1、NO.1 再现单元内词汇以本为本.阅读单词知其意1clone vt.n.2nutrition n.3fellow n.4channel n.5catastrophe n.6insert vt.7harvest vt.&vi.n.克隆克隆出来的动物或植物营养男子,家伙;同事,同类水道;航道;隧道灾难,灾祸插入,嵌入收割(庄稼)获;收成10tasty adj.11agriculture n.12rainforest n.美味的,可口的农业雨林8saleswoman n.9physician n纵联1女售货员,女推销员医师;内科医生.重点单词写其形1adj.准确的,精确的2adj.短暂的,简洁的,简
2、单的3adj.精确的,准确的4n.关系;亲戚5vt.实施;指挥乐队6n.利润,收益vi.&vt.获益;对有用7n.概念;观念8n.赞同,支持;恩惠,帮助;偏爱,偏袒9adj.普通的,一般的accuratebriefexactrelationconductprofitconceptfavourordinary10vt.&vi.证实,证明;确认;使确信11vt.纵联2使改变外观或性质(尤指向好的方向);使改变形态12n.总结;概括,概要13adj.真实的,实际的14n.收入,收益15n纵联3罪,罪行16n.饥饿;饥荒17n.突破18n.准许,许可,批准confirmtransformsummary
3、actualincomecrimehungerbreakthroughpermission.拓展单词通其变1anxiety n忧虑,焦虑,不安adj.担忧的,焦急的2adopt vt.收养,领养;采用,采纳adj.收养的n采用;收养3consequence n结果,后果adj.随之发生的adv.因此,所以4profession n职业,行业adj.专业的,职业的5original adj.原来的,起初的;首创的;非复制的n起源;出身,来历anxiousadoptedadoptionconsequentconsequentlyconsequentlyorigin6judgement n判断力;看
4、法,评价;(法律)判决v判断7majority n多数,大多数n少数民族;少数8consideration n仔细考虑;必须考虑的因素;体谅,顾及v考虑,认为prep.鉴于,考虑到adj.体贴的adj.大量的9reliable adj.可信赖的,可依靠的vi.依靠,依赖10frighten vt.使惊吓,使惊恐adj.(事物)令人害怕的adj.(人)感到害怕的11intention n目的,意图;企图vt.意欲,计划;打算judgeminorityconsiderconsideringconsiderateconsiderablerelyfrighteningfrightenedintendN
5、O.2 纵联同主族词汇一线串联纵联1.有病不可乱投“医”physician 内科医生surgeon 外科医生dentist 牙医eye doctor 眼科医生plastic surgeon 整形外科医生纵联2.前缀“trans-”之家transform 使改变形态transplant 移植translate 翻译transmit 传送;传播transfer 转移;转让transparent 透明的纵联3.“犯罪”相关常见词crime n.罪,罪行accuse vt.控告;指控charge vt.控告commit vt.犯(罪)punish vt.惩罚;处罚sentence vt.判决;宣判NO
6、.3 横拓同话题词汇以点扩面单元话题前沿科技 子话题1 人工智能artificial intelligence 人工智能data mining 数据挖掘service-oriented robots 服务型机器人big data 大数据speech recognition 语言识别cloud computing 云计算子话题2 生物技术 organism n有机体upbringing n抚育,养育make-up n构成,构造genetics n遗传学component n成分procedure n程序breed n(动植物的)品种sample n样本biotechnology n生物科技tra
7、nsplant n&vt.移植reproduce v复制;使再现biodiversity n生物多样性学考对接活学活用高考采撷(一)阅读中的词汇应用1(2016全国卷阅读C)I am Peter Hodes,a volunteer stem cell courier.Since March 2012,Ive done 89 trips of those,51 have been abroad.I have 42 hours to carry stem cells(干细胞)in my little box because Ive got two ice packs and thats how l
8、ong they last.In all,from the time the stem cells are harvested from a donor(捐献者)to the time they can be implanted in the patient,weve got 72 hours at most.So I am always conscious of time.写出加蓝词在此处的汉语意思:,本词的常用含义为“”。写出加蓝词在本单元的近义词:,意为“”。获得,得到收获,收割insert植入2(2013湖南高考阅读表达)Podell admits that she was doubt
9、ful at first,but now she describes the project as mutually(相互地)beneficial.People learn from her but she also learns from them.She says that the majority of those who come to her are dealing with some pretty heavy issues,and they expect her not only to listen,but also to provide real answers.用本单元单词改写
