1、问题二：无高级词汇或句型【问题描述与分析】现在很多老师也常告诉考生要尽量使用一些常用短句，这样是为了得安全分，而新考试大纲要求书面表达“尽量使用较复杂结构和较高级词汇”，书面表达要想得高分，一定要有使用准确的较高级句子作为文章的出彩点。就高中生的思维能力，构思一篇120余词的短文不难，难的是如何准确地表达。“书面表达”的阅卷一般是内容和语言分开评分的。内容是由语言来表达的，而语言又制约着内容的发挥。考生往往用汉语思维布局谋篇，然后用英语写作，从而造成了表达的语言别扭、不伦不类，难得高分。与此同时，用词恰当、语言准确是书面表达的基本要求，但如果考生的基础知识不扎实，对所用词汇、短语、句型的掌握不
2、够熟练，再加上平时没有进行充分的现实写作训练，考场上就很容易出现词法、句法以及拼写错误。在这一方面考生常犯的错误有：(1)用词单一，文章显得苍白无力。(2)考生基础知识差或者应试心理不好，在考场上容易忽略上述技巧的运用，从而造成语言表达上的失误或者使文章缺乏亮点而难得高分。(3)语句平庸，句式单调重复。【例】 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1表示歉意；2解释原因；3另约时间。注意：1.词数120150；2可适当增加细节。(2010山东卷)【参考范文】Dear Tom，Im sorry,
3、for I wont be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you.Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam, which is without doubt important for them. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully. As a result, I w
4、ill be busy helping them at that time.In addition, I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu, who suffered greatly from the big earthquake.In a nutshell, Im afraid Ill have no time to accompany you. So I want to put off our time of the visit until the first weekend of n
5、ext month. Is it OK?Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua先来看一位考生的习作：Dear Tom，I am Li Hua in Xin Hua middle school. I wrote this letter to tell you that I cant go to Beijing with you. The reason is the following.My grandparents have lived in the countryside for many years. I miss them very
6、 much. They will come to live with my family next week. I am very happy and decide to enjoy myself together with them. Do you think I am right or wrong?But next month will be my summer holiday. I will be free then. Would you like to go to Beijing together with me then?I am looking forward to your ea
7、rly reply.Yours，Li Hua本文并没有错误，但是特别闪光的句子也没有，只是平铺直叙了一篇文章，虽然知识点并没有遗漏，但是很难得到高的分数。【解决方案与复习指南】考生首先要通篇把握一下文章的思路，理清思路。提高语言表达准确性的关键在于采用合理的写作步骤，用英语构思，用英语表达，使内容和语言统筹兼顾。在写作时想出的一些句子能按提示要求表情达意，但用英语表达又无把握，就不要勉强使用，可以换用自己熟悉的、能熟练运用的同义英语句型进行表达，并避开意义把握不准或拼写不准的词汇。此外，在备考中，考生应该在老师的引导下认真复习作文，平日要注意归纳英语写作的规律，用正确的句型、固定的短语和句式进
8、行写作，并积累一定数量的语言素材，在考试的时候灵活运用就可能得到高分。我们可以采取以下应对措施以避免失误：“闪亮”组词，“阳光”组句：用词尽量贴切；用词尽量多样；尽量选用高级词汇表达。(1)运用别样的句式表达，比如在使用比较熟悉的“there be”句型时就不如使用“It seems that there are two reasons for this difference.”的表达效果好。(2)适当运用省略句：对于各种例子的对比，我们可以适当使用省略句来表述。这样会给人一种简单利落的感觉。(3)句式多样、语法结构丰富。“应用了较多的语法结构”应体现为：句式的多样化，灵活使用各种介词短语、非
9、谓语动词结构等方面。如：假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web？”为题，写一篇英语短文。注意：1.字数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(2010安徽卷)【参考范文】We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot en
10、joy themselves without them.However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and therere too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.As f
11、or cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.1.本文是一篇议论文，时态以一般现在时为主，用第一人称。2第一段说明对TV、 cell和Web的看法。3第二段阐述自己的观点，放弃哪一个。4第三段说出自己放弃的理由。总之，书写问题非一日之功，一定要在平时就多加注意，一定要注意字迹的大小问题，尽量做到不要太小，另外最好不要出现涂改现象(特别是实行网上阅卷的地方)，每次写作时应该先列提纲，想好了再写。.w。w-w*k&s%5￥u高考资源网w。w-w*k&s%5￥u
