1、 英语路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索高考二轮总复习第一部分 微专题强化练三 短文改错第一部分 考 向 分 析 考 题 引 路 强 化 训 练 231易 错 防 范 4考 向 分 析年份20142015命题趋势课标全国I课标全国课标全国I课标全国题材记叙文说明文记叙文记叙文改错以句为单位，每句最多两处错误。全文通常为八处错词，一处漏词，一处多词。有时改法不唯一，如：2015课标卷第五处错误可以把where改为that也可删去where。题材以记叙文为主，考查点越来越全，越来越细。考查点形容词与副词(4)，动词(1)，名词(1)，连词(1)，介词(1)，代词(1)，冠词(1)动词(3)，介词(2)
2、，代词(2)，名词(1)，冠词(1)，形容词与副词(1)动词(3)，代词(2)，形容词与副词(1)，名词(1)，连词(1)，介词(1)，冠词(1)动词(3)，形容词与副词(2)，连词(1)，冠词(1)，介词(1)，名词(1)，代词(1)考查方式错词(8)，多词(1)，漏词(1)错词(8)，多词(1)，漏词(1)错词(8)，多词(1)，漏词(1)错词(8)，多词(1)，漏词(1)考 题 引 路(一)(2015课标全国)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am liv
3、ing in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breath
4、e in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.答案：When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I thinkthought I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in thecou
5、ntryside.There the air is clean orand the mountains are green.Unfortunately，onwith the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriouslyserious problem.The airsair we breathe in is getting dirtie
6、r and dirtier.MuchMany rare animals are dying out.We must foundfindways to protect yourour/the environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.解析：第一处：thinkthought 时态误用。根据上一句的时间状语When I was a child 可知此处应用一般过去时，故把 think 改为thought。第二处：countryside前加the 冠词漏用。句意为：我现在生活在城市里，但我想念我乡下的家。此处应是特指作者童年所生活的乡
7、下，故加定冠词the。第三处：orand 连词错误。由语境可知，the air is clean和the mountains are green之间应是并列关系，不是选择关系，故把or改为and。第四处：onwith 介词误用。with the development of.为固定搭配，意为“随着的发展”。故把on改为with。第五处：删除been 语态误用。句子主语studies和谓语动词show之间应是主动关系，故删除been。第六处：seriouslyserious 副词误用。名词problem前应用形容词修饰，故把seriously改为serous。第七处：airsair 名词错误。a
8、ir意为“空气”时为不可数名词，故把airs改为air。第八处：MuchMany 副词误用。animals是可数名词复数形式，而much只能修饰不可数名词，故把Much改为Many。第九处：foundfind 动词错误。情态动词后面必须跟动词原形，故把found改为find。第十处：yourour/the 代词误用。本文讲述的是我们所生活的环境，而且主语是We，故把your改为our；也可以用定冠词特指上文提到的环境，故把your改为the。(二)(2014课标全国)Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father,my sist
9、er and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbo
10、rs.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案：Nearly five years beforeago，and with the help byof our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in
11、 our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearyearswe hadhave been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.Asa result,the plants are growing somewhereeverywhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and tastetasty.There are so muchmany that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we
12、 allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but或yet we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfullywonderful tomatoes at no cost!解析：第一处：beforeago 副词误用。由下文可知，此处讲述的是过去的事情，与一般过去时连用应用ago，不用before。一段时间和before连用时常用于完成时。第二处：byof 介词误用。with the help of sb
13、.为固定短语，意为“在某人的帮助下”。故将by改为of。第三处：yearyears 名词错误。前面的限定词these意为“这些”，修饰可数名词复数，所以使用复数years。第四处：hadhave 时态误用。时间状语since then和all these years一般与现在完成时连用，故把had改为have。第五处：As后加a 冠词漏用。as a result为固定短语，意为“因此；结果”。第六处：somewhereeverywhere 副词误用。根据上下文可知，圣女果应该长得到处都是，而不仅仅只在某些地方生长。故将somewhere改为everywhere。第七处：tastetasty 形
14、容词误用。根据连词and前后词性一致的原则可知，因为juicy是形容词，这里应用taste的形容词形式tasty，意为“美味的”。第八处：muchmany 副词误用。根据be动词用are及后面的them可知，此处指代的是可数名词的复数，故将much改为many。第九处：删除but或butyet 连词误用。although引导的让步状语从句不与表示转折的连词but连用，但可以与副词yet连用。因此去掉连词but，或者把but改为yet。第十处：wonderfullywonderful 副词误用。修饰后面的名词tomatoes，作定语，应该用形容词形式。强 化 训 练（点此链接）易 错 防 范 1
15、忽视行文逻辑 典例1 Thank you for all you had done for me.Mom,though I may often say it,I do love you.易错警示：忽视行文逻辑，可能改不出错误。答案：may后加not 2以行为单位去读改而非以句(篇)为单位去读改致错 典例2 My dream school looks like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom building.易错警示：以行为单位读改，受换行影响，可能改不出错误。答案：去掉the