10、句子:she thinks the project _写出加蓝词块在此处的汉语意思:写出加蓝词在本单元的近义词:,其副词形式为:_profits eachother大多数来找她的人actualactually(根据汉语及提示词翻译句子)1(2017浙江高考书面表达)这匹狼可能感觉到了来自人们的威胁,开始撤退。因此,它沿着公路跑掉了,消失在远方。(consequence)_2(2013广东高考书面表达)另外,候选人应该愿意与他人保持良好关系。(relation)_The wolf might feel the threats from the people,starting to withdra
11、w.As a consequence/In consequence,it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.高考采撷(二)写作中的词汇应用Moreover,the candidates should be willing to keep goodrelations with others.1adopt vt.收养,领养;采用,采纳记牢(1)adopt ones advice(suggestion)/plan/idea 采纳某人的建议/计划/想法adopt a positive attitude 采取积极的态度adopt
12、an orphan 领养孤儿(2)adopted adj.领养的adoption n.收养;采纳练通单句语法填空Many animal welfare organizations provide care and(adopt)services for homeless animals.Parents who have an child want to know whether they should tell the child he or she.(adopt)完成句子After much consideration,the president decided to _(采纳她的建议)Pup
13、ils should be helped to (对采取积极的态度)their life.adoptionadoptedis adoptedadopt hersuggestionadopt a positive attitude to用准 adopt与adapt 是容易混淆的形似词,adapt意为“适应”。写美(2018全国卷书面表达)我希望你采纳我的建议,祝你玩得愉快。_I hope you would adopt my suggestions and have a good time.2consequence n结果;后果记牢(1)as a consequence/result in co
14、nsequence 因此,结果 as a consequence/result of in consequence of因为的缘故(2)take/accept/face the consequences of 承担的后果(3)consequent adj.作为结果的,随之发生的 consequently adv.因此,结果;所以练通单句语法填空As consequence,they cant concentrate on their study and tend to be sleepy in class.(consequent),she understood it and became in
15、terested in Chinese traditional culture.The warming of the Earth and the (consequence)climatic changes affect us all.aConsequentlyconsequent完成句子Today,(由于)the rapid development of digital technology,the appearance of people and their way of life have been revolutionary changed.The young should learn
16、to(承担的后果)their actions.as a consequence of/in consequence oftake/accept/face the consequences of写美(2013福建高考书面表达)结果,孩子们变得如此依赖父母,以至于他们没有独立的思考或创意。_As a consequence,children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thoughts or creative ideas.3transform vt.&vi.使改变外观或性质(尤指向好的方向);使改
17、变形态;转化;转换;改造记牢(1)transform(.)into.(把)变成/转化成be transformed from.into/to.由变成;由迁到(2)transformation n.(外观或性质的)改变,变革 练通 单句语法填空She helps transform literature braille(盲文)to bring the power of story and knowledge to the hearts and minds of blind readers.Every moment of every day,energy is being(transform)fr
18、om one form into another.He has made a complete (transform)from a comedian into a dramatic actor.intotransformedtransformation写美(2014湖南高考书面表达)当你走路时,一台小型机器将行走所产生的能量转换成电能并储存起来。_When you walk,a small machine transforms the energy produced by walking into electric energy and stores it.联想“把变成”的其他表达:turn.
