, knowing deep down that it was for good.For months? all I talked about
57、 was Bella一how she had been my love-at-first-sight. That spring, Dillon took a job where he no longer had to work away from home. One day? we saw that a local rescue was putting on a dog adoption fair. We met a few dogs there, but none of them was a fit for us. We decided to drive over to the Humane
58、 Society. I looked at the adoptable dogs on their website as we were driving.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, I saw a dog named Penelope who reminded me of Bella.I didnt understand why she had been given up for a third time, and I didnt care._Yours,Li Hua2021届高中毕业班第三次统一检测英语参考答案及解析第一部
59、分阅读第一节A篇【语篇导读】本文是一篇应用文,主要介绍了四份收入比较高的工作。16. 【答案】A【解题思路】根据每一节中Salary部分的内容对比可知,第一份工作的收入最高。17. 【答案】C【解题思路】根据 Web Developer 的介绍中“Web developers might work for computer system design companies, or for marketing firms or departments, or be self-employed.可知。18. 【答案】C【解题思路】每一份工作介绍的结尾处都提到了“degree”或certificate
60、的要求,因此C为最佳 选项。B篇【语篇导读】本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了人们对其他人哪方面的表现更容易留下深刻印象。19. 【答案】B【解题思路】根据第一段中“Hollywood hopefuls take advantage of this reality by wearing”可 知,此处作者想要举例说明人们会通过用心的穿着打扮来给他人留下印象。20. 【答案】B【解题思路】根据第二段中both are characterized by distinctive features that promote facial recognition,”可知。21. 【答案】D【解题思路】根据最后一
61、段中we are always naturally more appealing and approachable when we focus on others and when we are genuine rather than simply sociable.可知。22. 【答案】D【解题思路】本文主要介绍了人们对其他人哪方面的表现更容易留下深刻印象,因此D为最适合 的选项。C篇【语篇导读】本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了西班牙城市塞维利亚利用产量过剩的橘子来发电,并 期待利用这一手段推动低碳环保进程。23. 【答案】B【解题思路】根据第一段中“most of it ends up in
62、Sevilles landfills和第二段中“The oranges are a problem for the city, and were producing added value from waste.可知。24. 【答案】D【解题思路】根据第二段中“The gas released from the fermented liquid will be used to drive a generator to produce clean power.可知。25. 【答案】A【解题思路】根据本句语法结构,该词为“programs”的定语,再结合后面内容的意思可知,该词 意为“实施”。26
63、. 【答案】C【解题思路】本文主要介绍了西班牙城市塞维利亚利用产量过剩的橘子来发电,并期待利用这 一手段推动低碳环保进程,因此C为最佳选项。D篇【语篇导读】本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了研究人员在新西兰的东海岸发现了新品种的可发光的 鲨鱼。27. 【答案】D【解题思路】根据第二段中“None are considered in danger of extinction, but little is known about their lifestyles and biology.可知。28. 【答案】A【解题思路】第四段主要介绍了海洋动物发光对它们生存的作用。29. 【答案】C【解题思路】根据倒
64、数第二段中“But Ebert thinks even this is far from the truth. n和“As. that number will go even higher.可知。30. 【答案】C【解题思路】根据最后一段中“Both Ebert and Mallefet hope that more attention will be paid to deep-sea sharks in the future 可知。第二节【语篇导读】本文是一篇说明文,主要针对如何在家锻炼保持健康提出了一些建议。31. 【答案】G【解题思路】答题空前一句提倡在家锻炼,答题空后一句开始提供具体的
65、建议,G项能与前后构 成合理的逻辑。32. 【答案】E【解题思路】本段标题为“建立固定的(锻炼)时间”,答题空后一句与本句存在转折关系,意为 “然而,在家锻炼很容易分心。”因此E为最佳选项。33. 【答案】B【解题思路】答题空前一句提到要尽可能地避免分心,B项则提供了具体的建议。34. 【答案】F【解题思路】答题空后一句列举了学习新的锻炼方式的例子,因此F为最佳选项。35. 【答案】C【解题思路】本句前面提到很多当地的健身机构都提供虚拟课程,且这是一个支持本地商业的 机会。C项提供了一种获得虚拟课程信息、支持本地商业的机会。第二部分语言运用第一节【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了作者的父
66、母破产以后,作者的生活发生的变化。36. 【答案】C【解题思路】第一句提到作者父母破产,因此作者从想要什么就能得到什么,变成甚至连住的地 方都没有,C项符合句意。37. 【答案】B【解题思路】破产这件事对作者和其父母都是很“巨大的,突然的”事。38. 【答案】D【解题思路】作者习惯了想要什么就能得到什么,不习惯被拒绝,因此会“不停,一直”要东西。39. 【答案】A【解题思路】作者还小,不理解东西贵。40. 【答案】B【解题思路】“别人有,我也要有”,这符合孩子的心理特点。41. 【答案】A【解题思路】生日的时候,拆礼物应该是“高兴地”。42. 【答案】C【解题思路】作者在生日的时候高兴地拆礼物
67、,以为自己能得到一直“渴望”的东西。43. 【答案】D【解题思路】答题空前一句提到作者没有得到渴望的礼物,妈妈能够看出他的“失望”。44. 【答案】B【解题思路】答题空前一句提到妈妈哭了,答题空后一句又补充说“我”理解了妈妈,因此此处是 给妈妈一个,拥抱”。45. 【答案】A【解题思路】妈妈的眼泪让作者“想到”她的努力工作。46. 【答案】C【解题思路】妈妈在经济上无法“支付,负担”作者并不需要的(非生活必要的)东西。47. 【答案】D【解题思路】这件事让作者学会了“感激”自己所拥有的东西。48. 【答案】B【解题思路】根据本句后面的内容可知,作者还在上学,因此是“兼职的”工作。49. 【答案
68、】C【解题思路】既然是通过工作攒钱,那积攒的应该是“工资”。50. 【答案】A【解题思路】作者通过自己工作攒钱买到了自己想要的东西,因此应为“挣得”。 第二节【语篇导读】本文是一篇说明文,主要介绍了气候变化对全球多个方面的影响。51. 【答案Jaffecting【解题思路】此处affect和主语these impacts是主动关系。52. 【答案Jon/upon【解题思路limpact和on/upon搭配表示“对的影响气53. 【答案 Jparticularly【解题思路】该词所在部分为状语,因此应使用副词。54. 【答案】a【解题思路】泛指“一个严重的问题气55. 【答案Jwhich【解题思
69、路】which指主句中的less snow cover in the mountainso56. 【答案Ifrequency【解题思路】the后of前应使用名词,作本句主语。57. 【答案】has increased【解题思路】根据本句时间状语in the past decades可知,应用现在完成时。58. 【答案】and【解题思路】本句中climate和weather conditions为并列关系。59. 【答案】is expected【解题思路】主语为environment,与expect为被动关系。60. 【答案Jthreats【解题思路】前面有many of these限定,因此应
