1、写作园地说明文：描写动物感悟范文请根据下列提示写一篇关于蛇的短文。1蛇是一种生活在草丛或阴暗地方的爬行动物；2蛇的颜色多样，天敌很难发现；3蛇的食物很多，比如老鼠、麻雀、鸟蛋等等；4蛇样子可怕但是用处很多。注意：1.根据内容适当增加细节；2词数120150。 精彩范文The snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places.Snakes usually have green, yellow or black skins, making it difficult for their enemies t
2、o find them.Snakes can take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs, birds eggs, pests and so on.Although snakes have no legs or feet, they can move very fast on their stomachs. Some kinds of snakes live in water, where they can swim as freely as fish.As snakes are dreadfullooking, people
3、 are afraid of them. Many people drive them away whenever they see snakes. However, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. They can help us to kill mice and pests. Also, they can provide us with delicious meat and their blood is a good drink. Poisonous snakes are especially useful, with which we c
4、an make valuable drugs.亮点分析：1文中多处用到含有定语从句的复合句，简洁得体。2非谓语动词短语making it . 作状语使句式变得灵活多样。3such as, and so on等短语的运用地道得当。4运用连词although, as和whenever，使句式复杂，提升文章档次。5副词“however”及“also”的运用使句子之间的衔接更加自然。技法讨论本模块的写作任务是动物描写。描写动物的书面表达属于事物介绍类说明文，以“说明”为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等，可对描述的对象作总体概括介绍，给人以直观的总体认识，然后进行具体说明
5、，使人全面深入地了解此种动物。事物介绍类说明文多用一般现在时。写文章时要注意行文的条理清晰，不能东一句、西一笔，缺乏章法。在动笔之前要安排好描述顺序，考虑好句与句之间的衔接、段与段之间的联系，并注意以下几点：1要抓住事物特征描写事物要紧紧围绕事物的特征进行介绍，如：属性、外貌、状态、用途等，并且要突出事物的个性。普通特征可以略写，个性特征要详细介绍以突出特色。2.要生动形象描写事物如果只是中规中矩地描绘它的形状特点，用词过于简单化、专业化，那么事物永远是“死”物。要想让事物“鲜活”起来，就应该使用一些描绘性的词汇来突出被介绍事物的鲜明特点。如：pleasant, lovely, sweet,
6、powerful, favourite, horrible, severe, funny, friendly, generous, brave, shy, firm, faithful等。类文演练请根据下面的表格，写一篇介绍华南虎的120150词的文章。 联想词汇1重达 _答案：weigh2以为主食 _答案：feed mainly on3在野外 _答案：in the wild4濒危 _答案：be endangered/in danger5保护 _答案：protect6惩罚 _答案：punish单句写作1尾部有黑斑。Its tail _.There are _.答案：has black spot
7、sblack spots in its tail2在野外华南虎的数量稀少。There are_.Few South China Tigers _.答案：few South China Tigers in the wildlive in the wild3华南虎濒危的原因是栖息地的减少和人类的捕杀。South China Tiger is _.The reduction of _.答案：in danger because of the reduction of its habitats and partly because of hunting by humansits habitats and
8、 hunting by humans have left it in danger连句成章 精彩范文South China Tiger is an endangered animal, whose habitat is in China, exactly speaking, in Southern China, Central China and Eastern China.South China Tiger is large and fierce. The male tiger can weigh about 190 kilograms and the female tiger about
9、110 kilograms. One of its main features is that its tail has black spots. They feed mainly on wild boars and sambars.Now, there are more than 70 South China Tigers in the reserve and few live in the wild. The reduction of its habitats and hunting by humans have left it in danger. As a result, we sho
10、uld educate people to protect it and punish those poachers severely. Besides, man mustnt destroy their habitats. Only in this way can its population increase.课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Classical Chinese poetry is traditional Chinese poetry _1_ (write) in Classical Chinese and t
11、ypified by certain traditional forms. Many _2_ (poem) come from particular historical periods, such as the poetry of the Tang Dynasty and the verse of the Song Dynasty. _3_ (it) existence dates back to at least as early as the publication of the Classic of Poetry or Shijing. There are _4_ (vary) com
12、binations of forms and genres, most of _5_ arose at the end of the Tang Dynasty.Development of Classical Chinese poetry _6_ (active) continued up to the year of 1919, when the May Fourth Movement _7_ (take) place, and is still popular even today. Classical Chinese poetry created during this 2,500yea
13、r period has been developing continuously, _8_ (produce) a great deal of diversityclassified by both major historical periods _9_ dynastic periods.Of the key aspects of Classical Chinese poetry is its close interrelationship with other forms of Chinese art, such as Chinese painting and Chinese calligraphy (书法). Classical Chinese poetry has proven to have a strong influence_10_ poetry worldwide.1_2._3._4._5_6._7._8._9_10._答案：1.written2.poems3.Its4.various5.which6actively7.took8.producing9.and10.on