19、into.;change.into.等。4conduct vt.指挥乐队;导电;实施,进行;引导n.行为,举止辨清 写出下列句中conduct的含义From childhood,she tried to live by the teachings of her parents and gradually accumulated a set of standards of conduct.Knowledge is the candle to conduct you to the bright and true life.In the new century we need to conduct
20、new foreign trade policies to realize high-speed development of our economy.Most metals can conduct electricity.Who will conduct the orchestra tonight?行为,举止引导实施,进行导电指挥写美(2010湖南高考书面表达)到目前为止,我们已经开展了各种英语学习活动,例如观看英语电影、举办圣诞派对、与外国学生聚会等。_So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning,
21、such as watching English films,holding Christmas parties and getting together with foreign students etc.5majority n多数,大多数记牢(1)a/the majority of.大多数be in the/a majority 占大部分/大多数(2)minority n.少数in the/a minority 占少数(3)major n&v.专业;主修adj.主要的major in 主修;以为专业练通单句语法填空A majority of Africans (be)forced to w
22、ork for the Europeans.Even though some British people are quite strange,the majority of them (be)really friendly and Ive made some good friends.For example,if you look at the audience at a classical concert,the majority (be)over the age of fifty.areareare/is单句改错I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of
23、 gardening so that it can help me to major the gardening after attending college.完成句子The white are in Australia while the native people.在澳大利亚,白人占多数而土著人占少数。major后加inin the majorityin the minority用准(1)the majority单独作主语时,谓语动词用单复数形式均可。(2)the majority of 复数名词复数谓语动词不可数名词单数谓语动词写美(2015浙江高考书面表达)当我有不同的观点时,我可能
24、会选择放弃自己的看法,而去尊重大多数人的观点。_When I have a different opinion,I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.6confirm vt.&vi.证实,证明;确认;使确信记牢confirm ones belief 坚定某人的信念be confirmed by sb.被某人认可It has been confirmed that.已确定/证实练通 完成句子They worked out an effective method,which _(被领导认可了)(尚未得到
25、证实)that the agreement is to be signed.The recent airplane crash (坚定了我的信念)that stronger safety regulations are needed.was confirmedby the leadershipIt has not been confirmedconfirms my belief写美(2011江苏高考书面表达)这张照片使我确信,成为一个好女儿比“好”学生更重要。_The picture confirms me it is even more important to be a gooddaugh
26、ter than a“good”student.7favour n赞同,支持;恩惠,帮助;喜爱;偏爱,偏袒vt.支持,偏袒辨清 写出下列句中favour的含义We have to apply the same rules to everyone,showing no favour.Chinese export commodities have enjoyed growing favouramong buyers abroad.I want to ask a favour of you;will you lend me your car?I talked to Susie about trave
27、lling abroad,and she was all in favour of going abroad.偏爱,偏袒喜爱帮助赞同记牢(1)in favour of 支持,赞同;有利于in sb.s favour 有利于某人(2)do sb.a favour/do a favour for sb.给某人以恩惠;帮助某人ask sb.a favourask a favour of sb.请某人帮忙(3)favourable adj.赞同的;有利的;良好的favourite adj.&n.特别喜爱(欢)的(东西)练通单句语法填空Everyone present at the meeting wa
28、s favour of what he put forward.It used to be my (favour)restaurant but the standard of cooking has fallen off recently.He made a (favour)impression on his future colleagues.infavouritefavourable同义替换Now I wonder whether you could do me a favour.Now I wonder.Now I wonder.whether you could do a favour
29、 for mewhether I could ask you a favour写美(2016全国卷书面表达)我写信告诉你一些关于我即将到来的暑假的计划,我也希望你帮我一个忙。_I am writing to tell you something about my plan for thecoming summer vacation and I also want you to do me afavour.8frighten vt.使惊吓,使惊恐记牢(1)frighten sb.into/out of doing sth.吓得某人做/不敢做某事frighten.away/off 吓走/跑frig
