1、2016高考英语二轮书面表达选读（3）参考范文【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Right after the Second World War, Germany was in ruins. Almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. Plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. Worse still, the supply of water and electrici
2、ty was often cut off in the city. Two American journalists interviewed a German family living in the basement. The husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. Worse still, there were bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. Life w
3、as hard for them at that time.After the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.“Do you think the Germans could rebuild their homeland?”“Absolutely.”“But I cant see any hope for the country at all. How can you be so certain about that?”“Have you noticed what
4、 they put on the table in the basement? There was a vase of flowers. A nation, suffering at such moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. It shows that hopes are not lost. They are still able to dream. A nation with hope can create miracles. They are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”【写作内容】1.
5、 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗？(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】One possible version:Two American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though l
6、iving a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.As is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties in front and make it in turn. Therefore，I agree that dreams can change
7、ones life. Lisa is my friend and former classmate. She was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. However, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more than 1.55 meters tall. There is no denying that actresses are usually much
8、taller than her. However, she didnt lose heart. With great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. The show was a success.As far as I am concerned, one who has a dream can see further, work harder, and gain much more. Please hold fast to your dreams.读
9、写任务评分说明读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。在评分时，应注意以下几方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2 概括的要点包括：Two American journalists interviewed a German family after the war. Though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that Germans were bound to r
10、ebuild their homeland.二、读写任务评分标准项目分值评分标准概括5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-
11、20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇
12、有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【广东省三模】书面表达（满分25分）就学生该不该带手机的问题有许多不同的看法。现在许多学生用手机，他们认为使用手机
13、是一种时尚；另外用手机和家人、朋友联系方便；但是一些学生违反学校规则把手机带到班里，在班里就能听到手机铃声。一些学生甚至在班里发短信。最后请谈谈你的看法。根据上面的汉语提示写一篇120词左右的短文。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 作文：本文属于给出汉语提示的半开放性的写作。成文时应注意以下几点：1. 内容表达要条理要清晰。正反对比分明；2. 内容要点要齐全；3. 注意人称和时态。时态用一般现在时，人称用一、三人称；4. 注意使用关联词，使文章顺畅、自然。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句式。 【参考范文】One possible version:Im a senior high s
14、tudent. Now many students use mobile phones .They think its a fashion to use mobile phones .Besides, its very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones. But some students break the rules in class. They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often he
15、ar the ring of mobile phones in class. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge .Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons .Those with mobile phones shouldnt
16、take mobile phones to the classroom . We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom. 【广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】基本写作（共1小题；满分15分）高中学生特别是高三学生熬夜现象很广泛。某高中在200名学生中就睡觉时间做了一次抽样调查，结果如下：25名学生在晚上1点左右睡觉；150名学生在12点左右睡觉；25名学生在11点左右睡
17、觉，高三学生没有一个人在11点之前睡觉。晚睡的结果就是晚起，早晨7：20学生就需要进课室开始一天的学习，可是很多学生直到7点才起床，没有时间吃早餐就匆忙进课室。不少学生因为疲劳在上课时睡着了。请根据以上内容写一篇短文，表述学生的睡觉情况和晚睡的不良结果。参考词汇熬夜“stay up late写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）A survey, done among 200 senior school students, shows that it is very common for senior s
18、chool students, especially Senior 3 students, to stay up late. *150 of the 200 students (surveyed) go to bed around 12 oclock at night, 25 students go to bed as late as 1 oclock early the next morning and only 25 rest as early as 11 oclock, none of whom was in Senior 3. *Staying up late leads to get
19、ting up late. *Though students are required to start a days work at 7:20, many of them get up as late as 7 oclock in the morning, and then hurry into their classroom without breakfast. *As a result, some of them are so sleepy in the day as to fall asleep in class.【评卷建议】基础写作：要包括全部内容约10个信息点。因为内容充足，比较好
20、写，难点只在如何把这些内容组合成5句话，因此句子的组织结构成为重点。1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-9分：写出大部分内容，语法错误很多。10-12分：写出几乎全部内容，有部分语法错误。13-15分：写出全部内容，很少或没有语法错误。【2013界广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）The train was forced to slow from 200 kilometers per hour to 120 km/h, a police officer with the Shenyang railway public security bureau told
21、 Xinhua News Agency. The smoker, a 23-year-old from Dalian, was fined 200 yuan ($30) for violating regulations. Smoking is strictly forbidden on high-speed trains, even in the toilets, washing rooms and connecting areas between cars, Xinhua quoted the unidentified officer as saying. Smoking can trig
22、ger fire alarms or even cause a fire on the train. Violators may be subject to warnings, fines or administrative detention for disturbing order on public transport facilities, he said. On Saturday, the first day of the Harbin-Dalian high-speed railways operation, a passenger was found smoking on a t
23、rain to Harbin, capital of Heilongjiang province, leading to a deceleration of the train, railway police said. The next day, a passenger in his 20s smoked in a washroom on a train also heading for Harbin, triggering the fire alarm. His actions nearly resulted in an emergency braking, according to Zh
24、ao Yang, chief conductor on the train. It is not uncommon for smokers to cause trouble on bullet trains. On Jan 11, a bullet train traveling from Shenzhen to Changsha was forced to brake after a smoker activated the emergency braking system. The halt delayed more than 20 trains. In December 2008, a
25、passenger was given three days detention because his smoking caused a bullet train from Tianjin to Beijing to automatically brake just a minute after it had departed Tianjin Railway Station. 写作内容1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词写出你看完这篇报道后的想法，内容至少包括：（1）吸烟可能对公共安全造成的危害和对他人的影响。（2）你对在公共场所“吸烟”的看法。写作要求1作文中可以使用亲身经历
26、或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）The passage reports a fact that a smoker smoked on a high-speed train and caused it to automatically slow down abnormally. Some more cases are offered to show that smoking on a bullet train causes troub
27、le and danger to others.As is known to everybody, smoking is very common in China. Almost everybody just considers it as a personal affair and does it at free will wherever they feel like it. Not only do people smoke in their own homes, but they also smoke in almost every public place, from their of
28、fices to the theatre. They feel it their private freedom, and few regard it as an offense to other people. But I do think smoking is not a personal affair but a social problem. When one smoker is enjoying his smoke, what he produces in his smoke affects the surroundings. He is at the same time forci
29、ng the people around to smoke second-hand. I once read a news story that a tourists smoking caused a fire on the top of Mount Huangshan. And I frequently read about fire disasters in homes or factories caused by smoking. I quite agree that trouble-making smokers should be severely punished with a vi
30、ew to cutting down smoking. I suggest that smoking be banned in all public places.【评卷建议】读写任务：内容概括要表达出吸烟造成火车减速的具体事件并总结出吸烟给高速列车造成麻烦和危险。表述部分主要表达读完此报道后对于吸烟危害的思考，可包括对吸烟很广泛的客观现实的认知，必须表达吸烟对他人的危害，可包括使别人被动吸烟、引发火灾给别人造成损失、导致火车延误给别人造成麻烦等，必须表达个人对于在公共场所吸烟的看法。内容概括：1-3分：句子正确但只有部分要点或有全部要点但句子的拼写、语法错误多。4-5分：句子正确、包括全部要点、字数不超过40。表述部分：1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-10分：内容少，有部分句子，拼写、语法错误较多、字迹潦草。11-14分：内容多，但不够连贯，拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。15-17分：内容充实，叙述清楚，但拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。18-20分：内容充实，语句连贯，没有或极少语法错误，字迹工整。