70、使用复数。第三部分写作第一节One possible version:Dear Louis ,Hoiv are you! Nowadays, career planning has become more frequently mentioned than ever before. As far as Im concerned, our future career needs to be carefully planned, and theres relevant knowledge to be learned and skills to be practiced. Our school ha
71、s started a career planning course and there are professional teachers who are guiding us to explore.Im curious what kind of project high schools provide and what students think of career planning in your country. Besides, Id be so grateful if you could offer me some advice on career planning. Looki
72、ng forward to your reply.Yours 9 Li Hua 第二节One possible version:Suddenly, I saw a dog named Penelope who reminded me of Bella. We arrived at the Humane Society and asked to meet her. An adoption counselor I had never met before took us into an office and started reading us Penelopes file. Halfway in
73、, I turned to an adoption counselor I knew, and said, This sounds like Bellas file. He nodded and said, Yeah. It is Bella; they just changed her name. n I started to cry. This was my love-at-first-sight dog!I didnt understand why she had been given up for a third time, and I didnt care. We knew we w
74、ere taking her home. I cried the entire way home with Bella in the back seat happily hanging her head out the window. And I cried again when we called our families to tell them we were doggy parents. Now, two and a half years later, she is sitting beside me on the sofa, trying to lick my face becaus
75、e she doesnt understand that the tears on my face are happy tears.【第一节应用文写作评分标准】 在评分时,应注意以下几个方面:3. 本题总分为15分,按5个档次给分。4. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调 整档次,最后给分。5. 词数少于60,从总分中减去2分。6. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连 贯性。7. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美 拼写及词汇用法均可接受。8. 如
76、书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。分值评分标准第五档13 15完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,具 备较强的语言运用能力;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。续表分值评分标准第四档10 12完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容;应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇 所致;应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档7
77、9基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容;应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解;应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档46未适当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容;语法结构单调、词汇有限;有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档13未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求;语法结构单调、词汇有限;较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响
78、对写作内容的理解;缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【第二节读后续写评分标准】在评分时,应注意以下几个方面:1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2. 评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求衡量、确定 或调整档次,最后给分。3. 词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时,应主要从以下四点考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2) 内容的丰富性;(3) 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(4) 上下文的连贯性。B. 拼写与标点符
79、号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。C. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。分值评分标准第五档21 25与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理;内容丰富,应用的语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不影响意义 表达;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档16 20与所给短文融洽度较高,与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理;内容比较丰富,应用的语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确,可能有些许错误,但完全不 影响意义表达;比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,所续写短文结构紧凑。第三档11 15与所给短文关系较为密切,与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接;写出了若干有关内容,应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求,虽有一些错误,但 不影响意义表达;应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。第二档610与所给短文有一定的关系,与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接;写出了一些有关内容,语法结构单调,词汇有限,有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误, 影响了意义的表达;较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档15与所给短文和开头语的衔接较差;产出内容太少,语法结构单调,词汇有限,有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重 影响了意义的表达;缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。0白卷、内容太少,无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。