30、hten sb.to death 把某人吓得要死(2)frightening adj.(事物)令人恐惧的,可怕的frightened adj.(人)害怕的,受到惊吓的be frightened at/by 因害怕,被吓坏了be frightened of/that 担心,对害怕be frightened to do 害怕做(3)fright n.恐惧,害怕练通单句语法填空(2016浙江高考)A sudden stop can be a very(frighten)experience,especially if you are travelling at high speed.They fri
31、ghtened the small boy into (tell)them the secret.The mothers are frightened the children going camping,for they may get lost in the mountain.tellingfrighteningof单句改错Seeing so many people injured during the conflict,the girl stood there shaking with a frightening look.完成句子The bird came to the window,
32、but I moved suddenly and _.那只鸟儿飞到窗前,可我的身子突然一动,把它吓走了。frighteningfrightenedfrightened it away/off用准 过去分词形式的形容词,如puzzled,confused,frightened,excited,surprised等,除了可以用来描述人的心理活动以外,还可以用来修饰与人有关的一些名词,如look,voice,smile,expression,face等。写美(2017浙江高考书面表达)Paul迅速打开门,这个被吓坏了的人迅速冲进车里,砰地关上(slam)了他身后的门。_Paul quickly un
33、locked the door,and the frightened man dived in,slamming the door behind him.9profit n利润,收益;好处,益处 vi.获益 vt.对有用/好处辨清 写出下列句中profit的词性和含义I think it will profit you nothing to follow his example._On the basis of our sales forecasts,we may begin to make a profit next year._I like reading each day for pro
34、fit and pleasure._Im sure that all of you will profit from this special experience._vt.对有用/好处n.利润,收益n好处,益处vi.获益写美(2017江苏高考书面表达)中国电影票房收入在2015年持续增长,为电影制片商带来了巨大的利润。_The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase in 2015,which brought great profit for film makers.词汇过关综合训练.单词拼写1I h
35、eard you suffered from (焦虑)when you took an exam recently.2Dr Yuan also helps many less developed countries to increase their rice (收成)3It is a surprise that the faraway village has been(改造)into a famous tourist city in only ten years.4I respect his (判断力)and Ill follow any advice he gives me.anxiety
36、harvestsjudgementtransformed5Scientists have made a (突破)in their treatment of the disease.6For children with hearing loss,they cannot pick up language as easily as (普通的)people.7As far as he is concerned,to increase the farmers(收入)is of greater importance than anything else.8For a hit show,(利润)can ad
37、d up to millions of dollars.breakthroughordinaryincomeprofits.单句语法填空1I think he did it by accident,not by (intend)2His success was a long history;but (brief)speaking,he succeeded after many failures.3Most of them were favour of my opinion while David was against it.4He was a wonderful father to both
38、 his natural and(adopt)children.intentionbrieflyinadopted5The majority who attended the meeting yesterday(be)students.6She worked hard at her lessons and as consequence got high marks.7I have been told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious (get)help from you.wereato get.单句改错1
39、Electric heaters have their electric energy transformed to heat.2The same cognitive(认知的)systems that make young children feel good about figuring something out may have adopted by adult scientists.3Hearing a strange noise,the poor man,trembling and frigh-tening,ran out of the dark cave.4Strictly spe
40、aking,you shouldnt enter the lab without the permission.5One-third of the country is covered with trees and the majority of the citizens is black people.tointohave后加beenfrighteningfrightened去掉第二个the第二个isare.翻译句子1所有出席会议的人都赞成该计划。(in favour of)2他恃强凌弱,总是吓得人们按他的意愿做事。(frighten sb.into)_3我遗憾地告诉你,由于你的工作很糟,我
41、不得不解雇你。(in consequence of,dismiss)_All the people present at the meeting are in favour of the plan.He was a bully.He tried to frighten people into doing what he wanted.I regret to tell you in consequence of your bad work,I amforced to dismiss you.4我们每个人都要有梦想,并且要对梦想采取积极乐观的态度。(adopt a positive attitud
42、e)5能量可以从一种形式转变成另一种形式。(transform)Every one of us should have a dream and adopt a positive attitude to our dreams.Energy can be transformed from one form into another.NO.1 记牢重点短语1 一方面另一方面2戏弄,摆弄;把当作儿戏3义无反顾地进行,努力推进4供出售,待销售5串记1耗尽体力,累垮6效仿某人7串记2 认真考虑8串记3赞同,支持9观点on the one hand.on the other hand.toy withpus
43、h ahead withfor salebe/get burnt outfollow in ones footstepstake.into considerationin favour ofpoint of view10有意义,有道理,讲得通11准备就绪,布置妥当12而不是13处理,对付14与相比较15指出16串记4概括地说17同意;与一致18结果是,证明是;生产make senseput.in placerather thandeal withcompared withpoint outin summaryin agreement withturn out同根短语串记串记1.“累垮”表达种种
44、 be/get burnt out be/get worn outbe/get tired out be/get exhausted串记2.“考虑”短语知多少 take.into consideration 认真考虑take.into account 考虑take account of 考虑think over 仔细考虑串记3.“inn.of”短语荟萃in favour of 支持,赞同in memory of 为了纪念in honour of 为了纪念in view of 鉴于;由于in terms of 就而言in case of 以防;万一in need of 需要in place of
45、 代替;取代in search of 寻找,寻求串记4.学会“总结”好处多 in summary in shortin brief in conclusionin a/one word to sum upNO.2 多备常用词块1 treatment 医疗2 ideas 道德观念3die heart failure 死于心脏衰竭4one the more forward-looking technologies较有远见的技术之一5the advances 科学进步6 the field of science 在科学界7come back work 下班回来8 information 进一步的信息
46、medicalmoralofofscientificinfromfurtherNO.3 背熟经典句式1 successfully from an adult cell was Dolly the sheep.第一只成功地用成年动物细胞克隆出的哺乳动物是多利羊。2The boy was frightened hurt.这个男孩与其说受伤不如说是害怕。3 is this with genetically modified(GM)food.转基因食品就是最好的例子。The first mammal to be clonedmorethanNowheretruer than学考对接活学活用高考采撷(一
47、)阅读中的词块和句式1(2018浙江高考阅读B)Steven Stein likes to follow garbage trucks.His strange habit(讲得通)when you consider that hes an environmental scientist who studies how to reduce litter,including things that fall off garbage trucks as they drive down the road.What is even more interesting is that one of Stei
48、ns jobs is defending an industry behind the plastic shopping bag.根据汉语意思填入本单元短语:可用本单元短语升级加蓝词汇,意为“考虑;把考虑在内”,其同义短语为_。makes sensetake.into considerationtake.into account2(2018江苏高考阅读B)When a dark-colored cake was served on a black plate (而不是白色的),customers recognized it as sweeter and more tasty.(完成句子)rat
49、her than a white one(根据提示翻译句子)1(2013湖南高考书面表达)一方面,我们认为友谊第一,比赛第二;另一方面,既然我们都尽力了,我们就没有遗憾。(on the one hand.on the other hand)_2(2018浙江高考书面表达)这是我第一次尝试骑马。(动词不定式作后置定语)高考采撷(二)写作中的短语和句式On the one hand,we think that friendship comes first,and a match comes second.On the other hand,since we all tried our best,w
50、e had no regret.This is my first attempt to ride a horse.短语集释1on the one hand.on the other hand.一方面另一方面辨清for one thing.for another(thing).on(the)onehand.on theother(hand).意为“首先,再者”,陈述的两个方面的情况常常一致意为“一方面另一方面”,常用来表述一个事物的两个方面,通常用于引出不同的,尤指对立的观点、思想等练通 完成句子,we should develop our economy;_,we should protect
51、 the environment.一方面我们应该发展经济;另一方面我们应该保护环境。Im not going to buy it;I dont like the color,and its far too expensive.我不会买它,首先我不喜欢这颜色,再者也太贵了。On the one handother handon thefor one thingfor another用准 on the one hand中的the可以省略,而on the other hand中的the不能省略。另外,on the other hand可以单独使用。写美(2013山东高考书面表达)一方面,我可以挣钱来
52、减轻家庭的负担。另一方面,我可以积累社会经验,这对我将来的生活也有好处。_On the one hand,I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family.On the other hand,I can accumulate some social experience,which does good to my future life.2follow in ones footsteps 效仿某人记牢(1)follow in the footsteps of.效仿follow ones example 以某人为榜样follow on
53、es advice/directions听从/遵循某人的建议/指示(2)as follows 如下,如下所述练通单句语法填空You cant follow in another (person)footsteps,and no one else will be able to follow in yours.The settings of each activity are follows in this table.aspersons完成句子We mustnt blindly foreign practice.我们不能亦步亦趋盲目地照外国办法行事。We must all and serve
54、the people with all our hearts.我们都应以他为榜样,全心全意为人民服务。The good points of the novel may be summarized.这部小说的优点概括起来有以下几个方面。follow in the footsteps offollow his exampleas follows写美(2016四川高考书面表达)夏天是一年中我最喜欢的季节。原因如下。_Summer is my favorite season of the year.The reasons are as follows.3take.into consideration认
55、真考虑记牢(1)show consideration for 对表示关心under consideration 在讨论/考虑中out of consideration for 出于对的考虑/体谅(2)consider vt.考虑;认为considerate adj.考虑周到的,体贴的considerable adj.大量的considering prep.考虑到;就而言;鉴于练通单句语法填空Everything (take)into consideration,his work is well done.Its said that the plan is consideration by th
56、e Ministry of Education.If you can help other people with pleasure and show your consideration them,everybody will like to be with you.takentakenfor完成句子Your teacher will(考虑你最近生病的情况)when judging your examination results.You should turn your music down _(出于对你的邻居们的体谅)take your recent illness into consi
57、derationout of consideration foryour neighbours写美(2012安徽高考书面表达)考虑了所有因素之后,我决定将理科作为我的主要学科。_After taking everything into consideration,I decided on science as my main subject of study.句式集释1动词不定式作后置定语教材原句 The first mammal to be cloned successfully from an adult cell was Dolly the sheep.悟拓展例句(1)He is alw
58、ays the first hardships and the last _ comforts.他是一个总是吃苦在前、享乐在后的人。(2)Its said that she has the ability the challenging work well.据说她有能力做好这一项具有挑战性的工作。(3)He had no money and no place.他没有钱也没有地方住。to bearto enjoyto doto live in析用法规则用法归纳(1)当中心词是序数词或被序数词、形容词最高级等修饰时或前有the only,the last,the right时,常用动词不定式作后置
59、定语。(2)动词不定式作后置定语用来修饰的词是抽象名词,常见的有:ability,chance,opportunity,ambition,attempt,offer,way以及time,place等。背写作佳句(1)(2015北京高考写作佳句)It offers teenagers,like you and me,a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.(要点句)(2)(2014福建高考写作佳句)In this way,I can not only work it out but also improve my abil
60、ity to overcome problems all by myself.(要点句)2more.than.“与其说倒不如说”教材原句 The boy was more frightened than hurt.悟拓展例句(1)Dont be too hard on him.He is.别对他太苛刻了,与其说他愚蠢倒不如说是被误导的。(2)Animals sleep hibernation is.动物的冬眠不只是睡眠。(3)Its difficult to accomplish the task in.在仅仅一周内完成这项工作很困难。(4)The audience are with her
61、performance.观众对她的表演很满意。more misled than stupidmore than sleepmore than satisfiedno more than one week析用法规则用法归纳(1)此句式意为“越,就越”,主、从句的两个谓语是同时进行的,表示一方随另一方程度的变化而变化。(2)从结构上看,第一个“the比较级”是表示条件的状语从句(在表示将来意义时,从句用一般现在时表示将来);第二个“the比较级”是主句。(3)此结构可以用省略形式。背写作佳句(1)(2014湖北高考写作佳句)The more you pay,the more you get.(要点
62、句)(2)(2013福建高考写作佳句)The more parents do for their children,the less independent they will become.(要点句)词块、句式过关综合训练.选词填空take.into consideration,follow in ones footsteps,in agreement with,on the one hand.on the other hand,toy with,get burnt out1Why are the programmers resigning one by one?Because they.2
63、While she was talking to me,she a pencil.3,I am your teacher;but,I am also your friend.4When comparing prices,one has to the quality of the goods.5He is a doctor and expects his son to.6All Jennys friends were her on her decision to quit the job.get burnt outtoyed withOn the one handon the other han
64、dtakeinto considerationfollow in his footstepsin agreement with.完成句子/句式升级1I dont think him to be because he is careless.我认为他不是做这项工作的最佳人选,因为他不细心。2,you should study hard;_,you should exercise more.一方面,你应该努力学习;另一方面,你应该多加锻炼。3The beauty of the mountainous village is _.我无法用语言形容这个多山乡村的美丽。the best man to do
65、 the jobOn the one handon the otherhandmore than I candescribe4After they take everything into consideration,they trusted themselves more and returned to their positions.,they trusted themselves more and returned to their positions.(用分词作状语),they trusted themselves more and returned to their position
66、s.(独立主格结构)Having taken everything into considerationEverything taken into consideration.分步写作假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Liam 想知道我国首例克隆(clone)猴“中中”和“华华”的情况,请你根据以下提示给他写一封信:1两只克隆猴名字的由来;2这一成果对医学的贡献;3你的感想。注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3信件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Liam,Nice to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua第一步:准确审题,理行文脉络,拟写作要点本
67、文属于应用文写作中的普通书信,时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。写作要点可以从以下三方面着手:一是说明写信的目的;二是介绍有关克隆猴的一些情况;三是自己的感想。其中要点1不用做过多的陈述,表达清楚写信目的即可,要点3也只需简单地表达自己的感想,写作重点在要点2。要点2对克隆猴的情况介绍属于半开放作文,对发散性思维的要求比较高,学生可以参考题目中给出的前2点要求进行写作,在此基础上再联系现实对要点进行扩充。要点1:能向你介绍有关“中中”和“华华”的一些情况,我感到很自豪。(be proud to do sth.)_要点2:它们被命名为“中华”,因为这个名字代表着我们的国家和民族。(name
68、after,mean)_I feel proud to tell you something about Zhong Zhong andHua Hua.They are named after Zhong Hua,because it meansChinese nation and people.要点2:这是医学研究上的一项重大突破,特别是在治疗脑部疾病及其他一些疑难杂症方面。(a major breakthrough,treatment,difficult and complicated cases)_要点3:我们将来一定能过上更加幸福、轻松的生活。(live a.life)It is a
69、major breakthrough in medicine research,especially in treatment of brain diseases and some other difficult and complicated cases.We are bound to live a happier and easier life in the future.第二步:添加细节,文意更丰满,表达更亮眼拟定的三个要点彼此之间毫无关联,且要点的内容过于简单。为使文章更加丰富,应对具体细节加以补充,并对各要点展开合理想象,添加一些相关信息。这些添加内容既可以以定状补、同位语的形式补充
70、到原有句子成分中,也可以以复杂句式的形式对原有要点句进行改造升级,提升文章档次。例如:要点1,可用同位语的形式补充细节“中国科学家培育成功的首例克隆猴”;要点2可用句型Thats why.及定语从句进行句式升级,说明它们被命名为“中华”的原因及意义;要点2可以用not only.but also句式扩充这一科研成果的意义;要点3可以用介词短语thanks to来补充这一感想的依据,并回扣文章主题。拓展 1:我很自豪能向你介绍“中中”和“华华”,中国科学家培育的首例克隆猴。(同位语)_拓展 2:我们中国人为这对双胞胎感到自豪,这就是为什么它们会被命名为“中华”,这个名字代表着我们的国家和民族。(
71、Thats why.,定语从句)_I feel proud to tell you something about Zhong Zhong andHua Hua,the first monkey clones produced by Chinesescientists.We Chinese take pride in the twins.Thats why they are named after Zhong Hua,which means Chinese nation and people.拓展 2:这不但是中国科学家的巨大成功,也是医学研究上的一项重大突破,特别是在治疗脑部疾病及其他一些疑
72、难杂症方面。(not only.but also)_拓展 3:多亏了先进的技术,我们将来一定能过上更加幸福、轻松的生活。_It is not only a great success for Chinese scientists but also a major breakthrough in medicine research,especially in treatment of brain diseases and some other difficult and complicated cases.Thanks to the advanced technology,we are boun
73、d to live a happier and easier life in the future.第三步:连句成文,排语句顺序,重衔接过渡本文根据要点的划分可分三段来组织文章,为总分总的结构。在第二段的情况介绍前加统领句“多年的研究和实验得到了回报。”来承上启下。在各段落中,各要点句可根据其内在逻辑关系重新排列,简单句与复杂句相互配合,使文章上下连贯,一气呵成。由于各要点间逻辑清晰、表达顺畅,无须添加额外的衔接词。Dear Liam,Nice to hear from you.I feel proud to tell you something about Zhong Zhong and H
74、ua Hua,the first monkey clones produced by Chinese scientists.Many years of research and experiments paid off.We Chinese take pride in the twins.That is why they are named after Zhong Hua,which means Chinese nation and people.Its not only a great success for Chinese scientists but also a major break
75、through in medicine research,especially in treatment of brain diseases and some other difficult and complicated cases.Thanks to the advanced technology,we are bound to live a happier and easier life in the future.Yours,Li Hua理清段落结构之(一)顺承三类顺承段落结构:1.按事情的发展顺序,也就是事情发生的起因经过结果。2.按时间的推移顺序,也就是按时间的先后顺序。这个顺序的
76、描写方式,通常都有时间词语。3.按空间的观察顺序,也就是空间位置的不同。这个顺序的描写方式,通常有地理位置的词语。这种顺承关系是下文总结段落的基础和例证。高考典例 1 2018天津卷阅读表达1Some people live to climb the highest mountains.Some people live only dreaming about it while others live to avoid ever climbing at all.But one thing is certain,all people encounter mountains in their lif
77、e.2When I was a little girl,my family moved to a tiny town at the bottom of a big mountain.One day after school,while exploring the green woods of this magnificent mountain,I almost fell on a set of stairs.What could these steps lead to?Curiosity got the best of me as I knew it would be starting to
78、get dark soon.I started climbing up those strangely mysterious steps.“承接下文”的句子3I climbed and climbed.There was nothing but just green bushes and these steps.I had to reach the top!But it was now getting real dark.If I kept going I might not be able to see my way back.My mum would be worried sick if
79、I didnt come home soon.So I ran back home almost in the dark while trying not to get too scared.4Anxiously I went to bed dreaming about what I would find at the top of this magical mountain.Could there be a castle up there?Maybe I would find a monster 怪物.Maybe I was taking the risk of never coming b
80、ack home.Or,maybe all I would find was absolutely nothing!But something inside me was going to climb that mountain at all cost.I could hardly wait to try this adventure again.“承接下文”的句子“承接下文”的句子24 三段文字以时间和空间为序,依次顺序承接,叙述了“我”的一次爬山过程,是下文总结段落的基础和例证。总结出不要放弃自己的梦想,一定要坚持下去。5Now we live in a world surrounded
81、by the“cant do”attitudes.We all fall down.We all have doubts and regrets.Still we must climb and dream about whats at the top of our mountain.Monsters may appear or the night will fall.But never ever give up on your dream!Never let anyone tell you,“You cant.”Dream big and climb high!高考典例 2 2017全国卷B
82、篇1I work with Volunteers for Wildlife,a rescue and education organization at Bailey Arboretum in Locust Valley.Trying to help injured,displaced or sick creatures can be heartbreaking;survival is never certain.However,when it works,it is simply beautiful.2I got a rescue call from a woman in Muttontow
83、n.She had found a young owl(猫头鹰)on the ground.When I arrived,I saw a 2-to 3-week-old owl.It had already been placed in a carrier for safety.3I examined the chick(雏鸟)and it seemed fine.If I could locate the nest,I might have been able to put it back,but no luck.My next work was to construct a nest an
84、d anchor it in a tree.4The homeowner was very helpful.A wire basket was found.I put some pine branches into the basket to make this nest safe and comfortable.I placed the chick in the nest,and it quickly calmed down.5Now all that was needed were the parents,but they were absent.I gave the homeowner
85、a recording of the hunger screams of owl chicks.These advertise the presence of chicks to adults;they might also encourage our chick to start calling as well.I gave the owner as much information as possible and headed home to see what news the night might bring.6A nervous night to be sure,but someti
86、mes the spirits of nature smile on us all!The homeowner called to say that the parents had responded to the recordings.I drove over andsaw the chick in the nest looking healthy and active.And it was accompanied in the nest by the greatest sight of all LUNCH!The parents had done their duty and would probably continue to do so.前五段文字以时间为序,依次顺承连接,其过程为“got a rescue callexaminedplacedparentsresponded”,展示了作者成功救助一只猫头鹰雏鸟的经历。